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 Post subject: DURD-E-JANAN
PostPosted: Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:26 pm 
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DOSTO MENY BHI KHAYAL KIA KE ISS BUZM MEN KUCH TABA AAZMAI KI JAEY.. TO AK GAZAL ARZ HE SHAIR KA NAAM NAHI AATA...


uss pe khool jati mery shok ki shidut sari,
dekhy hoty jo mery paon ke chaaly uss ny.


jis ka her aeyb zamany se chupaya men ny,
mery qissay sar-e-bazar uchaaly uss ny.


meri dum torti khawahish ka khayal aa na suka,
apny armaan hamesha hi nikaaly uss ny.


ak mera hi to haath na thama uss ny,
werna kitny hi girty hoey sumbhaaly uss ny.


jub ussy meri mohabat per bharosa hi na tha,
kiyon diye meri wafaaon ke hawaaly uss ny.

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AK AOR GAZAL AAP DOSTON KI NAZAR.... ISS GAZAL KA SHAIR KA NAAM BHI NAHI AATA.. AGER KISI DOST KO MALOOM HO TO PLZ BATA DEN.. THANX.




ghuzlon men tery ishq ka churcha na karengy.
hum tujh ko yun sur-e-aam ruswa na karengy.


kiyon hum pe uthaeen sung-e-malamut ki faseeleN,
behter he tery sheher men hum aaya na karengy.


ye chaand ye taary ye haseen raat ka aalum,
munsoob tery naam se kiya kiya na karengy.


weeran hoey qusr-e-tamana ke dareechy,
aabad kabhi piyar ki ab dunya na karengy.


har cheez ki bohtaat mein nuqsaan boht he,
shiddat se kisi shakhs ko chaha na karengy.


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AK AOR GAZAL AAP DOSTON KI NAZAR.... ISS GAZAL KA SHAIR KA NAAM BHI NAHI AATA.. AGER KISI DOST KO MALOOM HO TO PLZ BATA DEN.. THANX.




ghuzlon men tery ishq ka churcha na karengy.
hum tujh ko yun sur-e-aam ruswa na karengy.


kiyon hum pe uthaeen sung-e-malamut ki faseeleN,
behter he tery sheher men hum aaya na karengy.


ye chaand ye taary ye haseen raat ka aalum,
munsoob tery naam se kiya kiya na karengy.


weeran hoey qusr-e-tamana ke dareechy,
aabad kabhi piyar ki ab dunya na karengy.


har cheez ki bohtaat mein nuqsaan boht he,
shiddat se kisi shakhs ko chaha na karengy.


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wah janaab chah gaye hain aap zabardast miskeen jee khush rahiye....
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AK AOR GAZAL AAP DOSTON KI NAZAR.... ISS GAZAL KA SHAIR KA NAAM BHI NAHI AATA.. AGER KISI DOST KO MALOOM HO TO PLZ BATA DEN.. THANX.




ghuzlon men tery ishq ka churcha na karengy.
hum tujh ko yun sur-e-aam ruswa na karengy.


kiyon hum pe uthaeen sung-e-malamut ki faseeleN,
behter he tery sheher men hum aaya na karengy.


ye chaand ye taary ye haseen raat ka aalum,
munsoob tery naam se kiya kiya na karengy.


weeran hoey qusr-e-tamana ke dareechy,
aabad kabhi piyar ki ab dunya na karengy.


har cheez ki bohtaat mein nuqsaan boht he,
shiddat se kisi shakhs ko chaha na karengy.


:rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose:





wah janaab chah gaye hain aap zabardast miskeen jee khush rahiye....
:)O :)O





boht boht shukriya talaash-e-zeest.... mushkoor hon aap ka...

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ghuzlon men tery ishq ka churcha na karengy.
hum tujh ko yun sur-e-aam ruswa na karengy.


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wah jinab... bahot khobsurat sharing... bahot achay.



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ghuzlon men tery ishq ka churcha na karengy.
hum tujh ko yun sur-e-aam ruswa na karengy.


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wah jinab... bahot khobsurat sharing... bahot achay.




thank u sooooooooo much janab.. mushkoor on aap ka...

