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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy  Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:52 pm |
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sono wrote: tabs wrote: bohat khoob tabs ji...keep sharingbohat shukriya sono ji....dar asl is wiranay main koi aata nahin tha to post karna chor diya tha....ab aap ki badoulat rounaq lout aai hai to jo hukum aap ka. Keep visiting.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:55 pm |
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Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Wahhh!! Kya ghazal hai. "Husn par gharoor tha.." Pehlay 2 ashaar kamaal kay hain. 3rd shair main "..hum sa" ki bijayay "..hum say" nahi hona chahiyay tha? Please daikh lejiyay ga. Masooma ji, bohat mamnoon hon k aap is qadr nigah e ameeq se meri kawish e natwan ko izzat bakhsti hain.... arz yun hai k yahan main ne koshish ki hai k jaisay hum majboor thay waisa hi hamra dil bhi majboor tha is garz se hum sa likha hai. k dil kabhi hamse majboor nahin hota ham hi dil k hathoon majboor hotay hain... umeed hai aap ki tashafeeh ho gai ho gi. Nigah nawazi ka be had shukriya.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:57 pm |
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Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: tum yaar mantay phirtay ho,
humse dushman e jaan ik rooth gaya
Dard ki fasl zarkhaiz huwi jb,
dil main kadway ashk ka ghoont gaya Be had mamnoon hoon....nawazish!!!!
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:03 pm |
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tabs wrote: Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Wahhh!! Kya ghazal hai. "Husn par gharoor tha.." Pehlay 2 ashaar kamaal kay hain. 3rd shair main "..hum sa" ki bijayay "..hum say" nahi hona chahiyay tha? Please daikh lejiyay ga. Masooma ji, bohat mamnoon hon k aap is qadr nigah e ameeq se meri kawish e natwan ko izzat bakhsti hain.... arz yun hai k yahan main ne koshish ki hai k jaisay hum majboor thay waisa hi hamra dil bhi majboor tha is garz se hum sa likha hai. k dil kabhi hamse majboor nahin hota ham hi dil k hathoon majboor hotay hain... umeed hai aap ki tashafeeh ho gai ho gi. Nigah nawazi ka be had shukriya.....
Jee, main samajh gayi.
Apka yeh andaaz e bayan bhi bohat pasand aya.
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:58 am |
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tabs wrote: sono wrote: tabs wrote: bohat khoob tabs ji...keep sharingbohat shukriya sono ji....dar asl is wiranay main koi aata nahin tha to post karna chor diya tha....ab aap ki badoulat rounaq lout aai hai to jo hukum aap ka. Keep visiting.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Aug 11, 2009 5:32 pm |
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tabs wrote: Kia bat hay tabassum bhai,bohat aala,wallah maza agaya,bohat umda ghal kahi hay aap nay.mujhay to afsoos hay keh itne din bad aap ki ye ghazal pardh saka,
Allah Tala aap ke dilo dimagh ko mazeed ilm ki roshni se munawwar farmayay.Aameen.
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Nam e jamhoor pe bazaar saja rakha hay
biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:58 pm |
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mahtabhashmi wrote: tabs wrote: [center]Kia bat hay tabassum bhai,bohat aala,wallah maza agaya,bohat umda ghal kahi hay aap nay.mujhay to afsoos hay keh itne din bad aap ki ye ghazal pardh saka,
Allah Tala aap ke dilo dimagh ko mazeed ilm ki roshni se munawwar farmayay.Aameen. Hashmi Sb, bohat shukr guzar hoon aap ki nigah nawazi o hosla afzai ka.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:02 pm |
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Masooma wrote: Tabs jee, kahan masroof ho gayay aap?
Aapki agli sharing ka intezaar hai...
 Masooma ji, aap to janti hain ye ghazal goi zara mushkil kaam hota hai....mujhe MEER ka wo shair to yaad nahin per haan us ka mafhoom zaroor yaad hai "k jab shair kehna nahin aata tha to roz aik ghazal likhtay thay, jb likhna aya to aik shair kehna bhi mushkil hai." Khair aap ki zarra nawazi k liye behad mamnoon hoon...aap ki khidmat main phr se hazir.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:23 pm |
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My First poetry in punjabi language......Hope you like it!
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:40 pm |
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Masooma wrote: Aiii haiii, kee ghazal aye! 
Wadhiyaa kalaam pesh kiittaa je ''Tabs'' jii....paRh ke dil khush ho gayaa ai...mere walloN daad qubool farmaao jii..... Masooma ji, meri tay unji bongiyan san per tusi jes trah izzat afzai kitay, waqai dil khush kardita aaye.... Khush raho ji, jiwoondi raho.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:48 pm |
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tabs wrote: Masooma wrote: Aiii haiii, kee ghazal aye!
Wadhiyaa kalaam pesh kiittaa je ''Tabs'' jii....paRh ke dil khush ho gayaa ai...mere walloN daad qubool farmaao jii..... Masooma ji, meri tay unji bongiyan san per tusi jes trah izzat afzai kitay, waqai dil khush kardita aaye.... Khush raho ji, jiwoondi raho..... 
Main nayi jandi si tussi Punjabi wi bolday o. Bohat wadhiyaa, likhday ravo
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 10:46 am |
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tabs wrote: My First poetry in punjabi language......Hope you like it! bara acha likheya ve tussa...parh ke bari khushi hoi ve..likde ravo te hamesha khush ravo, ameen 
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zindagi ke safar me kabhi tum gir jaao to apna haath de
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Aug 16, 2009 6:12 pm |
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shari wrote: tabs wrote: My First poetry in punjabi language......Hope you like it! bara acha likheya ve tussa...parh ke bari khushi hoi ve..likde ravo te hamesha khush ravo, ameen Thanks Shari for dropping in .........
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:43 am |
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sono wrote: tabs wrote: My First poetry in punjabi language......Hope you like it!  )
waqi bohat lajawab kalam tabs ji....samajh to leti hon par ziyada bol nahen sakti....keep sharing Thanks Sono Sis.....koi gal nai, hum urdu se hi kaam chala laingay... thanks for dropping in.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:45 am |
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Arooj Amjad wrote: Aray waah tabassum ji...dono hi sharings jo iss page pe ki hain aap ne...bohat hi khoob hain.keep it up!!!
bohat saari khushi hui paRh kar Thanks Arooj ji, its nice to see you back in action....aap nahin thin to forum sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooona ho gaya tha.. main bhi abhi wapas aya hon forum pe.... Keep visiting...
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:47 am |
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tabs wrote: Kisi kaanch ki gudiya ki dilnasheeN muskrahat
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Keh yehi meri hayaat aur yehi mera haasil
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Keh inhee say zinda hai tabassum meray lab par
DhairooN daad iss naz'm kay liyay.
Tareef kay liyay alfaaz nahi.
Aur aapnay paish bhi itnay khoobsorat andaaz main ki hai.. wahhh!
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:03 pm |
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Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Kisi kaanch ki gudiya ki dilnasheeN muskrahat
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Keh yehi meri hayaat aur yehi mera haasil
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Keh inhee say zinda hai tabassum meray lab par
DhairooN daad iss naz'm kay liyay.
Tareef kay liyay alfaaz nahi.
Aur aapnay paish bhi itnay khoobsorat andaaz main ki hai.. wahhh!
Thanks masooma ji, bohat mamnoon hoon aap ki zarra nawazi ka.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Aug 18, 2009 7:17 am |
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bohat khoobsurat shairy...............
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Aug 22, 2009 7:22 pm |
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kiran@morning wrote: bohat khoobsurat shairy............... Thanks Kiran ji......keep visiting....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 3:37 am |
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g MAI APNI FIANCE KOO DAAD DYY DOO GA COZ YE GHAZAL USNY LEKHEE HY
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:12 pm |
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miskeen wrote: :rose:  MENY ABHI ABHI AP KI SHAIRY PARHI HE ....... KIA BAT HE JANAB WAH JI WAH KIA KAHNY...... MEN ISS SOCH MEN PAR GAYA KE AP JESY SHAIR NE MYJHY DAD DI. YE AP KA BARA PUN HE.... AP KI HOSILA AFZAI KA SHOKRIYA JANAB.................. CHULY GAEY GUM-E-HIJR SE ALEEL KAR KE MUJHY, KIYON AB GAER SE POOCHTY HEN KE BEEMAR KESA HE.. JUB BHI ROOTHA TO MERI ANKHON MEN NUMI BHAR AAI, WO KIA JAANY KE MANANY MEN KARAR KESA HE...... AP KI DUAON KA TALUBGAR JALLAL SHAH MISKEEN. Bohat nawaish hai Miskeen ji k aapni zarray ko aftab se tashbeeh di, warna ye khaksar kahan kisi qabil aap doston ki inayat hai... Nigah nawazi ka be had mamnoon hoon..........Bohat khush rahiye....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:47 pm |
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 Doston ki Araa o tanqeed ka muntazir Tabassum!!
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Aug 26, 2009 8:10 pm |
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 ab sharumsar na karen tabasum gi.. gazal boht achi he. galtiyan hur bary shair se hoi hen .... boht aala gazal he.... keep it up sir likhty rahye or humen sikhaty rahye........... ap ki dad ka mushkoor miskeen
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:07 am |
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tabs wrote: Woh tadap kay milnay ko ayaiN
Kaash aik baar yuN hota Wah... umda shair!
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:41 pm |
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miskeen wrote: :b)b: ab sharumsar na karen tabasum gi.. gazal boht achi he. galtiyan hur bary shair se hoi hen .... boht aala gazal he.... keep it up sir likhty rahye or humen sikhaty rahye........... ap ki dad ka mushkoor miskeen Bohat shukriya.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:42 pm |
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Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Woh tadap kay milnay ko ayaiN
Kaash aik baar yuN hota Wah... umda shair! Nwazish aap ki..............
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:06 pm |
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kheyal wrote: [color=#FF00FF]TABS...JI....AAKHRI GHAZAL HI DEKH PAYA HOOON...
AAP K PAAS KHEYALAT HAIN....
LEKIN SHAYERI K LIYE.....EK PAIMANA BHI ZAROORI HAI..JISE WAZUN KEHTE HAIN....SHAYERI KI ZUBAN MEN BHI..
CHOTHAY SHER KA DOOSRA MISRA...APNE TAQAZE POORE KERTA HAI..
KETNA ACHA HOTA.....KISI USTAD SE MUSH'WARA KERTE...JO AAP K QAREEB HON.....
MAI BHI KEHNE KI KOSHISH KERTA HOON....
KOSHISH JARI RUKHEN....MOTALE K SATH....
KHUSH RAHEN...[/color] Hazrat bohat hi mamnoon hoon aap ka k aap ne is qadr nigah e ameeq se meri kawish e khasta ko nawaza....mjhe aap se qataan ikhtilaf nahin, laikin aap ka aitiraz bhi kuch wazeh nahin.... Agr nagwar e khatir na guzray to rahnumai farmain.... Hosla afzai k liye shukriya....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:44 pm |
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salaqm tabasum sahib .... umeed he ke ap khush hongy.......
men ap ko hazrat shaikh saadi a.r ka mushhoor sher pesh karta hon molahiza keejiey
SADIYA SHEERAZIYA SUBAK MA DY KUM ZAT RA,
GAR KUMZAT AALIM SHUDY GARDUN ZANUD OSTAAD RA..... mean zaroor aati hogi.....
duaon ka talubgar miskeen.
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Aug 29, 2009 6:32 pm |
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miskeen wrote: salaqm tabasum sahib .... umeed he ke ap khush hongy.......
men ap ko hazrat shaikh saadi a.r ka mushhoor sher pesh karta hon molahiza keejiey
SADIYA SHEERAZIYA SUBAK MA DY KUM ZAT RA,
GAR KUMZAT AALIM SHUDY GARDUN ZANUD OSTAAD RA..... mean zaroor aati hogi.....
duaon ka talubgar miskeen. Hazrat, mujh se kam ilm ki satr poshi hoti, kya hi acha hota k aap is k meaning bhi ataa kar detay....... miskeen wrote: Tabasum ji salam pesh karta hon. kabhi hamari islaah ke lie hamary thread ka chakur bhi lagaya karen to nawazish hogi ak haleem ustad ki tarha .. duaon ka talabgar miskeen.
Wa Alaikum Assalam Hazrat, aap jaisay alaa zarf o sukhn shanas k kalam per hum lub kushai ki jisarat karain aaisay to gustakh nahin.....ye aap ki sada mizaji hai k hum jaison ko izzat bakhshtay hain. Aap ka khobsorat kalam zeenat e nigah huwa aur bohat khushi huwi k forum per aik khush aind izafa huwa, warna hum to tars gaye thay k koi zi ilm o sukhn yahan ka rukh karay.... Bohat nawazish.... Dua go o Dua jo Tabassum
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