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masood_zuberi
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Post subject: Re:  Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 8:24 am |
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Masooma wrote:
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Kehnay ko aik choota sa mazak kiya mainay
Tumsay kab kaha tumsay pyaar kiya mainay
Soocha kuch, kaha kuch, aur samajhti kuch aur rahi
Aaj khudh say jhoot bolnay ka izhaar kiya mainay
Tumhari justuju main khudhsay nazrain churyeen
Dard ban kar he tou dard ka hisaab kiya mainay
Tanhaii gidgidati mili wafaa ki galiyoon main
Rula kay khudh ko mohabbat ka insaaf kiya mainay
Phaila kar phool khawaboon ki kabar pay yunhi
Pehli baar haqeeqat say aitraaf kiya mainay
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pyaaree ghazal hai ,bhut khub
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 11:15 am |
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phela kar phoolon ko kabar per yon hi
pahli bar ulfat ka izhar kia meny...... kia kahny masooma ji....
ye gazal he masooma ji.... pehly dor men ye bundishen hoti thin.... ap ko to zaroor maloom hoga ke gazal usy kahty hen ke jis men maqta or qata ke sath 6 misra hon... ho sukta he ke galati per hon? ap ki meri thread men reply karny ka shokriya.......
duaon ka talubgarrrrrr miskeen.
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 10:44 am |
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Masooma
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Post subject: Re: Re: Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:58 am |
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masood_zuberi wrote: pyaaree ghazal hai ,bhut khub Bohat shukriya janab.
Keep visiting.
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Masooma
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:59 am |
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miskeen wrote: phela kar phoolon ko kabar per yon hi
pahli bar ulfat ka izhar kia meny...... kia kahny masooma ji....
ye gazal he masooma ji.... pehly dor men ye bundishen hoti thin.... ap ko to zaroor maloom hoga ke gazal usy kahty hen ke jis men maqta or qata ke sath 6 misra hon... ho sukta he ke galati per hon? ap ki meri thread men reply karny ka shokriya.......
duaon ka talubgarrrrrr miskeen.
Bohat shukriya janab.
Hmmm... mujhay bhi iss maamlay main ziyada maloomat nahi hai magar research kar kay zaroor clear kar doon gi, InshAllah. Keep visiting.
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Masooma
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:59 am |
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aligoldeneye wrote: Bohat shukriya, thanks for your visit.
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masood_zuberi
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Post subject: Re: Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:54 am |
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Masooma wrote: Tum har lamha mujhay
Sirf azmatay ho
Bayintiha dard daitay
Baypannah tadpatay ho
Meri mohabbat ka faida
Har rooz tum uthatay ho
Mairay dil say khail kar
Unhi phaik jaatay ho
Mauka daikhtay he
Andaaz badal laitay ho
Apna faida daikhtay he
Khayal badal laytay ho
Apni mohabbat ki door say
Badhtay mujhay rakhtay ho
Jaisay door jaun main
Ussay kheench laitay ho
Mairay jazbaat ko tum
Kaid kiyay rakhtay ho
Har sanjeedah baat meri
Mazak samajh laitay ho
Agar choodh jaun main
Manna tum mujhay laitay ho
Akhir main phir bhi
Ummeed cheen laitay ho
Pyar bhari nigah say daikh kar
Khush kar daitay ho
Aglay he pal laikin
Rang badal laitay ho
Anjaan ban kar
Dukh bohat daitay ho
Mohabbat say mehroom rakh kar
Saaza mujhay daitay ho
Uff karti hoon tou
Behla tum laitay ho
Waaday kar kay bhi
Kyun bhula daitay ho
Dukh dai kar har pal
Ansoon chura laitay ho
Bhulanna chahoon tou
Kasam lay laitay ho
Dil say nikalti hoon tou
Khayaloon main bas jaatay ho
Apni halaat ka mujhay
Kasoor war tehratay ho
Na he hamdardi
Na dilasa daitay ho
Dard main kami tou kiya
Ezafa kar daitay ho bari nazuk khayal bandi hai wah khub
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:28 pm |
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Kehnay ko aik choota sa mazak kiya mainay
Tumsay kab kaha tumsay pyaar kiya mainay
acha khayal hai.....
Khush rahiye......
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Post subject: Re: Re: Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:58 am |
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masood_zuberi wrote: bari nazuk khayal bandi hai wah khub
Oh wow... apko meri itni puraani kawish pasand aayi. 
Bohat shukriya!
