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balvinder
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Fri Mar 12, 2010 3:24 pm |
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haifa_s wrote: hairatoon ke sil-siley sooz-e-nihaaN tak aa gaye ham nazar tak chahte the tum to jaaN tak aa gaye dil ke afsaane, nigaahoN kii zubaan tak pahuNche baat chal niklii hai, ab dekheN kahaaN tak pahuNche
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Sat Mar 13, 2010 2:15 pm |
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haifa_s wrote: ab wohii harf-e-junooN sab ki zubaaN Thehrii hai jo bhi chal niklii hai wo baat kahaaN Thehri hai chaahe kuchh bhii ho, savaalaat na karnaa un se mere baare meiN ko_ii baat na kar naa un se
baat niklegii to phir door talak jaayegi
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:44 am |
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haifa_s wrote: :thinking un kii baatoN ka zara sa bhi asar mat lena warna chehrey ke taasor sey samajh jaayeN ge
baat niklegii to phir door talak jaayegi yuN hii apnoN ke dil meN shak paidaa nahiiN karte jo lab tak aa gayee us baat ko rokaa nahiiN karte
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 12:47 pm |
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bohot qoob sahab,......
mere do sher suniye,.....
aankhon ke ashk dil me utaar letaa hai kisiki qatir apni har qushi ko maar leta hai
uskaa zarf to dekh ke teri zindagi ke liye wo apni maut se kuch saanse udhaar leta hai
haseeb..........
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Mon Mar 15, 2010 9:19 pm |
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ab wohii harf-e-junooN sab ki zubaaN Thehrii hai jo bhi chal niklii hai wo baat kahaaN Thehri hai
junooN ki qaed main ye dil per goobar kesa he? nasha jo piyar main na tha to khumar kesa he?
chuly gaey jo gum-e-hijr se aleel kar ky mujhy, kiyon ab gaer se poochty hen k beemar kesa he?
miskeen.
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Wed Mar 17, 2010 9:40 am |
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miskeen wrote: chuly gaey jo gum-e-hijr se aleel kar ky mujhy, kiyon ab gaer se poochty hen k beemar kesa he? tum haal poochhte ho, inaayat ka shukriyah achhaa agar nahiiN hooN to biimaar bhii nahiiN
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:11 am |
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haifa_s wrote: biimar tere jii se guzar jayeN to acha jetey hain na martey hain ye mar jayeN to acha
shab bhar teray mareez ka aalam yehi raha nabzoN pe jis ne haath rakha keh dia ke bus!
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Sat Mar 20, 2010 10:51 am |
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balvinder wrote: haifa_s wrote: biimar tere jii se guzar jayeN to acha jetey hain na martey hain ye mar jayeN to acha
shab bhar teray mareez ka aalam yehi raha nabzoN pe jis ne haath rakha keh dia ke bus! un k aany se jo aajati he moo'n pe ronuk, wo samujhty hen k beemar ka hal acha he..
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:48 am |
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miskeen wrote: un k aany se jo aajati he moo'n pe ronuk, wo samujhty hen k beemar ka hal acha he.. haNs ke faramaate haiN vo dekh kar haalat merii kyoN tum aasaan samajhate the muhabbat merii?
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Wed Mar 24, 2010 10:48 am |
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haifa_s wrote: na kar mujhey sharm saar naseh mein dil se majbore hoN ke jis ka hai yoN to koon-o-makaN pey qaabo magr muhabbat pey bas nahin hai ab ye bhii nahiiN hai bas meN ke ham phooloN kii Dagar par lauT chalen jis raah_guzar par chalanaa hai vo raah_guzar talavaar hu_ii
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 7:36 am |
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rach bas gaya hey zahen mein nasir kisi ka rupe, ab kya karein gay hum koi shahkaar daikh ker....
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 8:38 am |
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haifa_s wrote: in aabloN sey paaoN ke ghabra geya tha mein jii khush howa rah ko por-khaar deikh kr kya Gham hai jo ye aabla_paaii safar meN hai ek Khaarzaar aur abhii rah_guzar meN hai
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 8:49 am |
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dia khan wrote: rach bas gaya hey zahen mein nasir kisi ka rupe, ab kya karein gay hum koi shahkaar daikh ker.... utra hai mere dil meN ko_ii chaaNd nagar se ab khauf nahiiN ko_ii andheroN ke safar se wo baat hai tujh meN ke koii tujh sa nahiiN hai ai kaash ko_ii dekhe tujhe merii nazar se
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Thu Mar 25, 2010 2:20 pm |
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"JavaN hone' lage' jab wo', tu' ham' sei kar liya parda'... Haya' yak-lakht aa'e orr' shabab aahista-aahista."
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 2:09 pm |
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sad_sadi wrote: "JavaN hone' lage' jab wo', tu' ham' sei kar liya parda'... Haya' yak-lakht aa'e orr' shabab aahista-aahista." ba-zaahir un ko hayaa_daar log samjhe haiN hayaa meN jo hai sharaarat, kisii ko kyaa maaloom 
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 3:09 pm |
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haifa_s wrote: teri bejhijhak hansy se na kisi ka dil ho meila ye nagar hai aeinoN ka yahan saans ley sambhal ke bahut hii saada hai too aur zamaana ayyaar Khudaa kare tujhe is shahar kii hava na lage
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Tue Mar 30, 2010 7:04 pm |
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Woh is ada se jo aayey to kyuN bhalaa na lagey Hazaar baar miley, phir bhi aashna na lagey
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Wed Mar 31, 2010 3:01 am |
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SHAIRYFAN wrote: Woh is ada se jo aayey to kyuN bhalaa na lagey Hazaar baar miley, phir bhi aashna na lagey husn kii, ik-ik adaa par, jaan-o-dil sadqe, magar lutf kuchh daaman bachaa kar hii nikal jaane meN hai
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Thu Apr 01, 2010 9:52 am |
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haifa_s wrote: wo kiya tha jisy ham ny thukra diya magr umr bhar haath maltey rahey kis ne kahaa ke ''Daagh''-e-vafaadaar mar gaya? voh haath mal ke kahte haiN "kya yaar mar gaya''
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 10:59 am |
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haifa_s wrote: mohabbat ki rahoN mein chalna sambhal ke yahan jo bhi aaya, geya haath mal ke dil TooT bhii jaaye to muhabbat nahiiN miT'ti is raah meN luT kar bhii khasaraa nahiiN hota
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:07 am |
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sono wrote: Kaise yaqeeN aaye, yeh khwab hai ya haqeeqat ehad-e-wafa kisi ka aur itni saadge se!!! poochhte haiN k, kyaa hua dil ko husn waaloN kii saadagii na gayii
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 7:45 pm |
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Kabhi aansu kabhi khushi bechii hum garibon ne bekasi bechii...
Chand saansein khariidne ke liye roz thodi si zindagi bechi...
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Hum bhi bahut ajeeb hain itney ajeeb hain ke bas, Khud ko tabaah kar liya aur malaal bhi nahi... Jon Elia
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Sat Apr 03, 2010 9:44 am |
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Khush_aamdeed ''Tamanna'' ji..... Tamanna242 wrote: Kabhi aansu kabhi khushi bechii hum garibon ne bekasi bechii...
Chand saansein khariidne ke liye roz thodi si zindagi bechi... zindagi bhar mere kaam aaye usool eik ik kar ke unheN bechaa kiyaa
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 10:57 am |
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sono wrote: iss simt sameton to bikharta hai udhar se dukh dete hoye yaar ne daman nahen dekha kitnaa kahaa thaa us se ke daaman sameT le ab voh bhii mere saath pareshaaniyoN meN hai
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Sun Apr 04, 2010 5:46 pm |
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balvinder wrote: sono wrote: iss simt sameton to bikharta hai udhar se dukh dete hoye yaar ne daman nahen dekha kitnaa kahaa thaa us se ke daaman sameT le ab voh bhii mere saath pareshaaniyoN meN haiAag Daman mein lag jayegi, dil mein sholaa machal jayegaa / Mera sagar na chhuna kabhi, Saakiya haath jal jaayega //
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Post subject: Re: jo zehan meN sher aaye vahii likh diijiye Posted: Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:53 am |
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Noor__rj99 wrote: Aag Daman mein lag jayegi, dil mein sholaa machal jayegaa Mera sagar na chhuna kabhi, Saakiya haath jal jaayega // mire ashk bhii haiN is meN ye sharaab ubal na jaaye miraa jaam chhoone waale tiraa haath jal na jaaye
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