poetry by Subah

kheyal · **Joined:** Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:00 am **Posts:** 231

subahh wrote:

chehrah
-----------------------------
muhabbat aaina hae
aur tum mera aaina ho
jese main roz
subah sawere dekhty hon
main apni hi aankhon se
tumhara hi chehra dekhty hon
aur tumhari hi aankhain
mera hi chehra dekhty hain
tumhain pata nahi hae....!!!
ke mera kamrah...
sheesh mahal hae
ke jis main her soo..
tumhari aankhain...
tumhara hi chehrah hae

subah..

khubsuret imagery....woh khab...jo jagti aankhon se hum sub dekhtay hain.
jub soch..bolnay lugti hai.....aur hum aaeena bun jatay hain...jis men
sirf aankhen hum'klam hoti hain.......jo deeda'wari ka huner khoob janti hain.
khoobsuret takhai'yul..thanks subah...

subahh · **Posted:** Sun Jan 31, 2010 1:17 pm

kheyal
buhat nawazish...muhabbat sa aaina....buhat shaffaf hota hae...aur munakkis kerta hae ...kyun ke mukhlis hota hae... mehboob hi her jaa nazr aae to aaina bhi wohi munakkis kerta hae...aur sabit kerta hae bas tu hi tu...her su tu

subahh · **Posted:** Mon Feb 01, 2010 8:44 pm

Woh....!!!

woh jo tha mera
abb kahaan hae mera
khaamoshi ke aalam main
faramoshii ke kalam main
main ne tumhara naam likha
phir kuch soch ke meeta diaa
aata pataa na thekana pataa
kahan jaake dhoondain
kahan jaake khojjain
sab talaash hae laa-haasil
aab to hain mere sathii.....
khaamoshii,faraamoshii aur fiiraaq

lonely_life1 · **Posted:** Mon Feb 01, 2010 10:04 pm

waho nice wording cute hai simple .. ehsas pyar sab kuch . buaht hi ala subahh g apka tu wasay b jawab nahi .. buhat se dad kabool kigiya ..

tabs · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 1953

subahh wrote:

Woh....!!!

woh jo tha mera
abb kahaan hae mera
khaamoshi ke aalam main
faramoshii ke kalam main
main ne tumhara naam likha
phir kuch soch ke meeta diaa
aata pataa na thekana pataa
kahan jaake dhoondain
kahan jaake khojjain
sab talaash hae laa-haasil
aab to hain mere sathii.....
khaamoshii,faraamoshii aur fiiraaq

Bohat khoob subha, kya baat hai aap ki, kya khobsorti se ehsas ko qalam band kiya hai k aik aik lafz apni dastaan suna raha hai..........bohat umda aap ko kamal hasil hai manzoom tarjumani ka.........bohat si daad qabool kijiye...............

subahh · **Posted:** Wed Feb 03, 2010 10:46 pm

lonely_life1 wrote:

waho nice wording cute hai simple .. ehsas pyar sab kuch . buaht hi ala subahh g apka tu wasay b jawab nahi .. buhat se dad kabool kigiya ..

loads of thznk you ! lonely...

*Tjs* · **Posted:** Thu Feb 04, 2010 5:53 am

subahh wrote:

Woh....!!!

woh jo tha mera
abb kahaan hae mera
khaamoshi ke aalam main
faramoshii ke kalam main
main ne tumhara naam likha
phir kuch soch ke meeta diaa
aata pataa na thekana pataa
kahan jaake dhoondain
kahan jaake khojjain
sab talaash hae laa-haasil
aab to hain mere sathii.....
khaamoshii,faraamoshii aur fiiraaq

Bohat khoob Subah ji,,, Zabardast !! :)O

subahh · **Posted:** Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:15 pm

tabs wrote:

subahh wrote:

Woh....!!!

