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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON  Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 3:22 am |
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MULAQAT kiskader khamoshiyon say aap dil may aa ghaey
janay kia kuch soch ker ham aap say sherma ghaey
yak bayak jhuk ghai nazer or kanptay hain hath bhi
aap jo aaey achanak ham bohot ghabra ghaey
ik nazer tirchi jo dali aap nay ham per janab
bay khaber masoom dil ko bay terha terpa ghaey
seedha sadha ab talak ham aap ko samjhay rahay
teer terkash may kahan say aap kay yeh aaghaey
aaj jo tanha hamain paya unhon nay ay RIBZ
jan ker moqa ghanimat hal-e-dil batla ghaey
ABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 6:06 am |
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kuch na us nay kaha tha janay kion
dil dharaknay laga tha jaanay kion
door mujh say tha, par khayalon main
woh qareeb aagaya tha jaanay kion
aaj keh dega haal-e-dil mujh say
yoon mujhay lag raha tha jaanay kion
go bohat say haseen thay mehfil main
dil usay dhoondta tha jaanay kion
sonia main nay baarha dekha
woh mujhay dekhta tha jaanay kion
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:44 am |
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sonia apne chhoti beher main khubsurat ghazal kahi hai . daad qabool karen .
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:46 am |
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cuty wrote: GAZAL kiskader khamoshiyon say aap dil may aa ghaey
janay kia kuch soch ker ham aap say sherma ghaey
yak bayak jhuk ghai nazer or kanptay hain hath bhi
aap jo aaey achanak ham bohot ghabra ghaey
ik nazer tirchi jo dali aap nay ham per janab
bay khaber masoom dil ko bay terha terpa ghaey
seedha sadha ab talak ham aap ko samjhay rahay
teer terkash may kahan say aap kay yeh aaghaey
aaj jo tanha hamain paya unhon nay ay RIBZ
jan ker moqa ghanimat hal-e-dil batla ghaey
(RABIA RIBZ) bhut sada magar bhut achhi ghazal hai . daad deta hun qabool karen
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Nahi Maloom Kyun likhta Raha hun
Hikayat-e-junoon likhta raha hun
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Thu Oct 01, 2009 1:40 pm |
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thanks masood
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 4:03 am |
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cuty,
hi cuty . hw r u .ihave seen ur poems .all are superb .i pray for u and hope u wiil keep writng like it .wisal and ishq ne to dil ko chhu liya
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 5:32 am |
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cuty wrote: CHAR DIN KAY KEHKAHAY LAY JAEEY char din kay kehkahay or dil lagi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap to yeh zindagi lay jaeey
meray ashkon per na jaein yeh to yoonhi behtay hain
meray honton per damakti her khushi lay jaeeay
in khanakti chooriyon kay gungunanay ki sada
meri payal ki sharabi bay khudi lay jaeeay
jo nahin hain aap to main is jahan ko kia karoon
meri aankhon main chamakti her khushi lay jaeeay
ja rahay hain aap jab apni RIBZ ko chor ker
aanay walay her lamhay ki aagahi lay jaeeay
(RABIA RIBZ)
Bohat hi Umdah. excellent
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 5:35 am |
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bohot nawazish masood and desire
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 5:40 am |
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roothay ho kiwn hay sawal koi bataeey
na yoon nazrain ham say churaeey
deen wazahatain her ik bat ki
bas ab rooth ker to na jaeey
nahin dil bhi ab to sanbhal raha
meray dost man jaeey
ghai sa aton ka hi wasta
nahin doosra koi rasta
bas ab nakhray yoon na dikhaeey
meray dost lot ker aaeey
nahin seh sakay gha yeh bay rukhi
dil e muztarib may hay sadghi
mujhay khonay say pehlay hi paeey
bas ab door RIBZ say na jaeey
(RABIA RIBZ)
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banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 5:49 am |
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BAYTABI un ko hamari yad na aaey to kia karain
dil ko kisi ki bat na bhaey to kia karain
ham eitaraf e ishq may jan say ghuzer ghaey
un ki nazer may phir bhi na aaey to kia karain
