Poet Of The Forum...start voting.

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Sat Jul 14, 2007 5:36 pm

AOA Everyone
Mujhe lagta hai k meri tarha "Mashq-e-sukhan" mein "Poet of the Forum" thread ki kammi,aur bohat se members bhi mehsoos kar rahe hon ge...So kyun na ye thread dobara start kiya jaaye...!
Shuru karte hain BASHIR BADAR saahab k misre se...

Tumhaari muhabbat agar saath ho gi

So..Best of luck to you all...

Iss silsilay mein har maheenay aik misra diya jaaye ga aur aap sab ko uss k saath apna misra joR k sher banaana hoga.Theek hai? :buke:

balvinder · **Posted:** Sat Jul 14, 2007 7:34 pm

bahut-bahut shukriya Arooj sahiba iss silsile ko fir se shuroo karne ke liye....

maiN khud chaahtaa thaa ki ye silsilaa fir se shuroo ho....lekin ye bhii chaahtaa thaa ki ise koii is ''forum'' ka shaayar ya shaayraat hi shuroo kare...aaj aapne merii muraad poorii kar dii....shukriyaah

aour kyaa khoob misraa diyaa hai aapne...to aaiye dosto iss misre par girah lagaayeiN..aour apne fann ki taabah-aazmaaii kareiN...

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:11 am

oh...koi nahin aaya ab tak :(
Chaliye pehli koshish ham hi kar Daalte hain

Na mehsoos ho gi kami zindagi mein
Tumhaari mohabbat agar saath ho gi

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:15 am

....aur doosri bhi... :(

To kar lein ge taskheer sara zamaana
Tumhaari mohabbat agar saath ho gi

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:17 am

...aur teesri bhi.... :(

Palat kar na dekhein ge dunia ko phir ham
Tumhaari mohabbat agar saath ho gi

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Sun Jul 15, 2007 7:38 am

Ab aap ki baari... :D :D

balvinder · **Posted:** Sun Jul 15, 2007 9:55 am

liijiye zald-baazi meN aapka saath dene ke liye ye ek chhoTi si kaavish haazir hai...

ghamoN meN khushii ki barsaat hogii
tumhaari muhabbat agar saath hogii

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Mon Jul 16, 2007 5:53 am

JahaaN bhar ki daulat mere haath ho gi
Tumhaari mohabbat agar saath ho gi

raz · **Joined:** Sun May 07, 2006 2:38 pm **Posts:** 12597

wah.. kya baat hai Arooj jee aur balvinder bhaji..............

muhammad_19k · **Joined:** Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:50 am **Posts:** 95

bhalaa kis ki mujh jaise auqaat ho gi?
tumhaari moHabbat agar saath ho gi :wink:

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Mon Jul 16, 2007 3:53 pm

muhammad_19k wrote:

bhalaa kis ki mujh jaise auqaat ho gi?
tumhaari moHabbat agar saath ho gi :wink:

Waah ji good concept...

shaam_key_baad · **Joined:** Sat Feb 17, 2007 11:36 pm **Posts:** 347

hmmm buhat khoob ji

raz · **Joined:** Sun May 07, 2006 2:38 pm **Posts:** 12597

sab ne bahut hi umda kavish pesh ki...

kuch humari taraf se bhi bardaasht karlen

ghum-o-ranj ki na koi raat hogi
tumari muhabbat agar saath hogi

muhammad_19k · **Joined:** Sat Jun 02, 2007 9:50 am **Posts:** 95

wow!!!

aik bohat zabardast girah zahn meN aaii to sochaa aap logoN ke saath share kar karlooN umeed hai ke aap ko zaroor pasand aa-ai gi,

khudaa ki khudii* miray haath ho gi
tumhaari moHabbat agar saath ho gi

* khudaai = duniyaa.

