ak gazal doston k naam

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 2710

miskeen wrote:

salam dosto ... kuch dino naya likha nahi ja raha... iss liye aik nazum post kar raha hon jo competation main likhi thi....

kiya aapus main ajnabi hen?

kabhi juzbat main kahy kuch alfaaz
kabhi be khoodi main kahi aik baat,
hur shub ka mutlaash he aik din,
aor din ki talaash main hur raat,

kiya aapus main ajnabi hen.

poorub se chaleeN jub thandi hawain
be qaraari main kahin goonjti sadain,
sawan ky maheeny main badaloN ka bhatukna,
ya kaali ghataoN se rim jhim bursaat.

kiya aapus main ajnabi hen?.

jawani main raatoN ko julna tarupna,
ya apno ko seeny se laga kar lapukna,
ya husrat se bistar per kurwat badulna,
phir mehboob aor dilbar ki ajub hurqaat.

kiya aapus main ajnabi hen?.
kiya aapus main ajnabi hen?.
miskeen.

naya kiwn nahin likha ja raha :^^:

wajha

waisey bohot achi poetry likhi hey aap ney :b)b:

miskeen · **Posted:** Sun Jun 13, 2010 1:00 pm

THANX RABIA... NEW PATA NAHI KIYON LIKHA JA RAHA.... THANX AGAIN.

Tifl e Maktab · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 5528

Aray Sain! hi cha tho karay! (sorry) Bhai ye kya kiya aap ne.....edit kyun kar diya hum to naya kalam parhnay aaye thay....

subahh · **Posted:** Wed Jun 16, 2010 2:22 pm

jalal...intezaar hae....nahi likh jaraha koi baat nahi hota hae essa kabhi kabhi ...par pm kerdia hota...ya hungama main gupshup...??
khush rahain :dua

Tifl e Maktab · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 5528

Tifl e Maktab wrote:

miskeen wrote:

.............................. (GEET)..............................

Zara aakar mery seeny k sary dard o gum dekho.
sahy kitny teri khaatir ye sub runj o alum dekho.

kisi ko dekh kar chehra tera shadab nahi hota,
tarap ker dil tera aakhir kabhi betab nahi hota,
kabhi dehleez-e-ulfat per jhuka kar sur ko tum dekho.

tumhari yad dheery sy koi surgoshi kerti he,
ye ankheN bheeg jati hen ye dharkan thum si jati he,
chaly aao meri chahut ka toota tum bharum dekho.

shub-e-hijraN ki tareeki gum-e-doraN k aalum main,
udasi chaa gai dil per ghutan barh gai he seeny main,
nahi hoty tery bardashut ab zulm o sittum dekho.

zamany bhar ki ruswai mery daman main bhar di he,
k ruswai bhi purchai ki terha daor aati he,
bachalo aabroo meri tujhy meri qasam dekho.

nahi purwah he ab miskeen ko agyaar ki logo,
taman'na he dil-e-nashad ko deedar ki logo,
bappa matum wafa ki laash per aa kar sanam dekho.

(Miskeen)

Shah sb, aik indian geet hai "Agr mjhse mohabbat hai, Mjhe apnay sab gham de do" main ne aap ka geet is tarz per gungunaya mjhe bohat acha laga....ab dekhtay hain k aap agr is geet ko is tarz per gain gay to kaisa lagay ga......

Will be waiting for you in the Audio Poetry................

kia zabardust judge kiya he aap ny wahhhhhh... ba khuda meny issi dhun per hi ye geet likha he... Qibla maan gaey aap ko.... wesy mujhy audio poetry ka thread oprate kerna nahi aata... plz rehnomai furmaen... sir meri aawaz boht kharab he.....

Shah Sb,

hum aap ka be-chaini se intezar kar rahay hain.......Audio Poetry main.......

Dosto! mjhe bohat khushi aur fakhr mehsoos ho raha hai aap sab ko ye batanay main k Shah sb, ka ye geet Hyderabad Radio per gaya aur sunaya gaya hai......

Congratz Shah Sb, Bohat bohat mubarak ho aap ko............. :buke:

subahh · **Posted:** Thu Jun 17, 2010 7:59 pm

shukria tabs ess information ka....
jalal mubarak ho....sain...hum ko ye audio kahan sunnay ko milay ga...?..yahan audio poetry main mumkin hae ya nahi??
khush rahain

razasoomro · **Joined:** Sat Aug 29, 2009 6:01 am **Posts:** 197

Shah Sb, abh dosto say kiya parda dari, bata bhi dain

Regards,

Saleem Raza

lovely · **Joined:** Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:27 pm **Posts:** 165

cuty wrote:

miskeen wrote:

salam dosto ... kuch dino naya likha nahi ja raha... iss liye aik nazum post kar raha hon jo competation main likhi thi....

kiya aapus main ajnabi hen?

kabhi juzbat main kahy kuch alfaaz
kabhi be khoodi main kahi aik baat,
hur shub ka mutlaash he aik din,
aor din ki talaash main hur raat,

kiya aapus main ajnabi hen.

poorub se chaleeN jub thandi hawain
be qaraari main kahin goonjti sadain,
sawan ky maheeny main badaloN ka bhatukna,
ya kaali ghataoN se rim jhim bursaat.

kiya aapus main ajnabi hen?.

jawani main raatoN ko julna tarupna,
ya apno ko seeny se laga kar lapukna,
ya husrat se bistar per kurwat badulna,
phir mehboob aor dilbar ki ajub hurqaat.

kiya aapus main ajnabi hen?.
kiya aapus main ajnabi hen?.
miskeen.

naya kiwn nahin likha ja raha :^^:

wajha

waisey bohot achi poetry likhi hey aap ney :b)b:

bohot hi piyara likha hey aap ney ji
daad qubul karain
:buke:

miskeen · **Posted:** Sat Jun 19, 2010 8:21 am

thanx lovely...

sameermoon · **Posted:** Sat Jun 19, 2010 11:22 am

Tifl e Maktab wrote:

miskeen wrote:

.............................. (GEET)..............................

