tabs wrote:
bohat khoob tabs ji...keep sharing
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| Author: | sono [ Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:59 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: bohat khoob tabs ji...keep sharing |
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| Author: | tabs [ Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:52 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
sono wrote: tabs wrote: bohat khoob tabs ji...keep sharing bohat shukriya sono ji....dar asl is wiranay main koi aata nahin tha to post karna chor diya tha....ab aap ki badoulat rounaq lout aai hai to jo hukum aap ka. Keep visiting..... |
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| Author: | tabs [ Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Wahhh!! Kya ghazal hai. "Husn par gharoor tha.." Pehlay 2 ashaar kamaal kay hain. 3rd shair main "..hum sa" ki bijayay "..hum say" nahi hona chahiyay tha? Please daikh lejiyay ga. Masooma ji, bohat mamnoon hon k aap is qadr nigah e ameeq se meri kawish e natwan ko izzat bakhsti hain.... arz yun hai k yahan main ne koshish ki hai k jaisay hum majboor thay waisa hi hamra dil bhi majboor tha is garz se hum sa likha hai. k dil kabhi hamse majboor nahin hota ham hi dil k hathoon majboor hotay hain... umeed hai aap ki tashafeeh ho gai ho gi. Nigah nawazi ka be had shukriya..... |
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| Author: | tabs [ Thu Aug 06, 2009 5:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: tum yaar mantay phirtay ho, humse dushman e jaan ik rooth gaya Dard ki fasl zarkhaiz huwi jb, dil main kadway ashk ka ghoont gaya Lajawaab..!! Kya ashaar hain. Dhairoon daad kabool kejiyay. Be had mamnoon hoon....nawazish!!!! |
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| Author: | Masooma [ Thu Aug 06, 2009 6:03 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Wahhh!! Kya ghazal hai. "Husn par gharoor tha.." Pehlay 2 ashaar kamaal kay hain. 3rd shair main "..hum sa" ki bijayay "..hum say" nahi hona chahiyay tha? Please daikh lejiyay ga. Masooma ji, bohat mamnoon hon k aap is qadr nigah e ameeq se meri kawish e natwan ko izzat bakhsti hain.... arz yun hai k yahan main ne koshish ki hai k jaisay hum majboor thay waisa hi hamra dil bhi majboor tha is garz se hum sa likha hai. k dil kabhi hamse majboor nahin hota ham hi dil k hathoon majboor hotay hain... umeed hai aap ki tashafeeh ho gai ho gi. Nigah nawazi ka be had shukriya..... Jee, main samajh gayi. Apka yeh andaaz e bayan bhi bohat pasand aya. 
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| Author: | sono [ Sun Aug 09, 2009 4:58 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: sono wrote: tabs wrote: bohat khoob tabs ji...keep sharing bohat shukriya sono ji....dar asl is wiranay main koi aata nahin tha to post karna chor diya tha....ab aap ki badoulat rounaq lout aai hai to jo hukum aap ka. Keep visiting..... tabs ji aap apni khoobsurat sharing jari rakhye.....yahan ronaq hi ronaq rahe ge. |
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| Author: | mahtabhashmi [ Tue Aug 11, 2009 5:32 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Kia bat hay tabassum bhai,bohat aala,wallah maza agaya,bohat umda ghal kahi hay aap nay.mujhay to afsoos hay keh itne din bad aap ki ye ghazal pardh saka,
Allah Tala aap ke dilo dimagh ko mazeed ilm ki roshni se munawwar farmayay.Aameen. |
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| Author: | Masooma [ Tue Aug 11, 2009 6:51 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Tabs jee, kahan masroof ho gayay aap? Aapki agli sharing ka intezaar hai... 
