|
|
sonia20
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy  Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:51 am |
Joined: Tue Sep 15, 2009 10:38 am
Posts: 33
|
|
gahazal kay chand ashaar:
sitamgar ki pazeeraee karay ga
yeh bus mera sa sodaee karay ga
khabar usko nahi meray maraz ki
maseeha kia maseehaee karay ga
chura leta nazrain, daikh kar jo
woh kia paas-e-shanasaee karay ga
na khona, sonia hosh uski khatir
keh daana hai woh danaee karay ga
|
|
 |
|
 |
|
Masooma
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:19 am |
| Super Moderator |
 |
Joined: Mon Dec 03, 2007 3:42 am
Posts: 6508
Location: Canada
|
tabs wrote: Toot kar phir na simat sakooN ga
Ek din tum say keh dooN ga.
As always, tareef kay liyay alfaaz kam par rahay hain. Bohat he khoobsorat naz'm hai!
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Masooma
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:21 am |
| Super Moderator |
|
Joined: Mon Dec 03, 2007 3:42 am
Posts: 6508
Location: Canada
|
sonia20 wrote: gahazal kay chand ashaar:
sitamgar ki pazeeraee karay ga
yeh bus mera sa sodaee karay ga
khabar usko nahi meray maraz ki
maseeha kia maseehaee karay ga
chura leta nazrain, daikh kar jo
woh kia paas-e-shanasaee karay ga
na khona, sonia hosh uski khatir
keh daana hai woh danaee karay ga Sonia jee welcome to Aapki Shairy. However, rules kay mutabiq aap kisi aur shayar ki thread main sharing nahi kar sakteen. Aap iss section main apni poetry he share kar sakti hain aur apna khudh ka topic bana kar. Please aap apni agli sharings new topic main kejiyay.
Shukriya.
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Masooma
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 7:30 am |
| Super Moderator |
|
Joined: Mon Dec 03, 2007 3:42 am
Posts: 6508
Location: Canada
|
tabs wrote:
Kabhi yahan bhi choodhiyooN ki khanak
Mehendi ki mehek hoti thi...
Yeh tanhai chali kyuN nahi jaati
Zindagi ki woh roothi bahaar
Zindagi maiN phir say kyuN nahi aati
...
Wahhhhh!
Speechless.
Bohat aa'la creation hai!!!
...alfaaz aur jazbaat ka aisa mayle bohat dinoon baad parhnay ko mila hai. Yeh parh kar mujhay maazi ki yaad a gayi...
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
sameermoon
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Sep 22, 2009 1:18 pm |
| Senior Member |
 |
Joined: Tue Sep 02, 2008 6:44 pm
Posts: 250
Location: "HELL"
|
tabs wrote: [center ]Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....[/center]    buhat khoob buhat ala lajawab.... khush raho dua go
_________________
Chaerein ya us ko aj, Na Chaerein,Her Aik Roz
Nazron k Wo Isharay yehi Sochtay rehay
Sir main humaray aj wo phairein gay Ungliyan
Zulfon ko hum Sanwary yehi sochtay rahay
Ik aur nya Zakhm sameer es ko kahan dein
Taqdeer K Sitaary yehi sochtay rahay
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Sep 23, 2009 6:48 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
 |
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
Masooma wrote: tabs wrote:
Kabhi yahan bhi choodhiyooN ki khanak
Mehendi ki mehek hoti thi...
Yeh tanhai chali kyuN nahi jaati
Zindagi ki woh roothi bahaar
Zindagi maiN phir say kyuN nahi aati
...
Wahhhhh!
Speechless.
Bohat aa'la creation hai!!!
...alfaaz aur jazbaat ka aisa mayle bohat dinoon baad parhnay ko mila hai. Yeh parh kar mujhay maazi ki yaad a gayi...Bohat nawazish hai aap ki...... sameermoon wrote: tabs wrote: [center]Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....[/center] buhat khoob buhat ala lajawab.... khush raho dua go Bohat shukriya Sameer Sb, Pazeerai k liye behad mamnoon hon. miskeen wrote: ShaH sb, Bohat mamnoon hoon ka aap ne meri is kawish e khasta k naam ataa kiya....bohat nawazish...