Zara aakar mery seeny k sary dard o gum dekho.
sahy kitny teri khaatir ye sub runj o alum dekho.

kisi ko dekh kar chehra tera shadab nahi hota,
tarap ker dil tera aakhir kabhi betab nahi hota,
kabhi dehleez-e-ulfat per jhuka kar sur ko tum dekho.

tumhari yad dheery sy koi surgoshi kerti he,
ye ankheN bheeg jati hen ye dharkan thum si jati he,
chaly aao meri chahut ka toota tum bharum dekho.

shub-e-hijraN ki tareeki gum-e-doraN k aalum main,
udasi chaa gai dil per ghutan barh gai he seeny main,
nahi hoty tery bardashut ab zulm o sittum dekho.

zamany bhar ki ruswai mery daman main bhar di he,
k ruswai bhi purchai ki terha daor aati he,
bachalo aabroo meri tujhy meri qasam dekho.

nahi purwah he ab miskeen ko agyaar ki logo,
taman'na he dil-e-nashad ko deedar ki logo,
bappa matum wafa ki laash per aa kar sanam dekho.

(Miskeen)

Shah sb, aik indian geet hai "Agr mjhse mohabbat hai, Mjhe apnay sab gham de do" main ne aap ka geet is tarz per gungunaya mjhe bohat acha laga....ab dekhtay hain k aap agr is geet ko is tarz per gain gay to kaisa lagay ga......

Will be waiting for you in the Audio Poetry................

kia zabardust judge kiya he aap ny wahhhhhh... ba khuda meny issi dhun per hi ye geet likha he... Qibla maan gaey aap ko.... wesy mujhy audio poetry ka thread oprate kerna nahi aata... plz rehnomai furmaen... sir meri aawaz boht kharab he.....

Shah Sb,

hum aap ka be-chaini se intezar kar rahay hain.......Audio Poetry main.......

Dosto! mjhe bohat khushi aur fakhr mehsoos ho raha hai aap sab ko ye batanay main k Shah sb, ka ye geet Hyderabad Radio per gaya aur sunaya gaya hai......

Congratz Shah Sb, Bohat bohat mubarak ho aap ko............. :buke:

miskeen bhai bari khoobsurat kavish hai? abi geet likhnay shuru kr diye ap nay
Allrounder ho gaye ho

miskeen · **Posted:** Sat Jun 19, 2010 7:31 pm

thanx sameer sahab.... bus kabhi kabhi iss field main bhi taba aazmai kar k dekhty hen.... pasund karny ka shukriya....

lovely · **Joined:** Mon Dec 28, 2009 2:27 pm **Posts:** 165

shah ji naya kalam? :^^:

Tifl e Maktab · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 5528

Shah sb,

itna to intezar nahin karwatay.....achi baat nahin hoti hai......

miskeen · **Posted:** Sat Jun 26, 2010 11:19 am

salam dosto... ye kalam gazal sumjhen ya kuch aor... men bhi nahi janta k kis sinf per likh raha hon... ye apna kalam is forum k boht piyary shair tabasum sahab k naam karta hon...

Jub tukhleeq-e-do jahaN na thi kuch to zaroor tha.
nida-e- koon se pehly yahaN koi to noor tha.

(nida-e-koon)= (koon fa yakoon)= al QURAN.

boot-e-aadum ka mehlool tha aab o turaab main,
wahaN kon tha jis par tera Qaim guroor tha.

Gaer k aagy jhukeN to tera Qahar o gazub he,
phir iblees ki nafi main bhala kiya Qasoor tha.

QuraN main bayaN he k too muzloom ka sathi he,
ik muzloom Karbala main boht be Qasoor tha.

Kehty ho k insaan tera siri wa anaasir he,
tujh se aaj bhi wo door he kal bhi mugroor tha.

(siri wa anaasir)= (al insaan o siri wa anaasir hi) al QURAN.

Nalaen-e-MUSTAFA k taly ho arsh-e-bareeN tum,
jesy MOOSA k qudmoN k taly koh-e-toor tha.

Miskeen chul kaba chaleN is bat ka shikwa kareN,
kiyon shetaan ko azad kiya jo nufs ka nasoor tha.

miskeen.

razasoomro · **Joined:** Sat Aug 29, 2009 6:01 am **Posts:** 197

Salam Shah Sb,

Bohat hee umeda kalam, waaaaaaah
khossann

boot-e-aadum ka melool tha aab o turaab main,
wahaN kon tha jis par tera Qaim guroor tha

iss shair nay tu lawjawb kardiya, wesay bohat sari our bhi takhleeq wajood main phaley say hee thee for example buly shah nay farmya : "asan adam karo agay hee jaya, adam sada jaya, aunt bhar dee kaal ee na kai "

