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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !!  Posted: Mon Jul 20, 2009 5:37 am |
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Nargisi Nazar
Dil ko dil he rehnay day, ibaadat gaH na kar
Judai hai mohabbat ki reet, panay ki chaH na kar
Mehfil abaad rahay gi, tehray uskay mehoob bohat
Na tadpa apni tanhai ko, yuN ussay gumraH na kar
Uss nargisi nazar say chandni tak sharmaa gayii...
Jo chehra madhoosh karde, uski tarf nigaaH na kar
Rehnay day pardah nasheeN ab yeh haal e dil janaa
Beh jaoN gi ishq e junuuN maiN, iss tarhaaN na kar
Lutf e gunah ka nasha hai thoda shoKh mizaaj
Meri hasrat na kar, zabt ko meray tabaaH na kar.. !!
July 20, 2009
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Tue Jul 21, 2009 2:10 pm |
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Masooma wrote: Nargisi Nazar
Dil ko dil he rehnay day, issay ibaadat gaH na kar
Judai hai mohabbat ki reet, panay ki chaH na kar
Mehfil maiN mil jayaiN gay tujhay hazarooN laikin
Apni tanhai ko na tadpa, yuN ussay gumraH na kar
Buth e kaafir, teray noor say chandni sharma gayii
Jo chehra madhoosh karde, uski tarf nigaaH na kar
Rehnay day pardah nasheeN ab yeh haal e dil janaa
Beh jaoN gi ishq e junuuN maiN, iss tarhaaN na kar
Suno! Lutf e gunah ka nasha hai thoda shoKh mizaaj
Meri hasrat na kar, zabt ko meray tabaaH na kar.. !!
July 20, 2009 aik-dam zabardast...again...dil ko chu ge lafz....bohat acha likha hai 
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dost usse kahte hain jo gham aur dukh me saath de
zindagi ke safar me kabhi tum gir jaao to apna haath de
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Jul 22, 2009 8:11 am |
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dost usse kahte hain jo gham aur dukh me saath de
zindagi ke safar me kabhi tum gir jaao to apna haath de
shari
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 4:49 am |
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Meri Kahani YuN Likh Do
Meri tanhai ko meri justujoo likh do
Khamosh haiN lafz, guftagoo likh do
Baarish maiN bheega ang ang mera
Boondh boondh ko ba-wuzoo likh do
Meri kahani, un yaadooN ki kaavish
Ek shaam, ek saher, ek ansoo likh do
Hasrat e deedar jo phir se jaag utha
Khushboo e badan chaar soo likh do
LakerooN maiN naam dhudhla gaya
Bikharta rang e henna, lahoo likh do
Intezaar maiN qaide qurbat ka nasha
Har khawaab ko dil e arzoo likh do !!
July 22, 2009
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Last edited by Masooma on Mon Jul 27, 2009 6:07 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 8:01 am |
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dost usse kahte hain jo gham aur dukh me saath de
zindagi ke safar me kabhi tum gir jaao to apna haath de
shari
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 8:11 am |
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Kahin aisa na ho Jana
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Mera akus chupky say
Teri ankhon say mit jai
Teri janab paltny k her rasta
Kehin band na ho jai
Meri yaadon ka her punchi
Tumhary haath say nikly aur
Falak abad ho jai
Ya phir
Barbad ho jai
Mera dil ab k seeny mai
Darkany say mukar jai
ANaa ke sabuz tehni ko
Main khud tode daita hon
Tumhary wastay jaana
Zid apni chor daita hon
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Jul 23, 2009 8:13 am |
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آپ کی محفل میں پوسٹ کردیا ہے اپ پتا نہیں اجازت ہے کے نہیں
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 9:21 am |
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Masooma wrote: Meri Kahani YuN Likh Do
Meri tanhai ko meri justujoo likh do
Khamosh haiN lafz, guftagoo likh do
Baarish maiN bheega ang ang mera
Boondh boondh ko ba-wuzoo likh do
Meri kahani, un yaadooN ki kaavish
Dard e judai, uss ke ansoo likh do
Hasrat e deedar jo phir se jaag utha
Khushboo e badan chaar soo likh do
LakerooN maiN naam dhudhlaya gya
Bikharta rang e henna, lahoo likh do
Intezaar maiN qaide qurbat ka nasha
Har khawaab ko dil e arzoo likh do !!
July 22, 2009 Beautiful keep posting 
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Yaadon kay hashyee bhi bohot ahem hain *Mohsin*
Deemak lagi kitaab ko aahista kholyee...
Kuch din to baso meri aankhon main
Phir khawab agar ho jao to kya
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Fri Jul 24, 2009 10:05 am |
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Masooma wrote: Nargisi Nazar
Dil ko dil he rehnay day, issay ibaadat gaH na kar
Judai hai mohabbat ki reet, panay ki chaH na kar
Mehfil abaad rahay gi, tehray uskay mehoob bohat
Na tadpa apni tanhai ko, yuN ussay gumraH na kar
Uss nargisi nazar say chandni tak sharmaa gayii...
Jo chehra madhoosh karde, uski tarf nigaaH na kar
Rehnay day pardah nasheeN ab yeh haal e dil janaa
Beh jaoN gi ishq e junuuN maiN, iss tarhaaN na kar
Suno! Lutf e gunah ka nasha hai thoda shoKh mizaaj
Meri hasrat na kar, zabt ko meray tabaaH na kar.. !!