dil say kaha hazar keh majboor wo bhi hain
gher bay qarari dil ki na jaey to kia karain
ham poochtay hain un ko bhula bhi dia agher
phir bhi jo ham ko chain na aaey to kia karain
ik iztarabi kaifiyat hay her lamha RABI
keh kay bhi is dafa wo na aaey to kia karain
(RABIA RIBZ)
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khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 6:12 am |
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BAYRUKHI meray koochay say aaker wo chalay jaein to kia kahiey
shakal ko phir bhi unki ham taras jaein to kia kahiey
may unki hoon wo meray hain bas itni si tamana hay
yehi ik bat baton may wo keh jaein to kia kahiey
ilahi roothna unka kahan berdasht may mayri
jafaein unki seh seh ker jo mer jaein to kia kahiey
khuda un ko wafa day day mujhay aisi dawa dayday
keh unki ik tajalli say jo jee jaein to kia kahiey
RIBZ keh day koi ja ker keh dam lab per ruka aaker
yehi do char gheryan hain jo seh jaein to kia kahiey
(RABIA RIBZ)
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khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 10:43 am |
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cuty,
hi cuty
hum to shair type bande hain . ab tak zindagi mein jo expierience huwa wo likh diya . hamaree tamam nek khawahishat aur duaen apke saath hein
app khush rahen aur khub khub likhen
take care of ur self
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Hikayat-e-junoon likhta raha hun
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 5:43 pm |
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cuty wrote: roothay ho kiwn hay sawal koi bataeey
na yoon nazrain ham say churaeey
deen wazahatain her ik bat ki
bas ab rooth ker to na jaeey
nahin dil bhi ab to sanbhal raha
meray dost man jaeey
ghai sa aton ka hi wasta
nahin doosra koi rasta
bas ab nakhray yoon na dikhaeey
meray dost lot ker aaeey
nahin seh sakay gha yeh bay rukhi
dil e muztarib may hay sadghi
mujhay khonay say pehlay hi paeey
bas ab door RIBZ say na jaeey
(RABIA RIBZ)
Kya baat hai...Bohat hi khobsorat andaz....dil main utr gaya... Bohat si daad qabool kijiye....
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 5:48 pm |
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cuty wrote: BAYTABI un ko hamari yad na aaey to kia karain
dil ko kisi ki bat na bhaey to kia karain
ham eitaraf e ishq may jan say ghuzer ghaey
un ki nazer may phir bhi na aaey to kia karain
dil say kaha hazar keh majboor wo bhi hain
gher bay qarari dil ki na jaey to kia karain
ham poochtay hain un ko bhula bhi dia agher
phir bhi jo ham ko chain na aaey to kia karain
ik iztarabi kaifiyat hay her lamha RABI
keh kay bhi is dafa wo na aaey to kia karain
(RABIA RIBZ) Wah! Ribz kamal kardiya.....bohat hi khobsorat...bohat shandar.... ham eitaraf e ishq may jan say ghuzer ghaey un ki nazer may phir bhi na aaey to kia karain dil say kaha hazar keh majboor wo bhi hain gher bay qarari dil ki na jaey to kia karain Bohat hi khobsorat ashaar hain... bohat si daad qabool kijiye.... Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 6:24 pm |
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cuty wrote: BAYRUKHI meray koochay say aaker wo chalay jaein to kia kahiey
shakal ko phir bhi unki ham taras jaein to kia kahiey
may unki hoon wo meray hain bas itni si tamana hay
yehi ik bat baton may wo keh jaein to kia kahiey
ilahi roothna unka kahan berdasht may mayri
jafaein unki seh seh ker jo mer jaein to kia kahiey
khuda un ko wafa day day mujhay aisi dawa dayday
keh unki ik tajalli say jo jee jaein to kia kahiey
RIBZ keh day koi ja ker keh dam lab per ruka aaker
yehi do char gheryan hain jo seh jaein to kia kahiey
(RABIA RIBZ)
Allah ye kalam ki barish.....Subhan Allah, aaj kal to khoob amad ho rahi hai aur wo bhi bohat khobsorat.....Kya ghazal kasheed ki hai aap ne bohat hi khobsorat....beshumar daad qabool kijiye.... Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Mon Oct 05, 2009 9:43 pm |
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itni khubsoorat ghazal par dhairon daad rabia. Aik do baatain main aap ko zuroor kehna chahoon gi ke yeh wala sher: meray koochay say aaker wo chalay jaein to kia kahiey shakal ko phir bhi unki ham taras jaein to kia kahiey iss main Shakal lafz sahee naheen hai, issay shakl likhain tou thoda sa bewazan ho raha hai. Issay dobara kahiye.
