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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry  Posted: Thu Dec 20, 2012 11:40 am |
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thanks .. mys jee  azharam jee hifa  humyra
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Fri Dec 21, 2012 1:44 am |
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 3:08 am |
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Zeest.sun wrote: chan vargay
sonay mukhry tay
gustakh nazr na paya kar
onon vaikh ae dil di thrkan
tuun aieven na ruk jaya karzeest.sun  bohat khoobsurat
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Mon Jan 28, 2013 1:56 pm |
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Zeest.sun wrote: chan vargay
sonay mukhry tay
gustakh nazr na paya kar
onon vaikh ae dil di thrkan
tuun aieven na ruk jaya karzeest.sun uff... zeeshu .....kamal kr dita ji  boht khuub
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Thu Apr 25, 2013 1:04 pm |
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Zeest.sun wrote: chan vargay
sonay mukhry tay
gustakh nazr na paya kar
onon vaikh ae dil di thrkan
tuun aieven na ruk jaya karzeest.sun huunr is ich dil da ki qusoor  qusoor te saara oss chan vargy muukhrre da ae..  Nice poetry tsyZ as always 
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Mon Jul 01, 2013 9:05 pm |
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Wed Jul 03, 2013 9:17 am |
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Zeest.sun wrote:  chulay day vich
paie mohbat
tanay kinay daie mohbat
sada chain,sakoon tay neendar
sanu wapas daie mohbat
jerahy aiday naz othavan
othay ja k raie mohbat
poetry/zeest.sunsada chain,sakoon tay neendar sanu wapas daie mohbat wahh wahh Noor G aiy ki keh ditta jay wahhhh sawaad a gaya g
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 1:52 pm |
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Zeest.sun wrote: bhul jana os shkas nu
kina muskil lag da a..
sade kolon neend
sakoon tay chain jo
thagda ae.....
aiven khvaban vich aa k
o galan karda ae...
koi bhla ae puchay sada ki o
lagda ae....
zinda lokan nu tay sare
yad hi karday va...
moie nu bhul janday va
dastoor ae jag da ae...
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Aje addaa hi thread twaaDa paDhya e. BaDee jaan ai twaadi likhaayi vich...... zeest ji.Waise te saariyaN nazmaaN baut hi umda hain, lekin ai nazm uppar wali khaas dil nuN lggi ai.....Baaki da thread vi paDh ke pher haazir howangaa. Khush rawo......
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Sat Dec 21, 2013 11:07 am |
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mazher ji thiz is my own poetry thread ap nay yahan sahir kya y?
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Tue May 13, 2014 5:28 pm |
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shukr hay koi tu aya thanks sahil main tu bhol hi gai k min punjabi poetry b krti hon thanks alot
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Tue May 13, 2014 6:32 pm |
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nice poems here,,,
I would like to share some thoughts with y'all!
thanks
mere watan diyaan uchyaan shanaan
uchha ohda jhanda
maara maari bum dhamake
loakee banaya dhanda
Jhoot dee roti jithay pakkay
Chor jinhaan noon Khaawan
aap te o barbaad ne laikin
wasyaan noo'n pae ujaran
dharti te maa'n hondi vay
dhee puttar ohde vaasi
maa'n noo'n khushian devan wale
vund-de phiran udaasi
bud nazraan to saanu bachaveen
meraya sohne Rabba
Lakhaan jaana'n de ke saanu
apna thoar vay labhya
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Wed May 14, 2014 1:29 pm |
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Zeest.sun wrote: shukr hay koi tu aya thanks sahil main tu bhol hi gai k min punjabi poetry b krti hon thanks alot
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Tue May 20, 2014 12:46 am |
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wow thats great yar... mere to kafi faide hen punjabi b ajai gi n poetry b ...
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 4:45 pm |
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Ina v chup chup rya na kar
Kch dil da hal v kya ty kr
Jery terey dil nu tordy va
Ona lokan dy vich baiya na kar
Ono aiven yad tun krda en
Kuyn ody oty marda en
Ae pagal dil kch hya ty kar
Zeest. Sun
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Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2016 4:51 pm |
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Thank dear rose n sahil. Ajkl busy hon islie likna bnd kr dya laikn bhla ye adt b koi chor skta hy b hppy ftirnds..
Mobile pr image shair nhe horaha
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