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DOSTO MENY BHI KHAYAL KIA KE ISS BUZM MEN KUCH TABA AAZMAI KI JAEY.. TO AK GAZAL ARZ HE SHAIR KA NAAM NAHI AATA...


uss pe khool jati mery shok ki shidut sari,
dekhy hoty jo mery paon ke chaaly uss ny.


jis ka her aeyb zamany se chupaya men ny,
mery qissay sar-e-bazar uchaaly uss ny.


meri dum torti khawahish ka khayal aa na suka,
apny armaan hamesha hi nikaaly uss ny.


ak mera hi to haath na thama uss ny,
werna kitny hi girty hoey sumbhaaly uss ny.


jub ussy meri mohabat per bharosa hi na tha,
kiyon diye meri wafaaon ke hawaaly uss ny.

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kia bat hai buhat khoob



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DOSTO MENY BHI KHAYAL KIA KE ISS BUZM MEN KUCH TABA AAZMAI KI JAEY.. TO AK GAZAL ARZ HE SHAIR KA NAAM NAHI AATA...


uss pe khool jati mery shok ki shidut sari,
dekhy hoty jo mery paon ke chaaly uss ny.


jis ka her aeyb zamany se chupaya men ny,
mery qissay sar-e-bazar uchaaly uss ny.


meri dum torti khawahish ka khayal aa na suka,
apny armaan hamesha hi nikaaly uss ny.


ak mera hi to haath na thama uss ny,
werna kitny hi girty hoey sumbhaaly uss ny.


jub ussy meri mohabat per bharosa hi na tha,
kiyon diye meri wafaaon ke hawaaly uss ny.

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kia bat hai buhat khoob


thank you sooooooooooooooo much prince.......

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ajub junoon-e-musafat main ghar se nikla tha.
khabar nahi ke sooruj kidhar se nikla tha.


ye kon phir se mujhy raston main chor gaya,
abhi abhi to azaab-e-safar se nikla nikla tha.


ye teer dil main magar be sabab nahi utra,
koi to hurf lub-e-charagar se nikla tha.


men raat toot kar roya to chain se soya,
ke dil ka zahar meri chusm-e-tar se nikla tha.


wo qais ab jisay mujnoo pokarty hen log,
meri terha koi deewana ghar se nikla tha.....



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ajub junoon-e-musafat main ghar se nikla tha.
khabar nahi ke sooruj kidhar se nikla tha.


ye kon phir se mujhy raston main chor gaya,
abhi abhi to azaab-e-safar se nikla nikla tha.


ye teer dil main magar be sabab nahi utra,
koi to hurf lub-e-charagar se nikla tha.


men raat toot kar roya to chain se soya,
ke dil ka zahar meri chusm-e-tar se nikla tha.


wo qais ab jisay mujnoo pokarty hen log,
meri terha koi deewana ghar se nikla tha.....


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh shah sahib :b)b: :b)b: :buke: :buke: :guns:



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ajub junoon-e-musafat main ghar se nikla tha.
khabar nahi ke sooruj kidhar se nikla tha.


ye kon phir se mujhy raston main chor gaya,
abhi abhi to azaab-e-safar se nikla nikla tha.


ye teer dil main magar be sabab nahi utra,
koi to hurf lub-e-charagar se nikla tha.

buhat khoob dear khush rahen


men raat toot kar roya to chain se soya,
ke dil ka zahar meri chusm-e-tar se nikla tha.


wo qais ab jisay mujnoo pokarty hen log,
meri terha koi deewana ghar se nikla tha.....



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ajub junoon-e-musafat main ghar se nikla tha.
khabar nahi ke sooruj kidhar se nikla tha.


ye kon phir se mujhy raston main chor gaya,
abhi abhi to azaab-e-safar se nikla nikla tha.


ye teer dil main magar be sabab nahi utra,
koi to hurf lub-e-charagar se nikla tha.


men raat toot kar roya to chain se soya,
ke dil ka zahar meri chusm-e-tar se nikla tha.


wo qais ab jisay mujnoo pokarty hen log,
meri terha koi deewana ghar se nikla tha.....


wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh shah sahib :b)b: :b)b: :buke: :buke: :guns:




boht boht shukriya waheed sahab and prince... plz keep visiting.. thanx

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nice Sharing G

Keep Sharing n Keep SmilinG



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nice Sharing Miskeen

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boht boht shukriya .... arzo-e-janan and subah gi.... boht shukar goozar hon aap ka....

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rog aesy bhi gum-e-yaar se lug jaaty hen.
dar se othty hen to deewar se lug jaaty hen.


ishq agaaz main hulki si khalish rukhta hy,
baad main senkiron aazar se lug jaaty hen.


pehly pehly hawus ik aadhi dokaan khoti hy,
phir to bazaar ke bazaar se lug jaaty hen.


bebasi bhi kabhi furqat ka sabub bunti he?
ro na paen to galey yaar se lug jaaty hen.


daag daamun ka ho dil ka ho ya chehry ka faraz,
kuch nishaan umr ki ruftaar se lug jaaty hen.


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DOSTO MENY BHI KHAYAL KIA KE ISS BUZM MEN KUCH TABA AAZMAI KI JAEY.. TO AK GAZAL ARZ HE SHAIR KA NAAM NAHI AATA...


uss pe khool jati mery shok ki shidut sari,
dekhy hoty jo mery paon ke chaaly uss ny.


jis ka her aeyb zamany se chupaya men ny,
mery qissay sar-e-bazar uchaaly uss ny.


meri dum torti khawahish ka khayal aa na suka,
apny armaan hamesha hi nikaaly uss ny.


ak mera hi to haath na thama uss ny,
werna kitny hi girty hoey sumbhaaly uss ny.


jub ussy meri mohabat per bharosa hi na tha,
kiyon diye meri wafaaon ke hawaaly uss ny.
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kia bat hai buhat khoob

wahhh jalal...buhat khub integhab hae aapka... :b)b:



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miskeen wrote:
rog aesy bhi gum-e-yaar se lug jaaty hen.
dar se othty hen to deewar se lug jaaty hen.


ishq agaaz main hulki si khalish rukhta hy,
baad main senkiron aazar se lug jaaty hen.


pehly pehly hawus ik aadhi dokaan khoti hy,
phir to bazaar ke bazaar se lug jaaty hen.


bebasi bhi kabhi furqat ka sabub bunti he?
ro na paen to galey yaar se lug jaaty hen.


daag daamun ka ho dil ka ho ya chehry ka faraz,
kuch nishaan umr ki ruftaar se lug jaaty hen.


:^^: :^^: :^^: :^^: :^^: :^^: :^^:



wah wah miskeen ji ap ne hamari rage dukh ko chair diya

aray ap ko miskeen kon kehta he ap to chupey rustom hain

ap ka chanayo acha he
pasand aya
bus muskratey rehayee or apna khiyal rukhayee ga
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ajub junoon-e-musafat main ghar se nikla tha.
khabar nahi ke sooruj kidhar se nikla tha.


ye kon phir se mujhy raston main chor gaya,
abhi abhi to azaab-e-safar se nikla nikla tha.


ye teer dil main magar be sabab nahi utra,
koi to hurf lub-e-charagar se nikla tha.


men raat toot kar roya to chain se soya,
ke dil ka zahar meri chusm-e-tar se nikla tha.


wo qais ab jisay mujnoo pokarty hen log,
meri terha koi deewana ghar se nikla tha.....


Kya baat hai Shah sb, Amjad islam Amjad ki is ghazal ko padh k to be saktha ik Aah si lab pe aakr reh gai....

Bohat si daad qabool kijiye is qadr dil kharash zouq e intekhab per....

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AK AOR GAZAL AAP DOSTON KI NAZAR.... ISS GAZAL KA SHAIR KA NAAM BHI NAHI AATA.. AGER KISI DOST KO MALOOM HO TO PLZ BATA DEN.. THANX.




ghuzlon men tery ishq ka churcha na karengy.
hum tujh ko yun sur-e-aam ruswa na karengy.


kiyon hum pe uthaeen sung-e-malamut ki faseeleN,
behter he tery sheher men hum aaya na karengy.


ye chaand ye taary ye haseen raat ka aalum,
munsoob tery naam se kiya kiya na karengy.


weeran hoey qusr-e-tamana ke dareechy,
aabad kabhi piyar ki ab dunya na karengy.


har cheez ki bohtaat mein nuqsaan boht he,
shiddat se kisi shakhs ko chaha na karengy.


:rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose:



Shah sb,

Qabil daad zouq paya hai aap ne Masha Allah kya intekhab hai.....bohat zaberdast....

hamari naqis maloumaat k mutabiq ye ghazal Ibn e Insha ki hai aur kuch yun hai....