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
cuty
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 12:34 pm |
| Super Member |
 |
Joined: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am
Posts: 1058
|
_________________
khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
miskeen
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 12:40 pm |
| Super Member |
 |
Joined: Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:04 am
Posts: 1915
Location: hyderabad
|
|
Qibla kahan hen ap? ap ki new kawish ka dil o jaan se intazar he .. ap ka nalaik shagird miskeen.
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
cuty
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Fri Sep 25, 2009 2:55 pm |
| Super Member |
|
Joined: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am
Posts: 1058
|
_________________
khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:43 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
cuty wrote: Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ka....bohat khoob qataa ataa kiya hai..... Bohat nawazish,
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 4:10 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
miskeen wrote:
hahahahah kia kehny qibla shempion ghatuk gaey. wah wah. gazal dilfareb thi ye gazal qibla awaael-e-ishq ki nigaarshat to nahi? mazirut ke saath uataad-e-mohtarum.
 Shah Sb, Bohat nawazish......Dar Asl ye hamara mizaj nahin per aik dost ki farmaish per kuch koshsih ki thi to socha k doston se bhi share ki jaye... Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ka....
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
mahtabhashmi
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 5:39 pm |
Joined: Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:38 pm
Posts: 1248
Location: Karachi, Pakistan
|
Wahhhhhhhhhhh Wah kia baat hay Tabssum bhai,aap ki ye salahiyat to ab aashkar hoi hay,bohat khoob.
Ye ghazal pardh kar abhi ak sher zehen mein aay hay,paish e khidmat hay
Jab us shaokh kay rukh par nazar gai
aesay uchhlay,chhat say ultay latak gayay
_________________
Nam e jamhoor pe bazaar saja rakha hay
biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Baarish
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:26 pm |
| Junior Addict Member |
 |
Joined: Sun Nov 11, 2007 7:52 am
Posts: 11562
Location: Jammu&Kashmir
|
tabs wrote: Abhi tumhari yaad k mousam gaae na thay
is dil ny tumko bhulaya abhi na tha
hum chah k khud se juda tujh ko na kar sakay
go tu nay hum ko dil main basaya kabhi na tha
dil ki udasiyon ka ye aalam aur amad e bahar
itna khizaan ne bhi hum ko rulaya kabhi na tha ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Nice collection ..beautiful written tabs g...keep writing.
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:12 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
Baarish wrote: tabs wrote: Abhi tumhari yaad k mousam gaae na thay
is dil ny tumko bhulaya abhi na tha
hum chah k khud se juda tujh ko na kar sakay
go tu nay hum ko dil main basaya kabhi na tha
dil ki udasiyon ka ye aalam aur amad e bahar
itna khizaan ne bhi hum ko rulaya kabhi na tha ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Nice collection ..beautiful written tabs g...keep writing. Aik purani takhleeq ko khoj nikalny aur phir ussay sarahny ka Behad Shukria.. 
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:14 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
mahtabhashmi wrote: Wahhhhhhhhhhh Wah kia baat hay Tabssum bhai,aap ki ye salahiyat to ab aashkar hoi hay,bohat khoob.
Ye ghazal pardh kar abhi ak sher zehen mein aay hay,paish e khidmat hay
Jab us shaokh kay rukh par nazar gai
aesay uchhlay,chhat say ultay latak gayay Bohat nawazish Hashmi sb....ehsan mand hoon aap ki mohabbaton ka.....
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
cuty
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 4:51 pm |
| Super Member |
|
Joined: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am
Posts: 1058
|
_________________
khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Fri Oct 02, 2009 5:04 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
cuty wrote: Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ki nigah nawazi o hosla afzai ka..... Bohat nawazish.....