Regards,

Saleem Raza

subahh · **Posted:** Sat Jun 26, 2010 12:15 pm

miskeen ...wah...rooh perwar...khubsoorat kalam...kiya muntaqi shikwah...aur estarabi halat pai jaty hae...woh sawalaat ...ji ka jawab ...talash kerte phirte hain...kitabon main..dabsitanon main..masjidon main..buhat hi riqat amez kalam...jis ki taseer der'aser k rooh wajd main aagai...wah...ger hum sare ke sare tehseen o sataish ke alfaz bhi urdu lughat se nikal ke likh dain to bhi es maya'naz o shahkaar tehreer ka haq ada na hoga...BESH'QEEMAT O BESH'BAHA kalam...roohaniat ke falsafe pe pura oterta hae...la makaan tak soch gai hae aapki...kiya perwaz hae...aur kiya sidra tul muntaha ki manzil...ka khwab o khayal...kamal hud tak...mojzati ..nazool o ilhaam ka nishaan
.. aaj ..ajab saroor paya ...k meri soch ko aapne qalm-pund kerdia
meri dua hae miskken...ye kalam abidah perveen ki awaz main son sakoon (ameen)..k
khusha raho sada .. :dua

Gen.waheed Ahmed · **Joined:** Tue Jun 22, 2010 4:12 pm **Posts:** 1018

miskeen wrote:

salam dosto... ye kalam gazal sumjhen ya kuch aor... men bhi nahi janta k kis sinf per likh raha hon... ye apna kalam is forum k boht piyary shair tabasum sahab k naam karta hon...

Jub tukhleeq-e-do jahaN na thi kuch to zaroor tha.
nida-e- koon se pehly yahaN koi to noor tha.

(nida-e-koon)= (koon fa yakoon)= al QURAN.

boot-e-aadum ka mehlool tha aab o turaab main,
wahaN kon tha jis par tera Qaim guroor tha.

Gaer k aagy jhukeN to tera Qahar o gazub he,
phir iblees ki nafi main bhala kiya Qasoor tha.

QuraN main bayaN he k too muzloom ka sathi he,
ik muzloom Karbala main boht be Qasoor tha.

Kehty ho k insaan tera siri wa anaasir he,
tujh se aaj bhi wo door he kal bhi mugroor tha.

(siri wa anaasir)= (al insaan o siri wa anaasir hi) al QURAN.

Nalaen-e-MUSTAFA k taly ho arsh-e-bareeN tum,
jesy MOOSA k qudmoN k taly koh-e-toor tha.

Miskeen chul kaba chaleN is bat ka shikwa kareN,
kiyon shetaan ko azad kiya jo nufs ka nasoor tha.

buht khoob janab :buke:

miskeen.

*sHeHr-E-kHaMosHaN* · **Posted:** Sat Jun 26, 2010 6:07 pm

miskeen wrote:

salam dosto... ye kalam gazal sumjhen ya kuch aor... men bhi nahi janta k kis sinf per likh raha hon... ye apna kalam is forum k boht piyary shair tabasum sahab k naam karta hon...

Jub tukhleeq-e-do jahaN na thi kuch to zaroor tha.
nida-e- koon se pehly yahaN koi to noor tha.

(nida-e-koon)= (koon fa yakoon)= al QURAN.

boot-e-aadum ka mehlool tha aab o turaab main,
wahaN kon tha jis par tera Qaim guroor tha.

Gaer k aagy jhukeN to tera Qahar o gazub he,
phir iblees ki nafi main bhala kiya Qasoor tha.

QuraN main bayaN he k too muzloom ka sathi he,
ik muzloom Karbala main boht be Qasoor tha.

Kehty ho k insaan tera siri wa anaasir he,
tujh se aaj bhi wo door he kal bhi mugroor tha.

(siri wa anaasir)= (al insaan o siri wa anaasir hi) al QURAN.

Nalaen-e-MUSTAFA k taly ho arsh-e-bareeN tum,
jesy MOOSA k qudmoN k taly koh-e-toor tha.

Miskeen chul kaba chaleN is bat ka shikwa kareN,
kiyon shetaan ko azad kiya jo nufs ka nasoor tha.

miskeen.

Bohut hi umda miskeen ji.........aankhon men ansu agaye..........very touchy.......kya hi baat hai apki.......bohut umda shayir hain ap........likhte rahye, meri duaen apke sath hain........

miskeen · **Posted:** Sat Jun 26, 2010 7:40 pm

boht boht shukriya saleem, gen. waheed sahab aor gazal sahiba ka.... mumnoon hon aap ka...

miskeen · **Posted:** Sat Jun 26, 2010 7:42 pm

subahh wrote:

miskeen ...wah...rooh perwar...khubsoorat kalam...kiya muntaqi shikwah...aur estarabi halat pai jaty hae...woh sawalaat ...ji ka jawab ...talash kerte phirte hain...kitabon main..dabsitanon main..masjidon main..buhat hi riqat amez kalam...jis ki taseer der'aser k rooh wajd main aagai...wah...ger hum sare ke sare tehseen o sataish ke alfaz bhi urdu lughat se nikal ke likh dain to bhi es maya'naz o shahkaar tehreer ka haq ada na hoga...BESH'QEEMAT O BESH'BAHA kalam...roohaniat ke falsafe pe pura oterta hae...la makaan tak soch gai hae aapki...kiya perwaz hae...aur kiya sidra tul muntaha ki manzil...ka khwab o khayal...kamal hud tak...mojzati ..nazool o ilhaam ka nishaan
.. aaj ..ajab saroor paya ...k meri soch ko aapne qalm-pund kerdia
meri dua hae miskken...ye kalam abidah perveen ki awaz main son sakoon (ameen)..k
khusha raho sada .. :dua

boht shukriya subah gi aap ka. ye aap ki zara nawazi he jo iss qadar aap ny iss kawish-e-khusta ko saraha he... ap ki dad per miskeen ap ka boht mumnoon he. khish rahen.