Bohat khoob subha, kya baat hai aap ki, kya khobsorti se ehsas ko qalam band kiya hai k aik aik lafz apni dastaan suna raha hai..........bohat umda aap ko kamal hasil hai manzoom tarjumani ka.........bohat si daad qabool kijiye...............

shukria tabs..khush rahain :dua

tabs · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 1953

Subahh,

Sirf shukriya se kaam nahin chalay ga......aap ko naya kalam bhi pesh karna paray ga................aisay nahin chalta..... :fr:

Miss tip top · **Posted:** Fri Feb 05, 2010 9:09 am

subahh wrote:

Woh....!!!

woh jo tha mera
abb kahaan hae mera
khaamoshi ke aalam main
faramoshii ke kalam main
main ne tumhara naam likha
phir kuch soch ke meeta diaa
aata pataa na thekana pataa
kahan jaake dhoondain
kahan jaake khojjain
sab talaash hae laa-haasil
aab to hain mere sathii.....
khaamoshii,faraamoshii aur fiiraaq

bht khubsurat lekha ha subah g ap nay........suchi ma

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Fri Feb 05, 2010 5:02 pm

Nice one subhaa ji! :buke:

subahh · **Posted:** Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:38 pm

tabs wrote:

Subahh,

Sirf shukriya se kaam nahin chalay ga......aap ko naya kalam bhi pesh karna paray ga................aisay nahin chalta..... :fr:

jo hukum sarkaar....wese hum jese chahain wese kaam chalatay hain... :Mad:

wese aapka hukum ser aankhon pe....neechay scroll kerain... :blushh:

...kalam hazir e aaiyoon hae.. :arrow:

subahh · **Posted:** Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:40 pm

●๋•мιѕѕ αттιтυ∂є●๋• wrote:

subahh wrote:

Woh....!!!

bht khubsurat lekha ha subah g ap nay........suchi ma

shukria tabi thread pe aanay ka...aur aapkay qeemty waqt ka

subahh · **Posted:** Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:41 pm

Arooj Amjad wrote:

Nice one subhaa ji! :buke:

arooj buhat nawazish ....khush rahain.. :dua

subahh · **Posted:** Fri Feb 05, 2010 8:55 pm

chaar-o-naachaar
-------------------------
aankhon se aansooun ki baarish
jism ki chikni mitti pe hoty rahi raat bher
issi se kabhi main ne seenchay thay
muhabbat ke pusmurdah phool

aaj kismat ke larazte hathon ne
kaghaz ki zerkhaiz zameen per
chaar-o-naa'chaar.....
chund beej boay hain.......

""""judaii hamara muqadder hae !!""""

sirf chund mah ki doori se
fasl-e-juddaii
pak ker tayyar hogi
kal jesse hum dono
mil ker kaatain ge

subah..

kheyal · **Joined:** Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:00 am **Posts:** 231

subahh wrote:

chaar-o-naachaar
-------------------------
aankhon se aansooun ki baarish
jism ki chikni mitti pe hoty rahi raat bher
issi se kabhi main ne seenchay thay
muhabbat ke pusmurdah phool

aaj kismat ke larazte hathon ne
kaghaz ki zerghaiz zameen per
chaar-o-naa'chaar.....
chund beej boay hain.......

""""judaii hamara muqadder hae !!""""

sirf chund mah ki doori se
fasl-e-juddaii
pak ker tayyar hogi
kal jesse hum dono
mil ker kaatain ge

subah..

wah....khoobsuret tusweer.....fikr-o-ehsas ki,
kehtay hain.....hurf 'butt' trashtay hain....
jo soch k mundir men, janay kub se mojood hotay hain.

fraq-o-wisal k nughmay...jo sudyon say sunay ja rahay hain....
aur dil...yeh geet...abud tuk gata rahega...
kaash k dreechay k us paar....usay bhi judaee k kurb ka pta ho.

ek khoobsuret fikr.....likhti rahain.....shad rahen.

waheed ahmed · **Posted:** Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:28 pm

subahh wrote:

chaar-o-naachaar
-------------------------
aankhon se aansooun ki baarish
jism ki chikni mitti pe hoty rahi raat bher
issi se kabhi main ne seenchay thay
muhabbat ke pusmurdah phool

aaj kismat ke larazte hathon ne
kaghaz ki zerghaiz zameen per
chaar-o-naa'chaar.....
chund beej boay hain.......

