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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi***  Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 8:10 am |
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"Faiz" mai.n shaayar vahii huu.N shaam-e-tanhaaii me.n kal
dha.Dakano.n ke saaz par jis kii Ghazal gaa_ii ga_ii
Ghazal
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 9:05 am |
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haifa_s wrote: "Faiz" mai.n shaayar vahii huu.N shaam-e-tanhaaii me.n kal
dha.Dakano.n ke saaz par jis kii Ghazal gaa_ii ga_ii
Ghazal mera diya lafz kya aap ko pasaNd nahiiN aaya ''haifa_s'' jii jo use chhoRh diyaa...pahle aap lafz ''anjuman_aaraa'' par sher inaayat kiijiye phir ham aap ke diye lafz par sher pesh kareNge.... 
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 9:15 am |
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mahafil-e-shauq me.n ik dhuum machaa dii us ne
khalvat-e-dil me.n rahii anjuman-aaraa ban kar
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 10:20 am |
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balvinder wrote: sono wrote: "tanhaii"
kyaa tira haal bhii ai anjuman_aaraa hai yahii?
main tire paas hooN, lekin vohii tanhaaii hai
~anjuman_aaraa~balvinder wrote: haifa_s wrote: "Faiz" mai.n shaayar vahii huu.N shaam-e-tanhaaii me.n kal
dha.Dakano.n ke saaz par jis kii Ghazal gaa_ii ga_ii
Ghazal mera diya lafz kya aap ko pasaNd nahiiN aaya ''haifa_s'' jii jo use chhoRh diyaa...pahle aap lafz ''anjuman_aaraa'' par sher inaayat kiijiye phir ham aap ke diye lafz par sher pesh kareNge.... sorry balvinder sahib gustakhi maaf, magar hum sono ji ke word "tanha_ii" ka jawab dena chha rahe the lekiin itne mein app ne kamal ker diya, orr page bhi change ho gaya isiliye aap ki post meri nazar se guzrii hii nahin lekin li jiye abb haziir hain hum ba_ma lafz ''anjuman_aaraa'' ke. shamo.n me.n ab nahii.n hai vo pahale sii roshanii
shaayad vo chaa.Nd anjuman_aaraa hai in dino.nQateel Shifaichaa.Nd
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 2:32 pm |
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haifa_s wrote: sorry balvinder sahib gustakhi maaf, magar hum sono ji ke word "tanha_ii" ka jawab dena chha rahe the lekiin itne mein app ne kamal ker diya, orr page bhi change ho gaya isiliye aap ki post meri nazar se guzrii hii nahin lekin li jiye abb haziir hain hum ba_ma lafz ''anjuman_aaraa'' ke.
chaa.Nd ajii ''sorry'' kii ko_ii guNzaaish nahiiN is bazm meN...ye sab to mazakan chalta rahta hai... 
khoob sher pesh kiye haiN lafz ''anjuman_aara'' par aapne aur ''tabassum'' sahab ne...ab aap ke diye lafz par ye sher aap kii nazar....
sau chaaNd bhii chamakeNge to kya baat banegi
tum aaye to is raat kii auqaat banegii
~auqaat~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Wed Jan 27, 2010 7:48 pm |
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din mein ham ko dekhane vaalo apane apane hain auqaat
jaao na tum in Khusk aaNkhon par ham raaton ko ro le hain
Firaq Gorakhpuri
"khusk"
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Thu Jan 28, 2010 4:32 pm |
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khushk tinko.n se Ghar bana rahe ho Mohsin
Ye JaanTe bhi ho Ke Mizaaj-e-Yaar Aag saa Hai.
Mizaaj-e-Yaar
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 5:58 am |
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vaade the beshumaar magar ai mizaaj-e-yaar
ham yaad kyaa dilaayeN nazaakat yahii to hai
Hashim Raza
"nazakat"
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 9:43 am |
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sono wrote: "nazakat" naaz hai gul ko nazaakat pe chaman meiN ai ''Zauq''
us ne dekhe hii nahiiN naaz-o-nazaakat vaale
~naaz~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 8:28 pm |
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aataa hai kis andaaz se tuk naaz to dekho
kis dhaj se qadam parataa hai andaaz to dekho
Mussafi
"dhaj"
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 6:43 am |
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chumne daar ko kiss dhaj se chala hai koi
aaj kiss naaz se maqtal mai qaza aati hai
maqtal
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 8:08 am |
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hisaar-e-maqtal-e-jaaN mein lahuu lahuu main thaa
rasan rasan merii vahashat guluu guluu main thaa
Alam Tab 'Tashna'
"vahshat"
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 3:10 pm |
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ishq ne pakaraa na thaa "Ghalib" abhii vahashat kaa rang
rah gayaa thaa dil me.n jo kuchh zauq-e-Khavarii haa_e haa_e
[ishq]
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 7:25 pm |
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yak_sar jahaan-e-husn bhii badalaa huaa saa hai
duniyaa-e-ishq aur nazar aa rahii hai aaj
[Firaq Gorakhpuri]
"husn"
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 9:39 am |
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sono wrote: "husn" ik haqeeqat sahee firdaus meiN hooroN ka vujood
husn-e-insaaN se nimaT looN to vahaaN tak dekhooN
~firdaus~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 9:52 am |
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lo vo sadiyo.n ke jahannum kii haddein Khatm ho_ii
ab hai firdaus hii firdaus jahaa.N tak aa_o
haddein
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 3:16 pm |
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haifa_s wrote: haddein hadeiN husn-o-muhabbat kii milaa kar
