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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den*  Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:11 pm |
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haseebWAHAB wrote: kya ajab rang laayi hai zamaane ki sang dili
mere dhadakte dil ko bhi patthar bana diya
umeed hai mera ye do sher aap ko pasand aayenge,.........
haseeb................ khush_aamdeed ''haseeb'' sahab....khoob as'aar pesh kiye haiN aapne...ummiid hai ''bait_baazi'' meN mulaaqaat hotii rahegii....khush rahiye.
ab ye suniye...
har dhaRhakate patthar ko log dil samajhate haiN
umr beet jaatii hai dil ko dil banaane meN
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:33 pm |
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balvinder wrote: haseebWAHAB wrote: kya ajab rang laayi hai zamaane ki sang dili
mere dhadakte dil ko bhi patthar bana diya
umeed hai mera ye do sher aap ko pasand aayenge,.........
haseeb................ khush_aamdeed ''haseeb'' sahab....khoob as'aar pesh kiye haiN aapne...ummiid hai ''bait_baazi'' meN mulaaqaat hotii rahegii....khush rahiye.
ab ye suniye...
har dhaRhakate patthar ko log dil samajhate haiN
umr beet jaatii hai dil ko dil banaane meN bohot munaasib jawaab diya hai aapne,..... mera ek maqta arz hai,.... taajub hota hai mujhe dil ki sakhti par ''haseeb'' ye toot bhi jaaye to awaaz nahi karta umeed hai aap ko pasand aayega...... haseeb.............
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 9:49 am |
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haseebWAHAB wrote: bohot munaasib jawaab diya hai aapne,.....
mera ek maqta arz hai,....
taajub hota hai mujhe dil ki sakhti par ''haseeb''
ye toot bhi jaaye to awaaz nahi karta
umeed hai aap ko pasand aayega......
haseeb............. bahut khoob ''haseeb'' sahab.... 
zaraa na moom huaa pyaar ki haraarat se
chiTakh ke TooT gaya, dil ka sakht aisa tha
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:34 pm |
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bohot khoob,........
ye suniye,....
dil lagaane ki kisi se wo saza paayi ke bas
aisi aisi Ishq me Is dil me ban aayi ke bas
shameem jaipuri.
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 3:14 pm |
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haseebWAHAB wrote: dil lagaane ki kisi se wo saza paayi ke bas
aisi aisi Ishq me Is dil me ban aayi ke bas
shameem jaipuri. is tarah sataayaa hai pareshaan kiya hai
goya ke muhabbat nahiiN ehsaan kiya hai
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 6:37 pm |
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balvinder wrote: haseebWAHAB wrote: dil lagaane ki kisi se wo saza paayi ke bas
aisi aisi Ishq me Is dil me ban aayi ke bas
shameem jaipuri. is tarah sataayaa hai pareshaan kiya hai
goya ke muhabbat nahiiN ehsaan kiya haibohot umda,... ab zara ye suniye,..... kabhi hausle dil ke hum bhi nikaalen Idhar aao tum ko gale se lagaalen bahlaa zabt ki bhi koi Intehaa hai kahan tak tabiyat ko apni sambhaalen AZIZ LUKHNAVI. qush rahen,....
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 8:45 am |
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Baazi Cha-a-yat-Faal Hai, Duniya Mirey Aage /
Hota Hai Shab-O-Roz, Tamaashaa Mirey Aage //
Hota Hai Ni-haan Gard Mein, Sehraa Mirey Hotey,
Ghista Hai Ja-been Khak Pe, Dariyaa mirey Aage //
Mat Puch Ke Kya Haal Hai Mira, Tirey Pichee,
Tu Dekh Ke Kya Rang Hai, Tira Mirey Aage //
Ie-maan Mujhe Roke Hai, Jo Khinche Hai Hujhe ku-fr,
kaaba Mire Piche Hai, Kalisaa Mirey Aage //
Go Haath Ko Jum-bish Nahi, Aankhoo Mein To Dum Hai,
Rehne Do Abhi Saagroo-Mina Mire Aage //
(Ghalib)
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 10:59 am |
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qush aamadeed noor Is section me aap ka qair maqdam hai,..........
yahan sher ak hawab sher se diya jata hai aap ne poori ghzal post kardi hai
khair ,ye sher suniye,......
bhule na kisi haal me aadaab e nazar hum
mudkar na tujhe dekh sake waqt e safar hum
JAAN NISAAR AQTAR,....