regards,
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Wed Jul 18, 2007 5:41 pm

waah khawar sahab kya giraah lagaai hai

Behzad Barham · **Posted:** Wed Jul 25, 2007 2:28 pm

Aabroo wrote:

Amawas mein bhi chandni raat hogi
Tumhari mohabat agar sath hogi

Oye hoye, kya misra lagaaya hai Aabru jeee, ye to hamein shadeed hi pasand aaya hai bhaee :D

And Thanx alottt Arooj jee for starting this thread again

Behzad Barham · **Posted:** Wed Jul 25, 2007 2:48 pm

Kisi aur gham ki kahaN baat hogi
Tumhari mohabat agar saat hogi

tuba najam · **Posted:** Sun Jul 29, 2007 8:55 am

kabhi b nah rastay main phir yas hogi

tumhari mohabbat agar sath hogi

tuba najam · **Posted:** Sun Jul 29, 2007 8:56 am

kabhi b nah tanha meri zaat hogi

tumhari mohabbat agar sath hogi

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Sun Jul 29, 2007 5:56 pm

Quote:

Aabroo wrote:

Amawas mein bhi chandni raat hogi
Tumhari mohabat agar sath hogi

Oye hoye, kya misra lagaaya hai Aabru jeee, ye to hamein shadeed hi pasand aaya hai bhaee

Aoa zamil ji
aabroo ji k misray ka matlab to bilashuba bohat khoob hai par i wanna know k kya "amaawas" kaali raat ko nahi kehte??if yes then kaali raat mein bhi chaandni raat ho gi...???
:?

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Sun Jul 29, 2007 5:57 pm

good going friends...keep it up

balvinder · **Posted:** Sun Jul 29, 2007 6:12 pm

Arooj Amjad wrote:

Quote:

Aabroo wrote:

Amawas mein bhi chandni raat hogi
Tumhari mohabat agar sath hogi

Oye hoye, kya misra lagaaya hai Aabru jeee, ye to hamein shadeed hi pasand aaya hai bhaee

Aoa zamil ji
aabroo ji k misray ka matlab to bilashuba bohat khoob hai par i wanna know k kya "amaawas" kaali raat ko nahi kehte??if yes then kaali raat mein bhi chaandni raat ho gi...???
:?

ab kyaa kahooN Arooj sahiba..lagta hai abhii aapne kisii se muhabbat nahiiN ki...aour saath hi aapne doosare misre par bhii gaur nahiiN farmaaya....jab aapke saath aapke mahboob ki muhabbat hai to yakiin jaaniye ki amaavas ki kaali raateiN bhii aapko chaaNdani raat ka ehsaas hi karvaayeiNgi....kyaa kahte ho zaamil bhaii

Behzad Barham · **Posted:** Mon Jul 30, 2007 12:19 am

Jee Balvinder bhai, mohabbat aap apna mausam, apna samaaN banaati hai 8)

Aur Arooj jee, as far as i m getting ur point, is misre mein lafz "mein" aapko confuse kar raha hai.
Agar aap amaavas ko kaali raat samjhein gi to ofcourse Aabru g k misre mein lafz "mein" izaafi mehsus hota hai, yaani yuN hona chaahiye k "amaavas bhi chaandni raat hogi" (wazan se qata'-e-nazar) lekin "mein" izaafi nahi hai coz amaavas "qamri maheene k aakhri din" ko kehte hain. So misra is rite.
Yaqeenan baat waazeh ho gaee hogi

BrOkEn PrInCe · **Posted:** Mon Jul 30, 2007 8:57 am

Dashte tanhai main bi ik umeed aass ho gee
TUmharai mohobat ager meray sath ho gee

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Mon Jul 30, 2007 5:36 pm

Zamil wrote:

Aur Arooj jee, as far as i m getting ur point, is misre mein lafz "mein" aapko confuse kar raha hai.
Agar aap amaavas ko kaali raat samjhein gi to ofcourse Aabru g k misre mein lafz "mein" izaafi mehsus hota hai, yaani yuN hona chaahiye k "amaavas bhi chaandni raat hogi" (wazan se qata'-e-nazar) lekin "mein" izaafi nahi hai coz amaavas "qamri maheene k aakhri din" ko kehte hain. So misra is rite.
Yaqeenan baat waazeh ho gaee hogi

thanx zamil ji..for getting my point and explaining it...so amaavas is"din" not raat :roll:

waah...didnt know it... :?