Insha ne phir ishq kiya


Apne ko hum is shehar meiN ruswa na kareN ge
ab tak jo hua khair ab aisa na kareN ge
wada hai keh ab aur na jalaayeN ge dil ko
nuqsaan hai is meiN to yeh suada na kareNge
taa shaam na un kuchoN meiN ghoomeN ge pareshaN
taa subha shab-e-maah mein jaaga na kareNge
har mod pe ThiThkeN ge na dewaanoN ki surat
har mod pe tujeh jaa ke pukaara na kareNge
likheN ge kisi aur hi unwaan ki nazmeiN
ghazaloN mein is bat ka charcha na kareNge

ham mazeed tehqeeq kar rahay hain k aap ko kisi kitab ka hawala bhi de sakain....

Bohat si daad qabool kijiye....

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DOSTO MENY BHI KHAYAL KIA KE ISS BUZM MEN KUCH TABA AAZMAI KI JAEY.. TO AK GAZAL ARZ HE SHAIR KA NAAM NAHI AATA...



uss pe khool jati mery shok ki shidut sari,
dekhy hoty jo mery paon ke chaaly uss ny.


jis ka her aeyb zamany se chupaya men ny,
mery qissay sar-e-bazar uchaaly uss ny.


meri dum torti khawahish ka khayal aa na suka,
apny armaan hamesha hi nikaaly uss ny.


ak mera hi to haath na thama uss ny,
werna kitny hi girty hoey sumbhaaly uss ny.


jub ussy meri mohabat per bharosa hi na tha,
kiyon diye meri wafaaon ke hawaaly uss ny.

:rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: [/b][/color]



Wallah! Shah Sb,

Aapko Charahgar kahain, sitamgar kahain kya kahain....Aik aik shair jaisay dil cheer k nikala ho.....subhan Allah kya baat hai janab.....ab to hamain bhi ishtiaq hai k aakhr ye shair e dil geer kon hai jis ne hum jaisay hi sab zakhm saja rakhay hain...

Bohat nawazish shah sb k is qadr khobsorat kalam se aap ne rushanas kar waya....

Bohat si daad qabool kijiye....



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rog aesy bhi gum-e-yaar se lug jaaty hen.
dar se othty hen to deewar se lug jaaty hen.


ishq agaaz main hulki si khalish rukhta hy,
baad main senkiron aazar se lug jaaty hen.


pehly pehly hawus ik aadhi dokaan khoti hy,
phir to bazaar ke bazaar se lug jaaty hen.


bebasi bhi kabhi furqat ka sabub bunti he?
ro na paen to galey yaar se lug jaaty hen.


daag daamun ka ho dil ka ho ya chehry ka faraz,
kuch nishaan umr ki ruftaar se lug jaaty hen.


:^^: :^^: :^^: :^^: :^^: :^^: :^^:



wah kya kehney janaab bohot he aalah khush rahiye :)O



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boht boht shukriya ....

Ali meesum sahab ka.

subah gi ka...

talash-e-zeest sahab ka...

aor khoososun Qibla tabasum sahab....... jinhon ny meri shearing ko itna pasund kia..... aap sub ka men boht mushkoor o mumnoon hon.... khush rahen aor shadab rahen aamin.

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apny undeshon ki barsaat dikhaaty kis ko.
tum bhi jub bhool gaey to yaad aaty kis ko.


kuch muyasar na hua apny zukhmon ke siwa,
muskoraty huey khuwabon main sajaty kis ko.


hum bhatuk ty hi rahy shaher ke weerano main,
apni tunhaai ka ehsaas dilaaty kis ko.





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PostPosted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 4:55 pm 
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(ustaad syed mohsin naqvi sahab ki gazal)


inn faslon ki fikar men kiyon karon bhala,
boht door reh kar bhi mery paas he koi.


iss soch main dooba hai boht dair se mera dil,
kia uss ke dil main bhi aisa ehsaas he koi.


un ki nuzron se buna meri sanson ka tasalsul,
iss terha meri zindagi ki aas he koi.


uss ka jo poocha he to bus itna jan lo,
boht khas boht khas boht khas he koi.


mohsin jo ja rahy to ye bhi usy kehna,
ab uss ke bina iss shehar main udaas he koi.



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PostPosted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 10:17 pm 
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miskeen wrote:

apny undeshon ki barsaat dikhaaty kis ko.
tum bhi jub bhool gaey to yaad aaty kis ko.


kuch muyasar na hua apny zukhmon ke siwa,
muskoraty huey khuwabon main sajaty kis ko.


hum bhatuk ty hi rahy shaher ke weerano main,
apni tunhaai ka ehsaas dilaaty kis ko.




wah buhat khooob janab



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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 3:50 pm 
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boht shookriya prince......



