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 Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy
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Doston! ye Nazm uski nazr kr raha hon jis ne mujhe muskurana sikhaya......Dekhlo is main kahin bhi kisi aur ka rang nahin ye sirf aur sirf tumharay liye hai.................aur Tumharay hi naam hai.........

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Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak

dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak


bohat umda tabs ji.....aur jese cuty ne kaha jis ke liye bhi likhe wo bohat khush naseeb hai
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Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak

dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak



wah wah wah kia kehny boht aala. khas ker ke oper wala sher. ak sher ap ki nazar.

ab men sumjha hon birahmun ki bootparusti ko,
ke meri terha wo bhi andha he ishq-e-beenai se.

tum khuda ka mujh pe ehsaN ho ba soorut-e-dilber,
ya ibn-e-Muryum ka mojiza ho koi maseehai se.
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Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak

dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak



wah wah wah kia kehny boht aala. khas ker ke oper wala sher. ak sher ap ki nazar.

ab men sumjha hon birahmun ki bootparusti ko,
ke meri terha wo bhi andha he ishq-e-beenai se.

tum khuda ka mujh pe ehsaN ho ba soorut-e-dilber,
ya ibn-e-Muryum ka mojiza ho koi maseehai se.
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Bohat mamnoon hoon Shah Sb, aapka k itni mohabbat se nawaztay hain.....

bohat nawazish



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Faqeer Ban k teray darr ki gadai le li
tujhay de k khushi, gham ki siyahi le li

Tujhay tark e ta'aluq ka afsoos na ho
so hum ne apnay hi sir sari burai le li



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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi hain
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum


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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum


Bohat khoobsurat Tabassum je.... :buke:

aise hi likhte rahiye :buke:



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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum


Bohat khoobsurat Tabassum je.... :buke:

aise hi likhte rahiye :buke:



Ya Allah, Chiragh jalain, k baam o dar sajain....hum to hairan hain k aaj ye suraj kidhar se nikla hai.....

bohat khushi huwi k aap ne hamaray thread ko ronaq bakhshi.....

bohat hi mamnoon hain aap k

Nawazish.....

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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum


Waaaaah Wah, bohat khoob,tabassum Bhai bohat aala Ghazal takhiq ki hay dheron daad qubool farmayay.

:buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke:



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Doston! ye Nazm uski nazr kr raha hon jis ne mujhe muskurana sikhaya......Dekhlo is main kahin bhi kisi aur ka rang nahin ye sirf aur sirf tumharay liye hai.................aur Tumharay hi naam hai.........


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bohot zaberdast janab
waisay jis kay liey bhi likhi hay
bohot khush naseeb hay wo


Bohat nawazish hai aap ki.......aur jis k liye likhi hai wo khush naseeb na hongay to hum kyun likhtay.....hamarai tamam naik tamannain un k saath hain wo jahan rahain khush rahain....

Aik bar phr aap ka behad mamnoon hoon, pazerai k liye....


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Doston! ye Nazm uski nazr kr raha hon jis ne mujhe muskurana sikhaya......Dekhlo is main kahin bhi kisi aur ka rang nahin ye sirf aur sirf tumharay liye hai.................aur Tumharay hi naam hai.........

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Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak

dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak


bohat umda tabs ji.....aur jese cuty ne kaha jis ke liye bhi likhe wo bohat khush naseeb hai
aur dil ko chuu jane wala shair...



Bohat maazrat sono ji, dar asal aadat nahin hai kisi naye mehman ki isliye aap ki post nazr andaz ho gai....khair bohat mutashakkir hoon hosla afzai k liye.....

aati raha karain itna buray bhi shair nahin hain hum....

Talib e dua

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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum



Waaaaah Wah, bohat khoob,tabassum Bhai bohat aala Ghazal takhiq ki hay dheron daad qubool farmayay.

:buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke:



Bohat ehsan mand hain aap k Hashmi sb bal k yun kahiye k maqrooz hain aap ki mohabbat k..

Bohat shukriya....

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Faqeer Ban k teray darr ki gadai le li
tujhay de k khushi, gham ki siyahi le li

Tujhay tark e ta'aluq ka afsoos na ho
so hum ne apnay hi sir sari burai le li
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kia kehny qibla wahhhhhhhhhhhhh boht aala sher hen dono..... dilkhush hogaya.




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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum

bohot haseen poetry kertay hain aap
:b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b:



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Masha-allah! zabardast!

Bohot umda Asad bhaai.. josh-e-imani se sarabor hokar likha hai aapne.. bohot khoob.