Qaiser-Aziz-Qais · **Joined:** Sun Feb 14, 2010 1:59 pm **Posts:** 13647

miskeen wrote:

salam dosto... ye kalam gazal sumjhen ya kuch aor... men bhi nahi janta k kis sinf per likh raha hon... ye apna kalam is forum k boht piyary shair tabasum sahab k naam karta hon...

Jub tukhleeq-e-do jahaN na thi kuch to zaroor tha.
nida-e- koon se pehly yahaN koi to noor tha.

(nida-e-koon)= (koon fa yakoon)= al QURAN.

boot-e-aadum ka mehlool tha aab o turaab main,
wahaN kon tha jis par tera Qaim guroor tha.

Gaer k aagy jhukeN to tera Qahar o gazub he,
phir iblees ki nafi main bhala kiya Qasoor tha.

QuraN main bayaN he k too muzloom ka sathi he,
ik muzloom Karbala main boht be Qasoor tha.

Kehty ho k insaan tera siri wa anaasir he,
tujh se aaj bhi wo door he kal bhi mugroor tha.

(siri wa anaasir)= (al insaan o siri wa anaasir hi) al QURAN.

Nalaen-e-MUSTAFA k taly ho arsh-e-bareeN tum,
jesy MOOSA k qudmoN k taly koh-e-toor tha.

Miskeen chul kaba chaleN is bat ka shikwa kareN,
kiyon shetaan ko azad kiya jo nufs ka nasoor tha.

miskeen.

bahut hi khoob aur rohani kallam hai parh kar rooh lazat paa gaye subhanallah bhaut sari unginnat daad wasool farmaye

miskeen · **Posted:** Mon Jun 28, 2010 11:29 am

boht boht shukriya aziz sahab.

*MYSTERIOUS* · **Posted:** Tue Jun 29, 2010 9:48 am

miskeen wrote:

salam dosto... ye kalam gazal sumjhen ya kuch aor... men bhi nahi janta k kis sinf per likh raha hon... ye apna kalam is forum k boht piyary shair tabasum sahab k naam karta hon...

Jub tukhleeq-e-do jahaN na thi kuch to zaroor tha.
nida-e- koon se pehly yahaN koi to noor tha.

(nida-e-koon)= (koon fa yakoon)= al QURAN.

boot-e-aadum ka mehlool tha aab o turaab main,
wahaN kon tha jis par tera Qaim guroor tha.

Gaer k aagy jhukeN to tera Qahar o gazub he,
phir iblees ki nafi main bhala kiya Qasoor tha.

QuraN main bayaN he k too muzloom ka sathi he,
ik muzloom Karbala main boht be Qasoor tha.

Kehty ho k insaan tera siri wa anaasir he,
tujh se aaj bhi wo door he kal bhi mugroor tha.

(siri wa anaasir)= (al insaan o siri wa anaasir hi) al QURAN.

Nalaen-e-MUSTAFA k taly ho arsh-e-bareeN tum,
jesy MOOSA k qudmoN k taly koh-e-toor tha.

Miskeen chul kaba chaleN is bat ka shikwa kareN,
kiyon shetaan ko azad kiya jo nufs ka nasoor tha.

miskeen.

Motarmi Wo Mukkarrmi jalaal bhai..
Adab O Tasleemat..
shairy .com yeek unique forum hai jahan
har taraha ke log judey howey hain aour hamra maqsad
ye hai ke kisi bhi tahra se kisi bhi maslak ya firqe
ke logo ki dil azaari na ho..iss zamn me
aap ke Kalam ke kuchh ashhar par hum aap ki tawajja dilana chahtey hai
ke ye ager aap ne likha hai to Iss par shikwaa ka gumaan thaher raha hai..
barah e karam Adara chahta hai ke inn ashhar par dobara nazer Sani farma
len ya bara he karam inn a
ashar ki tashreeh arsaal farmain..take kal kisi bhi simt se iss
par girift na a sakaery..

***kalam ki baher ek rao me na bah kar alfaaz ke judney se bhaari
ho gayi hai aor tawazun nahi rakh pa rahi hai

"
"wahan Kon tha jiss par tera Qaim Ghuroor tha?"
Aaya AAlah Rabul Aalmeen kisi cheez par Agher maghroor hoga to kon
hai Jo ussey Rok sakey?

Gaer k aagy jhukeN to tera Qahar o gazub he,
phir iblees ki nafi main bhala kiya Qasoor tha.
(Allah Jal o shanahu Uss ke darbar me ki janey wali Khataon ko bakhsh sakta hai
lekin Darbar E NABVI ki ghustakhiyon ko kabhi maaf nahi farmaye ga..
Wo sajDaa Sajda E Adam na tha .Wo NAbi Adam (A.S)ko
kiya jane wala Sajdaa tha..aor Beshak Insanon ko Farishton
ke Ooper Darja..ASHRAFUL MAKHLUQWAAT diya gaya hai..to
likhney wala Ek basher iss cheez pe bhala kaisey eatraaz kar sakta hai??

QuraN main bayaN he k too muzloom ka sathi he,
ik muzloom Karbala main boht be Qasoor tha.
Quraan E karim Wo wahid Kitaab hai jiss ki ibarat har zamaney me
Ek hi rahne wali hai..uss ke maani wo matlab kabhi bhi tabdeel nahi ho saktey..
Yahan pe Imam Hussain (R.T.A)ke bare me ishaara kiya gaya hai..
Lekin Jab Unn ka Ajar Allah ke nazdeekmaujood hai to Allah Ko ye nahi
bataya ja sakta ke wo "Ghafil tha'Tamam Tar Anbiyaa E akraam ne Saoobatein jhelin hain...
Wo Burdbaad aour Haleem hai..Yaqeenan jab Uss ki marzi ke Bina Patta nahi hil sakta to bala
inn wakeyat ko kya wo Nahi janta hoga????Ya wo Inn ko Rokne ki takat nahi Rakhta hoga???