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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 5:08 pm 
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dosto ye gazal meri boht pasundida gazlon main se ak gazal he.. per afsos ke iss gazal ke shair ka bhi mujhy naam nahi aata.. agar kisi ko maloom ho to plz bata den..... iss gazal main boht dard-e-janaN chupa hoa he........



chamun ka haal ye he k khaak orti he,
kidhar se ho k baharon k karwaaN gozry.


diyaar-e-yar ka sara safar anokha tha,
kadum kadum pe naye de k imtihaN gozry.


saba bhi aai to phoolon ke moo jholus k gai,
yahaN se abr bhi bursa ky bijliyaN gozry.


jo chup rahen to malamut kary zameer hamen,
khari khari kahen to ap ko giraaN gozry.


gozrny ko to mosibat k din gozar gaey,
bary hi gozry mager chor ker nishaaN gozry.


sahi gain na tagaful ki chund nazren bhi,
hen sharumsar k is dil main kia gomaN gozry.


kabhi to war rakeebon k bhi dy gaey maza,
kabhi to piyaar azizon k bhi giraaN gozry.


aey dil sambhul k kisi ko hisaab dena he,
k zindagi ky lumhy kahaN kahaN gozry.


:((: :((: :((: :((: :((: :((: :((:



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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 5:39 pm 
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miskeen wrote:


aey dil sambhul k kisi ko hisaab dena he,
k zindagi ky lumhy kahaN kahaN gozry.




Beautiful shairing :buke:
Be happy always!



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thanx areeb... khush rahen...



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miskeen, g jawab nahi apki collection ka yaar. kaha kaha se latay ho. zabardast yaar. buaht hi ala. keep sharing. janab..



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miskeen, g jawab nahi apki collection ka yaar. kaha kaha se latay ho. zabardast yaar. buaht hi ala. keep sharing. janab..



ye aap ki mohabaton ka asar he janab.... thanx alot gazal pasund kerny ka gi..... khush rahen shadab rahen....

:)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O



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jalal
wahhh buhat khub....mager hum ko bhi shair ka naam maloom nah hae



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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 11:25 pm 
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thanx alot subah gi..... han shair ka naam mil jaey to inn ka deewan purhny ka dil keh raha he......

:)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O



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PostPosted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 1:24 pm 
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Prince143 wrote:
miskeen wrote:


DOSTO MENY BHI KHAYAL KIA KE ISS BUZM MEN KUCH TABA AAZMAI KI JAEY.. TO AK GAZAL ARZ HE SHAIR KA NAAM NAHI AATA...


uss pe khool jati mery shok ki shidut sari,
dekhy hoty jo mery paon ke chaaly uss ny.


jis ka her aeyb zamany se chupaya men ny,
mery qissay sar-e-bazar uchaaly uss ny.


meri dum torti khawahish ka khayal aa na suka,
apny armaan hamesha hi nikaaly uss ny.


ak mera hi to haath na thama uss ny,
werna kitny hi girty hoey sumbhaaly uss ny.


jub ussy meri mohabat per bharosa hi na tha,
kiyon diye meri wafaaon ke hawaaly uss ny.
:rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose:

kia bat hai buhat khoob

wahhh jalal...buhat khub integhab hae aapka... :b)b:


thanx subah gi.........



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DOSTO MENY BHI KHAYAL KIA KE ISS BUZM MEN KUCH TABA AAZMAI KI JAEY.. TO AK GAZAL ARZ HE SHAIR KA NAAM NAHI AATA...


uss pe khool jati mery shok ki shidut sari,
dekhy hoty jo mery paon ke chaaly uss ny.


jis ka her aeyb zamany se chupaya men ny,
mery qissay sar-e-bazar uchaaly uss ny.


meri dum torti khawahish ka khayal aa na suka,
apny armaan hamesha hi nikaaly uss ny.


ak mera hi to haath na thama uss ny,
werna kitny hi girty hoey sumbhaaly uss ny.


jub ussy meri mohabat per bharosa hi na tha,
kiyon diye meri wafaaon ke hawaaly uss ny.

:rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose: :rose:

nice miskeen jee...keep sharing...ALwayz be happy...
ALLAH BLESS U ALwayz



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thanx nahi-karna-piyar.... ka gi... wesy aap ka name pata nahi he iss liye ye goostakhi ki he... mazirat....

miskeen.



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nice,selective collection



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boht shokriya talash-e-zeest.... ap ko hamari collection pasund aai.... khush rahen..

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