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 2:27 pm |
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haseebWAHAB wrote: kabhi hausle dil ke hum bhi nikaalen
Idhar aao tum ko gale se lagaalen
AZIZ LUKHNAVI ab dekhiye ''Azeez'' Lakhnavi sahab kii karastaanii....farmaate haiN ki...
sharma ke usne mujh ko gale se lagaa liyaa
maayoosi-e-nigaah ajab kaam kar gayii 
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 3:01 pm |
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haseebWAHAB wrote: bhule na kisi haal me aadaab e nazar hum
mudkar na tujhe dekh sake waqt e safar hum
JAAN NISAAR AQTAR,.... aur yahaaN ye haal hai ki....
saaNs thaame haiN nigaaheN ke na jaane kis dam
tum palaT aa'o, guzar jaa'o, ke muRh kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 3:13 pm |
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balvinder wrote: haseebWAHAB wrote: bhule na kisi haal me aadaab e nazar hum
mudkar na tujhe dekh sake waqt e safar hum
JAAN NISAAR AQTAR,.... aur yahaaN ye haal hai ki....
saaNs thaame haiN nigaaheN ke na jaane kis dam
tum palaT aa'o, guzar jaa'o, ke muRh kar dekhobohot qoob sahab ab zara ey suniye,...... meri judaaiyon se wo milkar nahi gaya uske baghair mai bhi koi mar nahi gaya MUZAFFAR WAARSI,.....
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 3:29 pm |
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haseebWAHAB wrote: meri judaaiyon se wo milkar nahi gaya
uske baghair mai bhi koi mar nahi gaya
MUZAFFAR WAARSI,..... ye huii kuchh anaa_parastii kii baat...bahut khoob....
kaT hii gayi judaai bhii, yeh kab huaa ke mar gaye?
tere bhii din guzar gaye ! mere bhii din guzar gaye
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 7:23 am |
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balvinder wrote: haseebWAHAB wrote: meri judaaiyon se wo milkar nahi gaya
uske baghair mai bhi koi mar nahi gaya
MUZAFFAR WAARSI,..... ye huii kuchh anaa_parastii kii baat...bahut khoob....
kaT hii gayi judaai bhii, yeh kab huaa ke mar gaye?
tere bhii din guzar gaye ! mere bhii din guzar gayebohot acha hai,....... ye suniye,..... aankhon ka rang baat ka lehjaa badal gaya wo shaqs ek shaam me kitna badal gaya jab apne apne haal pe hum tum na reh sake to kya hua jo humse zamaana badal gaya AMJAD ISLAAM ''AMJAD''
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:23 pm |
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haseebWAHAB wrote: aankhon ka rang baat ka lehjaa badal gaya
wo shaqs ek shaam me kitna badal gaya
jab apne apne haal pe hum tum na reh sake
to kya hua jo humse zamaana badal gaya
AMJAD ISLAAM ''AMJAD'' tere saaNche meN Dhalta ja raha hooN
na jaane kyooN badalta ja raha hooN
ye kaisi kaifiyat taarii hai mujh par
ke khud se bhii ulajhta ja raha hooN
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 5:11 pm |
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bohot qoob,........
lekin mera nazarya zara alag hai,........
mere ye do sher mulaaheza kijiye,......
mai jo hoon jaisa hoon ab waisa hi rahunga
mai mitti ka hun par saanche me dhalna nahi aata
mai to Insaan hoon koi mausam nahi ''haseeb''
waqt ke saath mujh ko badalnaa nahi aata
umeed hai aap ko mere ye do sher pasand aayenge,..........
haseeb............
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 8:35 am |
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haifa_s wrote: suna hai unheN bhii hawa lag ga_ii
hawaoN ke jo ruKh badalte rahey apnii marzii se kahaaN apne safar ke ham haiN
ruKh havaaoN ka jidhar ka hai, udhar ke ham haiN
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Thu Mar 18, 2010 1:22 pm |
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haifa_s wrote: suna hai unheN bhii hawa lag ga_ii
hawaoN ke jo ruKh badalte rahey
andaaz huu-ba-huu terii aavaaz-e-paa kaa thaa dekhaa nikal ke ghar se to jhauNkaa havaa kaa thaa AHMED NADEEM QASMI.
