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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy  Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 5:35 am |
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tabs wrote: Doston! ye Nazm uski nazr kr raha hon jis ne mujhe muskurana sikhaya......Dekhlo is main kahin bhi kisi aur ka rang nahin ye sirf aur sirf tumharay liye hai.................aur Tumharay hi naam hai......... tabs wrote: Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak
dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak
aur dil ko chuu jane wala shair...
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Oct 12, 2009 10:48 am |
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tabs wrote: Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak
dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak
wah wah wah kia kehny boht aala. khas ker ke oper wala sher. ak sher ap ki nazar.
ab men sumjha hon birahmun ki bootparusti ko,
ke meri terha wo bhi andha he ishq-e-beenai se.
tum khuda ka mujh pe ehsaN ho ba soorut-e-dilber,
ya ibn-e-Muryum ka mojiza ho koi maseehai se.
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 5:59 pm |
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miskeen wrote: tabs wrote: Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak
dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak
wah wah wah kia kehny boht aala. khas ker ke oper wala sher. ak sher ap ki nazar.
ab men sumjha hon birahmun ki bootparusti ko,
ke meri terha wo bhi andha he ishq-e-beenai se.
tum khuda ka mujh pe ehsaN ho ba soorut-e-dilber,
ya ibn-e-Muryum ka mojiza ho koi maseehai se.
(miskeen)Bohat mamnoon hoon Shah Sb, aapka k itni mohabbat se nawaztay hain..... bohat nawazish
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 6:57 pm |
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Faqeer Ban k teray darr ki gadai le li
tujhay de k khushi, gham ki siyahi le li
Tujhay tark e ta'aluq ka afsoos na ho
so hum ne apnay hi sir sari burai le li
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 7:00 pm |
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sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum
hum terah shab k aadi hain
deepak na jalao aisay tum
dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum
aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum
hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 8:10 am |
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tabs wrote: sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum
hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum
dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum
aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum
hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum Bohat khoobsurat Tabassum je....  aise hi likhte rahiye
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 3:12 pm |
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*Tjs* wrote: tabs wrote: sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum
hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum
dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum
aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum
hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum Bohat khoobsurat Tabassum je.... aise hi likhte rahiye Ya Allah, Chiragh jalain, k baam o dar sajain....hum to hairan hain k aaj ye suraj kidhar se nikla hai..... bohat khushi huwi k aap ne hamaray thread ko ronaq bakhshi..... bohat hi mamnoon hain aap k Nawazish..... Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 4:10 pm |
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hasil hoa hay kab usay lamha qarar ka
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:12 pm |
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cuty wrote: tabs wrote: Doston! ye Nazm uski nazr kr raha hon jis ne mujhe muskurana sikhaya......Dekhlo is main kahin bhi kisi aur ka rang nahin ye sirf aur sirf tumharay liye hai.................aur Tumharay hi naam hai.........
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bohot zaberdast janab
waisay jis kay liey bhi likhi hay
bohot khush naseeb hay wo
Bohat nawazish hai aap ki.......aur jis k liye likhi hai wo khush naseeb na hongay to hum kyun likhtay.....hamarai tamam naik tamannain un k saath hain wo jahan rahain khush rahain.... Aik bar phr aap ka behad mamnoon hoon, pazerai k liye.... Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:15 pm |
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sono wrote: tabs wrote: Doston! ye Nazm uski nazr kr raha hon jis ne mujhe muskurana sikhaya......Dekhlo is main kahin bhi kisi aur ka rang nahin ye sirf aur sirf tumharay liye hai.................aur Tumharay hi naam hai.........