Kehty ho k insaan tera siri wa anaasir he,
tujh se aaj bhi wo door he kal bhi mugroor tha.

"kahtey hO?"(katey ho ) ye Wahid Mutakkalim hai...
Allah ke liye iss ka Istemal kahan tak sahi hai
(Allah Tum nahi..aap nahi..Wo Inn sab se kahin tar aagey hai..)
Sirri ba mani Raaz O Anasir Ansur ki jama..
Insaan 4 Anasir aag Hawa Pani aor Mitti se ghoondh kar banaya gaya hai..
lekin ALLAH ki ZAAT TAMAM ME YAKTA AOUR BEMISAL HAI...
Allah jab Shah E Rag se Qareeb hai To Insaan Uss se Door Door kahan?? Jab Uss ne farmaya ke
Main Tumhari Har har Pukaar ko Sunta hoon..beshal Dekhney Aor Sunney wala hoon..
To Insaan Uss se Door kaise??

nalayein(Qadam)
nalaein e MUSTUFAA(S.A.W)
Nalaen-e-MUSTAFA k taly ho arsh-e-bareeN tum,
jesy MOOSA k qudmoN k taly koh-e-toor tha.
Shikwa me ek sher mutaffarik hai..yahan Insano ko talqeen aor ishara diya gaya hai..

Miskeen chul kaba chaleN is bat ka shikwa kareN,
kiyon shetaan ko azad kiya jo nufs ka nasoor tha

akhri band me Maani ke eatbaar se ye kaha gaya ke Shaitan ko Uss ne kyun aazad kiya..
jab ke Duniya banaey ka paimana hi yahi tha ke wo ye dekhna chahta tha ke Kon
Uss ke Hukm ka paband hai aour kon uss ki raah se pibharne wala hai..
yahan shikwaa cheh maani?[/quote]

please iss parehsaani ko door karen...

Regards
Myst

miskeen · **Posted:** Tue Jun 29, 2010 8:31 pm

Motarmi Wo Mukkarrmi jalaal bhai..
Adab O Tasleemat..
shairy .com yeek unique forum hai jahan
har taraha ke log judey howey hain aour hamra maqsad
ye hai ke kisi bhi tahra se kisi bhi maslak ya firqe
ke logo ki dil azaari na ho..iss zamn me
aap ke Kalam ke kuchh ashhar par hum aap ki tawajja dilana chahtey hai
ke ye ager aap ne likha hai to Iss par shikwaa ka gumaan thaher raha hai..
barah e karam Adara chahta hai ke inn ashhar par dobara nazer Sani farma
len ya bara he karam inn a
ashar ki tashreeh arsaal farmain..take kal kisi bhi simt se iss
par girift na a sakaery..

wa alekum salam asif bhai...
aap gumaan na karen. ye yaqeenun shikwa hi he. aor jub meny maan hi liya he k ye shikwa he to tashreeh abus hogi. meny kisi ki bhi dil aazari nahi ki he. ye meny apny rub se shikwa kiya he.. shikwa sudiyon se shair karty aa rahy hen.

***kalam ki baher ek rao me na bah kar alfaaz ke judney se bhaari
ho gayi hai aor tawazun nahi rakh pa rahi hai

behr o wazan main kahan tawazun bigar raha he plz ye mujhy aap rehnomai fumaen. shukar guzar rahon ga.
"
"wahan Kon tha jiss par tera Qaim Ghuroor tha?"
Aaya AAlah Rabul Aalmeen kisi cheez par Agher maghroor hoga to kon
hai Jo ussey Rok sakey?

aap se iltamas he k iss shair ko gaor se parhen k (wahan kon tha jis per tera Qaim guroor tha)... khuda ki husti jub se he tub se us ki sifaat us se alag nahi.. ba burqat he wo zaat jis k osaaf us ki soofat se alag nahi.. kiya khuda ki sifat (MOTAKABIR) nahi? insaan ki tukhleeq khuda ka sub se bara guroor tha. fidvi ka ye sawal apny AAQA RASOOL S.AWW ki shan main he. jo aik dawat-e-fikr he qibla. mutlab agar wahan koi tha to hamary AAQA THY aor koi zaat nahi thi, jis per khuda ka guroor Qaim tha. oper wali misra per gaor karen phir ye misra samujh saken gy. wo mugroor he to sirf apny mehboob ki khilqat per mugroor he. mera asl kehny ka muqsad yahi he.

Gaer k aagy jhukeN to tera Qahar o gazub he,
phir iblees ki nafi main bhala kiya Qasoor tha.
(Allah Jal o shanahu Uss ke darbar me ki janey wali Khataon ko bakhsh sakta hai
lekin Darbar E NABVI ki ghustakhiyon ko kabhi maaf nahi farmaye ga..
Wo sajDaa Sajda E Adam na tha .Wo NAbi Adam (A.S)ko
kiya jane wala Sajdaa tha..aor Beshak Insanon ko Farishton
ke Ooper Darja..ASHRAFUL MAKHLUQWAAT diya gaya hai..to
likhney wala Ek basher iss cheez pe bhala kaisey eatraaz kar sakta hai??

mohtarum bhai.. pehli bat to ye aap jan len k iblees farista nahi tha jinn tha.. doosri baat ye bhi dawat-e-fiqr he k khuda k hukm ko na maaniny ki waja se shtaan ko durbaar se nikala gaya ya uss se daleel mangi gai? pahli bat daleel mangi kiyon gai k tum ny sujda kiyon nahi kiya? us ny jawab diya k men afzal hon aag se bana hoa hon na k iss ki terha khaak se. QIBLA jesy hi uss ny ye daleel di usy darbar nikala gaya , lanati theraya gaya. kiya uss ny daleel galat di? han uss daleel galat di. uss ny sub se bara gunah kiya adl-e-khudawandi per shuk kiya k khuda mufzool k aagy afazal ko jhuka raha he. jo adal-e-khuda k khilaaf thi daleel. Qibla men aik baat ka zaroor iqraar karta hon k jub tak nafi ko nahi sumjhen gy tub tak musbat samujh main nahi aaey ga.

