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tiflaan-e-shahar be khaber ander joonen-e- maa,

ba een junooN hanooz sazawar sung neest...
saadi a.r

boht aala sir.... :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: [/color]


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Tabassum Bhai,bohat khoob,bohat umda ghazal hay, maza agaya parh kar,kis kis kalam ki tareef ki jae sab hi dil ko chhootay hen.sirf ghazal hi nahi aap ki nazm bhi qabil e daad hay.likhatay rahyay aur hamaray jaisay nao aamooz ko sikhnay ka moqa ata farmayyay.



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Qibla kia kehny wah wah wah. ye kehlati he gazal.
boht aala khayal he. dad men ak sher he zaheen shah zaheen ka.

yousif-e-misr tamanna tery julwon pe nisar,
meri bedariyon ko khuab-e-zulekha na bana.

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Aa'la ghazal hai janab. Aakhri shair tou lajawaab hai.
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Bohat shurkiya masooma ji, nawazish.....


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Tabassum Bhai,bohat khoob,bohat umda ghazal hay, maza agaya parh kar,kis kis kalam ki tareef ki jae sab hi dil ko chhootay hen.sirf ghazal hi nahi aap ki nazm bhi qabil e daad hay.likhatay rahyay aur hamaray jaisay nao aamooz ko sikhnay ka moqa ata farmayyay.


Hashmi sb,

kyun sharminda kartay hain......bohat bohat nawazish hai aap ki....

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tiflaan-e-shahar be khaber ander joonen-e- maa,

ba een junooN hanooz sazawar sung neest...
saadi a.r

boht aala sir.... :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: [/color]


Bohat shukriya shah sb........nawazish..



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Bohat Aalaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Jawab

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Bohat Aalaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
Laaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa Jawab

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Bohat nawazish Hashmi sb, aap ki zarra nawazi hai warna hamain to koi nigah e sharf k qabil bhi nahin samjhta.....

bohat bohat shukriya..... :)O



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MashAllah! Bohat khoobsorat khayalaat hain janab. Isi tarhaan likhtay rahiye.



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Aiii haiii! Aa'la naz'm. Bohat he khoobsorati say poora tajurbah raq'm kiya apnay.
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Aiii haiii! Aa'la naz'm. Bohat he khoobsorati say poora tajurbah raq'm kiya apnay.
Bohat khoob.



Bohat shukriya Masooma ji, aap jaisay doston ki pazeerai k bal per hi to hum is qabil hain k kuch jor sakain....

bohat nawazish.....

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Aha! Khayal bohat pasand aya.
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Achi nuzm hai....
rawani bhi....likhte rahen....
k riyazet....her fun k liye zaroori hai.
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qibla boht porana khayal he . men ho sakta he ke apni hesiyat se ziyada kah raha hon magar iss gazal ka theem or khayal ap jesy shair k kalam se boht choti mehsoos ho rahi he. wallah dil men na keejiey iss se kahen mery ustad acha likh sukty hen. kafiya or radeef ko prerany se gazal nai nahi bunti qibla ap ka khayal is se boht aala he.
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Aha! Khayal bohat pasand aya.
Bohat he pyaari ghazal hai janab.


Bohat shukriya Masooma ji.....nawazish....

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rawani bhi....likhte rahen....
k riyazet....her fun k liye zaroori hai.
Thanks Tabs...keep on sharing..


Hazrat Bohat enayat hai aap ki.....girah se band li hai aap ki baat....



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qibla boht porana khayal he . men ho sakta he ke apni hesiyat se ziyada kah raha hon magar iss gazal ka theem or khayal ap jesy shair k kalam se boht choti mehsoos ho rahi he. wallah dil men na keejiey iss se kahen mery ustad acha likh sukty hen. kafiya or radeef ko prerany se gazal nai nahi bunti qibla ap ka khayal is se boht aala he.
:)O :)O


Bohat Shukriya Shah Sb, ye aap ki mohabbat hai k aap mujhe is maqam e ooj pe tasavur kartay hain per main to aik zarah e raig bhi nahin, khata ka putla hoon lagzishain to baray baron se sirzad huwi hain.....Umeed hai aap darguzar farmain gay....Insha Allah hum koshaan rahain gay k aap k mayyar e zouq ki qadam bosi ka sharf hasil ho.

