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 Post subject: Re: my own punjabi poetry
PostPosted: Thu Dec 20, 2012 11:40 am 
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aasy pasay ik hajoom ae lokan da

ainj lagda ae fair v asi tay klay aan...

dil la baithty iss haraji dunya nal

asi v kinay pagal kinay jhalay aan...

tuadi mahfil vich hun dil ae lagda naien

tusi ravo ithy e asi tay chaly aan

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as usual boht zbrdast...zeeshu :b)b: :b)b: :)O :hug



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chan vargay

sonay mukhry tay

gustakh nazr na paya kar

onon vaikh ae dil di thrkan

tuun aieven na ruk jaya kar

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chan vargay

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tuun aieven na ruk jaya kar

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chan vargay

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uff... zeeshu .....kamal kr dita ji :hug

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huunr is ich dil da ki qusoor :p qusoor te saara oss chan vargy muukhrre da ae.. :)

Nice poetry tsyZ as always :b)b:



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chulay day vich

paie mohbat

tanay kinay daie mohbat

sada chain,sakoon tay neendar

sanu wapas daie mohbat

jerahy aiday naz othavan

othay ja k raie mohbat

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chulay day vich

paie mohbat

tanay kinay daie mohbat

sada chain,sakoon tay neendar

sanu wapas daie mohbat

jerahy aiday naz othavan

othay ja k raie mohbat

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waah ji...ki gal ay thadi ZeeshuUu :hug
bOOht soni lagi nazm...

likhde raho....sade nal share krde raho :hug
hsde raho te wasde raho :)O :)O :)O :hug :hug



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chulay day vich

paie mohbat

tanay kinay daie mohbat

sada chain,sakoon tay neendar

sanu wapas daie mohbat

jerahy aiday naz othavan

othay ja k raie mohbat

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sada chain,sakoon tay neendar

sanu wapas daie mohbat

wahh wahh Noor G aiy ki keh ditta jay wahhhh
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PostPosted: Tue Aug 27, 2013 1:52 pm 
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bhul jana os shkas nu

kina muskil lag da a..

sade kolon neend

sakoon tay chain jo

thagda ae.....

aiven khvaban vich aa k

o galan karda ae...

koi bhla ae puchay sada ki o

lagda ae....

zinda lokan nu tay sare

yad hi karday va...

moie nu bhul janday va

dastoor ae jag da ae...
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Aje addaa hi thread twaaDa paDhya e. BaDee jaan ai twaadi likhaayi vich......zeest ji.Waise te saariyaN nazmaaN baut hi umda hain, lekin ai nazm uppar wali khaas dil nuN lggi ai.....Baaki da thread vi paDh ke pher haazir howangaa. Khush rawo......



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PostPosted: Sat Dec 21, 2013 11:07 am 
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mazher ji thiz is my own poetry thread ap nay yahan sahir kya y?



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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2014 11:35 am 
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chulay day vich

paie mohbat

tanay kinay daie mohbat

sada chain,sakoon tay neendar

sanu wapas daie mohbat

jerahy aiday naz othavan

othay ja k raie mohbat

poetry/zeest.sun



NIce sharing zeest.sun jee keep it up waiting for more



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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2014 5:28 pm 
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shukr hay koi tu aya thanks sahil main tu bhol hi gai k min punjabi poetry b krti hon
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PostPosted: Tue May 13, 2014 6:32 pm 
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nice poems here,,,
I would like to share some thoughts with y'all!
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mere watan diyaan uchyaan shanaan
uchha ohda jhanda
maara maari bum dhamake
loakee banaya dhanda

Jhoot dee roti jithay pakkay
Chor jinhaan noon Khaawan
aap te o barbaad ne laikin
wasyaan noo'n pae ujaran


dharti te maa'n hondi vay
dhee puttar ohde vaasi
maa'n noo'n khushian devan wale
vund-de phiran udaasi


bud nazraan to saanu bachaveen
meraya sohne Rabba
Lakhaan jaana'n de ke saanu
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shukr hay koi tu aya thanks sahil main tu bhol hi gai k min punjabi poetry b krti hon
thanks alot :buke:


hahahaha sorry zeest.sun jee darasal mein kafi time k liye forum say bhaga howa tha so is liye thread mein aya hi nai and ab inshALLAH apko yeh moka nai mile ga

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wow thats great yar... mere to kafi faide hen punjabi b ajai gi n poetry b ...



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chulay day vich

paie mohbat

tanay kinay daie mohbat

sada chain,sakoon tay neendar

sanu wapas daie mohbat

jerahy aiday naz othavan

othay ja k raie mohbat

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humari piyari si Zeesto ji kahan hen? :hug :hug :hug
bht khubsurat likhti ho ap Zeesto ji :buke: :buke: :buke:
likhti raho, share karti raho
khush raho :hug



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uff kia kahon meri Zeesto ji bht kamal ki haseen nazm likhi he ap ne :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke:
wese mujhe punjabi seekhne ka bht shoq he mujhe bhi sikhao na kuch :^^:
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aasy pasay ik hajoom ae lokan da

ainj lagda ae fair v asi tay klay aan...

dil la baithty iss haraji dunya nal

asi v kinay pagal kinay jhalay aan...

tuadi mahfil vich hun dil ae lagda naien

tusi ravo ithy e asi tay chaly aan

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asi te challe aan
kithe challe o tusi Zeesto ji :^^:
nazm bht khubsurat he :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke:
share karti rahiye
khush rahiye :hug



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Ina v chup chup rya na kar
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Jery terey dil nu tordy va
Ona lokan dy vich baiya na kar
Ono aiven yad tun krda en
Kuyn ody oty marda en
Ae pagal dil kch hya ty kar
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Thank dear rose n sahil. Ajkl busy hon islie likna bnd kr dya laikn bhla ye adt b koi chor skta hy b hppy ftirnds..
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Ina v chup chup rya na kar
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Jery terey dil nu tordy va
Ona lokan dy vich baiya na kar
Ono aiven yad tun krda en
Kuyn ody oty marda en
Ae pagal dil kch hya ty kar
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wahhh bht hi haseen or lajawab nazm likhi he :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke: :buke:
or Panjabi zaban he hi itni sweet k is min likha hoa bht sweet lagta he
bht sweet nazm he Zeesto ji :hug :hug
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