QuraN main bayaN he k too muzloom ka sathi he,
ik muzloom Karbala main boht be Qasoor tha.
Quraan E karim Wo wahid Kitaab hai jiss ki ibarat har zamaney me
Ek hi rahne wali hai..uss ke maani wo matlab kabhi bhi tabdeel nahi ho saktey..
Yahan pe Imam Hussain (R.T.A)ke bare me ishaara kiya gaya hai..
Lekin Jab Unn ka Ajar Allah ke nazdeekmaujood hai to Allah Ko ye nahi
bataya ja sakta ke wo "Ghafil tha'Tamam Tar Anbiyaa E akraam ne Saoobatein jhelin hain...
Wo Burdbaad aour Haleem hai..Yaqeenan jab Uss ki marzi ke Bina Patta nahi hil sakta to bala
inn wakeyat ko kya wo Nahi janta hoga????Ya wo Inn ko Rokne ki takat nahi Rakhta hoga???

uffffffffff... Qibla yahan guftagoo daleel per ki gai he Qayas per nahi! Qayas mera muzhab nahi he bus. meny kub kaha k khuda gafil tha? ye aap ny iss ki maani nikali he. astugforALLAH khuda gafil ho sukta he? ye bhi dawat-e-fiqr he..
ye aik sawal he khuda se k jub tum muzloom k sathi ho to aik muzloom karbala main bhi muzloom tha.. kiya EESA A.S muzloom nahi tha. sathi k maani sumjhana chahta tha men. k sathi faqat iss se nahi sumjha jaey k khuda jis ko dunya main khush rakhy us se murad li jaey k khuda uss se raazi he . esa hurgiz nahi he. khuda dukh dy kar any piyaron ko aazmata he. muzloom asl main hi khuda ka saathi hota he. na k zaalim. mujhy ye bataen k aaj tak koi esa misal he jis main zalim faqeer ho aor muzloom badshah? mera kehny ka asl muksad ye he k khuda ki raah main jo dukh bardaasht kar k mar jaey wo hi muzloom kehlany l laiq he na k insaan ka insaan per jabr karny se koi muzloom bunta he.. ye behis boht barh jaey gi.

Kehty ho k insaan tera siri wa anaasir he,
tujh se aaj bhi wo door he kal bhi mugroor tha.

"kahtey hO?"(katey ho ) ye Wahid Mutakkalim hai...
Allah ke liye iss ka Istemal kahan tak sahi hai
(Allah Tum nahi..aap nahi..Wo Inn sab se kahin tar aagey hai..)
Sirri ba mani Raaz O Anasir Ansur ki jama..
Insaan 4 Anasir aag Hawa Pani aor Mitti se ghoondh kar banaya gaya hai..
lekin ALLAH ki ZAAT TAMAM ME YAKTA AOUR BEMISAL HAI...
Allah jab Shah E Rag se Qareeb hai To Insaan Uss se Door Door kahan?? Jab Uss ne farmaya ke
Main Tumhari Har har Pukaar ko Sunta hoon..beshal Dekhney Aor Sunney wala hoon..
To Insaan Uss se Door kaise??

sir ye kesi baten kar rahy hen aap? khuda ko kiya jama k seegy se pookaren gy? ALLAH MIYAN aap kitny achy hen? ya ALLAH meri aap madad furmaen? ufffffffff wo wahid to he par ahud bhi he. ab aap ko wahid aor ahad k bheech main farq ka ilm hota to ye baat nahi karty. aap ko RASOOL -E-KHUDA ki dua k jumly bata hon. ( aey purwardigaar tumhari bundagi k huq ada karny ka huq ye k wo huq ada hi na ho suky)... ye kesi language istamal ki he aap KAREEM SAWW ny? aey perwardigar? tumhari? (yahan ye kiyon nahi kaha AALAH miyan aap ki bundagi).. khuda se hamesha wahid mutakalim k seegy se hi baat ki jati he. chahy wo adab k zoomry main ho ya kalam k zoomry main ho.
nalayein(Qadam)
nalaein e MUSTUFAA(S.A.W)
Nalaen-e-MUSTAFA k taly ho arsh-e-bareeN tum,
jesy MOOSA k qudmoN k taly koh-e-toor tha.
Shikwa me ek sher mutaffarik hai..yahan Insano ko talqeen aor ishara diya gaya hai..

ye shair pehly shaire ka jawab he sir k wo kon tha jis per tera Qaim guroor tha?:ye wahi husti thi jis k jootiyon k taly arsh-e-azeem he.. aap sumjhany ki koshish karen.