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Waaaaaah!... Jis qadar tareef ki jaye kam hai... is main chand ash'ar to bohot hi aala or me'ayari kalaam ka namuna hai, aap ki ye ghazal bohot hi pasand aai, bohot achhe janaab..



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Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....


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Allahuakbar!.

Aankhon ke samne apni puri zindagi naach gai, or dard ke saye munhchidate nazar aaye... aysa laga kisi ne meri zindagi ki kitaab khol kar mujhi ko dikha di.. is nazm ke dard ko wahi achhi tarah mehsoos kar sakta hai jis ki eid haqiqat main ayse hi guzarti ho.. jo is din ki khushi ko rasm ki tarah manane ki koshish karta ho.. or eid ke din khush rehne ko apna farz samajh kar adaa karne ki nakaam koshish karta ho..

Bohot umda likha aap ne asad bhaai. meri janib se dheron daad qubool kijiye..



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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum


Aap ne shuruaat se ab tak bohot kam waqt me bohot lamba safar te kar liya, bohot taraqqi ki hai janaab.. bohot umda ash'aar hain, bohot achha likhte ho bhaai. ayse hi likhte rahiye.



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Aapki ye ghazal
sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum

Bahut achchhi lagi,
Ham bhool gaye apna sabkuchh
Ghazalein na sunao aise tum
Daad qubool karein


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Aapki ye ghazal
sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum

Bahut achchhi lagi,
Ham bhool gaye apna sabkuchh
Ghazalein na sunao aise tum
Daad qubool karein



sajjid bhai khoob gazal hai ...tabs likhtay jao aisy tum



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Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....


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buhat hi hassas jazbat , nazuk arman, dil shikan dard , gehri tanhai ka rung
aapki kavish me nazr aya
buhat khub
dad qabool kerain
khush rahain
subah..



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Masha-allah! zabardast!

Bohot umda Asad bhaai.. josh-e-imani se sarabor hokar likha hai aapne.. bohot khoob.

jazak Allah
ishq e e;ahi aur hub e rasool say mehakti kavish ...pasund aee
khush rahain
subah..



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Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....


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tabassum ji ..
jitni sraaha jaaye kam hai..
na jaane kitne logon aisi Eid ko mehsoos kar chuuke hian
jis ki akaasi aap ne buhut khoobsorat andaaz se ki hia,,
MashaAllah :hug



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Faqeer Ban k teray darr ki gadai le li
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Tujhay tark e ta'aluq ka afsoos na ho
so hum ne apnay hi sir sari burai le li



kia kehny qibla wahhhhhhhhhhhhh boht aala sher hen dono..... dilkhush hogaya.

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Maqrooz hain hazrat aap k.....

Bohat nawazish...



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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum

bohot haseen poetry kertay hain aap
:b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b:



Bohat nawazish hai Rabia ji aap ki.......



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Masha-allah! zabardast!

Bohot umda Asad bhaai.. josh-e-imani se sarabor hokar likha hai aapne.. bohot khoob.


Sayyid bhai,

mera manna hai k Allah pak Rehman o Raheem, apnay bandoon se is qadr mohabbat karta hai k jab un k gunah badh jatay hain to un say koi na koi aisa kaam karwa deta hai k uski rehmat shirminda ho jaye....aisay hi kuch mujh jaisay gunahgar se bhi karwadiya hai us Perwardigar ne warna meri itni auqat nahin....

Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ka....

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Waaaaaah!... Jis qadar tareef ki jaye kam hai... is main chand ash'ar to bohot hi aala or me'ayari kalaam ka namuna hai, aap ki ye ghazal bohot hi pasand aai, bohot achhe janaab..



Bohat nawazish .............

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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum


Aap ne shuruaat se ab tak bohot kam waqt me bohot lamba safar te kar liya, bohot taraqqi ki hai janaab.. bohot umda ash'aar hain, bohot achha likhte ho bhaai. ayse hi likhte rahiye.


Sayyid bhai ye aap ki alaa zarfi hai k zarra e raig ko aftab samjhtay hain, warna main kisi qabil nahin.....

Bohat nawzish k aap ne meray is thread ko ronaq bakhshi...

behad mamnoon

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Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak

dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak


tabs ji aap ki shairy ka aik aik lafz apni jagha aik jarra hua moti lagta hai.....alfaz nahen hein tareef ke liye....bas jaldi jaldi likte raha karen.



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Aapki ye ghazal
sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum

Bahut achchhi lagi,
Ham bhool gaye apna sabkuchh
Ghazalein na sunao aise tum
Daad qubool karein



Sajjid bhai,

Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ki mohabbat ka....