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
cuty
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 7:10 am |
| Super Member |
|
Joined: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am
Posts: 1058
|
_________________
khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
cuty
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:47 am |
| Super Member |
|
Joined: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am
Posts: 1058
|
_________________
khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
mahtabhashmi
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:09 am |
Joined: Sat Mar 07, 2009 6:38 pm
Posts: 1248
Location: Karachi, Pakistan
|
cuty wrote: Waaaaaaaaaah kia baat hay janab,aap ki zambeel say to bohat hi aala cheezen bahir aarahi hen,jawab nahi is ghazal ka,dheron daad qubool farmayyay.
_________________
Nam e jamhoor pe bazaar saja rakha hay
biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 5:40 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
cuty wrote: Thanks Rabia ji, aap ne hamray thread ko is qadr tawajjoh se padha, aap ki is mohabbat k liye be had mamnoon hon... Nawazish....
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:22 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
mahtabhashmi wrote: cuty wrote: Waaaaaaaaaah kia baat hay janab,aap ki zambeel say to bohat hi aala cheezen bahir aarahi hen,jawab nahi is ghazal ka,dheron daad qubool farmayyay. Ibtida e Ishq hai rota hai kya !!! Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ka ...... bohat nawazish...
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:24 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
miskeen wrote: Bohat Nawazish shah sb, hum to kab se aap ki rah tak rahay thay....jaldi jaldi aya kijiye ta k hum aap ki niyaz main apni saye e natawan paish kar k hosla afzai ka sharf hasil kar sakain.... Bohat shukriya....
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:29 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
sahil-E-tamana wrote: tabs wrote: Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....
] Bohat shukriya....keep visiting....
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
miskeen
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:39 pm |
| Super Member |
|
Joined: Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:04 am
Posts: 1915
Location: hyderabad
|
|
KAMAL HUD-E-KAMAL.
boht aala nazm likhi he ap ne. boht aala. aakhir men jo ap ne likha (mujhy maaf ker do) sari nazm ka wajood sama dia ap ne inn choty se lufzon men. kia kehny wahhh. boht lutf aaya perhny men...
jis ke bhi naam likhi he ye nazm wallah sungdil hoga jo matum na karey ga.
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 2:23 pm |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
miskeen wrote:
KAMAL HUD-E-KAMAL.
boht aala nazm likhi he ap ne. boht aala. aakhir men jo ap ne likha (mujhy maaf ker do) sari nazm ka wajood sama dia ap ne inn choty se lufzon men. kia kehny wahhh. boht lutf aaya perhny men...
jis ke bhi naam likhi he ye nazm wallah sungdil hoga jo matum na karey ga.
Shah Sb, pasand karnay ka bohat shukriya......per khudara SangDil to na khain k hamain wo bohat aziz hai............sub ki apni apni majboriyan hoti hain............ Bohat nawazish....
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
miskeen
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Oct 11, 2009 6:08 pm |
| Super Member |
|
Joined: Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:04 am
Posts: 1915
Location: hyderabad
|
|
hi hi Qibla hi hi. kia kehny iss latafut-e-shok-e-junooN ka. ap ne baja furmaya hum iss jasarut ki maafi mangty hen. ak sher ap ke nazar he.
men rooth ker ye sochita hon ke aaengy wo manany
kareeb jaany ki koshish men ye kerta hon bahaany.
men batata hon ke kitna sungdil he mera sanum,
kabhi haal-e-dil bhi na poocha aa k bister k surhany.
(miskeen)
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Tifl e Maktab
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:25 am |
| EverGreen Member |
|
Joined: Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am
Posts: 3604
|
Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak
dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak
_________________
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
cuty
|
Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:17 am |
| Super Member |
|
Joined: Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am
Posts: 1058
|
tabs wrote: Doston! ye Nazm uski nazr kr raha hon jis ne mujhe muskurana sikhaya......Dekhlo is main kahin bhi kisi aur ka rang nahin ye sirf aur sirf tumharay liye hai.................aur Tumharay hi naam hai......... hmm
bohot zaberdast janab
waisay jis kay liey bhi likhi hay
bohot khush naseeb hay wo
_________________
khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