qayaamat par qayaamat Dhaa rahaa hooN
~husn-o-muhabbat~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 4:27 pm |
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wo manzar, manzar-e-husn-o-muhabbat
wohee bas chaar-soo hai aur maiN hooN
chaar-soo
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 7:58 am |
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tuu aaftaab agar thaa to kyon Guruub huaa
ye raushanii see tere baad chaar-suu kyaa thii
Shehzad Ahmed
"aftab"
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 9:32 am |
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sono wrote: aftab subh-e-chaman meN ek yehi aaftaab tha
is aadamii kii laash ko aizaaz se uThaa
~aizaaz~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 6:40 pm |
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Mashriq ki hi Tehzib ko ye Aizaaz Mila hai
Maghrib mein kahan hote hai, rukhsar-e-hayaa Surkh
"surkh"
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:00 pm |
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sono wrote: "surkh" baat zaroor ko_ii hai dil meN, ham se baat chhupaate ho
ko_ii Khayaal to aayaa jisne cheharaa surkh gulaab kiyaa
~gulaab~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 7:46 am |
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ab itr bhii malo to mahabbat kii buu nahiin
vo din havaa huye ki pasiinaa gulaab thaa
[Madhoram Jauhar]
"hava"
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:28 am |
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sono wrote: "hava" samaiT letii shikasta gulaab kii khushboo
hawa ke haath meN aisa ko_ii hunar hi na tha
~hunar~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:04 am |
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ham-nashiin Khuub hai ye mahafil-e-yaaraaN ke yahaaN
vo saliqaa hai ke aibon ko hunar karate hain
Baqar Zaidi
"ham-nashiin"
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:45 am |
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sono wrote: "ham-nashiin" lab pe aayii na vo baat hii ham_nashiiN
aaye kyaa-kyaa suKhan darmiyaaN-darmiyaaN
''Firaq''
~darmiyaaN~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 7:33 am |
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ik Khalish ko haasil-e-umr-e-ravaaN rahne diyaa
jaankar hamne unheiN na_meharbaaN rahne diyaa
aarzoo-e-qarb bhii bakhshii diloN ne ishq ko
faaslaa bhii mere-unke darmiyaaN rahne diyaa
Khalish
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:00 am |
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koi mere dil se puuchhe tere teer-e-neem-kash ko
ye Khalish kahaan se hoti jo jigar ke paar hotaa
Jigar
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:06 am |
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josh-e-mahashar hai tashnaakaam abhii
chaak-e-daaman ko taa-jigar kar de
chaak-e-daaman
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 8:16 am |
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 Talaash-e-manzil adraak kerkey dekhtey hein, Ghubara-e-rah ko poshaak kerkey dekhtey hein, Hey kitna khoon baharon ki mezbani ko, Khazan mein daman-e-chaak kerkey dekhtey hein Mezbani
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:12 am |
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balvinder wrote: haifa_s wrote: Mezbani  liijiye hamaarii jaanib se sher suniye ''mezbaani'' par...
paas rahna kisii ka raat kii raat
mahmaanii bhii, mezbaanii bhii
~paas~[qareeb]boht khoob Balvinder sir  ye jo hai hukm mere paas na aaye ko_ii
is liye routh rahe hain ke manaaye ko_ii
hukm
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 9:39 am |
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haifa_s wrote: boht khoob Balvinder sir hukm
taGhaaful se hamko na barbaad kar
koii hukm farmaa, kuchh irshaad kar
~irshaad~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 2:26 pm |
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aah ke dil ne na phir shikva-e-bedaad kiyaa
jab se sharmiili nigaahoN ne kuchh irshaad kiyaa
nigaahoN
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 3:17 pm |
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haifa_s wrote: nigaahoN too nigaahoN ki zubaaN Khoob samajhtaa hogaa
terii jaanib to uThaa kartii haiN aksar aaNkheiN
~jaanib~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 5:22 am |
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uthaoo aankh na sharmaaoo ye to mehfill hai
ghazab se jaanib-e-aghyaar dekhte jao
mehfill
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 9:33 am |
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haifa_s wrote: [b]mehfill hamiiN jab na hoNge, to kya raNg-e-mehfil?
kise dekh kar aap sharmaaiyegaa?
~sharmaana~
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 2:21 pm |
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doono jahaaN de ke vo samjhe ye Khush raha
yahaN aa pari ye sharm ki takarar kiyaa karen
Mirza Ghalib
[sharm]
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Post subject: Re: ***Lafzoon Ki Bait Bazi*** Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:13 pm |
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haifa_s wrote: [sharm] mujh ko diyaar-e-Ghair meN maara watan se door
rakh lii mere Khuda ne merii bekasii kii sharm
''Ghalib''
~bekasii~
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mazHab koii lauTa le, aur uskii jagah de-de
tahzeeb saleeqe kii, insaan qareene ke
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