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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 3:05 pm |
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 10:10 pm |
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sono wrote: mareez-e-muhabbat unheen ka fasaanaa sunaataa rahaa dam nikalte nikalte magar zikr-e-shaam-e-alam jab bhi aayaa chiraagh-e-sahar bujh gayaa jalte jalte
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"Muni Begam" ne kya khooob gaya hai esy.... zaroor suniye ga sono ji...!!!
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:13 pm |
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sono wrote: laal dairy
purane samaan ke saath phir nikal ke samne aa gai hai..
peele safe miti hui syahii par jo likha hai .. vo dil pe bhi naqsh hai .. har baar ise door karne ki chaah me kabhi machan pe uchal diya kabhi purane samaan me phaink diya khirki se bahar phainkne me haath saath nahi dete..
barhaa ghar me chupane ki, dafn karne ki koshish aur utni hi shadeed koshish is dairy ki mere saamne aane kii ye lukachipi kai salon se jari hai main chup rahi hun aur mujhe dhoond rahi hai meri dairy ..... Wah sono ji.... bahot khobsurat nazam... nazro'n se ojhal kaisey rahi... 
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schzad
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:19 pm |
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sono wrote: Mujhay tumsay muhabbat hu gayee thee Kay tum apnay akelay pan ka dukh lay ker Meray rastay main aye thay Tumhari ankh say tanhayee ka azar behta tha . . .
Mujhay iss say muhabbat hu gaye hay Lajwab sharing sono ji... Bahot arsay baad ap ke makhsoos zaok ki hamil Nazam parhne ko mili.... jis ko parh ker aankhen band ker ke ye kaha ja sakta hai keh... "ye sono ki sharing ho gi."....... Be-had daaad vasool kijiye...!!!
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:18 am |
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aap mere thread mein kam atey hain na...iss liye......bohat shukria khushi hoyee ke iss bar aap ko meri sharing pasand ayen  keep visiting
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:53 pm |
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sono wrote: aap mere thread mein kam atey hain na...iss liye...... Aisa to hergiz nhi hai sono ji... ap ne 09 Feb ke bad 06 March ko kuch post kia hai....warna ham to intezar me rehtey hen keh...kab ap sharing kren aur ham hazirii den...
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haseebWAHAB
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 10:20 am |
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bohot umda nazm hai sonoji.........
aur ye mere bohot pasandeeda shayar, janaab ''SAAHIR LUDHYAANVI'' ki likhi hui nazm hai, jo ek shahkaar ki haisiat rakhti hai,.......
share karne ka shukriya........
haseeb........
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haseebWAHAB
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 2:13 pm |
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bohot umda nazm hai sonoji,............
ye nazm janaab e ''SHAKEEL BADAAYUNI'' ki nazm TERI MEHFIL ME QISMAT AAZMA KAR HUM BHI DEKHENGE'' se milti jhulti hai...........
bohot umda nazm share ki hai aap ne,........
aur mera maan na hai ke janaab e ''SHAKEEL BADAAYUNI'' AUR SAAHIR LUDHYAANVI'' jaise shuaraa sadiyon me ek baar paida hote hain.........
share karne ka shukriya......................
haseeb.....................
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:01 am |
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bikul sahi kaha aap ne sonoji.........
mai aap ke shauq o zauq ko salaam karta hun,.....
lekin aap ne koi nazm post nahi ki hai aaj,.......
jaise hi koi achi nazm nazar se guzre zaroor post kariye...........
aap ki nazm ka muntazir...........
haseeb....................
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 8:21 am |
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sono wrote: Ager mein pather ki Larki hoti
Tau apne peker ki sabz rut per
bohut si kaee ugaaya kerti
Bohut se tareek khwab bunti
Ujaley ko thokron mein rakhti
Khamoshiyon ke babool chunti
Dehekti kirnon ka jharna hoti
Samaaton ke tamam afsoon
Paash kerti mein kuch na sunti
Mein apne paloo mein saog bandhey
kisi ko in ka pata na deti
Safer ke har eik merhaley per
Mein rehzanon ki tarah mukerti
Tau mein aziyat ki malgaji an-ginnat udaasi ke rang chunti
Tumhari saari wajahaton ko
Mein sau tarah para para kerti
Na tumko yun aeena banati
Ager mein pather ki larKi hoti..... la-jawab sharing sono ji,, ur choice is too good 
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:53 pm |
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sono wrote: Ager mein pather ki Larki hoti
Tau apne peker ki sabz rut per
bohut si kaee ugaaya kerti
Bohut se tareek khwab bunti
Ujaley ko thokron mein rakhti
Khamoshiyon ke babool chunti
Dehekti kirnon ka jharna hoti
Samaaton ke tamam afsoon
Paash kerti mein kuch na sunti
Mein apne paloo mein saog bandhey
kisi ko in ka pata na deti
Safer ke har eik merhaley per
Mein rehzanon ki tarah mukerti
Tau mein aziyat ki malgaji an-ginnat udaasi ke rang chunti
Tumhari saari wajahaton ko
Mein sau tarah para para kerti
Na tumko yun aeena banati
Ager mein pather ki larKi hoti..... dard o gahm ke rang me doobi hui nazm hai sonoji,......... bohot umda,................... aap ne meri farmaayish ki laaj rakhli bohot shukriya,......... haseeb................
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Fri Apr 02, 2010 11:59 pm |
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sono wrote: Teri Khwaahish Kii Qasam Mustaqil Dukh Ne Tabiyet Hii Badal Daalii Hai , , , ,
Haar Aur Jeet Ko Is Khail Mein Rakhna Hii Nahien Ghair-Mashroot Mohabbat Kii Tarah Daalain Gey Wah sono ji.... kya khobsurat compromise kia hai... kya bat hai jinab...!!!
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