Dr.Love · **Posted:** Tue Jul 31, 2007 4:47 am

Zamil wrote:

Jee Balvinder bhai, mohabbat aap apna mausam, apna samaaN banaati hai 8)

Aur Arooj jee, as far as i m getting ur point, is misre mein lafz "mein" aapko confuse kar raha hai.
Agar aap amaavas ko kaali raat samjhein gi to ofcourse Aabru g k misre mein lafz "mein" izaafi mehsus hota hai, yaani yuN hona chaahiye k "amaavas bhi chaandni raat hogi" (wazan se qata'-e-nazar) lekin "mein" izaafi nahi hai coz amaavas "qamri maheene k aakhri din" ko kehte hain. So misra is rite.
Yaqeenan baat waazeh ho gaee hogi

Slam Dosto!!!
Yaha to boht mazy mazy kee and informatic discusion chal rahi hai Crdt to saray kai sar Abroo Jee koo hee jata hai jinhou nai Zamil and Blvindrer Jee kou bee kuch mazeed gushgvaar kerny kaa moqa dia nad ager koi naa samjnai kee kaser baqi thee to woh Zamil jee nai nahyt hee umedah wazahat kai sath dour ker dee!!

Hamesha khush rahai app sub log
All the BEst!!!

Mujy poetry voetry likhny kaa dhang too nahi atti bus perny kee haad tak boht shooq rakhta houn!!! app loigo kee nazer ker raha hou ager kafi yaa wazan kee kami hoi tou maafi chaou gaa!!!

Meri Her raat Shaab -e- Braat hoo gee
Tumhari muhabat ager sath hou gee!!

balvinder · **Posted:** Tue Jul 31, 2007 6:05 pm

ji zaamil bhaii bahut khoob...bilkul sahii tashriih ki hai aapne Aabroo ji ke misre ki kahna maiN bhii yahi chaahta thaa lekin jis aNdaaz se aapne bayaaN ki hai ek-dam durust hai....daad qubool kiijiye..

khush rahiye..

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Wed Aug 01, 2007 6:36 am

had ho gaee bhaee....hamein sher samajh mein aa aya tha dosto!... mafhoom ki khoobsoori ko saraaha bhi par "mein" kuch ajeeb lag raha tha thats why i asked.. :(
aur Aabroo ji "aur bhi dukh ain zamaane mein mohabbat k siwa" ;) array ishq karne ko to zindagi paRi hai...jab waqt aaye ga to wo bhi kar lain ge :wink:

raz · **Joined:** Sun May 07, 2006 2:38 pm **Posts:** 12597

wow.. bahut hi achey sab ne bahut achi kavish ki hai..

phir ganj-e-qaaroon mere haath hogi
tumari muhabbat agar saath hogi

ya

ganj-e- qaaroon mere haath hogi
tumari muhabbat agar saath hogi

balvinder · **Posted:** Wed Aug 01, 2007 5:00 pm

Arooj Amjad wrote:

aur Aabroo ji "aur bhi dukh hain zamaane mein mohabbat k siwa" ;)

''Arooj'' ji aapko muhabbat ek takliif si lagtii hai :?:

:( ek sher haazir hai apki nazar.....dekhiye ''bismil'' sa'iidi sahab kyaa farmaate haiN...

parastish kar, muhabbat karne vaaloN kii parastish kar
khudaa hotaa hai dil meiN, jab muhabbat dil meiN hotii hai

abhii itnaa hi....agar chaaheiNgi to ''muhabbat'' ki rahnumaaii meN aour bhii saboot pesh kar dooNga.... :D

Khuda aapko mahfooz rakkhe...

Dr.Love · **Posted:** Thu Aug 02, 2007 3:57 am

balvinder wrote:

Arooj Amjad wrote:

aur Aabroo ji "aur bhi dukh hain zamaane mein mohabbat k siwa" ;)

''Arooj'' ji aapko muhabbat ek takliif si lagtii hai :?:

:( ek sher haazir hai apki nazar.....dekhiye ''bismil'' sa'iidi sahab kyaa farmaate haiN...

parastish kar, muhabbat karne vaaloN kii parastish kar
khudaa hotaa hai dil meiN, jab muhabbat dil meiN hotii hai

abhii itnaa hi....agar chaaheiNgi to ''muhabbat'' ki rahnumaaii meN aour bhii saboot pesh kar dooNga.... :D

Khuda aapko mahfooz rakkhe...

Balvinder jee app kee baat theik hai but yeh kahna kai muhabat main taklefain nahi hoti saahi nahi hay!!! app jis dunia kee baat kar rahai hain sahid woh app kai under hee kee dunia hai jahan muhbbat hee muhabat milti hai sub kou (ALLAH kery kah puri dunia main ess ho jai).
But in some cases i saw a such kind off ppl jou ess kambakht muhabit hee kee waja sai kesi kaam kai nahi rahti even out of sense hoo jatay hain app ess qisam kee mohabat kaai beray kai kia kahain gain???? kia mohabat kerny wala jou ess condition pai haa apny azezou kai liy peryshani and ranjou alam kaa sabab nahi haii???

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Mon Aug 06, 2007 7:53 pm

:? array ye kya ho raha hi yahaan??? "gup shup" cHoRiye dosto...let's get back to the topic...plzzzzz :D

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Tue Aug 07, 2007 2:51 pm

hahahahaha... :D deikhiye to kya misra aaya hai zehen mein...

Mere haath se sab ko sheh-maat ho gi
"Tumhari mohabbat agar saath ho gi"

:D hahaha....

balvinder · **Posted:** Tue Aug 07, 2007 5:19 pm

Arooj ji aapke iss misre se mere zahan meN bhii ek misraa aarahaa hai ki...

ziNdgaani merii na koii bisaat hogii
tumhaarii muhabbat agar saath hogii

balvinder · **Posted:** Fri Aug 10, 2007 6:23 pm

ek aour khaam-khayaalii haazir hai..suniye aour sir dhuniye...

sajde meN mere ye kaaynaat hogii
tumhaarii muhabbat agar saath hogii

Behzad Barham · **Posted:** Wed Aug 22, 2007 4:14 am

Arooj Amjad wrote:

Mere haath se sab ko sheh-maat ho gi
"Tumhari mohabbat agar saath ho gi"

Waah kya ravaaN misra hai, bohat khoob

Behzad Barham · **Posted:** Wed Aug 22, 2007 4:55 am

raz wrote:

ganj-e- qaaroon mere haath hogi
tumari muhabbat agar saath hogi[/b]

Nice idea Raaz jee, lekin "Gunj" muzakkar hai mo'annas nahi.

Behzad Barham · **Posted:** Wed Aug 22, 2007 4:57 am

Khushi do jahaN ki mere haath hogi
Tumhari mohabbat agar saath hogi

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Wed Aug 22, 2007 1:57 pm

Zamil wrote:

Arooj Amjad wrote:

Mere haath se sab ko sheh-maat ho gi
"Tumhari mohabbat agar saath ho gi"

Waah kya ravaaN misra hai, bohat khoob

thankyou zamil ji...

nice to see u after so long..

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Wed Aug 22, 2007 1:58 pm

Zamil wrote:

Khushi do jahaN ki mere haath hogi
Tumhari mohabbat agar saath hogi

waah ji

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