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:59 am |
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tabs wrote: Kehnay ko aik choota sa mazak kiya mainay
Tumsay kab kaha tumsay pyaar kiya mainay
acha khayal hai.....
Khush rahiye......
Bohat purana bhi hai
Nawazish.
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 9:10 am |
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kysy tumhain bhulain
Jis tarf bhe dykhain sifr tum ko he pain
Tum he zara btao hm kysy tumhain bhulain
Tery sath mil k baithna
Krty hoay bateen
wo pehroon waqat guzarna
kabi josh-e-mohabbat main tumhain bazoon main sameetna
wo pyar ke bateen bhala hum kis ko sunain
Tum he zara btao hum kysy tumhain bhulain
Rah main ruk kr kabhi mera intazar krna
Jo main na aa sakoon tuo muj sy roth jana
Kr kr k koshashain hazar wo tum ko manana
Tery bagair janam hum kis ko manain
Tum he zara btao hm kysy tumhain bhulain
Wo sada sath rehny ka ehad bandhna
Shama k sath jysy rehta prwana
Pal bhr ke bhee judai zara she na pana
Tuo bhool kr tum ko sheraz kysy reh pain
Tum he zara btao hm kysy tumhain bhulain
Hum ny socha tha jb wo mil jain gy
Hum ny socha tha jb wo mil jain gy
Un k milny sy hum pher badal jain gy
Hum jo rehty thy tanha udas sara din
Un ke qurbat main hum pher behal hain gy
Wo dain gy sahara humain aagy bhar k
Gar jo rah main kabhi hum phesal jain gy
Hum jo bekhary thy toot kr zindagi main
Un k milny sy hum pher sanbhal jain gy
Wo bhe chor dy ga keya khabr the sheraz
Etni jaldi mery armaan jal jain gy
Etny dinoo sy na koe na rabta
Etny dinoo sy na koe na rabta
Tum ko tanhai sy dar nahi lagta
Kysy guzarti ho tum sara din
Rat ke tanhai sy dr nahi lagta
Khud ko na bnaoo tum aik tamasha
Tum ko zalam tamashai sy dr nahi lagta
Kuen raaz khol rahy ho mera
Tum ko ruswai sy dr nahi lagta
Kuen chory ja rahy ho sheraz ko
Tum ko bewafai sy dr nahi lagta
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 5:00 pm |
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ASIM RAFIQ wrote: kysy tumhain bhulain
Jis tarf bhe dykhain sifr tum ko he pain
Tum he zara btao hm kysy tumhain bhulain
Tery sath mil k baithna
Krty hoay bateen
wo pehroon waqat guzarna
kabi josh-e-mohabbat main tumhain bazoon main sameetna
wo pyar ke bateen bhala hum kis ko sunain
Tum he zara btao hum kysy tumhain bhulain
Rah main ruk kr kabhi mera intazar krna
Jo main na aa sakoon tuo muj sy roth jana
Kr kr k koshashain hazar wo tum ko manana
Tery bagair janam hum kis ko manain
Tum he zara btao hm kysy tumhain bhulain
Wo sada sath rehny ka ehad bandhna
Shama k sath jysy rehta prwana
Pal bhr ke bhee judai zara she na pana
Tuo bhool kr tum ko sheraz kysy reh pain
Tum he zara btao hm kysy tumhain bhulain
Hum ny socha tha jb wo mil jain gy
Hum ny socha tha jb wo mil jain gy
Un k milny sy hum pher badal jain gy
Hum jo rehty thy tanha udas sara din
Un ke qurbat main hum pher behal hain gy
Wo dain gy sahara humain aagy bhar k
Gar jo rah main kabhi hum phesal jain gy
Hum jo bekhary thy toot kr zindagi main
Un k milny sy hum pher sanbhal jain gy
Wo bhe chor dy ga keya khabr the sheraz
Etni jaldi mery armaan jal jain gy
Etny dinoo sy na koe na rabta
Etny dinoo sy na koe na rabta
Tum ko tanhai sy dar nahi lagta
Kysy guzarti ho tum sara din
Rat ke tanhai sy dr nahi lagta
Khud ko na bnaoo tum aik tamasha
Tum ko zalam tamashai sy dr nahi lagta
Kuen raaz khol rahy ho mera
Tum ko ruswai sy dr nahi lagta
Kuen chory ja rahy ho sheraz ko
Tum ko bewafai sy dr nahi lagta ASIM RAFIQ Sahib, shairy.com (Aap ki shairy) mein ham aap ko teh e dil say Khush aamdeed kehtay hen.
Aap ki nazm aur ghazal bohat achi hen,yahan ka tariqa e kar ye hay keh apnay kalam kay liyay sab ki apni alag thraed hoti hay,aap nay masooma jee ki thraed mein apna kalam paish kia hay jis ki ijazat nahi hay,aap alag say apni nai thraed bana kar us mein apna kalam paish karen is tarah aap ka kalam bhi ak thraed mein rahay ga aur tamam dost usay pardh saken gay.
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Nam e jamhoor pe bazaar saja rakha hay
biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:39 pm |
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Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Kehnay ko aik choota sa mazak kiya mainay
Tumsay kab kaha tumsay pyaar kiya mainay
acha khayal hai.....
Khush rahiye......
Bohat purana bhi hai
Nawazish.A Word of advice.....Ager porana hai to Revive karlain..... 
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 12:47 pm |
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mahtabhashmi wrote:
Aap ki nazm aur ghazal bohat achi hen,yahan ka tariqa e kar ye hay keh apnay kalam kay liyay sab ki apni alag thraed hoti hay,aap nay masooma jee ki thraed mein apna kalam paish kia hay jis ki ijazat nahi hay,aap alag say apni nai thraed bana kar us mein apna kalam paish karen is tarah aap ka kalam bhi ak thraed mein rahay ga aur tamam dost usay pardh saken gay.
Bohat shukriya Hashmi sahab. Aapnay tou meri job asaan kar di
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 12:50 pm |
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tabs wrote: A Word of advice.....Ager porana hai to Revive karlain.....
Aur agar aap rehnumai kartay rahain gay tou InshAllah yeh kaam bhi jald he ho jayay ga.
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:42 pm |
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Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: A Word of advice.....Ager porana hai to Revive karlain.....
Aur agar aap rehnumai kartay rahain gay tou InshAllah yeh kaam bhi jald he ho jayay ga.
Acha aap kalam ki babat keh rahi thin hum samjhy koi rishata e daireena ka zikr hai....khair aap tazah kalam ataa kijiye hum hazir hain pazeerai ko... Bohat khush rahiye... Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:05 am |
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Masooma wrote: Soochti hoon kay apko bhula doon
Dil say aap ka naam-o-nishan mita doon
Bas isi nadangi may khushi gava doon
Aur aap ki jaga tanhai apna loon
Shayaad us say judai ka dard kam ho
Aap ko meri mohabbat ka ehsaas ho
Shayaad aap ko meri kadar ho jayay
Aur meri mohabbat safal ho jayay
Ap nay jo mujhay zakhm diyay hain
Woh tou na bhar paon gi main
Pyar jo anjanay main mila mujhay
Woh na lauta poan gi main kya baat hai .khub khub daad
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 7:32 pm |
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Masooma wrote: Aik baat kehni thi tujhsay
jo khudh say bhi na keh paayi
teri mohabbat aik saaza hai
yeh aaj samajh main aayi
Kyun main tujhay khudhsay
juda nahi kar paati
kyun teri yaadein ab
dil say dorr nahi jaati
Kyun meri haansi ab
laboon pay khatum ho jaati
kyun har umeed mujhay
teri orr kheench laati
Pyar ke yeh kaisi keemat
tu mujh say lay raha hai
kya mujh say itni nafraat
jo har lamha gham day raha hai
Ab tuu he baata
keh maira kasoor kya hai
tujh say mohabbat kar kay
mainay kiya jurm kiya hai
Kya main teri mohabbat kay
kisi haal main laiq nahi
kya mujhay iss ki saaza
aansoun main milay gi
Teri saari baatein
ab jhooth lagnay lagi hain
phir bhi teri hansi ko
na bhula paon gi main
Tunay ab aisay
kyun kaid kar rakha hai mujhay
kyun maira dil inqar karta hai
ab bhulanay say tujhay
Haar raat mairay khaboon main
aik tera hee chehra hai
ab tou maut bhi apna loon
agar akhrat main tou mera hai... Bahut hi pur-dard, bahut hi pur-asar nazam hai Masooma ji   ! Saada alfaaz meiN aap ne bahut gahri gahri baateiN kee haiN. Ma'asha Allah!
Allah karey zoar-e-qalam aur zeyaadah :buke
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:44 pm |
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tabs wrote:
Acha aap kalam ki babat keh rahi thin hum samjhy koi rishata e daireena ka zikr hai....khair aap tazah kalam ataa kijiye hum hazir hain pazeerai ko...
Bohat khush rahiye...
Tabassum
Bas furstay milay tou kuch likhoon. Uni bhi start ho gayi, job pehlay say thi... aur inspiration ka door door tak koi naam o nishaan nahi 
InshAllah Ramadan kay baad zaroor koshish karoon gi...
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Post subject: Re: Re: Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:46 pm |
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masood_zuberi wrote: kya baat hai .khub khub daad Bohat shukriya jee, aapnay meri poori thread main say yeh purana kalaam dhoodha aur uss par comment kiya. Keep visiting.
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Sep 10, 2009 11:35 pm |
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Asalam o alakium.... Ap ke sari posts he buhat achi hian.... buhat acha lekhti ho ap... Be happy always AmeeN.
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 7:34 pm |
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Masooma wrote: Kahan ghayb hain madam....4 din ki ghair hazri k paisay katain gay..... 
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 9:20 pm |
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tabs wrote: Kahan ghayb hain madam....4 din ki ghair hazri k paisay katain gay.....
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 12:48 pm |
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masooma g ap ka mukamal thread tu abi nahi prh saka
mager jo prha hai usay pata chalta hay k ap ka buhat hi piyaara aur masoom takhayal hai
sada khush rahein
duaon ka talibgaar
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Nazron k Wo Isharay yehi Sochtay rehay
Sir main humaray aj wo phairein gay Ungliyan
Zulfon ko hum Sanwary yehi sochtay rahay
Ik aur nya Zakhm sameer es ko kahan dein
Taqdeer K Sitaary yehi sochtay rahay
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Sep 17, 2009 5:15 pm |
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sameermoon wrote: masooma g ap ka mukamal thread tu abi nahi prh saka
mager jo prha hai usay pata chalta hay k ap ka buhat hi piyaara aur masoom takhayal hai
sada khush rahein
duaon ka talibgaar
Bohat shukriya janab. Welcome to my thread. Apnay apna waqt meri shairy ko diya, mujhay acha laga. Keep visiting and commenting.
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:30 am |
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SHAIRYFAN wrote: Masooma wrote: Aik baat kehni thi tujhsay
jo khudh say bhi na keh paayi
teri mohabbat aik saaza hai
yeh aaj samajh main aayi
Kyun main tujhay khudhsay
juda nahi kar paati
kyun teri yaadein ab
dil say dorr nahi jaati
Kyun meri haansi ab
laboon pay khatum ho jaati
kyun har umeed mujhay
teri orr kheench laati
masooma ye nazm bhut khub hai .kya bat hai .meree taraf se apko bhut bhut EID
MUBARAK HO .
Pyar ke yeh kaisi keemat
tu mujh say lay raha hai
kya mujh say itni nafraat
jo har lamha gham day raha hai
Ab tuu he baata
keh maira kasoor kya hai
tujh say mohabbat kar kay
mainay kiya jurm kiya hai
Kya main teri mohabbat kay
kisi haal main laiq nahi
kya mujhay iss ki saaza
aansoun main milay gi
Teri saari baatein
ab jhooth lagnay lagi hain
phir bhi teri hansi ko
na bhula paon gi main
Tunay ab aisay
kyun kaid kar rakha hai mujhay
kyun maira dil inqar karta hai
ab bhulanay say tujhay
Haar raat mairay khaboon main
aik tera hee chehra hai
ab tou maut bhi apna loon
agar akhrat main tou mera hai... Bahut hi pur-dard, bahut hi pur-asar nazam hai Masooma ji ! Saada alfaaz meiN aap ne bahut gahri gahri baateiN kee haiN. Ma'asha Allah!
Allah karey zoar-e-qalam aur zeyaadah :buke
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 12:48 pm |
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Masooma wrote: Nargisi Nazar
Dil ko dil he rehnay day, ibaadat gaH na kar
Judai hai mohabbat ki reet, panay ki chaH na kar
Mehfil abaad rahay gi, tehray uskay mehoob bohat
Na tadpa apni tanhai ko, yuN ussay gumraH na kar
Uss nargisi nazar say chandni tak sharmaa gayii...
Jo chehra madhoosh karde, uski tarf nigaaH na kar
Rehnay day pardah nasheeN ab yeh haal e dil janaa
Beh jaoN gi ishq e junuuN maiN, iss tarhaaN na kar
Lutf e gunah ka nasha hai thoda shoKh mizaaj
Meri hasrat na kar, zabt ko meray tabaaH na kar.. !!
