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Post subject: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON  Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 5:34 am |
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may tum say piyar kerti hoon
lo yeh iqrar kerti hoon
bas itna yad rakh laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
kabhi jo dil tumra yeh
kisi kay wastay machlay
to mujh ko yad ker laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
mera yeh piyar bay talabi
meri chahat may bay gerzi
bas itni si tamana hay
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
jo wada bay khayali may
tum mujh say ker hi baithay ho
ussi ka pas ker laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
yehi hay RIBZ ki chahat
yehi uski tamana hay
keh in doori kay lamhon may
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sat Sep 05, 2009 8:30 pm |
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cuty wrote: may tum say piyar kerti hoon
lo yeh iqrar kerti hoon
bas itna yad rakh laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
kabhi jo dil tumra yeh
kisi kay wastay machlay
to mujh ko yad ker laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
mera yeh piyar bay talabi
meri chahat may bay gerzi
bas itni si tamana hay
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
jo wada bay khayali may
tum mujh say ker hi baithay ho
ussi ka pas ker laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
yehi hay RIBZ ki chahat
yehi uski tamana hay
keh in doori kay lamhon may
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
(RABIA RIBZ) Bhai wah......bohat hi khoobsorat nazm hai.....aapki ye pehli nazm nigah nawaz huwai aur padhnay ka ishtiyaq jaag utha.....umeed hai tishna e sukhn ko mayyos na farmain gi....Welcome to Apki Shairy  bohat si dua k sath bohat si daad Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:49 am |
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Rabiya ji
Aapko koee nahein bhoolega,isee tarah likhtee rahiye.Daad qubool keejiye
Sajid Hashmi
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 4:26 pm |
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masooma, tabassum and sajid poetry pasand kernay ka bohot shukria
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Post subject: SHIKWA / JAWAB-E-SHIKWA Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 4:32 pm |
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shikwa
Kaha Tha Na!
K Yun Sote Hue Mt Chhor K Jana..
Muje BeShk Jga Dena..
Bta Dena..
Tmhen Rsta Bdlna He..
Meri Hd Se Niklna He..
Tmhe Kis Bat Ka Dr Tha?
K Me Jane Na DunGa!?
Kahin Pe Qed Kr LunGa!?
ARE PAGAL!
Mohbt Ki Tbiat May,
ZbrDsti Nhi Hoti..
Jise Rsta Bdlna Ho,
Use Rsta Bdlne Se..
Jise Hd Se Niklna Ho,
Use Hd Se Niklne Se..
Na Koi Rok Paya He..
Na Koi Rok PayeGa..
Mgr ik Bat Keh Dun!?
Tmhe Khone Se Drta Hun..
ME AB SONE SE DRTA HUN..
(UNKNOWN POET)
JAWAB-E-SHIKWA
tumhain sotay may kab chora
may nay kai bar jhanjhora
palak say girtay ansoo nay
tumhari neend ko tora
nazer pairon say lipti thi
keh ham ko rok lo jana
na hi had say nikalna tha
na hi rasta badalna tha
mujhay to jan-e-man her soo
teri chahat may dhalna tha
meray dil ka machalna tha
keh ham ko rok lo jana
teri banhon may jeena tha
teri banhon may merna tha
teri khatir sanwerna tha
teri khatir ujerna tha
mera tum say yeh kehna tha
keh ham ko rok lo jana
teri ankhon kay ansoo yeh
meray dil per kiwn girtay hain
mera dil noch laitay hain
mujhay baychain kertay hain
mujhay sab bhool janay do
tum mujh ko bhool ker jana
hami ko dosh daitay ho
hamaray dil ko hi tora
nahin ab zakhm bhi gehra
hay ab derd bhi thora
nahin ab RIBZ ko chahat
keh ham ko rok lo jana
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 5:59 am |
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sab say pehlay to SORRY keh waqfiyat na honay kay sabab aap ko zehmat uthani pari meri wajha say or phir poetry pasand kernay ka shukria,
aapnay poocha arooj keh RIBZka kia matlab hay to piyar kay namon ka koi matlab nahin hota jis nay yeh nam baray piyar say rakha tha woh to mujhay chor gaya laikin yeh nam meray sath sath hay,is say pehlay mayRABI takhallus kerti thi.
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:02 am |
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masooma pasand kernay ka shukria.