""""judaii hamara muqadder hae !!""""

sirf chund mah ki doori se
fasl-e-juddaii
pak ker tayyar hogi
kal jesse hum dono
mil ker kaatain ge

subah..

wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh subahh jee buht umdeh kavish sache jazbe
jin ki koi qeemet nahi hoti younhi likhty rahyee. :buke:

subahh · **Posted:** Sat Feb 06, 2010 7:56 pm

kheyal wrote:

subahh wrote:

chaar-o-naachaar
wah....khoobsuret tusweer.....fikr-o-ehsas ki,
kehtay hain.....hurf 'butt' trashtay hain....
jo soch k mundir men, janay kub se mojood hotay hain.

fraq-o-wisal k nughmay...jo sudyon say sunay ja rahay hain....
aur dil...yeh geet...abud tuk gata rahega...
kaash k dreechay k us paar....usay bhi judaee k kurb ka pta ho.

ek khoobsuret fikr.....likhti rahain.....shad rahen.

kheyal shukria ....judaii ka qarb....qareeb rehnay walay jantay hain...door janay walay bhool jaatay hain... :thinking

khush rahain...

tabs · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 1953

jinhain guftar ka fun ho unhain alfaz ka kya gham
k qalam ma'moor hota hai lafzon ki qataroon per

aap k tazah kalam k muntazir hain................... :fr:

subahh · **Posted:** Sun Feb 07, 2010 3:33 pm

tabs wrote:

jinhain guftar ka fun ho unhain alfaz ka kya gham
k qalam ma'moor hota hai lafzon ki qataroon per

aap k tazah kalam k muntazir hain................... :fr:

tabs tazah kalam saturday ko hi pesh kia hae...aur abhi koi purana bhi nahi hoa...aap intezar keraian ....hamaray bas jadu ki chari nahi ke roz ha roz aek nai kavish market main le aain... :thinking

insaan hon koi machine nahi... :argue:

tabs · **Joined:** Sat Dec 27, 2008 8:39 am **Posts:** 1953

subahh wrote:

tabs wrote:

jinhain guftar ka fun ho unhain alfaz ka kya gham
k qalam ma'moor hota hai lafzon ki qataroon per

aap k tazah kalam k muntazir hain................... :fr:

tabs tazah kalam saturday ko hi pesh kia hae...aur abhi koi purana bhi nahi hoa...aap intezar keraian ....hamaray bas jadu ki chari nahi ke roz ha roz aek nai kavish market main le aain... :thinking

insaan hon koi machine nahi... :argue:

Ghazab aya sitam toota, qayamat ho gai barpa
Faqat itna hi pocha tha...............................

aap se bohat ma'azrat khwah hain subah ji, ainda dast basta muntazir rahain gay.... :no:

subahh · **Posted:** Mon Feb 08, 2010 11:46 pm

shukria waheed....parhne aur serhane ka...

subahh · **Posted:** Mon Feb 08, 2010 11:53 pm

tabs wrote:

subahh wrote:

tabs wrote:

jinhain guftar ka fun ho unhain alfaz ka kya gham
k qalam ma'moor hota hai lafzon ki qataroon per

aap k tazah kalam k muntazir hain................... :fr:

tabs tazah kalam saturday ko hi pesh kia hae...aur abhi koi purana bhi nahi hoa...aap intezar keraian ....hamaray bas jadu ki chari nahi ke roz ha roz aek nai kavish market main le aain... :thinking

insaan hon koi machine nahi... :argue:

Ghazab aya sitam toota, qayamat ho gai barpa
Faqat itna hi pocha tha...............................

aap se bohat ma'azrat khwah hain subah ji, ainda dast basta muntazir rahain gay.... :no:

nahi tabs nahi.....essi koi baat nahi....ke aap mujh se mafi ke talabgar hon...sorry kerain....aap aapnay aalfaz wapis lain....hum hergiz nahi chahain ge ke shair e s.c dast basta hon....
bas kiya kerain tabs ke :
tujh se bhi dil faraib hain ghum rozgar ke

Arslan Faisal · **Posted:** