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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA  Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 5:55 am |
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bohat shukria schzad ji
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 6:03 am |
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mareez-e-muhabbat unheen ka fasaanaa
sunaataa rahaa dam nikalte nikalte
magar zikr-e-shaam-e-alam jab bhi aayaa
chiraagh-e-sahar bujh gayaa jalte jalte
iraadaa thaa tark-e-muhabbat ka lekin
fareb-e-muhabbat men phir aa gaye ham
abhi khaake thokar sambhalne na paaye
ke phir khaai thokar sambhalte sambhalte
unhen khat men likhaa thaa dil muztarib hai
javaab un kaa aayaa muhabbat na karate
tumhen dil lagaane ko kisne kahaa thaa
behel jaayegaa dil behelte behelte
vo mehmaan rahe bhi to kab tak hamaare
hui shammaa gul aur doobe sitaare
"Qamar" is qadar un ko jaldi thi ghar ki
vo ghar chal diye chaandni dhalte dhalte
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sat Jan 30, 2010 3:05 pm |
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jeb bhi chahain ik nayee soret bana lete hain log
aik chehre per kayee chehre saja lete hain log.
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sun Jan 31, 2010 8:06 am |
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woh jo ikk laihr mire dil se uThee thee paihle
tujh ko kyuN aaj tire dil meiN bhee maiHsoos hu'ee
woh jo ikk baat mire dil ne kahee thee tujh se
tire dil ne bhee kahee mujh se tow maiHsoos hu'ee
yuN lagaa jaise azal se ko'ee jaltaa sooraj
kisee saa'ey ke tale chhupne ko aa pohNchaa ho
jaise betaab se dariyaa kaa machaltaa paanee
Khud ko Khaamosh samandar meiN bhulaa baiThaa ho
jis meN aiHsaas kaa toofaaN ho muHabbat kaa sukoon
jis kee gaihraa'ee meN hum Doobnaa chaahen to "Khayaal"
lamHe ulfat ke humeN usmeN saNbhaale rakkheN
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Mon Feb 01, 2010 10:10 pm |
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sono wrote: mareez-e-muhabbat unheen ka fasaanaa
sunaataa rahaa dam nikalte nikalte
magar zikr-e-shaam-e-alam jab bhi aayaa
chiraagh-e-sahar bujh gayaa jalte jalte
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Tue Feb 02, 2010 6:39 am |
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Teri Aahat
Sulagti Dupaher Ko Aake Pal Mein Shaam Karti Hai
Uutrtti Hai Sawad e Hijar Mein Kuch Iis Tara Jaisey
Sadaye Aashna Koi
Ghanay,Gehrey,Aandherey Janglon Ki Beyaakeni Mein
Rah-e Manzil Dikhati Hai
Roshni Ka Kaam Karti Hai
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:14 am |
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SAFAR
Main siyah raat kay safar parr hoon
aik qendeel yaad-e-janan ki
hath mein hai,magar hawa hai taez
main to ik baat kay safar parr hoon
jo kisi kunnj-e-labb say phooti thi
aur meri tamam umr ko--- aik
dasht-e-pur khaar mein dhakael ga'ei
saari subhein,usi kay naam huein
saari fathein,usi kay naam huein
main,faqat maat kay safar parr hoon
main to ik baat kay safar parr hoon!
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Mon Feb 08, 2010 5:20 pm |
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shukria janab...
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 6:22 am |
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thnx schzad ji
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Tue Feb 09, 2010 6:34 am |
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laal dairy
purane samaan ke saath
phir nikal ke samne aa gai hai..
peele safe
miti hui syahii
par jo likha hai ..
vo dil pe bhi naqsh hai ..
har baar ise door karne ki chaah me
kabhi machan pe uchal diya
kabhi purane samaan me phaink diya
khirki se bahar phainkne me
haath saath nahi dete..
barhaa ghar me chupane ki, dafn karne ki koshish
aur utni hi shadeed koshish
is dairy ki mere saamne aane kii
ye lukachipi kai salon se jari hai
main chup rahi hun
aur mujhe dhoond rahi hai
meri dairy .....
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:09 pm |
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Mujhay tumsay muhabbat hu gayee thee
Kay tum apnay akelay pan ka dukh lay ker
Meray rastay main aye thay
Tumhari ankh say tanhayee ka azar behta tha
To mainay tumko un cheroon ki qurbat baksh di
Aisay manazir tum pay roshan ker diye
Jin per basarat naaz kernay kay bahanay dhoondhti hay
Tumhari guftugu mayoos sannatooN ka jungle thee
So mainay tumko aisi mehfilooN main awaleeN saf main bithaya
Aisay logon say milaya
Jahan hoontooN ki junbish nujawaN qisoon main dhelti hay,
QehqahooN ki rasm chalti hay
Tumhain apni sama’at say bhe shikwa tha
Kay tum nay naghmgi kay din nahi dekhay
Herf ko awaz kay pehloo main khawabeedha nahi paya
So main bhee gungunati subh ki manind lehjoon ko
Tumharay zoaq ki mehroom khilwat main bula laya
Kayee ras gholati shameiN
Tumhari rooh main baydaar ker dalein
Magar hona wahi thaa
Ju talaq jornay waloon ka dayrena muqaddar hay
Guzishta raat tumnay mujhko baymasruf samagh ker apnay HangamooN ki janib he nazar rakhi
Lehaza abb ijazat do
Meray rastay ki janib ghoar say dekho
Wu dekho ek dermandha musafir
Meri qurbat kay liye baychain lagta hay
Tum uski aankh say tanhayee ka aazar behta dekh saktay ho
Aur uski guftugu mayoos sannatooN ka jungle hay
Issay apni sama’at say bhee shikwa hay
Mujhay iss say muhabbat hu gaye hay
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:13 pm |
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sono wrote: laal dairy
purane samaan ke saath
phir nikal ke samne aa gai hai..
peele safe
miti hui syahii
par jo likha hai ..
vo dil pe bhi naqsh hai ..
har baar ise door karne ki chaah me
kabhi machan pe uchal diya
kabhi purane samaan me phaink diya
khirki se bahar phainkne me
haath saath nahi dete..
barhaa ghar me chupane ki, dafn karne ki koshish
aur utni hi shadeed koshish
is dairy ki mere saamne aane kii
ye lukachipi kai salon se jari hai
main chup rahi hun
aur mujhe dhoond rahi hai
meri dairy ..... Wah sono ji.... bahot khobsurat nazam... nazro'n se ojhal kaisey rahi... 
