MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

may tum say piyar kerti hoon
lo yeh iqrar kerti hoon
bas itna yad rakh laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
kabhi jo dil tumra yeh
kisi kay wastay machlay
to mujh ko yad ker laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
mera yeh piyar bay talabi
meri chahat may bay gerzi
bas itni si tamana hay
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
jo wada bay khayali may
tum mujh say ker hi baithay ho
ussi ka pas ker laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
yehi hay RIBZ ki chahat
yehi uski tamana hay
keh in doori kay lamhon may
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
(RABIA RIBZ)

Masooma · **Posted:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 6:02 am

Welcome to Aapki Shairy.
Bohat he khoobsorat aghaaz hai.
Will look forward to your sharings.

:buke:

Tifl e Maktab · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 3604

cuty wrote:

may tum say piyar kerti hoon
lo yeh iqrar kerti hoon
bas itna yad rakh laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
kabhi jo dil tumra yeh
kisi kay wastay machlay
to mujh ko yad ker laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
mera yeh piyar bay talabi
meri chahat may bay gerzi
bas itni si tamana hay
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
jo wada bay khayali may
tum mujh say ker hi baithay ho
ussi ka pas ker laina
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
yehi hay RIBZ ki chahat
yehi uski tamana hay
keh in doori kay lamhon may
mujhay tum bhool mat jana
(RABIA RIBZ)

Bhai wah......bohat hi khoobsorat nazm hai.....aapki ye pehli nazm nigah nawaz huwai aur padhnay ka ishtiyaq jaag utha.....umeed hai tishna e sukhn ko mayyos na farmain gi....Welcome to Apki Shairy :buke:

bohat si dua k sath bohat si daad

Tabassum

sajid hashmi · **Posted:** Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:49 am

Rabiya ji
Aapko koee nahein bhoolega,isee tarah likhtee rahiye.Daad qubool keejiye

Sajid Hashmi

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

masooma, tabassum and sajid poetry pasand kernay ka bohot shukria

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

shikwa

Kaha Tha Na!
K Yun Sote Hue Mt Chhor K Jana..
Muje BeShk Jga Dena..
Bta Dena..
Tmhen Rsta Bdlna He..
Meri Hd Se Niklna He..

Tmhe Kis Bat Ka Dr Tha?
K Me Jane Na DunGa!?
Kahin Pe Qed Kr LunGa!?

ARE PAGAL!
Mohbt Ki Tbiat May,
ZbrDsti Nhi Hoti..
Jise Rsta Bdlna Ho,
Use Rsta Bdlne Se..
Jise Hd Se Niklna Ho,
Use Hd Se Niklne Se..
Na Koi Rok Paya He..
Na Koi Rok PayeGa..
Mgr ik Bat Keh Dun!?
Tmhe Khone Se Drta Hun..
ME AB SONE SE DRTA HUN..
(UNKNOWN POET)

JAWAB-E-SHIKWA

tumhain sotay may kab chora
may nay kai bar jhanjhora
palak say girtay ansoo nay
tumhari neend ko tora
nazer pairon say lipti thi
keh ham ko rok lo jana
na hi had say nikalna tha
na hi rasta badalna tha
mujhay to jan-e-man her soo
teri chahat may dhalna tha
meray dil ka machalna tha
keh ham ko rok lo jana
teri banhon may jeena tha
teri banhon may merna tha
teri khatir sanwerna tha
teri khatir ujerna tha
mera tum say yeh kehna tha
keh ham ko rok lo jana
teri ankhon kay ansoo yeh
meray dil per kiwn girtay hain
mera dil noch laitay hain
mujhay baychain kertay hain
mujhay sab bhool janay do
tum mujh ko bhool ker jana
hami ko dosh daitay ho
hamaray dil ko hi tora
nahin ab zakhm bhi gehra
hay ab derd bhi thora
nahin ab RIBZ ko chahat
keh ham ko rok lo jana
(RABIA RIBZ)

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:02 pm

bohat khoob ji...very nice "jawab"
WELCOME to this forum :buke:

Hope u have great time here
Aik baat remind karwa doon,aap yahan sirf aik hi thread bana sakti hain.kindly apni saari poetry aik hi thread mein post kijiyeAbhi aap k dono threads merge karwa rahi hun...Theek!
Take good care :buke:

All the best

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Sun Sep 06, 2009 10:08 pm

Bhala "Ribz" ka kya matlab hai?just takhallus??? :thinking

Masooma · **Posted:** Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:45 am

Aapka "jawab" pasand aya.
:buke:

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

sab say pehlay to SORRY keh waqfiyat na honay kay sabab aap ko zehmat uthani pari meri wajha say or phir poetry pasand kernay ka shukria,
aapnay poocha arooj keh RIBZka kia matlab hay to piyar kay namon ka koi matlab nahin hota jis nay yeh nam baray piyar say rakha tha woh to mujhay chor gaya laikin yeh nam meray sath sath hay,is say pehlay mayRABI takhallus kerti thi.