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Wah Wahhhhhhhhhhh,Tabassum Bhai, bohat umda ghazal enayat ki hay aap nay,alfaz ka khazana hay aap kay pas,aur durast maqam par behtreen lafz kay intikhab nay char chand laga diyay hen is ghazal mein,tareef kay liyay alfaz nahi aur ham jaisa kam ilm bhala tareef ka alfaz bhi kahan say laega,hamari khush qismati hay keh aap ka kalam pardhnay ki saadat hasil ho rahi hay is say hamen bhi kuch sikhnay ka moqa milay ga.Allah Taala aap kay zehn o dil ko mazeed ilm ki roshni say munawwar farmayay.Aameen

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Wah Wahhhhhhhhhhh,Tabassum Bhai, bohat umda ghazal enayat ki hay aap nay,alfaz ka khazana hay aap kay pas,aur durast maqam par behtreen lafz kay intikhab nay char chand laga diyay hen is ghazal mein,tareef kay liyay alfaz nahi aur ham jaisa kam ilm bhala tareef ka alfaz bhi kahan say laega,hamari khush qismati hay keh aap ka kalam pardhnay ki saadat hasil ho rahi hay is say hamen bhi kuch sikhnay ka moqa milay ga.Allah Taala aap kay zehn o dil ko mazeed ilm ki roshni say munawwar farmayay.Aameen

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Hashmi sb,

aap ne to hamain khareed hi liye....beinteha mamnoon hain aapki Mowaddaat k.

Allah Pak aap ko bohat si khushiyan ataa karay....Ameen



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MashAllah!! Iss baar tou tareef kay liyay aflaaz he nahi meray pass. Kya baat hai. Ghazal ka har aik shair seedha dil main utar gaya. Bohat khoob tabs jee! Aisay he likhtay rahiye.

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Wah Wahhhhhhhhhhh,Tabassum Bhai, bohat umda ghazal enayat ki hay aap nay,alfaz ka khazana hay aap kay pas,aur durast maqam par behtreen lafz kay intikhab nay char chand laga diyay hen is ghazal mein,tareef kay liyay alfaz nahi aur ham jaisa kam ilm bhala tareef ka alfaz bhi kahan say laega,hamari khush qismati hay keh aap ka kalam pardhnay ki saadat hasil ho rahi hay is say hamen bhi kuch sikhnay ka moqa milay ga.Allah Taala aap kay zehn o dil ko mazeed ilm ki roshni say munawwar farmayay.Aameen

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MashAllah!! Iss baar tou tareef kay liyay aflaaz he nahi meray pass. Kya baat hai. Ghazal ka har aik shair seedha dil main utar gaya. Bohat khoob tabs jee! Aisay he likhtay rahiye.

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Masooma Ji,

Bohat mamnoon hoon, aap ki nigah nawazi o pazeerai ka bohat shukriya....



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Zahay naseeb k aap ne hamaray thread ko rounaq bakhshi, bohat mamnoon hain...

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Wah Wahhhhhhhhhhh,Tabassum Bhai, bohat umda ghazal enayat ki hay aap nay,alfaz ka khazana hay aap kay pas,aur durast maqam par behtreen lafz kay intikhab nay char chand laga diyay hen is ghazal mein,tareef kay liyay alfaz nahi aur ham jaisa kam ilm bhala tareef ka alfaz bhi kahan say laega,hamari khush qismati hay keh aap ka kalam pardhnay ki saadat hasil ho rahi hay is say hamen bhi kuch sikhnay ka moqa milay ga.Allah Taala aap kay zehn o dil ko mazeed ilm ki roshni say munawwar farmayay.Aameen

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Suno! main bohat khush hoon,
apne nae safar main,
apne sapnon k ghar main,
nae apnon k ghar main,

sub bohat chahtay hain mujhe,
bohat khayal kartay hain,
"WoH" to bohat hi chahtay hain
bohat sarahtay hain,

bohat masroof rehti hoon,
bohat masroor rehti hoon,
mager kabhi tanha jo baithon to,
kabhi sajh dhaj k niklon jo,

tum bohat yaad atay ho,
mere hathon ki mehndi main ab bhi mehaktay ho,

Suno! main bohat khush hon,
mujhe ab bhool jao na,
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Suno! main bohat khush hoon,
apne nae safar main,
apne sapnon k ghar main,
nae apnon k ghar main,

sub bohat chahtay hain mujhe,
bohat khayal kartay hain,
"WoH" to bohat hi chahtay hain
bohat sarahtay hain,

bohat masroof rehti hoon,
bohat masroor rehti hoon,
mager kabhi tanha jo baithon to,
kabhi sajh dhaj k niklon jo,

tum bohat yaad atay ho,
mere hathon ki mehndi main ab bhi mehaktay ho,

Suno! main bohat khush hon,
mujhe ab bhool jao na,
mujhe mat yaad aao na!


Ufff! Kya baat hai tabs jee. Yeh naz'm tou seedha dil ko chu gayi... lagta hai mujh par likhi gayi hai. Bohat aa'la!!
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Tabs ji,
AOA,

Bohot dinon ke ba'ad fursat milli tou aap ke thread manin visit kiya. Tabs ji, khubsoorat khayal ke hona bohot zuroori hai ke iss ke baghair hum kuch naheen likh paate magar aap se jo shikayat mujhay pehlay thi wohi ab bhi hai. Aap ka taqreeban har sher wazan se aari hai. Agar aap thodi si aur mehnat karai tou issay bohot beheter kar saktay hain.

Duago,

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Tabs ji,
AOA,

Bohot dinon ke ba'ad fursat milli tou aap ke thread manin visit kiya. Tabs ji, khubsoorat khayal ke hona bohot zuroori hai ke iss ke baghair hum kuch naheen likh paate magar aap se jo shikayat mujhay pehlay thi wohi ab bhi hai. Aap ka taqreeban har sher wazan se aari hai. Agar aap thodi si aur mehnat karai tou issay bohot beheter kar saktay hain.

Duago,

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bohat nawazish k aap ne hamaray thread ko rounaq bakhshi aur apni qeemti raye se nawazah....ye to aap ka kamal e nazr hai k aap hamari ghalatiyan dekh leti hain.........insha Allah hum koshaan hain k aap ki shikayat jald door kijiye...

Bohat shukriya...


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Bohat shukriya Zuberi sb,


Aap ko bhi Eid ki bohat bohat mubarak baad in advance....



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 Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy
PostPosted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 3:37 pm 
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aaha aaha kia kehny qibla kia kehny esi haseen jasarat ap ka qalum hi kar sukta he . shahgird ka sur oncha he ab tuk. duaon ka talabgar ap ka nalaik student. :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose:



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 Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy
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miskeen wrote:
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aaha aaha kia kehny qibla kia kehny esi haseen jasarat ap ka qalum hi kar sukta he . shahgird ka sur oncha he ab tuk. duaon ka talabgar ap ka nalaik student. :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose:



Bohat shukriya meray dost aap ki mohabbat o pazeerai ka warna log to abhi nuqs dhoondh hi laitay hain...

Bohat nawazish......



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 Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy
PostPosted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 7:31 am 
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Qibla hum salam pesh karty hen. nuqs dhondty rahen log iss se kia hota he . ap ki bat per ak sher arz he.

deny ke liye dilbar hum shairon ke paas kia he,
ye gazal tumhary naam he le tohfa hakeer ka.
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