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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy  Posted: Tue Apr 14, 2009 8:34 am |
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tabs wrote:
Mumkin hai dard ka nighahoon se eayaan hona
baes e haif hai buldand aah o fughaan hona
chashm e num dil e pur chak girayban hona
kisay nasib rah e ishq ka aasaan hona
sehr e ishq main baes e sukon hota hai
dil sa chak e giraybaan hona
mere ashaar kisi qabil nahin phir bhi
kisi lafz ko aata nahin pashaymaan hona
hum shaheedan e wafa hi ko hasil ye kamal
ik Tabassum ka teer e rag e jaan hona
buhat hi piyari collection hai apki khush rahen hamesha
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 6:12 pm |
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Prince143 wrote:
buhat hi piyari collection hai apki khush rahen hamesha
[/quote] Bohat shukriya, ye hamari khush naseebi hai k aap ne hamaray thread ko ronaq bakhshi. bus aik apni nawazishon k silsila mauqoof na farmiye ga, warna hum kahan ji pain gay.... Talib e Dua Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2009 6:17 pm |
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Arooj ji, ye nazm aap ki nazr.......Attachment: nazm tum lout aao na.gif
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Apr 18, 2009 8:44 am |
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tabs wrote: Prince143 wrote:
buhat hi piyari collection hai apki khush rahen hamesha
Bohat shukriya, ye hamari khush naseebi hai k aap ne hamaray thread ko ronaq bakhshi. bus aik apni nawazishon k silsila mauqoof na farmiye ga, warna hum kahan ji pain gay.... Talib e Dua Tabassum[/quote] bus ji hamari itni bhi tarif mat karen janab ap achi achi post karte rahen hum zarur angey Apna buhat khayal rakhna ALLAH apko hamesha khush rakhen AMEEN
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 5:09 pm |
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tabs wrote: Arooj ji, ye nazm aap ki nazr.......Attachment: nazm tum lout aao na.gif Wah Wah Tabassum ji, kya baat hai. Bohot khubsoorat nazm. aad qubool karain. 
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Apr 21, 2009 5:49 pm |
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seemanaqvi wrote: tabs wrote: Arooj ji, ye nazm aap ki nazr.......Attachment: nazm tum lout aao na.gif Wah Wah Tabassum ji, kya baat hai. Bohot khubsoorat nazm. aad qubool karain. Seema ji, bohat khushi huwi aap ko forum pe online dekh kr.
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon May 11, 2009 8:13 pm |
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Ye Ghazal Arooj ji k marhoon e minnat k un ki rahnumai k beghair main aap ki khidmat main paish karnay k qabil na tha........ Attachment: dil k nagr se.gif
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed May 13, 2009 6:15 am |
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tabs wrote:
Mumkin hai dard ka nighahoon se eayaan hona
baes e haif hai buldand aah o fughaan hona
chashm e num dil e pur chak girayban hona
kisay nasib rah e ishq ka aasaan hona
sehr e ishq main baes e sukon hota hai
dil sa chak e giraybaan hona
nice janaab
mere ashaar kisi qabil nahin phir bhi
kisi lafz ko aata nahin pashaymaan hona
hum shaheedan e wafa hi ko hasil ye kamal
ik Tabassum ka teer e rag e jaan hona
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 4:01 pm |
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Meri muhabbat ka itna sa bas fasana hai
mera ye ishq us ka faqat dostana hai
be rukhi yunhi be sabab nahi hai dost
ho na ho ye tark e taaluq ka shakhsana hai
zindagi is tarha khafa rahi humse
hawa e tund hai aur diya jalana hai
kisay khabr thi k wafain yun bhi badlain gi
k jissay bair tha mujhko us hi se tera dostana hai
bhula diya hain us ne sab hi paiman
meri fitrat k phr bhi mujhe nibhana hai
Hamain to roz hi aazmaa liya tu ne
tujhe bhi aae dil kisi roz aazmana hai
abhi na qabr main utaro doston mujhko
muntazir hoon Tabassum ko bhi to aana hai.