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

masooma pasand kernay ka shukria.

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

ansooo tumhari ankh say behtay to hain mager
dil per hamaray girtay hain yeh kaisi bat hay

ham ko na dosh do keh tumhain chor kiwn dia
ham ko to yad aik aik guzri bat hay

ham sath thay to ankh may ansoo na thay kabhi
ab to naseeb may yehi bas gham ki rat hay

ham lot ker na aein ghay tum say kaha to tha
tum sochtay thay bas yoonhi pagli ki bat hay

ay kaash tum na tortay dil RIBZ ka kabhi
laikin tumharay liey to choti si bat hay

(RABIA RIBZ)

Masooma · **Posted:** Mon Sep 07, 2009 6:46 am

cuty wrote:

ansooo tumhari ankh say behtay to hain mager
dil per hamaray girtay hain yeh kaisi bat hay

ham ko na dosh do keh tumhain chor kiwn dia
ham ko to yad aik aik guzri bat hay

ham sath thay to ankh may ansoo na thay kabhi
ab to naseeb may yehi bas gham ki rat hay

ham lot ker na aein ghay tum say kaha to tha
tum sochtay thay bas yoonhi pagli ki bat hay

ay kaash tum na tortay dil RIBZ ka kabhi
laikin tumharay liey to choti si bat hay

(RABIA RIBZ)

Bohat he khoobsorat khayalaat hain Rabia. Highlighted ashaar tou dil ko chu gayay. Keep sharing.

:buke:

khamosh_mohabbat · **Joined:** Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:07 am **Posts:** 2

mat azma inta meri mohabbat ki inteha ko k to khud toot ker bikher jay
array main to woh moaj -e- darya hoon k jisy tahrny ko kinara na millay

khamosh_mohabbat · **Joined:** Mon Sep 07, 2009 8:07 am **Posts:** 2

mujhy maloom hain k ab bhi tujhy meri yad ati hy
yunhi to nahn dil ka shab e tanhai main bekarar hona

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to nigah e nam se paoch hijr k lamhoon ki wehshat
milny k bahany yaadon main aker tarpaya na ker

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main shab o roz bus tery hi ehsas main khoya sa rehta hoon
ab to khud ko bhi nahn yaad k kab din howa kab shab dhali

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helloz all!

these all are my own creatives, i know i m not a good poet but i 'll try my level best to share my poetry. either it good or not .

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

HIJR

teray bina reh nahin paein gay ab ham
derd-e-judai seh nahin paein gay ab ham

is dil kay angan may ab tum hi tum ho
dil ki her dherkan may ab tum hi tum ho

ham say hooi hay koi khata to batlao
saza do or ham ko mujrim tehrao

orh lia ger ham nay kafan to kia ker lo gay
tum lotay or ham na milay to kia ker logay

tum ko wasta RAB ka yoon na chor kay jao
ribz kay behtay ansoo daikh kay lot aao

(RABIA RIBZ)

Masooma · **Posted:** Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:48 am

"khamosh_mohabbat"

Welcome to the forum.
Par rules kay mutabiq aap kisi aur shayar ki thread main post nahi kar saktay/sakti. Lihaza aap apni sharings kay liyay new topic bana lain.
Shukriya.

:buke:

Masooma · **Posted:** Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:49 am

cuty wrote:

orh lia ger ham nay kafan to kia ker lo gay
tum lotay or ham na milay to kia ker logay

tum ko wasta RAB ka yoon na chor kay jao
ribz kay behtay ansoo daikh kay lot aao

Aa'la ashaar hain Rabia.
Bohat khoob. Keep writing!

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

aisay hi himmat bandhati rahiey,mera safer jari rahay ga,pasand kernay ka shukria

sono · **Joined:** Tue Sep 27, 2005 3:41 am **Posts:** 29986

wah cuty ji aap ka collection parha....bohat umda hai.....dil ko chuu jane wali sharing hain....keep sharing sis :buke:

Masooma · **Posted:** Thu Sep 10, 2009 8:48 pm

Rabia, aapki agli sharing ka intezaar hai...
:buke:

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

thanks SONO

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

NAZRAIN CHURA KAY MUJH SAY TUM KAISAY JA SAKO GAY

nazrain chura kay mujh say tum kaisay ja sako ghay
kia door ja kay mujh say tum chain pa sako ghay
aansoo tarap rahay hain aankhon main meri daikho
yadon say meri kia tum peecha chura sako ghay
ab tum chalay bhi jao yoon na palat kay daikho
aankhon main aaey aansoo kab tak chupa sako gha
ay janay walay tujh ko rakhay khuda aman main
nazron say door ja ker dil say na ja sako ghay
pohnchi dua RIBZ ki arshay bareen ko choonay
dil ko meray yaqeen hay tum phir say aa sako ghay
(RABIA RIBZ)

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

OR AITABAR TOOT GAYA

abhi ansoo to peenay do ,abhi dil ko sanbhalnay do
abhi kuch rat baqi hay,abhi ham ko pighalnay do
bata dain gay bata dain gay tumhain sab kuch bata dain gay
kisi ka bhaid khulnay ka hamain matam to kernay do
wo jis ko ham nay pooja tha bana ker dayota koi
gira hay aaj nazron say hamain ab to tarapnay do
yaqeen hay ab koi dil ki gali may aa na paey ga
bas uski bay wafai ko hamain pal pal bhugatnay do
chalay jao nahin poocho keh aakhir muddua kia hay
abhi dil kirchi kirchi hay,abhi kuch pal saraknay do
RIBZ kiwn ker banaya tha kisi ko na khuda tum nay
dubo do apni kashti ko ussay sahil pay rehnay do
(RABIA RIBZ)

Masooma · **Posted:** Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:10 am

cuty wrote:

NAZRAIN CHURA KAY MUJH SAY TUM KAISAY JA SAKO GAY

nazrain chura kay mujh say tum kaisay ja sako ghay
kia door ja kay mujh say tum chain pa sako ghay
aansoo tarap rahay hain aankhon main meri daikho
yadon say meri kia tum peecha chura sako ghay
ab tum chalay bhi jao yoon na palat kay daikho
aankhon main aaey aansoo kab tak chupa sako gha
ay janay walay tujh ko rakhay khuda aman main
nazron say door ja ker dil say na ja sako ghay
pohnchi dua RIBZ ki arshay bareen ko choonay
dil ko meray yaqeen hay tum phir say aa sako ghay
(RABIA RIBZ)

Uff!! Aa'la ghazal Rabia.
Wahhhh!!
Especially highlighted shair tou dil ko chu gaya.

Masooma · **Posted:** Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:13 am

cuty wrote:

OR AITABAR TOOT GAYA

abhi ansoo to peenay do ,abhi dil ko sanbhalnay do
abhi kuch rat baqi hay,abhi ham ko pighalnay do
bata dain gay bata dain gay tumhain sab kuch bata dain gay
kisi ka bhaid khulnay ka hamain matam to kernay do
wo jis ko ham nay pooja tha bana ker dayota koi
gira hay aaj nazron say hamain ab to tarapnay do
yaqeen hay ab koi dil ki gali may aa na paey ga
bas uski bay wafai ko hamain pal pal bhugatnay do
chalay jao nahin poocho keh aakhir muddua kia hay
abhi dil kirchi kirchi hay,abhi kuch pal saraknay do
RIBZ kiwn ker banaya tha kisi ko na khuda tum nay
dubo do apni kashti ko ussay sahil pay rehnay do
(RABIA RIBZ)

Aiii haiii! BOHAT khoob!
Tareef kay liyay alfaaz kam par rahay hain.
Har shair he highlighted samjhain.

mahtabhashmi · **Posted:** Sat Sep 12, 2009 6:47 pm

cuty wrote:

OR AITABAR TOOT GAYA

abhi ansoo to peenay do ,abhi dil ko sanbhalnay do
abhi kuch rat baqi hay,abhi ham ko pighalnay do
bata dain gay bata dain gay tumhain sab kuch bata dain gay
kisi ka bhaid khulnay ka hamain matam to kernay do
wo jis ko ham nay pooja tha bana ker dayota koi
gira hay aaj nazron say hamain ab to tarapnay do
yaqeen hay ab koi dil ki gali may aa na paey ga
bas uski bay wafai ko hamain pal pal bhugatnay do
chalay jao nahin poocho keh aakhir muddua kia hay
abhi dil kirchi kirchi hay,abhi kuch pal saraknay do
RIBZ kiwn ker banaya tha kisi ko na khuda tum nay
dubo do apni kashti ko ussay sahil pay rehnay do
(RABIA RIBZ)

Wahhhhhhhh,Kia baat hay, Bohat umda ghazal takhliq ki hay aap nay Khas kar ye sherr to dil mein utar gaya

Chalay jao na poochho keh aakhir muddua kia hay
abhi dil kirchi kirchi hay,abhi kuch pal saraknay do

RABIA Jee Bohat pasand aai aap ki ye ghazal, dheron daad qubool farmayay,aap kay nayay kalam ka intizar rahay ga.

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

thanks mehtab and masooma

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

JANA JANA

Mertay dam tak bhi main tum say yeh kahoon gi jana
Main tumhari hoon tumhari hi rahoon ghi jana
Waqt kat jaey gha yadon ka sahara lay ker
Tum bhi halat ko zara apni sanbhalo jana
Lo tumhain aaj mohobat ki kasam daiti hoon
Ab na ashkon say kabhi chera bhighona jana
Gham kabhi pas tumharay nahin aanay doon ghi
Tum ko meri hay kasam ab nahin rona jana
Main nay dukh sukh main kia sath nibhanay ka ehed
Main tumhari hoon tumhari hoon tumhari jana
Tum ko kia gham hay agher dolat e duyan na mili
Dil RIBZ nay to tumhain day hi dia hay jana
(RABIA RIBZ)

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

CHAR DIN KAY KEHKAHAY LAY JAEEY

char din kay kehkahay or dil lagi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap to yeh zindagi lay jaeey
meray ashkon per na jaein yeh to yoonhi behtay hain
meray honton per damakti her khushi lay jaeeay
in khanakti chooriyon kay gungunanay ki sada
meri payal ki sharabi bay khudi lay jaeeay
jo nahin hain aap to main is jahan ko kia karoon
meri aankhon main chamakti her khushi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap jab apni RIBZ ko chor ker
aanay walay her lamhay ki aagahi lay jaeeay
(RABIA RIBZ)

Masooma · **Posted:** Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:33 am

cuty wrote:

CHAR DIN KAY KEHKAHAY LAY JAEEY

char din kay kehkahay or dil lagi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap to yeh zindagi lay jaeey
meray ashkon per na jaein yeh to yoonhi behtay hain
meray honton per damakti her khushi lay jaeeay
in khanakti chooriyon kay gungunanay ki sada
meri payal ki sharabi bay khudi lay jaeeay
jo nahin hain aap to main is jahan ko kia karoon
meri aankhon main chamakti her khushi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap jab apni RIBZ ko chor ker
aanay walay her lamhay ki aagahi lay jaeeay
(RABIA RIBZ)

Wahhh! Aa'la sharing Rabia.
Bohat khoob!

SHAIRYFAN · **Posted:** Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:42 am

cuty wrote:

CHAR DIN KAY KEHKAHAY LAY JAEEY

char din kay kehkahay or dil lagi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap to yeh zindagi lay jaeey
meray ashkon per na jaein yeh to yoonhi behtay hain
meray honton per damakti her khushi lay jaeeay
in khanakti chooriyon kay gungunanay ki sada
meri payal ki sharabi bay khudi lay jaeeay
jo nahin hain aap to main is jahan ko kia karoon
meri aankhon main chamakti her khushi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap jab apni RIBZ ko chor ker
aanay walay her lamhay ki aagahi lay jaeeay
(RABIA RIBZ)

Bahut zabardast, bahut hi aa'la shaayery hai aap ki, Rabia ji, jis se forum ka mey'aar ooNcha ho gaya hai. HazaaroN, laakhoN daad qubool keejiyey
:b)b:

.

Bas aap ki Ghamgeen shairy se muta'assir ho kar, isee wazan meiN, aik doosray shaayer ki advice par tawajjuh dilaana chaah raha tha:

Mujrim-e-sartaabi-e-husn-e-jawaaN ho jaaiyey
Gulfishaani ta kuja, shola fishaaN ho jaaiyey
Khaaiyey ga ek nigaah-e-lutf ka kab tak faraib
Koyee afsaana bana kar badgumaaN ho jaaiyey

One again, hazaaroN, laakhoN, daad!
:buke:

*·.·´¯`คяšђ´¯`·.·* · **Posted:** Sun Sep 13, 2009 5:53 am

cuty wrote:

CHAR DIN KAY KEHKAHAY LAY JAEEY

char din kay kehkahay or dil lagi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap to yeh zindagi lay jaeey
meray ashkon per na jaein yeh to yoonhi behtay hain
meray honton per damakti her khushi lay jaeeay
in khanakti chooriyon kay gungunanay ki sada
meri payal ki sharabi bay khudi lay jaeeay
jo nahin hain aap to main is jahan ko kia karoon
meri aankhon main chamakti her khushi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap jab apni RIBZ ko chor ker
aanay walay her lamhay ki aagahi lay jaeeay
(RABIA RIBZ)

Bohat Umda Rabia Ji :buke:

Beautiful Creation

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

thanks masooma,shairyfan,hidden-tears

Tifl e Maktab · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 3604

ansooo tumhari ankh say behtay to hain mager
dil per hamaray girtay hain yeh kaisi bat hay

ham ko na dosh do keh tumhain chor kiwn dia
ham ko to yad aik aik guzri bat hay

ham sath thay to ankh may ansoo na thay kabhi
ab to naseeb may yehi bas gham ki rat hay

ham lot ker na aein ghay tum say kaha to tha
tum sochtay thay bas yoonhi pagli ki bat hay

ay kaash tum na tortay dil RIBZ ka kabhi
laikin tumharay liey to choti si bat hay

Bohat hi khoob......bohat hi umdah khayal hain, really heart felt....

Bohat si daad qabool kijiye...

Tifl e Maktab · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 3604

cuty wrote:

OR AITABAR TOOT GAYA

abhi ansoo to peenay do ,abhi dil ko sanbhalnay do
abhi kuch rat baqi hay,abhi ham ko pighalnay do
bata dain gay bata dain gay tumhain sab kuch bata dain gay
kisi ka bhaid khulnay ka hamain matam to kernay do
wo jis ko ham nay pooja tha bana ker dayota koi
gira hay aaj nazron say hamain ab to tarapnay do
yaqeen hay ab koi dil ki gali may aa na paey ga
bas uski bay wafai ko hamain pal pal bhugatnay do
chalay jao nahin poocho keh aakhir muddua kia hay
abhi dil kirchi kirchi hay,abhi kuch pal saraknay do
RIBZ kiwn ker banaya tha kisi ko na khuda tum nay
dubo do apni kashti ko ussay sahil pay rehnay do
(RABIA RIBZ)

Bohat Khoob nazm hai bohat hi dil ko choti huwi......bohat shandar.....

Daad qabool kijiye beshumar.....

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

thanks tabassum

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

ham ko koi hamarey hi jaisa nahin mila

ham ko koi hamarey hi jaisa nahin mila
jo ho wafa may taq koi aisa nahin mila

miltay to hain bohot say sare rahay zindigi
berh ker jo hath tham lay koi aisa nahin mila

shano pay jiskay rakh kay ser ham shant ho sakain
na janay kiwn abhi tak koi aisa nahin mila

jo bhi mila wo doosray ki zulf ka aseer
jo sirf ho hamara koi aisa nahin mila

dil gam say choor choor hay ab kia batain RIBZ
chahay jo ham ko toot ker koi aisa nahin mila

(RABIA RIBZ)

sono · **Joined:** Tue Sep 27, 2005 3:41 am **Posts:** 29986

cuty wrote:

ham ko koi hamarey hi jaisa nahin mila

ham ko koi hamarey hi jaisa nahin mila
jo ho wafa may taq koi aisa nahin mila

miltay to hain bohot say sare rahay zindigi
berh ker jo hath tham lay koi aisa nahin mila

shano pay jiskay rakh kay ser ham shant ho sakain
na janay kiwn abhi tak koi aisa nahin mila

jo bhi mila wo doosray ki zulf ka aseer
jo sirf ho hamara koi aisa nahin mila

dil gam say choor choor hay ab kia batain RIBZ
chahay jo ham ko toot ker koi aisa nahin mila

(RABIA RIBZ)

jo bhi mila wo doosray ki zulf ka aseer
jo sirf ho hamara koi aisa nahin mila

bohat umda sharing rabia :b)b:

Masooma · **Posted:** Wed Sep 16, 2009 5:08 am

cuty wrote:

jo bhi mila wo doosray ki zulf ka aseer
jo sirf ho hamara koi aisa nahin mila

dil gam say choor choor hay ab kia batain RIBZ
chahay jo ham ko toot ker koi aisa nahin mila

Wah. Aa'la ashaar Rabia. Bohat khoobsorat ghazal hai.

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