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| Author: | tabs [ Sat Aug 15, 2009 9:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
mahtabhashmi wrote: tabs wrote: [center]Kia bat hay tabassum bhai,bohat aala,wallah maza agaya,bohat umda ghal kahi hay aap nay.mujhay to afsoos hay keh itne din bad aap ki ye ghazal pardh saka, Allah Tala aap ke dilo dimagh ko mazeed ilm ki roshni se munawwar farmayay.Aameen. Hashmi Sb, bohat shukr guzar hoon aap ki nigah nawazi o hosla afzai ka..... |
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| Author: | tabs [ Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Masooma wrote: Tabs jee, kahan masroof ho gayay aap? Aapki agli sharing ka intezaar hai... Masooma ji, aap to janti hain ye ghazal goi zara mushkil kaam hota hai....mujhe MEER ka wo shair to yaad nahin per haan us ka mafhoom zaroor yaad hai "k jab shair kehna nahin aata tha to roz aik ghazal likhtay thay, jb likhna aya to aik shair kehna bhi mushkil hai." Khair aap ki zarra nawazi k liye behad mamnoon hoon...aap ki khidmat main phr se hazir..... |
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| Author: | tabs [ Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:23 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
 My First poetry in punjabi language......Hope you like it! |
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| Author: | Masooma [ Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:29 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Aiii haiii, kee ghazal aye!  Wadhiyaa kalaam pesh kiittaa je ''Tabs'' jii....paRh ke dil khush ho gayaa ai...mere walloN daad qubool farmaao jii..... |
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| Author: | tabs [ Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Masooma wrote: Aiii haiii, kee ghazal aye! Wadhiyaa kalaam pesh kiittaa je ''Tabs'' jii....paRh ke dil khush ho gayaa ai...mere walloN daad qubool farmaao jii..... Masooma ji, meri tay unji bongiyan san per tusi jes trah izzat afzai kitay, waqai dil khush kardita aaye.... Khush raho ji, jiwoondi raho..... |
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| Author: | Masooma [ Sat Aug 15, 2009 10:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Masooma wrote: Aiii haiii, kee ghazal aye! Wadhiyaa kalaam pesh kiittaa je ''Tabs'' jii....paRh ke dil khush ho gayaa ai...mere walloN daad qubool farmaao jii..... Masooma ji, meri tay unji bongiyan san per tusi jes trah izzat afzai kitay, waqai dil khush kardita aaye.... Khush raho ji, jiwoondi raho..... Tussi mainay sooch'an tay majboor kar'ta kay... jay tussi wakye serious ho gayay lik'an day mamlay'ch tay fare ki ho'U ga?  Main nayi jandi si tussi Punjabi wi bolday o. Bohat wadhiyaa, likhday ravo 
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| Author: | shari [ Sun Aug 16, 2009 10:46 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: My First poetry in punjabi language......Hope you like it! bara acha likheya ve tussa...parh ke bari khushi hoi ve..likde ravo te hamesha khush ravo, ameen 
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| Author: | tabs [ Sun Aug 16, 2009 6:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
shari wrote: tabs wrote: My First poetry in punjabi language......Hope you like it! bara acha likheya ve tussa...parh ke bari khushi hoi ve..likde ravo te hamesha khush ravo, ameen Thanks Shari for dropping in ......... |
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| Author: | sono [ Sun Aug 16, 2009 7:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: My First poetry in punjabi language......Hope you like it! bohat wadiya janab bohat wadiya (aur yahan meri punjabi khatam  )waqi bohat lajawab kalam tabs ji....samajh to leti hon par ziyada bol nahen sakti....keep sharing
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| Author: | Arooj Amjad [ Sun Aug 16, 2009 8:22 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Aray waah tabassum ji...dono hi sharings jo iss page pe ki hain aap ne...bohat hi khoob hain.keep it up!!! bohat saari khushi hui paRh kar
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| Author: | tabs [ Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:41 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
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| Author: | tabs [ Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
sono wrote: tabs wrote: My First poetry in punjabi language......Hope you like it! bohat wadiya janab bohat wadiya (aur yahan meri punjabi khatam )waqi bohat lajawab kalam tabs ji....samajh to leti hon par ziyada bol nahen sakti....keep sharing Thanks Sono Sis.....koi gal nai, hum urdu se hi kaam chala laingay... thanks for dropping in..... |