Miskeen chul kaba chaleN is bat ka shikwa kareN,
kiyon shetaan ko azad kiya jo nufs ka nasoor tha

akhri band me Maani ke eatbaar se ye kaha gaya ke Shaitan ko Uss ne kyun aazad kiya..
jab ke Duniya banaey ka paimana hi yahi tha ke wo ye dekhna chahta tha ke Kon
Uss ke Hukm ka paband hai aour kon uss ki raah se pibharne wala hai..
yahan shikwaa cheh maani?[/quote]

please iss parehsaani ko door karen...

phir wahi Qayas? khuda ka koi bhi amal daleel k siwa wajood main nahi aata., jo adal karta he wo daleel zaroor rukhta he. agar men dehriya hota to kaba ka zikr nahi karta.. shikwa kaba kiyon ja ky kar raha he shair? wo to hur jaga mojood he na? ye baat aap ny gaor ki? ab bat rehti he k azad kiyon kiya? to iss ka jawab ye k uss ny apni ibatoN ka takaza kia jo khuda per hujat hoi. jis par khuda ny ussy mohlat di. ab agar wo Qayamat k din apni ibadatoN ki daleel se bhi nahi buch sukta wo sub ibadaten us ny bech di aor soda kiya khuda se. dawat-e-fiqr ye k aey insaan apni ibadaton per naaz na karna nahi ye sumajhna k tumhari ibadateN tumhara sila-e-janat he...

men janta hon k ye sawalat kiyon kiye ja rahy hen mujh se? men aik bat batana chahta forum walon ko aaj k men khuda ko Qayas se nahi Daleel se manta hon..
aakhir main aik HAZRAT ALI KA QAOL ( MENY APNY IRADON K TOOTNY BAD KHUDA KO PEHCHANA)... YE QUOTE SAMUJH GAEY TO SUMJHON GA K AAP MERI POORI BAT SAMUJH GAEY... khuda aap ko khush rakhy aamin.

Syed Jallal hyder moosvi.

Regards
Myst

kheyal · **Joined:** Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:00 am **Posts:** 1129

miskeen wrote:

salam dosto... ye kalam gazal sumjhen ya kuch aor... men bhi nahi janta k kis sinf per likh raha hon... ye apna kalam is forum k boht piyary shair tabasum sahab k naam karta hon...

Jub tukhleeq-e-do jahaN na thi kuch to zaroor tha.
nida-e- koon se pehly yahaN koi to noor tha.

(nida-e-koon)= (koon fa yakoon)= al QURAN.

boot-e-aadum ka mehlool tha aab o turaab main,
wahaN kon tha jis par tera Qaim guroor tha.

Gaer k aagy jhukeN to tera Qahar o gazub he,
phir iblees ki nafi main bhala kiya Qasoor tha.

QuraN main bayaN he k too muzloom ka sathi he,
ik muzloom Karbala main boht be Qasoor tha.

Kehty ho k insaan tera siri wa anaasir he,
tujh se aaj bhi wo door he kal bhi mugroor tha.

(siri wa anaasir)= (al insaan o siri wa anaasir hi) al QURAN.

Nalaen-e-MUSTAFA k taly ho arsh-e-bareeN tum,
jesy MOOSA k qudmoN k taly koh-e-toor tha.

Miskeen chul kaba chaleN is bat ka shikwa kareN,
kiyon shetaan ko azad kiya jo nufs ka nasoor tha.

miskeen.

Wah miskeen ji....
khubsuret aur mani afrini....woh klam jo qari ko fikr ki dawet deta hai.
sub se brhi khoobi aapka kholus hai....woh soch hai...jo musbet hai.
jzae khair ho....mzeed fikr ki taufeeq hum sub ko hasil ho.
shadab rahain.....ba'murad rahain...

miskeen · **Posted:** Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:14 am

boht shukriya khayal sahab. ye aap ki zara nawazi he... werna yahan to meri class li ja rahi he.. mumnoon hon aap ka.

Tifl e Maktab · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 5528

shah sb,

main is behas main hissa nahin lena chahta, us ki 2 wajoohat hain...

1. ye aap ka thread hai is ko discussion thread na banain....
2. shair ka apna takhayyul us ki apni perwaz e fikr hai, kisi misray, ya shair k maani ya pas e manzar kya hai ye us shair ka khaliq hi behtr janta aur samjhta hai........shair k liye zarori nahin k wo her shair ya misray ki wazahat bhi bayan karay..............

aap ka kalam bila-shubha bohat khoob aur Ilmi dawat bhi hai, laikin main aap se pehlay bhi ariz kar chuka hon aur aik martaba phr guzarish karon ga k aisay khayalat manzr e aam per pesh karnay se guraiz karain aur inhain aisi hi mehfil main zahir karain jo k aap ki ilmi o fikri satah k mutawazan hon....

Her shakhs ki apni aik ilmi o sha'ori satah ho ti hai....(Glass adha bhara hai.......aur Glass adha khali hai, jumlay dono durust hain per tanazur yaksar mukhtalif hai)

Tifl e Maktab · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 5528

miskeen wrote:

boht shukriya khayal sahab. ye aap ki zara nawazi he... werna yahan to meri class li ja rahi he.. mumnoon hon aap ka.

jinhain apnay se bara samjhty hain unki nahin manain gay to class to ho gi na..... :tease:

miskeen · **Posted:** Thu Jul 01, 2010 7:36 pm

ji han Qibla bus galti hogai hum se....

:((:

miskeen · **Posted:** Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:52 pm

dosto ye gazal jo aap ko pesh kar raha hon wo pehly bhi post kar chuka hon... compitation main ye gazal winner gazal hoi he pata nahi kesy? aap k liye aik bar phir....

hum ny to dekh liya ye dil lagany se pehly.
tum kitny be wafa thy humen apnany se pehly.

he perwanoN ki fitrat wahi julna wa turapna,
per shama to bojhti nahi sehar hojany se pehly.

kiyon dostoN ko parukhna he dustoor-e-zamana,
hum haar chuky hen tumhen aazmany se pehly.

iss se barh kar wafa ki aor den kiya daleel,
k khud hi ro pary hen tumhen satany se pehly.

dunya se chupaey rukha apny piyar ko lekin,
nuzroN se ayaaN hogaey kuch batany se pehly.

wo kis terha den apni begunahi ka saboot,
jo wady apny taor gaey kisi bahany se pehly.

miskeen teri daga se kabhi be khabar na tha,
tubhi to rota chaor gaey humen manany se pahly.

miskeen.