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Jun 13, 2009 5:06 pm |
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tabs wrote: Meri muhabbat ka itna sa bas fasana hai
mera ye ishq us ka faqat dostana hai
be rukhi yunhi be sabab nahi hai dost
ho na ho ye tark e taaluq ka shakhsana hai
zindagi is tarha khafa rahi humse
hawa e tund hai aur diya jalana hai
kisay khabr thi k wafain yun bhi badlain gi
k jissay bair tha mujhko us hi se tera dostana hai
bhula diya hain us ne sab hi paiman
meri fitrat k phr bhi mujhe nibhana hai
Hamain to roz hi aazmaa liya tu ne
tujhe bhi aae dil kisi roz aazmana hai
abhi na qabr main utaro doston mujhko
muntazir hoon Tabassum ko bhi to aana hai. Bohat khoob, Tabassum bhai bohat umda ghazal takhliq ki hay, khas taor par ye sher to dil ko bha gaya,
Zidagi is tarah khafa rahi ham say
hawa e tund hay aur diya jalana hay
Bohat si daad qubool farmaiyay.Allah karay zor e qalam aur bhi ziyada
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biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Jun 14, 2009 4:27 am |
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Tabassum ji
Aapke pas khayal hai,alfaz hein mager shayeri ke qawaneen ke tahat aur mehnat ki zaroorat hai ,ummeed hai aap bahut jald bawazn sher kehte milenge.meri daad qubool keejiye.
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Jun 15, 2009 5:33 am |
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nice sharings ,,,keep it up.
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Jun 18, 2009 6:28 pm |
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thanks Maria for yr sweet comments.... Thanks Sajid bhai for youe Sour comments... I like both... 
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Jul 02, 2009 8:00 pm |
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tabs wrote: wah.............behtreen............! faqat meena
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Jul 04, 2009 9:30 pm |
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Meena wrote: [quote="tabs wah.............behtreen............! faqat meena[/quote] Thanks meena ji for dorping by......
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:54 pm |
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Nam e jamhoor pe bazaar saja rakha hay
biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:26 am |
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Thanks Masooma Ji,
aap ki khidmat main apni ghazal ka aik shair pesh karraha hoon, qabool kijiye ga....
Ye dil hai mera koi kocha e wehshat to nahin hai
barsoon se nahin guzra hai koi bhi idhar se............
Aap aati rahin hum aap ki khidmat main aisay nazranay pesh kartay rahin gay......
Bohat shukriya pasand karnay ka.....
Tabassum!!
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:28 am |
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mahtabhashmi wrote: Hashmi sahib, hamaray doston aur mohsineen ki fehrist main sab se pehla naam aap hi ka to aata hai......nigah nawazi k liye be had mamnoon hoon..... Aap ki mohabbaton ka maqrooz Tabassum!!
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Jul 29, 2009 8:18 pm |
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tabs wrote: bohat umda ghazal tabs ji....parh ke maza aa gaya
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Aug 01, 2009 8:56 pm |
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sono wrote: tabs wrote: [center][img]
bohat umda ghazal tabs ji....parh ke maza aa gaya Sono Ji, bohat mamnoon hoon k aap ne apnay qeemti waqt main se chand lamhaat nikal kar sharf e nigah bakhsha..... bohat shukriya...