Bohat nawazish....aatay raha kijiye hamra hosla bandha rehay ga...



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Aapki ye ghazal
sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum

Bahut achchhi lagi,
Ham bhool gaye apna sabkuchh
Ghazalein na sunao aise tum
Daad qubool karein



sajjid bhai khoob gazal hai ...tabs likhtay jao aisy tum



Sameer bhai, Hosla afzai ka behad mamnoon hoon.....



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Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....


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buhat hi hassas jazbat , nazuk arman, dil shikan dard , gehri tanhai ka rung
aapki kavish me nazr aya
buhat khub
dad qabool kerain
khush rahain
subah..


Hazrat is qadr nigah e ameeq se meri aah e rayegaan per tawajjah k liye behad mamnoon.

Bohat nawazish hai aap ki....



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Masha-allah! zabardast!

Bohot umda Asad bhaai.. josh-e-imani se sarabor hokar likha hai aapne.. bohot khoob.

jazak Allah
ishq e e;ahi aur hub e rasool say mehakti kavish ...pasund aee
khush rahain
subah..



Bohat Nawazish................................



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Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....





tabassum ji ..
jitni sraaha jaaye kam hai..
na jaane kitne logon aisi Eid ko mehsoos kar chuuke hian
jis ki akaasi aap ne buhut khoobsorat andaaz se ki hia,,
MashaAllah :hug



Asif bhai,

Wo aaye hamaray thread main khuda ki qudrat hai..........................

Bohat nawazish k aap ne meray in alfaz main chupay dard ko mehsoos kiya aur meri is saee e naqish ko qabil e sataish samjha....aatay raha kijiye k aap ki amad se hum jaisay Tiflaan e sukhn ki hosla afzai hoti hai....

Intehai Mutashakkir,

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Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak

dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak


tabs ji aap ki shairy ka aik aik lafz apni jagha aik jarra hua moti lagta hai.....alfaz nahen hein tareef ke liye....bas jaldi jaldi likte raha karen.



Sono ji,

aap ka husn e nigah hai ka aap zarrah e khaak ko ba misl e aftab sarahti hain....main be had maqrooz hon aap ki is inayat ka....

bohat bohat shukriya...

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Waaaaaah!... Jis qadar tareef ki jaye kam hai... is main chand ash'ar to bohot hi aala or me'ayari kalaam ka namuna hai, aap ki ye ghazal bohot hi pasand aai, bohot achhe janaab..

uuf
kitni kubsurat gazal hay
bohot zaberdast :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke:
:b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b:



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Waaaaaah!... Jis qadar tareef ki jaye kam hai... is main chand ash'ar to bohot hi aala or me'ayari kalaam ka namuna hai, aap ki ye ghazal bohot hi pasand aai, bohot achhe janaab..

uuf
kitni kubsurat gazal hay
bohot zaberdast :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke:
:b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b:



Rabia ji,

Bohat shukriya, waisay mujhe pora yaqeen hai k Sayyid bhai k kehnay per aap ko ghazal ki khobsorti ka ehsas nahin huwa hoga................

Bohat nawazish.............



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Elahi kisi ko gham nahin dena
dena to agay dam nahin dena

aankhain teri ata'at main bheegain
ya kisi ko chashm e num nahin dena

Usman o Hatim sakhi teray banday
jo dena, to kisi ko kam nahin dena



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Elahi kisi ko gham nahin dena
dena to agay dam nahin dena

aankhain teri ata'at main bheegain
ya kisi ko chashm e num nahin dena

Usman o Hatim sakhi teray banday
jo dena, to kisi ko kam nahin dena



ALLAH OAKBAR! qibla kia kehny ap ke mizaaj men ye rung bhi dekhny ko mila kia kehny soofiyat se bhurpoor ashaar kahy hen ap ny dil baag o bahar ho gaya..

:rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: ye phool ap ki nazr..



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Waaaaaah!... Jis qadar tareef ki jaye kam hai... is main chand ash'ar to bohot hi aala or me'ayari kalaam ka namuna hai, aap ki ye ghazal bohot hi pasand aai, bohot achhe janaab..

uuf
kitni kubsurat gazal hay
bohot zaberdast :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke:
:b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b: :b)b:

nahin aisi bat nahin is ghazal ka her shair haseen hay :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke:



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tabassum
buhat khubsoorat undaz e baayan ...ishq e elahi aur ish q e Rasool se pur
Jazak Allah ....WAH !
khush rahain
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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum

hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum

dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum

aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum

hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum

buhat achi kavish
khush rahain
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