MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON

masood_zuberi · **Posted:** Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:13 am

cuty,

tohfa ghazal bhut hee haseen hai .kitnee saadi si aur dilko touch karnewali ghazal hai . yunhee likhtee raho .

maheen_ansari · **Joined:** Tue Aug 18, 2009 2:39 pm **Posts:** 540

mashallah jee ap ke tmam poetry bhut achi hay khas kar kuch gazlain bhut pasand aaien
kush rahie aur liktien rahian

sameermoon · **Posted:** Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:53 pm

cuty wrote:

TUHFA

itnay haseen khwab na mujh ko dikhaeey
may khak ki hoon cheez zamin per bithaeey

tuhfay ki TABI aap say tareef kia karoon
itna hi kam hay isko to jitna sarahiey

kano may ras sa ghol ghai aap ki sada
yoon door door reh kay na ulfat jitaeey

hansna mazak kerna hay aadat hamari dost
kuch aap hi hamari yeh aadat churaeey

suntay hain log piyar may jeetay hain har ker
ham hartay hi jaein ghay jitna haraeey

ham aapkay khuloos ki khushboo may kho ghaey
ab to na door reh kay RIBZ ko sataeey

(RABIA RIBZ)

buhat khoob mashAllah acha likha hai yuunhi likhti rahiye

dua go

azhar munir · **Posted:** Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:49 pm

sameermoon wrote:

cuty wrote:

TUHFA

itnay haseen khwab na mujh ko dikhaeey
may khak ki hoon cheez zamin per bithaeey

tuhfay ki TABI aap say tareef kia karoon
itna hi kam hay isko to jitna sarahiey

kano may ras sa ghol ghai aap ki sada
yoon door door reh kay na ulfat jitaeey

hansna mazak kerna hay aadat hamari dost
kuch aap hi hamari yeh aadat churaeey

suntay hain log piyar may jeetay hain har ker
ham hartay hi jaein ghay jitna haraeey

ham aapkay khuloos ki khushboo may kho ghaey
ab to na door reh kay RIBZ ko sataeey

(RABIA RIBZ)

buhat khoob mashAllah acha likha hai yuunhi likhti rahiye

dua go

sameer moon ji cuty ji thank you buht khoob double mashALLAH please
come on likhty rahain. sub tum sey piar kertey hain sub udas hain

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

miskeen wrote:

2no khobsoorat gazals hen... magar mujhy doosri wali boht achi lagi wh ribz.......... khush rahen... tabs wali raey pehli gazal men sahi he....

:rose:

thanks miskeen
issi terha hosla afzai hoti rahi
to shayad takhleek ka amal jari rahay

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

Masooma wrote:

cuty wrote:

WOH AIK SHAKHS...

kitna zaheen shaks hay MASHA ALLAH kaho
banjer zamin pay apni mohobat jo bo gaya

Wah! Bohat khoobsorat ghazal hai Rabia. Highlighted shair mujhay bohat pasand aya.

arey masooma kahan theen aap
yahan aapki deed ko ankhain taras ghaein
pehlay to may samjhi aap naraz hain
laikin jab ameeq nighahon say mushahida kia to pata chala janaba ghair hazir hain
phir is baychain dil ko zara sukoon mila
thanks for comming
and
apriciation

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

masood_zuberi wrote:

cuty,

tohfa ghazal bhut hee haseen hai .kitnee saadi si aur dilko touch karnewali ghazal hai . yunhee likhtee raho .

thanks masood
ALLAH aap ki masroofiyat ko jaldi achi wali fiursat may tabdeel karey ,aap aey hosla afzai ki bohot shukria
aapkay kalam ki muntazir .RABI

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

maheen_ansari wrote:

mashallah jee ap ke tmam poetry bhut achi hay khas kar kuch gazlain bhut pasand aaien
kush rahie aur liktien rahian

hmm
thanks for comming
yar waisay tum nay abhi sari poetry to nahin perhi hay
goli to na do mujhay

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

sameermoon wrote:

cuty wrote:

