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| Author: | masood_zuberi [ Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:13 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
cuty, tohfa ghazal bhut hee haseen hai .kitnee saadi si aur dilko touch karnewali ghazal hai . yunhee likhtee raho . |
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| Author: | maheen_ansari [ Wed Oct 21, 2009 12:21 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
mashallah jee ap ke tmam poetry bhut achi hay khas kar kuch gazlain bhut pasand aaien kush rahie aur liktien rahian |
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| Author: | sameermoon [ Wed Oct 21, 2009 6:53 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
cuty wrote: TUHFA itnay haseen khwab na mujh ko dikhaeey may khak ki hoon cheez zamin per bithaeey tuhfay ki TABI aap say tareef kia karoon itna hi kam hay isko to jitna sarahiey kano may ras sa ghol ghai aap ki sada yoon door door reh kay na ulfat jitaeey hansna mazak kerna hay aadat hamari dost kuch aap hi hamari yeh aadat churaeey suntay hain log piyar may jeetay hain har ker ham hartay hi jaein ghay jitna haraeey ham aapkay khuloos ki khushboo may kho ghaey ab to na door reh kay RIBZ ko sataeey (RABIA RIBZ) buhat khoob mashAllah acha likha hai yuunhi likhti rahiye dua go |
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| Author: | azhar munir [ Wed Oct 21, 2009 9:49 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
sameermoon wrote: cuty wrote: TUHFA itnay haseen khwab na mujh ko dikhaeey may khak ki hoon cheez zamin per bithaeey tuhfay ki TABI aap say tareef kia karoon itna hi kam hay isko to jitna sarahiey kano may ras sa ghol ghai aap ki sada yoon door door reh kay na ulfat jitaeey hansna mazak kerna hay aadat hamari dost kuch aap hi hamari yeh aadat churaeey suntay hain log piyar may jeetay hain har ker ham hartay hi jaein ghay jitna haraeey ham aapkay khuloos ki khushboo may kho ghaey ab to na door reh kay RIBZ ko sataeey (RABIA RIBZ) buhat khoob mashAllah acha likha hai yuunhi likhti rahiye dua go sameer moon ji cuty ji thank you buht khoob double mashALLAH please come on likhty rahain. sub tum sey piar kertey hain sub udas hain |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
miskeen wrote: 2no khobsoorat gazals hen... magar mujhy doosri wali boht achi lagi wh ribz.......... khush rahen... tabs wali raey pehli gazal men sahi he....  thanks miskeen issi terha hosla afzai hoti rahi to shayad takhleek ka amal jari rahay |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:36 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
Masooma wrote: cuty wrote: WOH AIK SHAKHS... kitna zaheen shaks hay MASHA ALLAH kaho banjer zamin pay apni mohobat jo bo gaya Wah! Bohat khoobsorat ghazal hai Rabia. Highlighted shair mujhay bohat pasand aya. arey masooma kahan theen aap yahan aapki deed ko ankhain taras ghaein pehlay to may samjhi aap naraz hain laikin jab ameeq nighahon say mushahida kia to pata chala janaba ghair hazir hain phir is baychain dil ko zara sukoon mila thanks for comming and apriciation |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:40 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
masood_zuberi wrote: cuty, tohfa ghazal bhut hee haseen hai .kitnee saadi si aur dilko touch karnewali ghazal hai . yunhee likhtee raho . thanks masood ALLAH aap ki masroofiyat ko jaldi achi wali fiursat may tabdeel karey ,aap aey hosla afzai ki bohot shukria aapkay kalam ki muntazir .RABI |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:43 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
maheen_ansari wrote: mashallah jee ap ke tmam poetry bhut achi hay khas kar kuch gazlain bhut pasand aaien kush rahie aur liktien rahian hmm thanks for comming yar waisay tum nay abhi sari poetry to nahin perhi hay goli to na do mujhay |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:45 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
sameermoon wrote: cuty wrote: TUHFA itnay haseen khwab na mujh ko dikhaeey may khak ki hoon cheez zamin per bithaeey tuhfay ki TABI aap say tareef kia karoon itna hi kam hay isko to jitna sarahiey kano may ras sa ghol ghai aap ki sada yoon door door reh kay na ulfat jitaeey hansna mazak kerna hay aadat hamari dost kuch aap hi hamari yeh aadat churaeey suntay hain log piyar may jeetay hain har ker ham hartay hi jaein ghay jitna haraeey ham aapkay khuloos ki khushboo may kho ghaey ab to na door reh kay RIBZ ko sataeey (RABIA RIBZ) buhat khoob mashAllah acha likha hai yuunhi likhti rahiye dua go bohot bohot shukria sameer aapkay aanay or poetry pasand kernay ka |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:48 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