may unki hoon wo meray hain bas itni si tamana hay
yehi ik bat baton may wo keh jaein to kia kahieyKya khoob, wah!!!ilahi roothna unka kahan berdasht may mayri Iss main bardasht ka t naheen aa raha, koi aur lafz use kar ke daikhain
jafaein unki seh seh ker jo mer jaein to kia kahieykhuda un ko wafa day day mujhay aisi dawa dayday keh unki ik tajalli say jo jee jaein to kia kahiey Bohot achay!!!RIBZ keh day koi ja ker keh dam lab per ruka aaker yehi do char gheryan hain jo seh jaein to kia kahiey Yahan par (RIBZ) bewazan ho raha issay bhi dobara kahiye jaise ke
Koi jaa kar yeh keh day RIBZ, dam lab par ruka aa karyehi do char gheryan hain jo seh jaein to kia kahiey (RABIA RIBZ) Bohot si daad!!! 
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 3:21 am |
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masood_zuberi wrote: cuty,
hi cuty
hum to shair type bande hain . ab tak zindagi mein jo expierience huwa wo likh diya . hamaree tamam nek khawahishat aur duaen apke saath hein
app khush rahen aur khub khub likhen
take care of ur self shukria masood keh aap apnay qeemti waqt may say waqt nikal ker meray thread may aatay hain,meri poetry ko sarahtay hain 
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khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 3:29 am |
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tabs wrote: cuty wrote: roothay ho kiwn hay sawal koi bataeey
na yoon nazrain ham say churaeey
deen wazahatain her ik bat ki
bas ab rooth ker to na jaeey
nahin dil bhi ab to sanbhal raha
meray dost man jaeey
ghai sa aton ka hi wasta
nahin doosra koi rasta
bas ab nakhray yoon na dikhaeey
meray dost lot ker aaeey
nahin seh sakay gha yeh bay rukhi
dil e muztarib may hay sadghi
mujhay khonay say pehlay hi paeey
bas ab door RIBZ say na jaeey
(RABIA RIBZ)
Kya baat hai...Bohat hi khobsorat andaz....dil main utr gaya... Bohat si daad qabool kijiye.... thanks tabassum
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khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 3:30 am |
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tabs wrote: cuty wrote: BAYTABI un ko hamari yad na aaey to kia karain
dil ko kisi ki bat na bhaey to kia karain
ham eitaraf e ishq may jan say ghuzer ghaey
un ki nazer may phir bhi na aaey to kia karain
dil say kaha hazar keh majboor wo bhi hain
gher bay qarari dil ki na jaey to kia karain
ham poochtay hain un ko bhula bhi dia agher
phir bhi jo ham ko chain na aaey to kia karain
ik iztarabi kaifiyat hay her lamha RABI
keh kay bhi is dafa wo na aaey to kia karain
(RABIA RIBZ) Wah! Ribz kamal kardiya.....bohat hi khobsorat...bohat shandar.... ham eitaraf e ishq may jan say ghuzer ghaey un ki nazer may phir bhi na aaey to kia karain dil say kaha hazar keh majboor wo bhi hain gher bay qarari dil ki na jaey to kia karain Bohat hi khobsorat ashaar hain... bohat si daad qabool kijiye.... Tabassum shukria janab
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khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 3:33 am |
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tabs wrote: cuty wrote: BAYRUKHI meray koochay say aaker wo chalay jaein to kia kahiey
shakal ko phir bhi unki ham taras jaein to kia kahiey
may unki hoon wo meray hain bas itni si tamana hay
yehi ik bat baton may wo keh jaein to kia kahiey
ilahi roothna unka kahan berdasht may mayri
jafaein unki seh seh ker jo mer jaein to kia kahiey
khuda un ko wafa day day mujhay aisi dawa dayday
keh unki ik tajalli say jo jee jaein to kia kahiey
RIBZ keh day koi ja ker keh dam lab per ruka aaker
yehi do char gheryan hain jo seh jaein to kia kahiey
(RABIA RIBZ)
Allah ye kalam ki barish.....Subhan Allah, aaj kal to khoob amad ho rahi hai aur wo bhi bohat khobsorat.....Kya ghazal kasheed ki hai aap ne bohat hi khobsorat....beshumar daad qabool kijiye.... Tabassum bas kia karain shairy ka derya baha to behta hi chala ghaya ham band bandhtay hi reh ghay nawazish isqader pasand kernay kay liey
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khwahish machal rahi hey rabi key dil main yehi
banhon main hum hon unki nadya ka ho kinara
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 3:44 am |
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seemanaqvi wrote: itni khubsoorat ghazal par dhairon daad rabia. Aik do baatain main aap ko zuroor kehna chahoon gi ke yeh wala sher: meray koochay say aaker wo chalay jaein to kia kahiey shakal ko phir bhi unki ham taras jaein to kia kahiey iss main Shakal lafz sahee naheen hai, issay shakl likhain tou thoda sa bewazan ho raha hai. Issay dobara kahiye.