[img]/img] tabs wrote: Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak
dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak
aur dil ko chuu jane wala shair...Bohat maazrat sono ji, dar asal aadat nahin hai kisi naye mehman ki isliye aap ki post nazr andaz ho gai....khair bohat mutashakkir hoon hosla afzai k liye..... aati raha karain itna buray bhi shair nahin hain hum.... Talib e dua Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 5:16 pm |
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mahtabhashmi wrote: Bohat ehsan mand hain aap k Hashmi sb bal k yun kahiye k maqrooz hain aap ki mohabbat k.. Bohat shukriya.... Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 14, 2009 6:29 pm |
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[[/color]bs"] Faqeer Ban k teray darr ki gadai le li
tujhay de k khushi, gham ki siyahi le li
Tujhay tark e ta'aluq ka afsoos na ho
so hum ne apnay hi sir sari burai le li [/quote]
kia kehny qibla wahhhhhhhhhhhhh boht aala sher hen dono..... dilkhush hogaya.
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 15, 2009 9:35 pm |
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tabs wrote: sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum
hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum
dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum
aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum
hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 11:57 am |
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Aapki ye ghazal
sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum
hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum
dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum
aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum
hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum
Bahut achchhi lagi,
Ham bhool gaye apna sabkuchh
Ghazalein na sunao aise tum
Daad qubool karein
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 1:48 pm |
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sajid hashmi wrote: Tabs
Aapki ye ghazal
sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum
hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum
dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum
aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum
hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum
Bahut achchhi lagi,
Ham bhool gaye apna sabkuchh
Ghazalein na sunao aise tum
Daad qubool karein sajjid bhai khoob gazal hai ...tabs likhtay jao aisy tum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:04 pm |
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tabs wrote: tabs buhat hi hassas jazbat , nazuk arman, dil shikan dard , gehri tanhai ka rung aapki kavish me nazr aya buhat khub dad qabool kerain khush rahain subah..
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:06 pm |
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Sayyid Randeri wrote: tabs wrote: Masha-allah! zabardast!
Bohot umda Asad bhaai.. josh-e-imani se sarabor hokar likha hai aapne.. bohot khoob.jazak Allah ishq e e;ahi aur hub e rasool say mehakti kavish ...pasund aee khush rahain subah..
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:55 pm |
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tabs wrote: tabassum ji .. jitni sraaha jaaye kam hai.. na jaane kitne logon aisi Eid ko mehsoos kar chuuke hian jis ki akaasi aap ne buhut khoobsorat andaaz se ki hia,, MashaAllah 
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:29 pm |
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miskeen wrote: [[/color]bs"] Faqeer Ban k teray darr ki gadai le li
tujhay de k khushi, gham ki siyahi le li
Tujhay tark e ta'aluq ka afsoos na ho
so hum ne apnay hi sir sari burai le li
kia kehny qibla wahhhhhhhhhhhhh boht aala sher hen dono..... dilkhush hogaya.
[/quote] Maqrooz hain hazrat aap k..... Bohat nawazish...
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:30 pm |
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cuty wrote: Bohat nawazish hai Rabia ji aap ki.......
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:33 pm |
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Sayyid Randeri wrote: tabs wrote: Masha-allah! zabardast!
Bohot umda Asad bhaai.. josh-e-imani se sarabor hokar likha hai aapne.. bohot khoob.Sayyid bhai, mera manna hai k Allah pak Rehman o Raheem, apnay bandoon se is qadr mohabbat karta hai k jab un k gunah badh jatay hain to un say koi na koi aisa kaam karwa deta hai k uski rehmat shirminda ho jaye....aisay hi kuch mujh jaisay gunahgar se bhi karwadiya hai us Perwardigar ne warna meri itni auqat nahin.... Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ka.... Ehqar Tabassum
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Sayyid Randeri wrote: tabs wrote: [img]http://[/img] Waaaaaah!... Jis qadar tareef ki jaye kam hai... is main chand ash'ar to bohot hi aala or me'ayari kalaam ka namuna hai, aap ki ye ghazal bohot hi pasand aai, bohot achhe janaab..Bohat nawazish ............. Sayyid Randeri wrote: tabs wrote: sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum
Sayyid bhai ye aap ki alaa zarfi hai k zarra e raig ko aftab samjhtay hain, warna main kisi qabil nahin..... Bohat nawzish k aap ne meray is thread ko ronaq bakhshi... behad mamnoon Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 8:46 pm |
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tabs wrote: Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak
dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:08 am |
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sajid hashmi wrote: Tabs
Aapki ye ghazal
sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum
hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum
dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum
aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum
hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum
Bahut achchhi lagi,
Ham bhool gaye apna sabkuchh
Ghazalein na sunao aise tum
Daad qubool karein Sajjid bhai, Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ki mohabbat ka.... Bohat nawazish....aatay raha kijiye hamra hosla bandha rehay ga...