azhar munir wrote: sameermoon wrote: cuty wrote: TUHFA itnay haseen khwab na mujh ko dikhaeey may khak ki hoon cheez zamin per bithaeey tuhfay ki TABI aap say tareef kia karoon itna hi kam hay isko to jitna sarahiey kano may ras sa ghol ghai aap ki sada yoon door door reh kay na ulfat jitaeey hansna mazak kerna hay aadat hamari dost kuch aap hi hamari yeh aadat churaeey suntay hain log piyar may jeetay hain har ker ham hartay hi jaein ghay jitna haraeey ham aapkay khuloos ki khushboo may kho ghaey ab to na door reh kay RIBZ ko sataeey (RABIA RIBZ) buhat khoob mashAllah acha likha hai yuunhi likhti rahiye dua go sameer moon ji cuty ji thank you buht khoob double mashALLAH please come on likhty rahain. sub tum sey piar kertey hain sub udas hain thanks azher |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:14 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
meri 13 sal say 17 sal ki ummer ki poetry zin di ghi say dil lagana ham nay jana terk kia
teri mehfil may aana jana ham nay jana terk kia |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:16 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
meray takhayul ki chor wadi may chukay chupkay wo aa gaya hay
jissay bulaya bhi tha na main nay wo meray dil may sama gaya hay |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:24 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
shabnam sharab hay kaliyan sharabi
jo ham hain sharabi to kia hay kharabi |
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| Author: | cuty [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:26 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
ajab sookoon hay samander ki nerm banhon may
her aik chashma ussi may hay zam hoowa jata |
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| Author: | sono [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 6:54 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
wah Rabia....itni choti omar se itni achi shairy mashaAllah 
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| Author: | azhar munir [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:20 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
cuty wrote: ajab sookoon hay samander ki nerm banhon may her aik chashma ussi may hay zam hoowa jata buhat khoobsoorat sumnder se bhi gahra i apperciated take care |
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| Author: | azhar munir [ Thu Oct 22, 2009 10:27 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
cuty wrote: meray takhayul ki chor wadi may chukay chupkay wo aa gaya hay jissay bulaya bhi tha na main nay wo meray dil may sama gaya hay buht khub jeeti raho |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:49 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
thanks sono and azher |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:51 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
rukh say naqab uthaya to dil e dildar kho gaya
phir aftab sherm say gulnar ho gaya |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:53 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
ham daikhtay rahay or wo ghoomtay rahay
kalyon ka mun wo bar bar choomtay rahay |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:55 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
phoolon kay murjhanay per kalyan sog manati hain
apni apni bari per sab mitti may mil jati hain |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 2:58 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
tera tasawer,teri mohobat,tera karam or teri inayat
yeh char anser hi zindigi may hamain sahara deeay hooey hain |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
hijr ki ik ik ghari sadyon may dhal gai
wo shiddaton say yoon milay keh zindigi badal gai |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:04 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
bad e saba say aik din titli nay yoon kaha
apnay hi dosh per too mujh ko ura kay lay ja ehsan may na bhooloon gi yeh umer bher tera dikhla day gher to aik bar roza huzur ka |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:11 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
mera piyar tum meri taqdeer tum ho
meri arzuon ki tashheer tum ho yeh sab ko pata hay yeh sab jantay hain meray beetay lamhon ki tasweer tum ho zamana na cheenay kahin tum ko mujh say meray sachay khwabon ki tabeer tum ho zara such batao kia tum ko pata hay meray dil ki dherkan may tehreer tum ho |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:13 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
abhi abhi may kia hoowa
keh dil say dil juda hoowa kab hoowa yeh kiwn hoowa woh door iskader hoowa yeh kaisa faisla hoowa yeh kaisa fasla hoowa |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:19 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
rat bhi chain say baser na hooi
phir na kehna hamain khaber na hooi doobtay ham gaey khiyalon may teri tasweer der ba der na hooi aaey jo tum meray tasawer may meri us rat ki seher na hooi teri furqat may ban gai laila phir bhi mujh per teri nazer na hooi |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:21 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
mohobat ka tarana keh azan e bilali thi nabuwat ka zamana tha keh taqseem e hilali thi |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:26 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
mohobat kay mani kuch hamko batado
kuch ehsas iska dil may jaga do kisi ko bhi dil main yoonhi tum basa lo jisay chahay andaz e dilber dikha do issi ko kia kehtay ho tum sab mohobat jisay tum dubo do jisay tum tira do |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 3:27 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
kon ankhon may bas ghaya RABI
neend kiwn rat bher nahin aati |
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| Author: | Masooma [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 4:16 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
cuty wrote: ham daikhtay rahay or wo ghoomtay rahay kalyon ka mun wo bar bar choomtay rahay Ufff! cuty wrote: phoolon kay murjhanay per kalyan sog manati hain apni apni bari per sab mitti may mil jati hain Ah'ha! cuty wrote: hijr ki ik ik ghari sadyon may dhal gai wo shiddaton say yoon milay keh zindigi badal gai Wahhh! Aa'la ashaar Rabia. Dil ko chu gayay! |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:11 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
thanks masooma |
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| Author: | Imran Shanawar [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:22 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
اچھے اشعار ہیں۔ شکریہ |
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| Author: | cuty [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 5:23 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
shukria imran |
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| Author: | sameermoon [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 1:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
cuty wrote: mohobat kay mani kuch hamko batado kuch ehsas iska dil may jaga do kisi ko bhi dil main yoonhi tum basa lo jisay chahay andaz e dilber dikha do issi ko kia kehtay ho tum sab mohobat jisay tum dubo do jisay tum tira do cuty very nice thoughts aur khoob likha hai khush raho dua go |
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| Author: | azhar munir [ Fri Oct 23, 2009 6:57 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
cuty wrote: bad e saba say aik din titli nay yoon kaha apnay hi dosh per too mujh ko ura kay lay ja ehsan may na bhooloon gi yeh umer bher tera dikhla day gher to aik bar roza huzur ka bohat nek aur achay khyialat hain mey sarhata hon. |
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| Author: | cuty [ Sat Oct 24, 2009 2:30 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
sameermoon wrote: cuty wrote: mohobat kay mani kuch hamko batado kuch ehsas iska dil may jaga do kisi ko bhi dil main yoonhi tum basa lo jisay chahay andaz e dilber dikha do issi ko kia kehtay ho tum sab mohobat jisay tum dubo do jisay tum tira do cuty very nice thoughts aur khoob likha hai khush raho dua go thanks sameer |
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| Author: | cuty [ Sat Oct 24, 2009 2:31 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
azhar munir wrote: cuty wrote: bad e saba say aik din titli nay yoon kaha apnay hi dosh per too mujh ko ura kay lay ja ehsan may na bhooloon gi yeh umer bher tera dikhla day gher to aik bar roza huzur ka bohat nek aur achay khyialat hain mey sarhata hon. thanks azher |
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| Author: | miskeen [ Sat Oct 24, 2009 7:01 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
cuty wrote: mera piyar tum meri taqdeer tum ho meri arzuon ki tashheer tum ho yeh sab ko pata hay yeh sab jantay hain meray beetay lamhon ki tasweer tum ho zamana na cheenay kahin tum ko mujh say meray sachay khwabon ki tabeer tum ho zara such batao kia tum ko pata hay meray dil ki dherkan may tehreer tum ho sub ki sub aala shearing hen. magar iss gazal ny to dil ko hila dia he... boht acha likhtee hen aap... by the way gazal ko poora likhen humen purhny men lutf aata he... 
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| Author: | cuty [ Sat Oct 24, 2009 1:05 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON |
jalal shah yeh meri 13 say 17 sal ki dermiyani umer ki poetry hay uswaqt itni hi likhi thi so itni hi yahan likh di pasand kernay ka shukria |
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