may unki hoon wo meray hain bas itni si tamana hay
yehi ik bat baton may wo keh jaein to kia kahieyKya khoob, wah!!!ilahi roothna unka kahan berdasht may mayri Iss main bardasht ka t naheen aa raha, koi aur lafz use kar ke daikhain
jafaein unki seh seh ker jo mer jaein to kia kahieykhuda un ko wafa day day mujhay aisi dawa dayday keh unki ik tajalli say jo jee jaein to kia kahiey Bohot achay!!!RIBZ keh day koi ja ker keh dam lab per ruka aaker yehi do char gheryan hain jo seh jaein to kia kahiey Yahan par (RIBZ) bewazan ho raha issay bhi dobara kahiye jaise ke
Koi jaa kar yeh keh day RIBZ, dam lab par ruka aa karyehi do char gheryan hain jo seh jaein to kia kahiey (RABIA RIBZ) Bohot si daad!!! CHASHM E MA ROSHAN DIL E MA SHAD may kia bataoon keh mujhay kitni khushi ho rahi hay keh aapnay meray thread may qadam ranjah fermaya meri bohot izzat afzai hay keh meri ghazlain aapki nighah e naz say ghuzreen or dad bhi pa ghaeen aapki tashreef awri ka bay intaha shukria
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 7:02 am |
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NARAZGHI yeh dil muztarib hay yeh kaisay kahin ham
teri bayniyazi ko kaisay sahain ham
yoon tujh may uter jaein ham sans banker
teray dil may khoon ki terha say bahain ham
bohot hi kathin hay mohobat ki wadi
magher yeh bata day keh kaisay bachain ham
jo ki dosti hay to ab sath bhi day
kiwn ham per sitam yeh keh tanha rahain ham
na rakhay ghi ab RIBZ tujh say taluq
nahin kam koi keh tujh per marain ham
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 7:53 am |
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Superb jee, tmam ke tmam bhut umda hain. nice work!
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 12:04 pm |
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cuty wrote: BAYTABI un ko hamari yad na aaey to kia karain
dil ko kisi ki bat na bhaey to kia karain
ham eitaraf e ishq may jan say ghuzer ghaey
un ki nazer may phir bhi na aaey to kia karain
dil say kaha hazar keh majboor wo bhi hain
gher bay qarari dil ki na jaey to kia karain
ham poochtay hain un ko bhula bhi dia agher
phir bhi jo ham ko chain na aaey to kia karain
ik iztarabi kaifiyat hay her lamha RABI
keh kay bhi is dafa wo na aaey to kia karain
(RABIA RIBZ) buhut khoobsorat ash'aar 
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Tue Oct 06, 2009 1:51 pm |
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Jo AatiSh fiShan hum yahan daikh rahy hain uss sy halat aur ehsaasat ki uss hiDdat ka pata milta hai jis ne iss LaAwY ko janam dia. Meri dua hai keh ap ki sari khawahshen poori hon. Bohat hi umda izharia hai aap ka. keep sharing.