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| Author: | tabs [ Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:45 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Arooj Amjad wrote: Aray waah tabassum ji...dono hi sharings jo iss page pe ki hain aap ne...bohat hi khoob hain.keep it up!!! bohat saari khushi hui paRh kar Thanks Arooj ji, its nice to see you back in action....aap nahin thin to forum sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooona ho gaya tha.. main bhi abhi wapas aya hon forum pe.... Keep visiting... |
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| Author: | Masooma [ Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:47 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Kisi kaanch ki gudiya ki dilnasheeN muskrahat ... Keh yehi meri hayaat aur yehi mera haasil ... Keh inhee say zinda hai tabassum meray lab par DhairooN daad iss naz'm kay liyay. Tareef kay liyay alfaaz nahi. Aur aapnay paish bhi itnay khoobsorat andaaz main ki hai.. wahhh! |
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| Author: | tabs [ Mon Aug 17, 2009 7:03 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Kisi kaanch ki gudiya ki dilnasheeN muskrahat ... Keh yehi meri hayaat aur yehi mera haasil ... Keh inhee say zinda hai tabassum meray lab par DhairooN daad iss naz'm kay liyay. Tareef kay liyay alfaaz nahi. Aur aapnay paish bhi itnay khoobsorat andaaz main ki hai.. wahhh! Thanks masooma ji, bohat mamnoon hoon aap ki zarra nawazi ka..... |
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| Author: | kiran@morning [ Tue Aug 18, 2009 7:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
bohat khoobsurat shairy............... |
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| Author: | tabs [ Sat Aug 22, 2009 7:22 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
kiran@morning wrote: bohat khoobsurat shairy............... Thanks Kiran ji......keep visiting.... |
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| Author: | DKD [ Mon Aug 24, 2009 3:37 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
g MAI APNI FIANCE KOO DAAD DYY DOO GA COZ YE GHAZAL USNY LEKHEE HY |
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| Author: | miskeen [ Tue Aug 25, 2009 7:58 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
 MENY ABHI ABHI AP KI SHAIRY PARHI HE ....... KIA BAT HE JANAB WAH JI WAH KIA KAHNY...... MEN ISS SOCH MEN PAR GAYA KE AP JESY SHAIR NE MYJHY DAD DI. YE AP KA BARA PUN HE.... AP KI HOSILA AFZAI KA SHOKRIYA JANAB.................. CHULY GAEY GUM-E-HIJR SE ALEEL KAR KE MUJHY, KIYON AB GAER SE POOCHTY HEN KE BEEMAR KESA HE.. JUB BHI ROOTHA TO MERI ANKHON MEN NUMI BHAR AAI, WO KIA JAANY KE MANANY MEN KARAR KESA HE...... AP KI DUAON KA TALUBGAR JALLAL SHAH MISKEEN. |
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| Author: | tabs [ Wed Aug 26, 2009 5:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
miskeen wrote: :rose: MENY ABHI ABHI AP KI SHAIRY PARHI HE ....... KIA BAT HE JANAB WAH JI WAH KIA KAHNY...... MEN ISS SOCH MEN PAR GAYA KE AP JESY SHAIR NE MYJHY DAD DI. YE AP KA BARA PUN HE.... AP KI HOSILA AFZAI KA SHOKRIYA JANAB.................. CHULY GAEY GUM-E-HIJR SE ALEEL KAR KE MUJHY, KIYON AB GAER SE POOCHTY HEN KE BEEMAR KESA HE.. JUB BHI ROOTHA TO MERI ANKHON MEN NUMI BHAR AAI, WO KIA JAANY KE MANANY MEN KARAR KESA HE...... AP KI DUAON KA TALUBGAR JALLAL SHAH MISKEEN. Bohat nawaish hai Miskeen ji k aapni zarray ko aftab se tashbeeh di, warna ye khaksar kahan kisi qabil aap doston ki inayat hai... Nigah nawazi ka be had mamnoon hoon..........Bohat khush rahiye.... |
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| Author: | tabs [ Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:47 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
 Doston ki Araa o tanqeed ka muntazir Tabassum!! |
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| Author: | miskeen [ Wed Aug 26, 2009 8:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
 ab sharumsar na karen tabasum gi.. gazal boht achi he. galtiyan hur bary shair se hoi hen .... boht aala gazal he.... keep it up sir likhty rahye or humen sikhaty rahye........... ap ki dad ka mushkoor miskeen |
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| Author: | Masooma [ Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:07 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Woh tadap kay milnay ko ayaiN Kaash aik baar yuN hota Wah... umda shair! |
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| Author: | tabs [ Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:41 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