July 20, 2009
Revised dasht-e-hijer main duaon ko pairhan krna asaan nahi hota masoom dard aur khoobsurat jazba hai khush rahiye
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Chaerein ya us ko aj, Na Chaerein,Her Aik Roz
Nazron k Wo Isharay yehi Sochtay rehay
Sir main humaray aj wo phairein gay Ungliyan
Zulfon ko hum Sanwary yehi sochtay rahay
Ik aur nya Zakhm sameer es ko kahan dein
Taqdeer K Sitaary yehi sochtay rahay
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:43 am |
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sameermoon wrote: Masooma wrote: Nargisi Nazar
Dil ko dil he rehnay day, ibaadat gaH na kar
Judai hai mohabbat ki reet, panay ki chaH na kar
Mehfil abaad rahay gi, tehray uskay mehoob bohat
Na tadpa apni tanhai ko, yuN ussay gumraH na kar
Uss nargisi nazar say chandni tak sharmaa gayii...
Jo chehra madhoosh karde, uski tarf nigaaH na kar
Lutf e gunah ka nasha hai thoda shoKh mizaaj
Meri hasrat na kar, zabt ko meray tabaaH na kar.. !!
July 20, 2009
Revised dasht-e-hijer main duaon ko pairhan krna asaan nahi hota masoom dard aur khoobsurat jazba hai khush rahiye
Rehnay day pardah nasheeN ab yeh haal e dil janaa
Beh jaoN gi ishq e junuuN maiN, iss tarhaaN na kar
kamal hud-e-kamal kia kehny ap ne humen ehsaas-e-kumtari men daal dia hahahah. khush rahen. boht aala gazal he.
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:27 am |
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sameermoon wrote:
dasht-e-hijer main duaon ko pairhan krna asaan nahi hota
masoom dard aur khoobsurat jazba hai
khush rahiye
Bohat shukriya janab.
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 5:54 am |
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kahan hen ap masooma ji hum ap ki new gazal ke intazar men hen!
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 6:59 pm |
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miskeen wrote:
kahan hen ap masooma ji hum ap ki new gazal ke intazar men hen!
Bas janab... abhi haal kuch iss tarhaan hai kay:
Masooma wrote: Kabhi jeet tou kabhi haar ho jaati hai
Zara si baat kehna dushwaar ho jaati hai
Kabhi tou alfaaz saath nahi daytay mera
Kabhi khamoshi dil pay sawaar ho jaati hai
... Bohat pehlay likha thay yeh... Abhi kay liyay...
Lack of inspiration, writers block, kuch bhi keh lain... aaj kal likha nahi ja raha
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 7:26 pm |
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Kabhi jeet tou kabhi haar ho jaati hai
Zara si baat kehna dushwaar ho jaati hai
Kabhi tou alfaaz saath nahi daytay mera
Kabhi khamoshi dil pay sawaar ho jaati hai
wah wah kia bat he! acha ji hum phir bhi ap ki new gazal ke intazar men rahen gy. miskeen.