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:39 am |
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maheen_ansari wrote: Superb jee, tmam ke tmam bhut umda hain. nice work! maheen_ansari, aapko mujhay aapnay thread may daikh ker kitni khushi ho rahi hay may bata nahin sakti,may aapki mazahiya shairy ki maddah hoon. shukria aap aaey or mera kalam pasand kia.
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:43 am |
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*MYSTERIOUS* wrote: cuty wrote: BAYTABI un ko hamari yad na aaey to kia karain
dil ko kisi ki bat na bhaey to kia karain
ham eitaraf e ishq may jan say ghuzer ghaey
un ki nazer may phir bhi na aaey to kia karain
dil say kaha hazar keh majboor wo bhi hain
gher bay qarari dil ki na jaey to kia karain
ham poochtay hain un ko bhula bhi dia agher
phir bhi jo ham ko chain na aaey to kia karain
ik iztarabi kaifiyat hay her lamha RABI
keh kay bhi is dafa wo na aaey to kia karain
(RABIA RIBZ) buhut khoobsorat ash'aar aapka meray thread may aana or kalam ko sarahna ,meray liey intehai izzat afzai ki bat hay, bohot shukria.
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:45 am |
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 2:55 am |
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bay herf khat sadah say khat may too nay kia kia payam bhaijay
kitnay haseen jazbay likh meray nam bhaijay
bay herf khat tha wo ya tehreer thi shaghufta
poochay yeh mujh say koi kia kia inaam bhaijay
her lamha unki khatir behlaein dil jo mera
ehsas kay shaghufta bandi ghulam bhaijay
wo meray dil ka malik mujh say qareeb ter hay
her khat may wo to yaro mujh ko salam bhaijay
kasid ka shukria ho jazbat ko jila di
saday safhey pey likh ker unkay kalam bhaijay
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 3:07 am |
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SANGH KA INSAN may nay ik sangh kay insan say mohobat ki hay
sal ha sal ki rasmon say baghawat ki hay
sangh say phorna ser ko hay muqader tehra
janay kia soch kay pather say rifaqat ki hay
us nay her lamha may bakhsha hay naya dukh mujh ko
her qayamat pey nai aik qayamat ki hay
may nay chaha hay ussay rooh ki ghehrai say
us bay meher pey ham nay yeh inayat ki hay
us nay jazbon ko bhi dolat may hay tola RABI
us nay kia soch kay toheen e mohobat ki hay
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 4:39 am |
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cuty wrote: SANGH KA INSAN may nay ik sangh kay insan say mohobat ki hay
sal ha sal ki rasmon say baghawat ki hay
sangh say phorna ser ko hay muqader tehra
janay kia soch kay pather say rifaqat ki hay
us nay her lamha may bakhsha hay naya dukh mujh ko
her qayamat pey nai aik qayamat ki hay
may nay chaha hay ussay rooh ki ghehrai say
us bay meher pey ham nay yeh inayat ki hay
us nay jazbon ko tarazoo may hay tola RABI
us nay kia soch kay toheen e mohobat ki hay
(RABIA RIBZ)
bhut bhut khub ha i apka kalam .daad leejiye aur khush rahen
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:18 am |
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thanks masood
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 5:54 am |
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HAYA kabhi door chalay jatay ho
kabhi pas chalay aatay ho
nazron ko churatay ho
anchal ko churatay ho
her bat pay bandish hay
kiwn ham ko satatay ho
ankhon may agher jhankain
cheray ko jhukatay ho
ger pas jo baitain to
tum kitna lijatay ho
ham dil ko kahan lay jaein
kiwn lamhay bitatay ho
mushkil say milay ho ab
kuch bat bhi ker lo na
tum sirf hamaray ho
iqrar bhi kerlo na
kiwn honton pay ik ghehri
khamoshi sajatay ho
ham jantay hain dil may
kia bat tumharay hay
chehray say chupatay ho
ankhon say batatay ho
ab bas bhi karo jana
kiwn ham ko rulatay ho
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 8:33 am |
