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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Sat Sep 19, 2009 6:56 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
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| Author: | miskeen [ Sat Sep 19, 2009 7:00 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
qibla boht achi nazam he kia kehny. kamal ka rubt he. 
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| Author: | sonia20 [ Sun Sep 20, 2009 12:51 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
gahazal kay chand ashaar: sitamgar ki pazeeraee karay ga yeh bus mera sa sodaee karay ga khabar usko nahi meray maraz ki maseeha kia maseehaee karay ga chura leta nazrain, daikh kar jo woh kia paas-e-shanasaee karay ga na khona, sonia hosh uski khatir keh daana hai woh danaee karay ga |
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| Author: | Masooma [ Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Toot kar phir na simat sakooN ga Ek din tum say keh dooN ga. As always, tareef kay liyay alfaaz kam par rahay hain. Bohat he khoobsorat naz'm hai! |
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| Author: | Masooma [ Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
sonia20 wrote: gahazal kay chand ashaar: sitamgar ki pazeeraee karay ga yeh bus mera sa sodaee karay ga khabar usko nahi meray maraz ki maseeha kia maseehaee karay ga chura leta nazrain, daikh kar jo woh kia paas-e-shanasaee karay ga na khona, sonia hosh uski khatir keh daana hai woh danaee karay ga Sonia jee welcome to Aapki Shairy. However, rules kay mutabiq aap kisi aur shayar ki thread main sharing nahi kar sakteen. Aap iss section main apni poetry he share kar sakti hain aur apna khudh ka topic bana kar. Please aap apni agli sharings new topic main kejiyay. Shukriya. 
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Mon Sep 21, 2009 6:55 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
miskeen wrote: qibla boht achi nazam he kia kehny. kamal ka rubt he. Bohat nawazish...... Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Toot kar phir na simat sakooN ga Ek din tum say keh dooN ga. As always, tareef kay liyay alfaaz kam par rahay hain. Bohat he khoobsorat naz'm hai! Masooma ji kyun sharmindah karti hain, hum kahan kisi qabil hain ye to aap ka husn e nazr aur mohabbat hai.... bohat nawazish, behad mamnoon hoon... |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Mon Sep 21, 2009 7:03 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....   
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| Author: | Masooma [ Mon Sep 21, 2009 7:30 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Kabhi yahan bhi choodhiyooN ki khanak Mehendi ki mehek hoti thi... Yeh tanhai chali kyuN nahi jaati Zindagi ki woh roothi bahaar Zindagi maiN phir say kyuN nahi aati ... Wahhhhh! Speechless.  Bohat aa'la creation hai!!! ...alfaaz aur jazbaat ka aisa mayle bohat dinoon baad parhnay ko mila hai. Yeh parh kar mujhay maazi ki yaad a gayi... |
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| Author: | miskeen [ Mon Sep 21, 2009 9:33 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: [center]Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....[/center]    wah wah wah! kia kehny qibla ap ka. iss sinf ko aaj kal azad shairy kaha jata he. magar ap ne to iss men bhi wazan bhar dia. boht khoob khayal he. 
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| Author: | sameermoon [ Tue Sep 22, 2009 1:18 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: [center]Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....[/center] buhat khoob buhat ala lajawab.... khush raho dua go |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Wed Sep 23, 2009 6:48 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Kabhi yahan bhi choodhiyooN ki khanak Mehendi ki mehek hoti thi... Yeh tanhai chali kyuN nahi jaati Zindagi ki woh roothi bahaar Zindagi maiN phir say kyuN nahi aati ... Wahhhhh! Speechless. Bohat aa'la creation hai!!! ...alfaaz aur jazbaat ka aisa mayle bohat dinoon baad parhnay ko mila hai. Yeh parh kar mujhay maazi ki yaad a gayi... Bohat nawazish hai aap ki...... sameermoon wrote: tabs wrote: [center]Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....[/center] buhat khoob buhat ala lajawab.... khush raho dua go Bohat shukriya Sameer Sb, Pazeerai k liye behad mamnoon hon. miskeen wrote: tabs wrote: [center]Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....[/center] wah wah wah! kia kehny qibla ap ka. iss sinf ko aaj kal azad shairy kaha jata he. magar ap ne to iss men bhi wazan bhar dia. boht khoob khayal he. ShaH sb, Bohat mamnoon hoon ka aap ne meri is kawish e khasta k naam ataa kiya....bohat nawazish... |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Sep 24, 2009 12:34 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: hmm wah kia bat hay
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| Author: | miskeen [ Fri Sep 25, 2009 12:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Qibla kahan hen ap? ap ki new kawish ka dil o jaan se intazar he .. ap ka nalaik shagird miskeen. |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Sep 25, 2009 2:55 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya.... derd-e-dil samoya hay hasraton ko boya hay dukh kay saray lamhon ko ik jagha proya hay (fil badeeh) |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Sun Sep 27, 2009 12:43 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
cuty wrote: tabs wrote: Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya.... derd-e-dil samoya hay hasraton ko boya hay dukh kay saray lamhon ko ik jagha proya hay (fil badeeh) Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ka....bohat khoob qataa ataa kiya hai..... Bohat nawazish, |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Sun Sep 27, 2009 1:59 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
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| Author: | miskeen [ Sun Sep 27, 2009 2:06 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
hahahahah kia kehny qibla shempion ghatuk gaey. wah wah. gazal dilfareb thi ye gazal qibla awaael-e-ishq ki nigaarshat to nahi? mazirut ke saath uataad-e-mohtarum.
