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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy  Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:13 am |
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tabs wrote: Elahi kisi ko gham nahin dena
dena to agay dam nahin dena
aankhain teri ata'at main bheegain
ya kisi ko chashm e num nahin dena
Usman o Hatim sakhi teray banday
jo dena, to kisi ko kam nahin dena MashAllah. Bohat khoob janab. Daikh kar khushi huwi kay aap aur bhi ziyada regular ho gayay meri ghair haazri main. 
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 21, 2009 1:49 pm |
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tabs wrote: .. tabs jis ka b khayal hai buhat hi acha khayal aur aur andaz sado aur dilkash hai khush rahiye dua go
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Nazron k Wo Isharay yehi Sochtay rehay
Sir main humaray aj wo phairein gay Ungliyan
Zulfon ko hum Sanwary yehi sochtay rahay
Ik aur nya Zakhm sameer es ko kahan dein
Taqdeer K Sitaary yehi sochtay rahay
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:10 am |
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miskeen wrote: Shah sb, bohat nawazish, bas us Perwardigar e Alam ka karam hai k hamaray gunahoon se qataa nazr wo ham pe sada mehrbaan hi raha........................... Inayat hai aapki..........
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:40 am |
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subahh wrote: tabs wrote: tabassum buhat khubsoorat undaz e baayan ...ishq e elahi aur ish q e Rasool se pur Jazak Allah ....WAH ! khush rahain subah.. Bohat nawazish janab.............
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:42 am |
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subahh wrote: buhat hi juda si ...sadgi o masoomiat k sath likhi hoi kavish ...sharer o chunchal bhi
khush rahain
subah.. Bohat shukriya Hazrat ager apni pasand ka hawala bhi deta to aur bhi khushi hoti....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:44 am |
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Masooma wrote: tabs wrote: Elahi kisi ko gham nahin dena
dena to agay dam nahin dena
aankhain teri ata'at main bheegain
ya kisi ko chashm e num nahin dena
Usman o Hatim sakhi teray banday
jo dena, to kisi ko kam nahin dena MashAllah. Bohat khoob janab. Daikh kar khushi huwi kay aap aur bhi ziyada regular ho gayay meri ghair haazri main. Thanks dear....aap ki kami to nahin pori kar sakta laikin aap ki zimaydarion main ma'awnat zaror kar sakta hon..... Bohat khush rahiye..... Duago Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:51 am |
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sameermoon wrote: tabs wrote: .. tabs jis ka b khayal hai buhat hi acha khayal aur aur andaz sado aur dilkash hai khush rahiye dua go Bohat Nawazish hai.....kuch be rabt khiyalat aur na pukhta haroof-e-aaina tamsaal-e-fikar-o-idraak ko ap jesy pukhta kaar qaare'een ki khidmat mein paish karny ki jasaarat ki hai taaky ap k be laag tabsron aur musbat tanqeed se apny khiylaat aur izhaar ko behtar karny ki saee kar sakoon Mutashakkir Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 4:53 am |
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sono wrote: tabs wrote: bohat khoobsurat sharing tabs ji....kamal ki gazal...Bohat nawazish hai............
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 5:24 am |
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BOHT KHOOB TABS. SHUKRIA
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خدا مہرباں ہوگا عرش بریں پر
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 7:07 am |
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khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 8:23 am |
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tabs wrote: us ne churaya hath to ik bar dekha tha..
dastaras main kiski hai aur sawal kiska haiBohat hi Umdah Tabassum je.... la-jawab  likhte rahiye 
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 11:16 am |
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Imran Shanawar wrote: BOHT KHOOB TABS. SHUKRIA Hazrat Tashakkur aap ki nigah nawazi ka hai, hum kahan is qabil k hamray shukrguzar bhi hon....... Bohat nawazish......
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 22, 2009 2:03 pm |
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*Tjs* wrote: tabs wrote: us ne churaya hath to ik bar dekha tha..
dastaras main kiski hai aur sawal kiska haiBohat hi Umdah Tabassum je.... la-jawab likhte rahiye Bohat shukriya Jiya ji........keep visiting....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 5:42 am |
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سفر میں ساتھ کس کا ہے اور خیال کس کا ہے
بہت اچھی ہے۔ شکریہ
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 2:42 pm |
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tabs buhat khoob khyal hai ... kaho to main help krdon... apna samgh kr?
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Ik aur nya Zakhm sameer es ko kahan dein
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 3:17 pm |
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sameermoon wrote: tabs buhat khoob khyal hai ... kaho to main help krdon... apna samgh kr? Sameer bhai Apna bhi kehtay hain aur phr ghairon ki tarha ijazat bhi mangtay hain.... Hazrat Sad Bismillah.......Hum isay apni khush naseebi samjhain gaye....Aap Pm kr dijya hum aap ki ijazat se edit kardain gaye......warna Mods ko aiteraz hoga.... Bohat mamnoon
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sat Oct 24, 2009 5:21 pm |
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biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 8:42 am |
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mahtabhashmi wrote: Hashmi Sb, Bohat mamnoon hoon aap ki nigah nawazi o hosla afzai ka....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 8:46 am |
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Sameer Bhai,
main aap ka behad mamnoon hoon k aap ne is kam ilm ki rahnumai farmai aur meri aik na pukhta kawish ko sharf e mushatgi bakhsha...
main aap se multamis hoon k ye saya e shafqat sada qayem rakhiye ga aur bila jhijhak jahan bhi suqm mehsos farmain rahnumai kijiye ga..
khuda aap ko ilm o azmat se sirfaraz farmaye.
duago
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 2:32 pm |
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tabs es piyaar kya liye shukrya . naam mention krna zrori nahi but thora
naraz hon ap say nazm main abi galti hai ...ap ko pm kya tha correct kro esay kuin budnaam krwanay ka irada hai mujay :( plzzz
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Ik aur nya Zakhm sameer es ko kahan dein
Taqdeer K Sitaary yehi sochtay rahay
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 3:55 pm |
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sameermoon wrote: tabs es piyaar kya liye shukrya . naam mention krna zrori nahi but thora
naraz hon ap say nazm main abi galti hai ...ap ko pm kya tha correct kro esay kuin budnaam krwanay ka irada hai mujay :( plzzz Aray Hazrat Badnaam hongay to kya naam na hoga..... Aaap ka hukm sir aankhon per........ Aap ki is apnaiyat aur mohabbat ka maqrooz Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Mon Oct 26, 2009 5:32 pm |
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تببسم جی۔۔۔۔
تسی تے بس چھا گئے ہو۔۔۔
فل ٹائم چھا گئے ہو۔۔۔۔
ہمیشہ خوش رہو۔۔۔۔
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 5:45 am |
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gumsum_nenaa wrote: تببسم جی۔۔۔۔
تسی تے بس چھا گئے ہو۔۔۔
فل ٹائم چھا گئے ہو۔۔۔۔
ہمیشہ خوش رہو۔۔۔۔ Zia bhai, Aap ki is qadrdani k liye behad mamnoon hoon.... Bohat khush rahiye.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:25 am |
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tabs wrote: Waah.... bohat khoob Tabassum je... bohat hi Umdah kawish hai
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 1:42 am |
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tabs wrote: Beautiful. M just lovin it... Hasratein or khawab they bikhrey parhe Or Mein in kirchiyon per pa barhina chal raha tha ;;;;;;;;;;;; Yeh chamakta aasman mujh ko to raas aata nahin hai Yeh baharon ka saman mujh ko to raas aata nahin hai... Kia baat hai ji Cha gayi ho tusi OOps  I just forgot to say .. Daad qabool kijeaye (yeh yahan pe sub log kehte hain na) 
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 4:18 pm |
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*Tjs* wrote: tabs wrote: Waah.... bohat khoob Tabassum je... bohat hi Umdah kawish hai Jiya bohat shukriya pasand karnay ka.....kisi rothay ko mananay k liye likhi thi per dekho to zara zalim per koi asr hi na huwa..... 
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 4:20 pm |
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subahh wrote: Main lout aaunga
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tabassum,
buhat judagana undaz bari sadgi berjastagi aur dil ki gehrai se jazbat ko sehl tor pe pesh kiya ...aap ne
dad qabool kerain
khusgh rahain
subah.. Hazrat bohat shukrguzar hoon aap ki nigah e ameeq ka aur is darja sataish ka bhi... bohat bohat nawazish....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Wed Oct 28, 2009 4:22 pm |
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Masooma wrote: tabs wrote:
Bohat aa'la naz'm hai tabs jee. Parh kar kisi ki yaad a gayi 
Beta, ziyada na yaad kiya karo, warna ye yadain aagay nahin badhnay dain gi... Bohat bohat khush raho.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 9:13 am |
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tabs wrote: buhat khub tabassum...khayal ki rawani o sadgi...bhali lagi khush rahain subah..`
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 12:17 pm |
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subahh wrote: tabs wrote: buhat khub tabassum...khayal ki rawani o sadgi...bhali lagi khush rahain subah..` Thank you sir, mujhe bohat khushi hai k aap meri in naqis tehreeron ko is qadr mohabbat se padhtay hain.... bohat shukriya.....
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Post subject: Re: Meri Shairy Posted: Thu Oct 29, 2009 11:14 pm |
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Good work dude keep sharing
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