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cuty wrote: SANGH KA INSAN may nay ik sangh kay insan say mohobat ki hay
sal ha sal ki rasmon say baghawat ki hay
sangh say phorna ser ko hay muqader tehra
janay kia soch kay pather say rifaqat ki hay
us nay her lamha may bakhsha hay naya dukh mujh ko
her qayamat pey nai aik qayamat ki hay
may nay chaha hay ussay rooh ki ghehrai say
us bay meher pey ham nay yeh inayat ki hay
us nay jazbon ko bhi dolat may hay tola RABI
us nay kia soch kay toheen e mohobat ki hay
(RABIA RIBZ)
bara cofidence hai ; usne kya soch k tauheen-e- mohabbat ki hai wah wah
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 11:16 am |
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cuty wrote: *MYSTERIOUS* wrote: cuty wrote: BAYTABI un ko hamari yad na aaey to kia karain
dil ko kisi ki bat na bhaey to kia karain
ham eitaraf e ishq may jan say ghuzer ghaey
un ki nazer may phir bhi na aaey to kia karain
dil say kaha hazar keh majboor wo bhi hain
gher bay qarari dil ki na jaey to kia karain
ham poochtay hain un ko bhula bhi dia agher
phir bhi jo ham ko chain na aaey to kia karain
ik iztarabi kaifiyat hay her lamha RABI
keh kay bhi is dafa wo na aaey to kia karain
(RABIA RIBZ) buhut khoobsorat ash'aar aapka meray thread may aana or kalam ko sarahna ,meray liey intehai izzat afzai ki bat hay, bohot shukria. hum etraf-e-ishq mein jan se guzar gaye unki nazar mein phir bhi n aaye to kya karen bhut khub . itna piyara shair .maza agya daad daad data hun
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 11:23 am |
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cuty wrote: HAYA kabhi door chalay jatay ho
kabhi pas chalay aatay ho
nazron ko churatay ho
anchal ko churatay ho
her bat pay bandish hay
kiwn ham ko satatay ho
ankhon may agher jhankain
cheray ko jhukatay ho
ger pas jo baitain to
tum kitna lijatay ho
ham dil ko kahan lay jaein
kiwn lamhay bitatay ho
apki ye nazam bhut khubsurat hai .bara besakhtapan aur sadgi hai .reader kho jata hai .itni kam umree main esa kalam. khush raho
mushkil say milay ho ab
kuch bat bhi ker lo na
tum sirf hamaray ho
iqrar bhi kerlo na
kiwn honton pay ik ghehri
khamoshi sajatay ho
ham jantay hain dil may
kia bat tumharay hay
chehray say chupatay ho
ankhon say batatay ho
ab bas bhi karo jana
kiwn ham ko rulatay ho
(RABIA RIBZ)
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Wed Oct 07, 2009 11:30 am |
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cuty wrote: bay herf khat sadah say khat may too nay kia kia payam bhaijay
kitnay haseen jazbay likh meray nam bhaijay
bay herf khat tha wo ya tehreer thi shaghufta
poochay yeh mujh say koi kia kia inaam bhaijay
her lamha unki khatir behlaein dil jo mera
ehsas kay shaghufta bandi ghulam bhaijay
wo meray dil ka malik mujh say qareeb ter hay
her khat may wo to yaro mujh ko salam bhaijay
kasid ka shukria ho jazbat ko jila di
saday safhey pey likh ker unkay kalam bhaijay
(RABIA RIBZ) ye ghazal bari classic touch liye huwe hai , bhut pyari hai .qasid ka zikr bare khubsurat andaz mein kiya hai . ghalib aour meer ne bhi qasid ka khub khub tazkara kiya hai . superb ,
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 1:05 am |
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thank you so much Masood
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Post subject: Re: MAY TUM SAY PIYAR KERTI HOON Posted: Thu Oct 08, 2009 12:46 pm |
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subahh wrote: rabia ribz
aj apki shairy pay tawajah ki ...khub likhti hain par unwan o mouzu aek sa hi hae her kalam main ...judai sanum ki bewafai ...kuch aur terz ke mouzuat pay bhi likhnay ki koshish kerain....intezar rahaiga
khush rahain
subah.. aapki tashreef awri or pasandeedghi ka shukria abhi dil kay jis mosam say guzer rahi hoon wohi likh rahi hoon jab gham e jana say gham e doran may aaoon ghi to wo likhoon ghi
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