TUHFA

itnay haseen khwab na mujh ko dikhaeey
may khak ki hoon cheez zamin per bithaeey

tuhfay ki TABI aap say tareef kia karoon
itna hi kam hay isko to jitna sarahiey

kano may ras sa ghol ghai aap ki sada
yoon door door reh kay na ulfat jitaeey

hansna mazak kerna hay aadat hamari dost
kuch aap hi hamari yeh aadat churaeey

suntay hain log piyar may jeetay hain har ker
ham hartay hi jaein ghay jitna haraeey

ham aapkay khuloos ki khushboo may kho ghaey
ab to na door reh kay RIBZ ko sataeey

(RABIA RIBZ)

buhat khoob mashAllah acha likha hai yuunhi likhti rahiye

dua go

bohot bohot shukria sameer aapkay aanay or poetry pasand kernay ka

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

azhar munir wrote:

sameermoon wrote:

cuty wrote:

TUHFA

itnay haseen khwab na mujh ko dikhaeey
may khak ki hoon cheez zamin per bithaeey

tuhfay ki TABI aap say tareef kia karoon
itna hi kam hay isko to jitna sarahiey

kano may ras sa ghol ghai aap ki sada
yoon door door reh kay na ulfat jitaeey

hansna mazak kerna hay aadat hamari dost
kuch aap hi hamari yeh aadat churaeey

suntay hain log piyar may jeetay hain har ker
ham hartay hi jaein ghay jitna haraeey

ham aapkay khuloos ki khushboo may kho ghaey
ab to na door reh kay RIBZ ko sataeey

(RABIA RIBZ)

buhat khoob mashAllah acha likha hai yuunhi likhti rahiye

dua go

sameer moon ji cuty ji thank you buht khoob double mashALLAH please
come on likhty rahain. sub tum sey piar kertey hain sub udas hain

thanks azher

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

meri 13 sal say 17 sal ki ummer ki poetry

zin di ghi say dil lagana ham nay jana terk kia
teri mehfil may aana jana ham nay jana terk kia

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

meray takhayul ki chor wadi may chukay chupkay wo aa gaya hay
jissay bulaya bhi tha na main nay wo meray dil may sama gaya hay

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

shabnam sharab hay kaliyan sharabi
jo ham hain sharabi to kia hay kharabi

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

ajab sookoon hay samander ki nerm banhon may
her aik chashma ussi may hay zam hoowa jata

sono · **Joined:** Tue Sep 27, 2005 3:41 am **Posts:** 29986

wah Rabia....itni choti omar se itni achi shairy mashaAllah :b)b:

azhar munir · **Posted:** Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:20 pm

cuty wrote:

ajab sookoon hay samander ki nerm banhon may
her aik chashma ussi may hay zam hoowa jata

buhat khoobsoorat sumnder se bhi gahra
i apperciated
take care

azhar munir · **Posted:** Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:27 pm

cuty wrote:

meray takhayul ki chor wadi may chukay chupkay wo aa gaya hay
jissay bulaya bhi tha na main nay wo meray dil may sama gaya hay

buht khub jeeti raho

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

thanks sono and azher

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

rukh say naqab uthaya to dil e dildar kho gaya
phir aftab sherm say gulnar ho gaya

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

ham daikhtay rahay or wo ghoomtay rahay
kalyon ka mun wo bar bar choomtay rahay

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

phoolon kay murjhanay per kalyan sog manati hain
apni apni bari per sab mitti may mil jati hain

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

tera tasawer,teri mohobat,tera karam or teri inayat
yeh char anser hi zindigi may hamain sahara deeay hooey hain

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

hijr ki ik ik ghari sadyon may dhal gai
wo shiddaton say yoon milay keh zindigi badal gai

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

bad e saba say aik din titli nay yoon kaha
apnay hi dosh per too mujh ko ura kay lay ja
ehsan may na bhooloon gi yeh umer bher tera
dikhla day gher to aik bar roza huzur ka

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

mera piyar tum meri taqdeer tum ho
meri arzuon ki tashheer tum ho

yeh sab ko pata hay yeh sab jantay hain
meray beetay lamhon ki tasweer tum ho

zamana na cheenay kahin tum ko mujh say
meray sachay khwabon ki tabeer tum ho

zara such batao kia tum ko pata hay
meray dil ki dherkan may tehreer tum ho

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

abhi abhi may kia hoowa
keh dil say dil juda hoowa

kab hoowa yeh kiwn hoowa
woh door iskader hoowa

yeh kaisa faisla hoowa
yeh kaisa fasla hoowa

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

rat bhi chain say baser na hooi
phir na kehna hamain khaber na hooi

doobtay ham gaey khiyalon may
teri tasweer der ba der na hooi

aaey jo tum meray tasawer may
meri us rat ki seher na hooi

teri furqat may ban gai laila
phir bhi mujh per teri nazer na hooi

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

mohobat ka tarana keh azan e bilali thi
nabuwat ka zamana tha keh taqseem e hilali thi

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

mohobat kay mani kuch hamko batado
kuch ehsas iska dil may jaga do

kisi ko bhi dil main yoonhi tum basa lo
jisay chahay andaz e dilber dikha do

issi ko kia kehtay ho tum sab mohobat
jisay tum dubo do jisay tum tira do

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

kon ankhon may bas ghaya RABI
neend kiwn rat bher nahin aati

Masooma · **Posted:** Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:16 am

cuty wrote:

ham daikhtay rahay or wo ghoomtay rahay
kalyon ka mun wo bar bar choomtay rahay

Ufff!

cuty wrote:

phoolon kay murjhanay per kalyan sog manati hain
apni apni bari per sab mitti may mil jati hain

Ah'ha!

cuty wrote:

hijr ki ik ik ghari sadyon may dhal gai
wo shiddaton say yoon milay keh zindigi badal gai

Wahhh! Aa'la ashaar Rabia. Dil ko chu gayay!

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

thanks masooma

Imran Shanawar · **Joined:** Tue May 12, 2009 9:28 am **Posts:** 142

اچھے اشعار ہیں۔ شکریہ

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

shukria imran

sameermoon · **Posted:** Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:28 pm

cuty wrote:

mohobat kay mani kuch hamko batado
kuch ehsas iska dil may jaga do

kisi ko bhi dil main yoonhi tum basa lo
jisay chahay andaz e dilber dikha do

issi ko kia kehtay ho tum sab mohobat
jisay tum dubo do jisay tum tira do

cuty very nice thoughts aur khoob likha hai
khush raho
dua go

azhar munir · **Posted:** Fri Oct 23, 2009 6:57 pm

cuty wrote:

bad e saba say aik din titli nay yoon kaha
apnay hi dosh per too mujh ko ura kay lay ja
ehsan may na bhooloon gi yeh umer bher tera
dikhla day gher to aik bar roza huzur ka

bohat nek aur achay khyialat hain mey sarhata hon.

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

sameermoon wrote:

cuty wrote:

mohobat kay mani kuch hamko batado
kuch ehsas iska dil may jaga do

kisi ko bhi dil main yoonhi tum basa lo
jisay chahay andaz e dilber dikha do

issi ko kia kehtay ho tum sab mohobat
jisay tum dubo do jisay tum tira do

cuty very nice thoughts aur khoob likha hai
khush raho
dua go

thanks sameer

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

azhar munir wrote:

cuty wrote:

bad e saba say aik din titli nay yoon kaha
apnay hi dosh per too mujh ko ura kay lay ja
ehsan may na bhooloon gi yeh umer bher tera
dikhla day gher to aik bar roza huzur ka

bohat nek aur achay khyialat hain mey sarhata hon.

thanks azher

miskeen · **Posted:** Sat Oct 24, 2009 7:01 am

cuty wrote:

mera piyar tum meri taqdeer tum ho
meri arzuon ki tashheer tum ho

yeh sab ko pata hay yeh sab jantay hain
meray beetay lamhon ki tasweer tum ho

zamana na cheenay kahin tum ko mujh say
meray sachay khwabon ki tabeer tum ho

zara such batao kia tum ko pata hay
meray dil ki dherkan may tehreer tum ho

sub ki sub aala shearing hen. magar iss gazal ny to dil ko hila dia he... boht acha likhtee hen aap... by the way gazal ko poora likhen humen purhny men lutf aata he...

:)O

cuty · **Joined:** Sat Sep 05, 2009 1:09 am **Posts:** 1058

jalal shah yeh meri 13 say 17 sal ki dermiyani umer ki poetry hay uswaqt itni hi likhi thi so itni hi yahan likh di
pasand kernay ka shukria

MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON

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