July 20, 2009
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aapki poetry baree lajawaab hay
belkul complete lagtee hay
iseetara liktee raha karay
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 12:38 am |
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Masooma wrote: Lajawaab Keep sharing masooma ji.. Lovely realli khush rahein, Bless ya!
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 3:19 am |
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●◦ мάняΰкн ◦● wrote: Lajawaab Keep sharing masooma ji.. Lovely realli khush rahein, Bless ya!
Shukriya Mahrukh.
Welcome to my thread. Keep visiting.
Take care 
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:58 am |
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Masooma wrote: Bohat khoob.....bohat acha likha aur design kiya hai aap ne..... aik choti si baat ager aap inpage urdu use karrahi hain to ye yaani Dard E Jigr main dard k daal k neechay zair laga dain (shift+comma) to ye ki zaroorat pori ho jaye gi. kyun k jaisay aap ne likha hai ussay shair ki rawani main rukawat aa jati hai.... umeed hai mind nahin karain gi.....
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 10:02 am |
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Masooma wrote: Bohat khobsorat design kiya hai aap ne shairi maini jaan daal di.... bohat si daad qabool kijiye....
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:53 pm |
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tabs wrote:
aik choti si baat ager aap inpage urdu use karrahi hain to ye yaani Dard E Jigr main dard k daal k neechay zair laga dain (shift+comma) to ye ki zaroorat pori ho jaye gi. kyun k jaisay aap ne likha hai ussay shair ki rawani main rukawat aa jati hai....
umeed hai mind nahin karain gi.....
Ghalti ki nishandahi ka bohat shukriya Tabs jee. Mainay Inpage abhi istamaal karna shuru kiya hai par ainda khayal rakhoon gi. tabs wrote:
Bohat khobsorat design kiya hai aap ne shairi maini jaan daal di....
bohat si daad qabool kijiye....
Shairy aur designing pasand karnay kay liyay bohat shukriya. Aatay rahiyay..
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 7:07 am |
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hmmmmmmmmmm achee ghazal hay janaab
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 7:17 am |
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SITARON KA HOJOOM HAI JAISAY...
KHOOBSURET SHAYERI.....AUR DESIGNED POETRY KA INTEKHAB....
ART GALLERY ...EK KHOOBSURET SAIR-GAH
THANKS MASSOMA JI.....IS KI KHOOBSURTI SIWA KERTI RAHEN...
BE BLESSED ALWAYS...
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:50 pm |
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Rani noor wrote: hmmmmmmmmmm achee ghazal hay janaab Bohat shukriya Rani. Keep visiting.
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 5:53 pm |
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kheyal wrote: SITARON KA HOJOOM HAI JAISAY...
KHOOBSURET SHAYERI.....AUR DESIGNED POETRY KA INTEKHAB....
ART GALLERY ...EK KHOOBSURET SAIR-GAH
THANKS MASSOMA JI.....IS KI KHOOBSURTI SIWA KERTI RAHEN...
BE BLESSED ALWAYS...
Apnay apna keemti waqt iss thread ko diya, bohat shukriya kheyal.
Aati rahiyay 
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 8:04 pm |
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Kabhi khusboo, kabhi nagma, kabhi shaam, kabhi sehar
Mujh maiN sama kar mera he khayal kiya hai
bohat khoobsurat sharing Masooma, mazeed ka intezar hai
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 4:41 am |
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sono wrote: Kabhi khusboo, kabhi nagma, kabhi shaam, kabhi sehar
Mujh maiN sama kar mera he khayal kiya hai
bohat khoobsurat sharing Masooma, mazeed ka intezar hai Bohat shukriya Sono jee..
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 9:46 am |
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Sawaal
Mohabbat nay ajab tera haal kiya hai
Aaj aks nay ainay say sawaal kiya hai
Aankh say ojhal fasla badh jata hai
Kaunsi aarzoo par konsa wisaal kiya hai
Mohabbat pay meri jissay maan tha bohat
Aaj kehta hai zindagi ko paa-maal kiya hai
Pyaar aur mohabbat mausami kheel haiN janaa
Jaisay udrat nay urooj ko zavaal kiya hai
Kabhi khusboo, kabhi nagma, kabhi shaam, kabhi sehar
Mujh maiN sama kar mera he khayal kiya hai
Lahoo sehem gaya meri dhadkan teher gayi
Har pal, har lamha mah o saal kiya hai
Yadoon nay aksar pyaas bujha di meri
Teri justujoo ne jab jab nidhaal kiya hai
Safa e dil pay ashqooN ki tehreer ban gaya
Waqt nay dawa di, aisa kamaal kiya hai
July 27, 2009 [/quote] bohat bohat hi umda likha hai....bohat gahrai ke saath likha hai...very good
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Jul 30, 2009 12:43 pm |
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THANKS MASOOMA.....LEKIN..
'AATI RAHIYAY'......NAHI.....'AATAY RAHYAY....
HOPE YOU GOT IT....
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 3:36 am |
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kheyal wrote:
THANKS MASOOMA.....LEKIN..
'AATI RAHIYAY'......NAHI.....'AATAY RAHYAY....
HOPE YOU GOT IT....
Iss ghalati kay liyay maazrat.
"Aatay rahiyay"
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 4:41 am |
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Masooma mazeed kalam akb tak aa raha hai?
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Fri Jul 31, 2009 4:49 am |
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sono wrote: Masooma mazeed kalam akb tak aa raha hai?
Aik ghazal aadhi complete ki hui hai  Bas aaj midterm tha isi liyay ab tak complete nahi ki par Inshallah weekend tak zaroor post karoon gi
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