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Tue Sep 29, 2009 4:10 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
miskeen wrote: hahahahah kia kehny qibla shempion ghatuk gaey. wah wah. gazal dilfareb thi ye gazal qibla awaael-e-ishq ki nigaarshat to nahi? mazirut ke saath uataad-e-mohtarum. Shah Sb, Bohat nawazish......Dar Asl ye hamara mizaj nahin per aik dost ki farmaish per kuch koshsih ki thi to socha k doston se bhi share ki jaye... Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ka.... |
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| Author: | mahtabhashmi [ Tue Sep 29, 2009 5:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Wahhhhhhhhhhh Wah kia baat hay Tabssum bhai,aap ki ye salahiyat to ab aashkar hoi hay,bohat khoob.
Ye ghazal pardh kar abhi ak sher zehen mein aay hay,paish e khidmat hay Jab us shaokh kay rukh par nazar gai aesay uchhlay,chhat say ultay latak gayay |
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| Author: | Baarish [ Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Abhi tumhari yaad k mousam gaae na thay is dil ny tumko bhulaya abhi na tha hum chah k khud se juda tujh ko na kar sakay go tu nay hum ko dil main basaya kabhi na tha dil ki udasiyon ka ye aalam aur amad e bahar itna khizaan ne bhi hum ko rulaya kabhi na tha ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Nice collection ..beautiful written tabs g...keep writing. |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:12 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Baarish wrote: tabs wrote: Abhi tumhari yaad k mousam gaae na thay is dil ny tumko bhulaya abhi na tha hum chah k khud se juda tujh ko na kar sakay go tu nay hum ko dil main basaya kabhi na tha dil ki udasiyon ka ye aalam aur amad e bahar itna khizaan ne bhi hum ko rulaya kabhi na tha ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Nice collection ..beautiful written tabs g...keep writing. Aik purani takhleeq ko khoj nikalny aur phir ussay sarahny ka Behad Shukria..
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Tue Sep 29, 2009 8:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
mahtabhashmi wrote: Wahhhhhhhhhhh Wah kia baat hay Tabssum bhai,aap ki ye salahiyat to ab aashkar hoi hay,bohat khoob. Ye ghazal pardh kar abhi ak sher zehen mein aay hay,paish e khidmat hay Jab us shaokh kay rukh par nazar gai aesay uchhlay,chhat say ultay latak gayay Bohat nawazish Hashmi sb....ehsan mand hoon aap ki mohabbaton ka..... |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 01, 2009 4:51 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote:  nehayat haseen poetry hay yeh aapki
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Fri Oct 02, 2009 5:04 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
cuty wrote: tabs wrote: [img]] nehayat haseen poetry hay yeh aapki Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ki nigah nawazi o hosla afzai ka..... Bohat nawazish..... |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Tue Oct 06, 2009 5:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
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| Author: | cuty [ Wed Oct 07, 2009 7:10 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
[qu nice poetry ote="tabs"] |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:47 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
 bohot zaberdast 
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| Author: | mahtabhashmi [ Fri Oct 09, 2009 10:09 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
cuty wrote: bohot zaberdast Waaaaaaaaaah kia baat hay janab,aap ki zambeel say to bohat hi aala cheezen bahir aarahi hen,jawab nahi is ghazal ka,dheron daad qubool farmayyay.