miskeen wrote: :b)b: ab sharumsar na karen tabasum gi.. gazal boht achi he. galtiyan hur bary shair se hoi hen .... boht aala gazal he.... keep it up sir likhty rahye or humen sikhaty rahye........... ap ki dad ka mushkoor miskeen Bohat shukriya..... |
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| Author: | tabs [ Thu Aug 27, 2009 6:42 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Woh tadap kay milnay ko ayaiN Kaash aik baar yuN hota Wah... umda shair! Nwazish aap ki.............. |
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| Author: | kheyal [ Thu Aug 27, 2009 8:13 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
[color=#FF00FF]TABS...JI....AAKHRI GHAZAL HI DEKH PAYA HOOON... AAP K PAAS KHEYALAT HAIN.... LEKIN SHAYERI K LIYE.....EK PAIMANA BHI ZAROORI HAI..JISE WAZUN KEHTE HAIN....SHAYERI KI ZUBAN MEN BHI.. CHOTHAY SHER KA DOOSRA MISRA...APNE TAQAZE POORE KERTA HAI.. KETNA ACHA HOTA.....KISI USTAD SE MUSH'WARA KERTE...JO AAP K QAREEB HON..... MAI BHI KEHNE KI KOSHISH KERTA HOON.... KOSHISH JARI RUKHEN....MOTALE K SATH.... KHUSH RAHEN...[/color] |
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| Author: | tabs [ Fri Aug 28, 2009 6:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
kheyal wrote: [color=#FF00FF]TABS...JI....AAKHRI GHAZAL HI DEKH PAYA HOOON... AAP K PAAS KHEYALAT HAIN.... LEKIN SHAYERI K LIYE.....EK PAIMANA BHI ZAROORI HAI..JISE WAZUN KEHTE HAIN....SHAYERI KI ZUBAN MEN BHI.. CHOTHAY SHER KA DOOSRA MISRA...APNE TAQAZE POORE KERTA HAI.. KETNA ACHA HOTA.....KISI USTAD SE MUSH'WARA KERTE...JO AAP K QAREEB HON..... MAI BHI KEHNE KI KOSHISH KERTA HOON.... KOSHISH JARI RUKHEN....MOTALE K SATH.... KHUSH RAHEN...[/color] Hazrat bohat hi mamnoon hoon aap ka k aap ne is qadr nigah e ameeq se meri kawish e khasta ko nawaza....mjhe aap se qataan ikhtilaf nahin, laikin aap ka aitiraz bhi kuch wazeh nahin.... Agr nagwar e khatir na guzray to rahnumai farmain.... Hosla afzai k liye shukriya.... |
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| Author: | miskeen [ Fri Aug 28, 2009 7:44 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
salaqm tabasum sahib .... umeed he ke ap khush hongy....... men ap ko hazrat shaikh saadi a.r ka mushhoor sher pesh karta hon molahiza keejiey SADIYA SHEERAZIYA SUBAK MA DY KUM ZAT RA, GAR KUMZAT AALIM SHUDY GARDUN ZANUD OSTAAD RA..... mean zaroor aati hogi..... duaon ka talubgar miskeen. |
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| Author: | miskeen [ Sat Aug 29, 2009 11:27 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Tabasum ji salam pesh karta hon. kabhi hamari islaah ke lie hamary thread ka chakur bhi lagaya karen to nawazish hogi ak haleem ustad ki tarha .. duaon ka talabgar miskeen.
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| Author: | tabs [ Sat Aug 29, 2009 6:32 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
miskeen wrote: salaqm tabasum sahib .... umeed he ke ap khush hongy....... men ap ko hazrat shaikh saadi a.r ka mushhoor sher pesh karta hon molahiza keejiey SADIYA SHEERAZIYA SUBAK MA DY KUM ZAT RA, GAR KUMZAT AALIM SHUDY GARDUN ZANUD OSTAAD RA..... mean zaroor aati hogi..... duaon ka talubgar miskeen. Hazrat, mujh se kam ilm ki satr poshi hoti, kya hi acha hota k aap is k meaning bhi ataa kar detay....... miskeen wrote: Tabasum ji salam pesh karta hon. kabhi hamari islaah ke lie hamary thread ka chakur bhi lagaya karen to nawazish hogi ak haleem ustad ki tarha .. duaon ka talabgar miskeen. Wa Alaikum Assalam Hazrat, aap jaisay alaa zarf o sukhn shanas k kalam per hum lub kushai ki jisarat karain aaisay to gustakh nahin.....ye aap ki sada mizaji hai k hum jaison ko izzat bakhshtay hain. Aap ka khobsorat kalam zeenat e nigah huwa aur bohat khushi huwi k forum per aik khush aind izafa huwa, warna hum to tars gaye thay k koi zi ilm o sukhn yahan ka rukh karay.... Bohat nawazish.... Dua go o Dua jo Tabassum |
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| Author: | miskeen [ Sat Aug 29, 2009 7:22 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
ALLAH O AKBAR . tabasum sahib ye kia keh diya ap ne ? men wakai ap ki shairy gor se parhta hon. bus ap ke thrad men kuch ap per jumla bazi dekhi to raha nahi gaya or usi wakt ap ko shaikh saadi a.r ka sher likh dia.. ke ap sumjh jaen.. mean ye he saadi sheerazi kabhi kumzat ko ilm na dena gar wo aalim hogaya to pahly ustad ki gardan mary ga.. bari bari nawazish ap ki ke iss nacheez ko iss kabil sumjha. ap ka abhi tak intazar tha.. ak gazal ka sher ap ke lie arz he honton pe un ke jub soona achanuk jo apna naam phir taweezon per yakeen hoa ke be asar na thy. aadab wa duaon ka talubgar miskeen
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| Author: | tabs [ Sat Aug 29, 2009 9:20 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
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