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 9:40 am |
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haseebWAHAB wrote: andaaz huu-ba-huu terii aavaaz-e-paa kaa thaa
dekhaa nikal ke ghar se to jhauNkaa havaa kaa thaa
AHMED NADEEM QASMI. paa-e-khoobaaN koii zindaaN meN naya hai majnooN
aage aavaaz-e-salaasil kabhii aisii to na thii
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:06 am |
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haifa_s wrote: paa-e-bosii bhi tumhein yaar ki mill jaye gii
oss ke koochey ki zara Khaak to mill jaaney do le to looN sote meN us ke paaoN ka bosaa, magar
aisii baatoN se voh kaafir bad_gumaaN ho jaayega
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Post subject: Shair Ka jawab Shair se den Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 1:06 pm |
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So-tey Main Muskuraati Hai, Aankhee Bhi Hamaari /
Meri Palkoon Ko, Abhi Khwaab Chupane Nahi Aate //
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 1:19 pm |
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Mud-Datain Guzar Gayi Hai, Aankoo Ko Soye Hue /
Koi Apne Intazaar Ka, Aisa Huner Palkoon Ko De Gaya //
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 1:26 pm |
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Main Chup Tha, To Chalti Hawaa Ruk Gayi /
Zabaan Sab Samajhte Hai, Jazbaat Ki //
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Post subject: Re: Shair Ka jawab Shair se den Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:19 am |
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Noor__rj99 wrote: So-tey Main Muskuraati Hai, Aankhee Bhi Hamaari
Meri Palkoon Ko, Abhi Khwaab Chupane Nahi Aate //
be_Khabar too ne abhi aa_iinaa dekhaa nahiiN
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 2:51 am |
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sono wrote: aaiina dekh apna sa muuNh le ke reh gaye
sahab ko dil na dene pe kitna gurrur tha maiN ne yooNhi mazaaq meN us ko kaha tha chaaNd
aa_iinaa baar baar ko_ii dekhtaa rahaa 
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 3:12 pm |
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sono wrote: balvinder wrote: maiN ne yooNhi mazaaq meN us ko kaha tha chaaNd
aa_iinaa baar baar ko_ii dekhtaa rahaa Main kyon na daad doon us ke fun ki
Mere har sawal ka pehlay hi jawab rakhta hai
ab un ke husn meN husn-e-nazar bhii shaamil hai
kuchh aur merii nazar se saNvar gayaa ko_ii
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 5:19 pm |
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balvinder wrote:
ab un ke husn meN husn-e-nazar bhii shaamil hai
kuchh aur merii nazar se saNvar gayaa ko_ii[/b]
chaahiye paiGaamabar dono taraf
lutf kyaa jab duu-ba-duu hone lagii
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Sun May 16, 2010 4:49 am |
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sono wrote: chaahiye paiGaamabar dono taraf
lutf kyaa jab duu-ba-duu hone lagii arey ye silsila to rukaa paRha hai....chaliye ise phir se shuroo karte haiN...
ham ek umr se vaaqif haiN ab na samjhaao
ke lutf kya hai mere mehrabaaN sitam kya hai
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Wed May 19, 2010 10:54 am |
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haifa_s wrote: ay muhabbat ky marahil sy guzrney waley
to ne aanso kabhi deikha hei sitara kr ky ai ishq ! dekh ham bhii haiN kis dil ke aadamii
mahmaaN banaa ke gham ko kalejaa khilaa diyaa
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Thu May 20, 2010 11:46 am |
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haifa_s wrote: ishq mein our kuch nahin milta
saikroN gham naseab hotey hein jin se mil kar zindagi se ishq ho jaaye voh log
aap ne shaayad na dekhe hoN, magar aise bhii haiN
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Post subject: Re: *Shair Ka jawab Shair se den* Posted: Sat May 22, 2010 1:08 pm |
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haifa_s wrote: ishq hr haal ik tarap thehra!
furqat-e-yar to bahana hy kitne majboor haiN ham log anaa ke haathoN
ishq karte haiN, ko_ii aur bahaana kar ke
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