Qaiser-Aziz-Qais · **Joined:** Sun Feb 14, 2010 1:59 pm **Posts:** 13647

aap ke dostoon may se aik dost ko bhaut pasand ayi aap ki ye kaawish so nice keep it up

miskeen · **Posted:** Fri Jul 02, 2010 8:25 pm

boht shukriya aziz sahab...

:)O

miskeen · **Posted:** Sun Jul 04, 2010 11:26 am

dosto ye gazal aap ki khidmat main pesh karta hon.

..................CHAAND....................

aey chaand agar na too hota ye raat soohani na hoti,
phoolon mn mehuk taron mn chamuk hr shae mn jawani na hoti.

ye zulf shab e dejor se aur chal teri mastani si
bulbul na sunti geet koi, aur lehroon main rawani na hoti

hur chodviN ko tum aangun main mehboob k lums ko chooty ho,
men lurta jhagurta tum se agar wo tujh pe deewani na hoti.

mehtab-e-falak aa dekh zara mehtab-e-zameeN k julwon ko,
tera naam sanam ko na deta gar tujh si peshani na hoti.

muqrooz tera hur aasique he mujboor tera hur shair he,
julwaa na tera gar roshan ho nughmon main rawani na hoti.

Kuch aag si pinhaan hay teri in thandi thandi kirno mein
in chandni raaton mein werna wehshat ki rawani na hoti

hur paekar-e-husn naqaboN main lipta hoa rehta he miskeen,
rehty jo tum bhi hijaaboN main kahin teri kahani na hoti.

miskeen.

Qaiser-Aziz-Qais · **Joined:** Sun Feb 14, 2010 1:59 pm **Posts:** 13647

behtreen zabardast very nice :b)b:

dhair sari daad wasool karain maskeen ji, mashallah bhaut umda tareeq pe khiyalaat ko lafzon ka roop atta kartey hain Allah aur tariqi atta farmaye...ameen.
waise maskeen ji mahtaab zameen ka ho ya aasmaan ka dono hi hotey khatarnak hain :^^:

subahh · **Posted:** Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:07 pm

miskeen buhat khubsoorat khayal....hamain kahin ...kuch ikhtelaf hae....aapko batate hain pm ker ke...aap yaqeenun samjh jain ge...
wese kamal ki kavish hae bila shubah....dad wasool kerain...perhte hi aankhun main chaand aur chaandni oter aai...
khush rahain.. :dua

miskeen · **Posted:** Sun Jul 04, 2010 12:19 pm

zahy naseeb subah gi.. aap ki islah hamary liye certificate k misl hogi...

shagufta subhani · **Posted:** Sun Jul 04, 2010 2:49 pm

miskeen wrote:

dosto ye gazal aap ki khidmat main pesh karta hon.

..................CHAAND....................

aey chaand agar na too hota ye raat soohani na hoti,
phoolon mn mehuk taron mn chamuk hr shae mn jawani na hoti.

ye zulf shab e dejor se aur chal teri mastani si
bulbul na sunti geet koi, aur lehroon main rawani na hoti

hur chodviN ko tum aangun main mehboob k lums ko chooty ho,
men lurta jhagurta tum se agar wo tujh pe deewani na hoti.

mehtab-e-falak aa dekh zara mehtab-e-zameeN k julwon ko,
tera naam sanam ko na deta gar tujh si peshani na hoti.

muqrooz tera hur aasique he mujboor tera hur shair he,
julwaa na tera gar roshan ho nughmon main rawani na hoti.

Kuch aag si pinhaan hay teri in thandi thandi kirno mein
in chandni raaton mein werna wehshat ki rawani na hoti

hur paekar-e-husn naqaboN main lipta hoa rehta he miskeen,
rehty jo tum bhi hijaaboN main kahin teri kahani na hoti.

miskeen.

wonderful Jalal bhai ..zabardast..
aey chaand agar na too hota ye raat soohani na hoti,
phoolon mn mehuk taron mn chamuk hr shae mn jawani na hoti.
Arz kiya hai yun ..mulahezaa farnmein..

aye chand ager na tu hota ye dil ki kahani na hoti..
chehrey pe damak ..taron me ramak...iss shab me rawani na hoti..
Adaab arz hai janab..
aap hi ki bahen hoon.. :Y:

khush rahein aabaad rahein..hamesha shaad rahein..

miskeen · **Posted:** Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:03 pm

boht khoob kiya kehny wahhhhhhhhh.... pasund karny ka shukriya... :buke:

*sHeHr-E-kHaMosHaN* · **Posted:** Thu Jul 08, 2010 9:06 pm

Miskeen ji, jis tarah se ap ne asif ji ko apne kalam ki wazahat ya jo bhi keh len, di, behtareen thi. Men tifl-e-maktab ji ki dono baton se muttafiq hun. Ap bohut hi acha likhte hain, yunhi likhte rahyega. Mere nazdeek ap bohut hi umda shayir hain. Allah apko khush rakhe.

miskeen · **Posted:** Sat Jul 10, 2010 10:51 am

thanx gazal gi. mumnoon.
:buke:

ak gazal doston k naam

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