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Oct 20, 2009 5:10 am |
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sameermoon wrote: sajid hashmi wrote: Tabs
Aapki ye ghazal
sapnay na dikhao aisay tum
nazrain na milao aisay tum
hum terah shab k aadi
deepak na jalao aisay tum
dil mein to khizaa’n ka mausam hai
malhar na gao aisay tum
aankhen na mol chuka payen
sapnay na sajao aisay tum
hum tum pe jeewan waar chukay
ab chor na jao aisay tum
Bahut achchhi lagi,
Ham bhool gaye apna sabkuchh
Ghazalein na sunao aise tum
Daad qubool karein sajjid bhai khoob gazal hai ...tabs likhtay jao aisy tum Sameer bhai, Hosla afzai ka behad mamnoon hoon.....
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subahh wrote: tabs wrote: Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....
]tabs buhat hi hassas jazbat , nazuk arman, dil shikan dard , gehri tanhai ka rung aapki kavish me nazr aya buhat khub dad qabool kerain khush rahain subah.. Hazrat is qadr nigah e ameeq se meri aah e rayegaan per tawajjah k liye behad mamnoon. Bohat nawazish hai aap ki....
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subahh wrote: Sayyid Randeri wrote: tabs wrote: Masha-allah! zabardast!
Bohot umda Asad bhaai.. josh-e-imani se sarabor hokar likha hai aapne.. bohot khoob.jazak Allah ishq e e;ahi aur hub e rasool say mehakti kavish ...pasund aee khush rahain subah.. Bohat Nawazish................................
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*MYSTERIOUS* wrote: tabs wrote: Main nahin janta k ye shairi ki konsi sinf se mutaaliq hai, per itna zaroor janta hoon k ye likhnay k baad main ne apnay dil ko bohat Khafeef mehsoos kiya....
tabassum ji .. jitni sraaha jaaye kam hai.. na jaane kitne logon aisi Eid ko mehsoos kar chuuke hian jis ki akaasi aap ne buhut khoobsorat andaaz se ki hia,, MashaAllah Asif bhai, Wo aaye hamaray thread main khuda ki qudrat hai.......................... Bohat nawazish k aap ne meray in alfaz main chupay dard ko mehsoos kiya aur meri is saee e naqish ko qabil e sataish samjha....aatay raha kijiye k aap ki amad se hum jaisay Tiflaan e sukhn ki hosla afzai hoti hai.... Intehai Mutashakkir, Tabassum
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sono wrote: tabs wrote: Honton k Tabassum se kajal ki siyahi tak
Ik sehr sa bandha hai aseeri se rehai tak
dard e judai main yun khona-ba-fishani ki
k deed ki hasrat main kho baithay beenai tak Sono ji, aap ka husn e nigah hai ka aap zarrah e khaak ko ba misl e aftab sarahti hain....main be had maqrooz hon aap ki is inayat ka.... bohat bohat shukriya... Tabassum
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cuty wrote: Rabia ji, Bohat shukriya, waisay mujhe pora yaqeen hai k Sayyid bhai k kehnay per aap ko ghazal ki khobsorti ka ehsas nahin huwa hoga................ Bohat nawazish.............
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Elahi kisi ko gham nahin dena
dena to agay dam nahin dena
aankhain teri ata'at main bheegain
ya kisi ko chashm e num nahin dena
Usman o Hatim sakhi teray banday
jo dena, to kisi ko kam nahin dena
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tabs wrote: tabassum buhat khubsoorat undaz e baayan ...ishq e elahi aur ish q e Rasool se pur Jazak Allah ....WAH ! khush rahain subah..
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