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 9:19 pm |
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sono wrote: Mujhay tumsay muhabbat hu gayee thee
Kay tum apnay akelay pan ka dukh lay ker
Meray rastay main aye thay
Tumhari ankh say tanhayee ka azar behta tha
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Mujhay iss say muhabbat hu gaye hay
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:18 am |
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aap mere thread mein kam atey hain na...iss liye......bohat shukria khushi hoyee ke iss bar aap ko meri sharing pasand ayen  keep visiting
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 7:43 am |
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Jab ankh mein ansoo ataay hain
jab dil ki dharkan rotee hai
Jab door kahin sanaatay mein
Ek chaap si koi hote hai
Jab mun mein ansoo girtay hain
Dukh hastay hain,dukh hastay hain
Jab raat k saiy dhaltay hain
Aur panche punkh andheray mein
Ghar lout k ayaa kartay hain
Phir hum jaisay dewaanay log
Prem ki aag mein jaltya hain
Dukh hastay hain,dukh hastay hain
Jab waqt k koray kagaz par
Bus rang bharna rah jata hai
Aur sung chalna rah jata hai
Phir apnay saat samandar parr
Door kahin jaa bastay hain
Dukh hastay hain,dukh hastay hain
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 10:53 pm |
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sono wrote: aap mere thread mein kam atey hain na...iss liye...... Aisa to hergiz nhi hai sono ji... ap ne 09 Feb ke bad 06 March ko kuch post kia hai....warna ham to intezar me rehtey hen keh...kab ap sharing kren aur ham hazirii den... 
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Sun Mar 07, 2010 10:20 am |
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bohot umda nazm hai sonoji.........
aur ye mere bohot pasandeeda shayar, janaab ''SAAHIR LUDHYAANVI'' ki likhi hui nazm hai, jo ek shahkaar ki haisiat rakhti hai,.......
share karne ka shukriya........
haseeb........
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 8:20 am |
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thnx a lot haseeb ji Saahir ji mere bhi pasandida shair hein....on ki sari nazem hi shahkar hein....aik aur nazam mulahiza kijye...ere’s today’s nazm:
dabegi kab talak aawaaz-e-aadam, ham bhi dekheiNge
rukeiNge kab talak jazbaat-e-barham, ham bhi dekheiNge
chalo yuuN hi sahii ye jaur-e-paiham, ham bhi dekheiNge
dar-e-zindaaN se dekheiN ya urooj-e-daar se dekheiN
tumheiN ruswaa sar-e-baazaar-e-aalam ham bhi dekheiNge
zaraa dam lo ma’aal-e-shaukat-e-jam ham bhi dekheiNge
ba-zom-e-quwwat-e-faulaad-o-aahan dekh lo tum bhii
ba-faiz-e-jazbaa-e-iimaan-e-mohkam ham bhi dekheiNge
jabeen-e-kaj-kulaahii Khaak par Kham ham bhi dekheiNge
mukaafaat-e-amal taareeKh-e-insaaN kii rawaayat hai
karoge kab talak naawak faraaham ham bhi dekheiNge
kahaaN tak hai tumhaare zulm meiN dam ham bhi dekheiNge
ye hangaam-e-widaa-e-shab hai aie zulmat ke farzando
sahar ke dosh par gulnaar parcham ham bhi dekheiNge
tumheiN bhi dekhna hoga ye aalam ham bhi dekheiNge
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 2:13 pm |
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bohot umda nazm hai sonoji,............
ye nazm janaab e ''SHAKEEL BADAAYUNI'' ki nazm TERI MEHFIL ME QISMAT AAZMA KAR HUM BHI DEKHENGE'' se milti jhulti hai...........
bohot umda nazm share ki hai aap ne,........
aur mera maan na hai ke janaab e ''SHAKEEL BADAAYUNI'' AUR SAAHIR LUDHYAANVI'' jaise shuaraa sadiyon me ek baar paida hote hain.........
share karne ka shukriya......................
haseeb.....................
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Tue Mar 09, 2010 7:14 pm |
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aap ne baja farmaya haseeb ji kuch shair aise hain ke un ka kalam kitni hi bar parho dil kabhi nahen bharta....shukria meri sharing pasand karne ka
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Post subject: Re: NAZMON KA KHAZANA Posted: Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:01 am |
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bikul sahi kaha aap ne sonoji.........
mai aap ke shauq o zauq ko salaam karta hun,.....
lekin aap ne koi nazm post nahi ki hai aaj,.......
jaise hi koi achi nazm nazar se guzre zaroor post kariye...........
aap ki nazm ka muntazir...........
haseeb....................
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wo pehlay wali bat nhi rahi..... Kuch memberz hee to hen jin ki sharingz ka intezar rehta hai. 
main to apni taraf se achi hi sharing karne ki koshish karti hon....khair main post karti rahon ge koi sharing pasand aye to inam dijye ga 