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Post subject: Re: Re: Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 4:36 am |
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masood_zuberi wrote: Masooma wrote: Tum har lamha mujhay
Sirf azmatay ho
Bayintiha dard daitay
Baypannah tadpatay ho
Meri mohabbat ka faida
Har rooz tum uthatay ho
Mairay dil say khail kar
Unhi phaik jaatay ho
Mauka daikhtay he
Andaaz badal laitay ho
Apna faida daikhtay he
Khayal badal laytay ho
Apni mohabbat ki door say
Badhtay mujhay rakhtay ho
Jaisay door jaun main
Ussay kheench laitay ho
Mairay jazbaat ko tum
Kaid kiyay rakhtay ho
Har sanjeedah baat meri
Mazak samajh laitay ho
Agar choodh jaun main
Manna tum mujhay laitay ho
Akhir main phir bhi
Ummeed cheen laitay ho
Pyar bhari nigah say daikh kar
Khush kar daitay ho
Aglay he pal laikin
Rang badal laitay ho
Anjaan ban kar
Dukh bohat daitay ho
Mohabbat say mehroom rakh kar
Saaza mujhay daitay ho
Uff karti hoon tou
Behla tum laitay ho
Waaday kar kay bhi
Kyun bhula daitay ho
Dukh dai kar har pal
Ansoon chura laitay ho
Bhulanna chahoon tou
Kasam lay laitay ho
Dil say nikalti hoon tou
Khayaloon main bas jaatay ho
Apni halaat ka mujhay
Kasoor war tehratay ho
Na he hamdardi
Na dilasa daitay ho
Dard main kami tou kiya
Ezafa kar daitay ho bari nazuk khayal bandi hai wah khub kia bat hay MASOOMA kitni masoom si poetry likhi hay or intehai masoomiyat say sab kuch likh ghaeen 
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khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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Post subject: Re: Re: Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 3:23 am |
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masood_zuberi wrote: Masooma wrote: Tum har lamha mujhay
Sirf azmatay ho
Bayintiha dard daitay
Baypannah tadpatay ho
Meri mohabbat ka faida
Har rooz tum uthatay ho
Mairay dil say khail kar
Unhi phaik jaatay ho
Mauka daikhtay he
Andaaz badal laitay ho
Apna faida daikhtay he
Khayal badal laytay ho
Apni mohabbat ki door say
Badhtay mujhay rakhtay ho
Jaisay door jaun main
Ussay kheench laitay ho
Mairay jazbaat ko tum
Kaid kiyay rakhtay ho
Har sanjeedah baat meri
Mazak samajh laitay ho
Agar choodh jaun main
Manna tum mujhay laitay ho
Akhir main phir bhi
Ummeed cheen laitay ho
Pyar bhari nigah say daikh kar
Khush kar daitay ho
Aglay he pal laikin
Rang badal laitay ho
Anjaan ban kar
Dukh bohat daitay ho
Mohabbat say mehroom rakh kar
Saaza mujhay daitay ho
Uff karti hoon tou
Behla tum laitay ho
Waaday kar kay bhi
Kyun bhula daitay ho
Dukh dai kar har pal
Ansoon chura laitay ho
Bhulanna chahoon tou
Kasam lay laitay ho
Dil say nikalti hoon tou
Khayaloon main bas jaatay ho
Apni halaat ka mujhay
Kasoor war tehratay ho
Na he hamdardi
Na dilasa daitay ho
Dard main kami tou kiya
Ezafa kar daitay ho bari nazuk khayal bandi hai wah khub
may to issay perh ker ser zada si reh ghai
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khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 11:12 am |
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Masooma,
masooma hw r u .kafi arse se koi bat naheen ho saki . men bhi kuch post naheen karsaka. apki ye ghazal bhut hi khubsurat hai .meree daad qabool karen .china kaisa hai .hw about ur studies .
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Nahi Maloom Kyun likhta Raha hun
Hikayat-e-junoon likhta raha hun
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Post subject: Re: !! Mehfil e Sukhan !! Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:06 am |
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masood_zuberi wrote: SHAIRYFAN wrote: Masooma wrote: Aik baat kehni thi tujhsay
jo khudh say bhi na keh paayi
teri mohabbat aik saaza hai
yeh aaj samajh main aayi
Kyun main tujhay khudhsay
juda nahi kar paati
kyun teri yaadein ab
dil say dorr nahi jaati
Kyun meri haansi ab
laboon pay khatum ho jaati
kyun har umeed mujhay
teri orr kheench laati
masooma ye nazm bhut khub hai .kya bat hai .meree taraf se apko bhut bhut EID
MUBARAK HO .
Pyar ke yeh kaisi keemat
tu mujh say lay raha hai
kya mujh say itni nafraat
jo har lamha gham day raha hai
Ab tuu he baata
keh maira kasoor kya hai
tujh say mohabbat kar kay
mainay kiya jurm kiya hai
Kya main teri mohabbat kay
kisi haal main laiq nahi
kya mujhay iss ki saaza
aansoun main milay gi
Teri saari baatein
ab jhooth lagnay lagi hain
phir bhi teri hansi ko
na bhula paon gi main
Tunay ab aisay
kyun kaid kar rakha hai mujhay
kyun maira dil inqar karta hai
ab bhulanay say tujhay
Haar raat mairay khaboon main
aik tera hee chehra hai
ab tou maut bhi apna loon
agar akhrat main tou mera hai... Bahut hi pur-dard, bahut hi pur-asar nazam hai Masooma ji ! Saada alfaaz meiN aap ne bahut gahri gahri baateiN kee haiN. Ma'asha Allah!
Allah karey zoar-e-qalam aur zeyaadah :buke masooma ji kahan hain aap
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khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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