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| Author: | miskeen [ Fri Oct 09, 2009 3:02 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: boht khoobsorat qibla choty baher men boht bari baat kahi he aap ne kia kehny. wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
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| Author: | sahil-E-tamana [ Fri Oct 09, 2009 3:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya.... Bohat khub Tabs jee keep it up be happay always 
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Fri Oct 09, 2009 5:40 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
cuty wrote: bohot zaberdast Thanks Rabia ji, aap ne hamray thread ko is qadr tawajjoh se padha, aap ki is mohabbat k liye be had mamnoon hon... Nawazish.... |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:22 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
mahtabhashmi wrote: cuty wrote: bohot zaberdast Waaaaaaaaaah kia baat hay janab,aap ki zambeel say to bohat hi aala cheezen bahir aarahi hen,jawab nahi is ghazal ka,dheron daad qubool farmayyay. Ibtida e Ishq hai rota hai kya !!! Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ka ...... bohat nawazish... |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
miskeen wrote: tabs wrote: boht khoobsorat qibla choty baher men boht bari baat kahi he aap ne kia kehny. wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh Bohat Nawazish shah sb, hum to kab se aap ki rah tak rahay thay....jaldi jaldi aya kijiye ta k hum aap ki niyaz main apni saye e natawan paish kar k hosla afzai ka sharf hasil kar sakain.... Bohat shukriya.... |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Sat Oct 10, 2009 6:29 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
sahil-E-tamana wrote: tabs wrote: Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya.... ] Bohat khub Tabs jee keep it up be happay always Bohat shukriya....keep visiting.... |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:22 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Doston! ye Nazm uski nazr kr raha hon jis ne mujhe muskurana sikhaya......Dekhlo is main kahin bhi kisi aur ka rang nahin ye sirf aur sirf tumharay liye hai.................aur Tumharay hi naam hai......... 
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| Author: | miskeen [ Sun Oct 11, 2009 12:39 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
KAMAL HUD-E-KAMAL. boht aala nazm likhi he ap ne. boht aala. aakhir men jo ap ne likha (mujhy maaf ker do) sari nazm ka wajood sama dia ap ne inn choty se lufzon men. kia kehny wahhh. boht lutf aaya perhny men... jis ke bhi naam likhi he ye nazm wallah sungdil hoga jo matum na karey ga. |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Sun Oct 11, 2009 2:23 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
miskeen wrote: KAMAL HUD-E-KAMAL. boht aala nazm likhi he ap ne. boht aala. aakhir men jo ap ne likha (mujhy maaf ker do) sari nazm ka wajood sama dia ap ne inn choty se lufzon men. kia kehny wahhh. boht lutf aaya perhny men... jis ke bhi naam likhi he ye nazm wallah sungdil hoga jo matum na karey ga. Shah Sb, pasand karnay ka bohat shukriya......per khudara SangDil to na khain k hamain wo bohat aziz hai............sub ki apni apni majboriyan hoti hain............ Bohat nawazish.... |
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| Author: | miskeen [ Sun Oct 11, 2009 6:08 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
hi hi Qibla hi hi. kia kehny iss latafut-e-shok-e-junooN ka. ap ne baja furmaya hum iss jasarut ki maafi mangty hen. ak sher ap ke nazar he. men rooth ker ye sochita hon ke aaengy wo manany kareeb jaany ki koshish men ye kerta hon bahaany. men batata hon ke kitna sungdil he mera sanum, kabhi haal-e-dil bhi na poocha aa k bister k surhany. (miskeen) |
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| Author: | Tifl e Maktab [ Mon Oct 12, 2009 2:25 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak |
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| Author: | cuty [ Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:17 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: Meri Shairy |
tabs wrote: Doston! ye Nazm uski nazr kr raha hon jis ne mujhe muskurana sikhaya......Dekhlo is main kahin bhi kisi aur ka rang nahin ye sirf aur sirf tumharay liye hai.................aur Tumharay hi naam hai......... hmm bohot zaberdast janab waisay jis kay liey bhi likhi hay bohot khush naseeb hay wo |
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