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Aug 02, 2009 9:07 am |
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bohat bohat achi collection hai aap ki, bohat umda...keep it up
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zindagi ke safar me kabhi tum gir jaao to apna haath de
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:02 pm |
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Bhatakti khushi, kyun pata poochti hai
kya ye zeest dil ki, khata poochti hai
huway qatl armaan kis ke yahan per
bari hasraton se hawa poochti hai
dar-e-jaana ab bhi nahi chortay kyun
palat'ti huee her dua poochti hai
teri shokhiyaa'n sab kahan kho gayee hein
mere ghar ki weeraa'n fiza poochti hai
zamee'n teri ashko'n se pehlay hi nam hai
main barso'n kahan pe, ghata poochti hai
nibhai na rasm-e-wafa jis ne ik bhi
mera mujh se tarz-e-wafa poochti hai
mera dil tha jis pe huwa para para
bhala konsi thi ada, poochti hai
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:31 pm |
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tabs wrote: Bhatakti khushi, kyun pata poochti hai
kya ye zeest dil ki, khata poochti hai
huway qatl armaan kis ke yahan per
bari hasraton se hawa poochti hai
dar-e-jaana ab bhi nahi chortay kyun
palat'ti huee her dua poochti hai
tabs wrote: zamee'n teri ashko'n se pehlay hi nam hai
main barso'n kahan pe, ghata poochti hai
Aa'la shair.. wah!tabs wrote: mera dil tha jis pe huwa para para
bhala konsi thi ada, poochti hai
Lajawaab...
Likhtay rahiyay janab.. aapki sharings ka intezaar rehta hai.
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Aug 04, 2009 6:51 pm |
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Thanks Masooma ji for such an instant response.....
Thanks for the appreciation........
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:34 am |
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tabs wrote: Bhatakti khushi, kyun pata poochti hai
kya ye zeest dil ki, khata poochti hai
huway qatl armaan kis ke yahan per
bari hasraton se hawa poochti hai
dar-e-jaana ab bhi nahi chortay kyun
palat'ti huee her dua poochti hai
teri shokhiyaa'n sab kahan kho gayee hein
mere ghar ki weeraa'n fiza poochti hai
zamee'n teri ashko'n se pehlay hi nam hai
main barso'n kahan pe, ghata poochti hai
nibhai na rasm-e-wafa jis ne ik bhi
mera mujh se tarz-e-wafa poochti hai
mera dil tha jis pe huwa para para
bhala konsi thi ada, poochti hai
palat'ti huee her dua poochti hai
bohat khoob tabs ji
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:22 pm |
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sono wrote: tabs wrote: Bhatakti khushi, kyun pata poochti hai
palat'ti huee her dua poochti hai
bohat khoob tabs ji Thanks Sono jo for dropping in.....please keep visiting.... Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:25 pm |
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Ik khwab suhana toot gaya,
mann ka nagr koi loot gaya,
chandni phaili charoon ore,
ik dil ka kona chhoot gaya,
barsoon baad mila wo hamse,
ik zakhm purana phoot gaya,
tum yaar mantay phirtay ho,
humse dushman e jaan ik rooth gaya
Dard ki fasl zarkhaiz huwi jb,
dil main kadway ashk ka ghoont gaya
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 4:33 pm |
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tabs wrote: Ik khwab suhana toot gaya,
mann ka nagr koi loot gaya,
chandni phaili charoon ore,
ik dil ka kona chhoot gaya,
barsoon baad mila wo hamse,
ik zakhm purana phoot gaya,
tum yaar mantay phirtay ho,
humse dushman e jaan ik rooth gaya
Dard ki fasl zarkhaiz huwi jb,
dil main kadway ashk ka ghoont gaya chandni phaili charoon ore, ik dil ka kona chhoot gaya, bohat khoobsurat khayal tabs ji
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:22 pm |
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tabs wrote: tum yaar mantay phirtay ho,
humse dushman e jaan ik rooth gaya
Dard ki fasl zarkhaiz huwi jb,
dil main kadway ashk ka ghoont gaya
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:27 pm |
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tabs wrote: Wahhh!! Kya ghazal hai. "Husn par gharoor tha.." Pehlay 2 ashaar kamaal kay hain. 3rd shair main "..hum sa" ki bijayay "..hum say" nahi hona chahiyay tha? Please daikh lejiyay ga.
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