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:11 am |
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 ansooo tumhari ankh say behtay to hain mager dil per hamaray girtay hain yeh kaisi bat hay ham ko na dosh do keh tumhain chor kiwn dia ham ko to yad aik aik guzri bat hay ham sath thay to ankh may ansoo na thay kabhi ab to naseeb may yehi bas gham ki rat hay ham lot ker na aein ghay tum say kaha to tha tum sochtay thay bas yoonhi pagli ki bat hay ay kaash tum na tortay dil RIBZ ka kabhi laikin tumharay liey to choti si bat hay (RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:46 am |
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cuty wrote:
ansooo tumhari ankh say behtay to hain mager
dil per hamaray girtay hain yeh kaisi bat hay
ham ko na dosh do keh tumhain chor kiwn dia
ham ko to yad aik aik guzri bat hay
ham sath thay to ankh may ansoo na thay kabhi
ab to naseeb may yehi bas gham ki rat hay
ham lot ker na aein ghay tum say kaha to tha
tum sochtay thay bas yoonhi pagli ki bat hay
ay kaash tum na tortay dil RIBZ ka kabhi
laikin tumharay liey to choti si bat hay
(RABIA RIBZ)
Bohat he khoobsorat khayalaat hain Rabia. Highlighted ashaar tou dil ko chu gayay. Keep sharing.
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:21 am |
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mat azma inta meri mohabbat ki inteha ko k to khud toot ker bikher jay
array main to woh moaj -e- darya hoon k jisy tahrny ko kinara na millay
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:26 am |
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mujhy maloom hain k ab bhi tujhy meri yad ati hy
yunhi to nahn dil ka shab e tanhai main bekarar hona
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to nigah e nam se paoch hijr k lamhoon ki wehshat
milny k bahany yaadon main aker tarpaya na ker
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main shab o roz bus tery hi ehsas main khoya sa rehta hoon
ab to khud ko bhi nahn yaad k kab din howa kab shab dhali
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helloz all!
these all are my own creatives, i know i m not a good poet but i 'll try my level best to share my poetry. either it good or not .
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:42 am |
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HIJR
teray bina reh nahin paein gay ab ham
derd-e-judai seh nahin paein gay ab ham
is dil kay angan may ab tum hi tum ho
dil ki her dherkan may ab tum hi tum ho
ham say hooi hay koi khata to batlao
saza do or ham ko mujrim tehrao
orh lia ger ham nay kafan to kia ker lo gay
tum lotay or ham na milay to kia ker logay
tum ko wasta RAB ka yoon na chor kay jao
ribz kay behtay ansoo daikh kay lot aao
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:49 am |
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cuty wrote: orh lia ger ham nay kafan to kia ker lo gay
tum lotay or ham na milay to kia ker logay
tum ko wasta RAB ka yoon na chor kay jao
ribz kay behtay ansoo daikh kay lot aao
Aa'la ashaar hain Rabia.
Bohat khoob. Keep writing!
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Sep 09, 2009 5:39 am |
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aisay hi himmat bandhati rahiey,mera safer jari rahay ga,pasand kernay ka shukria
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Fri Sep 11, 2009 2:45 am |
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thanks SONO
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 5:44 am |
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NAZRAIN CHURA KAY MUJH SAY TUM KAISAY JA SAKO GAY
nazrain chura kay mujh say tum kaisay ja sako ghay
kia door ja kay mujh say tum chain pa sako ghay
aansoo tarap rahay hain aankhon main meri daikho
yadon say meri kia tum peecha chura sako ghay
ab tum chalay bhi jao yoon na palat kay daikho
aankhon main aaey aansoo kab tak chupa sako gha
ay janay walay tujh ko rakhay khuda aman main
nazron say door ja ker dil say na ja sako ghay
pohnchi dua RIBZ ki arshay bareen ko choonay
dil ko meray yaqeen hay tum phir say aa sako ghay
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 5:54 am |
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OR AITABAR TOOT GAYA abhi ansoo to peenay do ,abhi dil ko sanbhalnay do
abhi kuch rat baqi hay,abhi ham ko pighalnay do
bata dain gay bata dain gay tumhain sab kuch bata dain gay
kisi ka bhaid khulnay ka hamain matam to kernay do
wo jis ko ham nay pooja tha bana ker dayota koi
gira hay aaj nazron say hamain ab to tarapnay do
yaqeen hay ab koi dil ki gali may aa na paey ga
bas uski bay wafai ko hamain pal pal bhugatnay do
chalay jao nahin poocho keh aakhir muddua kia hay
abhi dil kirchi kirchi hay,abhi kuch pal saraknay do
RIBZ kiwn ker banaya tha kisi ko na khuda tum nay
dubo do apni kashti ko ussay sahil pay rehnay do
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:10 am |
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cuty wrote: NAZRAIN CHURA KAY MUJH SAY TUM KAISAY JA SAKO GAY
nazrain chura kay mujh say tum kaisay ja sako ghay
kia door ja kay mujh say tum chain pa sako ghay
aansoo tarap rahay hain aankhon main meri daikho
yadon say meri kia tum peecha chura sako ghay
ab tum chalay bhi jao yoon na palat kay daikho
aankhon main aaey aansoo kab tak chupa sako gha
ay janay walay tujh ko rakhay khuda aman main
nazron say door ja ker dil say na ja sako ghay
pohnchi dua RIBZ ki arshay bareen ko choonay
dil ko meray yaqeen hay tum phir say aa sako ghay
(RABIA RIBZ)
Uff!! Aa'la ghazal Rabia.
Wahhhh!!
Especially highlighted shair tou dil ko chu gaya.
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:13 am |
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cuty wrote: OR AITABAR TOOT GAYA abhi ansoo to peenay do ,abhi dil ko sanbhalnay do
abhi kuch rat baqi hay,abhi ham ko pighalnay do
bata dain gay bata dain gay tumhain sab kuch bata dain gay
kisi ka bhaid khulnay ka hamain matam to kernay do
wo jis ko ham nay pooja tha bana ker dayota koi
gira hay aaj nazron say hamain ab to tarapnay do
yaqeen hay ab koi dil ki gali may aa na paey ga
bas uski bay wafai ko hamain pal pal bhugatnay do
chalay jao nahin poocho keh aakhir muddua kia hay
abhi dil kirchi kirchi hay,abhi kuch pal saraknay do
RIBZ kiwn ker banaya tha kisi ko na khuda tum nay
dubo do apni kashti ko ussay sahil pay rehnay do
(RABIA RIBZ)
Aiii haiii! BOHAT khoob!
Tareef kay liyay alfaaz kam par rahay hain.
Har shair he highlighted samjhain.
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 12:20 am |
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thanks mehtab and masooma
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 12:24 am |
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JANA JANA Mertay dam tak bhi main tum say yeh kahoon gi jana
Main tumhari hoon tumhari hi rahoon ghi jana
Waqt kat jaey gha yadon ka sahara lay ker
Tum bhi halat ko zara apni sanbhalo jana
Lo tumhain aaj mohobat ki kasam daiti hoon
Ab na ashkon say kabhi chera bhighona jana
Gham kabhi pas tumharay nahin aanay doon ghi
Tum ko meri hay kasam ab nahin rona jana
Main nay dukh sukh main kia sath nibhanay ka ehed
Main tumhari hoon tumhari hoon tumhari jana
Tum ko kia gham hay agher dolat e duyan na mili
Dil RIBZ nay to tumhain day hi dia hay jana
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 12:28 am |
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CHAR DIN KAY KEHKAHAY LAY JAEEY char din kay kehkahay or dil lagi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap to yeh zindagi lay jaeey
meray ashkon per na jaein yeh to yoonhi behtay hain
meray honton per damakti her khushi lay jaeeay
in khanakti chooriyon kay gungunanay ki sada
meri payal ki sharabi bay khudi lay jaeeay
jo nahin hain aap to main is jahan ko kia karoon
meri aankhon main chamakti her khushi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap jab apni RIBZ ko chor ker
aanay walay her lamhay ki aagahi lay jaeeay
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:33 am |
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cuty wrote: CHAR DIN KAY KEHKAHAY LAY JAEEY char din kay kehkahay or dil lagi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap to yeh zindagi lay jaeey
meray ashkon per na jaein yeh to yoonhi behtay hain
meray honton per damakti her khushi lay jaeeay
in khanakti chooriyon kay gungunanay ki sada
meri payal ki sharabi bay khudi lay jaeeay
jo nahin hain aap to main is jahan ko kia karoon
meri aankhon main chamakti her khushi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap jab apni RIBZ ko chor ker
aanay walay her lamhay ki aagahi lay jaeeay
(RABIA RIBZ)
Wahhh! Aa'la sharing Rabia.
Bohat khoob!
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cuty wrote: CHAR DIN KAY KEHKAHAY LAY JAEEY char din kay kehkahay or dil lagi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap to yeh zindagi lay jaeey
meray ashkon per na jaein yeh to yoonhi behtay hain
meray honton per damakti her khushi lay jaeeay
in khanakti chooriyon kay gungunanay ki sada
meri payal ki sharabi bay khudi lay jaeeay
jo nahin hain aap to main is jahan ko kia karoon
meri aankhon main chamakti her khushi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap jab apni RIBZ ko chor ker
aanay walay her lamhay ki aagahi lay jaeeay
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Bas aap ki Ghamgeen shairy se muta'assir ho kar, isee wazan meiN, aik doosray shaayer ki advice par tawajjuh dilaana chaah raha tha:
Mujrim-e-sartaabi-e-husn-e-jawaaN ho jaaiyey
Gulfishaani ta kuja, shola fishaaN ho jaaiyey
Khaaiyey ga ek nigaah-e-lutf ka kab tak faraib
Koyee afsaana bana kar badgumaaN ho jaaiyey
One again, hazaaroN, laakhoN, daad!
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cuty wrote: CHAR DIN KAY KEHKAHAY LAY JAEEY char din kay kehkahay or dil lagi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap to yeh zindagi lay jaeey
meray ashkon per na jaein yeh to yoonhi behtay hain
meray honton per damakti her khushi lay jaeeay
in khanakti chooriyon kay gungunanay ki sada
meri payal ki sharabi bay khudi lay jaeeay
jo nahin hain aap to main is jahan ko kia karoon
meri aankhon main chamakti her khushi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap jab apni RIBZ ko chor ker
aanay walay her lamhay ki aagahi lay jaeeay
(RABIA RIBZ)
Beautiful Creation
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ansooo tumhari ankh say behtay to hain mager
dil per hamaray girtay hain yeh kaisi bat hay
ham ko na dosh do keh tumhain chor kiwn dia
ham ko to yad aik aik guzri bat hay
ham sath thay to ankh may ansoo na thay kabhi
ab to naseeb may yehi bas gham ki rat hay
ham lot ker na aein ghay tum say kaha to tha
tum sochtay thay bas yoonhi pagli ki bat hay
ay kaash tum na tortay dil RIBZ ka kabhi
laikin tumharay liey to choti si bat hay
Bohat hi khoob......bohat hi umdah khayal hain, really heart felt....
Bohat si daad qabool kijiye...
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cuty wrote: OR AITABAR TOOT GAYA abhi ansoo to peenay do ,abhi dil ko sanbhalnay do
abhi kuch rat baqi hay,abhi ham ko pighalnay do
bata dain gay bata dain gay tumhain sab kuch bata dain gay
kisi ka bhaid khulnay ka hamain matam to kernay do
wo jis ko ham nay pooja tha bana ker dayota koi
gira hay aaj nazron say hamain ab to tarapnay do
yaqeen hay ab koi dil ki gali may aa na paey ga
bas uski bay wafai ko hamain pal pal bhugatnay do
chalay jao nahin poocho keh aakhir muddua kia hay
abhi dil kirchi kirchi hay,abhi kuch pal saraknay do
RIBZ kiwn ker banaya tha kisi ko na khuda tum nay
dubo do apni kashti ko ussay sahil pay rehnay do
(RABIA RIBZ) Bohat Khoob nazm hai bohat hi dil ko choti huwi......bohat shandar..... Daad qabool kijiye beshumar.....
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cuty
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:13 am |
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ham ko koi hamarey hi jaisa nahin mila
ham ko koi hamarey hi jaisa nahin mila
jo ho wafa may taq koi aisa nahin mila
miltay to hain bohot say sare rahay zindigi
berh ker jo hath tham lay koi aisa nahin mila
shano pay jiskay rakh kay ser ham shant ho sakain
na janay kiwn abhi tak koi aisa nahin mila
jo bhi mila wo doosray ki zulf ka aseer
jo sirf ho hamara koi aisa nahin mila
dil gam say choor choor hay ab kia batain RIBZ
chahay jo ham ko toot ker koi aisa nahin mila
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 3:50 am |
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cuty wrote: ham ko koi hamarey hi jaisa nahin mila
ham ko koi hamarey hi jaisa nahin mila
jo ho wafa may taq koi aisa nahin mila
miltay to hain bohot say sare rahay zindigi
berh ker jo hath tham lay koi aisa nahin mila
shano pay jiskay rakh kay ser ham shant ho sakain
na janay kiwn abhi tak koi aisa nahin mila
jo bhi mila wo doosray ki zulf ka aseer
jo sirf ho hamara koi aisa nahin mila
dil gam say choor choor hay ab kia batain RIBZ
chahay jo ham ko toot ker koi aisa nahin mila
(RABIA RIBZ)
jo sirf ho hamara koi aisa nahin mila
bohat umda sharing rabia
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kabhi yon ho ke pathar chott khayen
ye har dam aaiine hi choor kyon?
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Masooma
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Sep 16, 2009 5:08 am |
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cuty wrote: jo bhi mila wo doosray ki zulf ka aseer
jo sirf ho hamara koi aisa nahin mila
dil gam say choor choor hay ab kia batain RIBZ
chahay jo ham ko toot ker koi aisa nahin mila
Wah. Aa'la ashaar Rabia. Bohat khoobsorat ghazal hai.
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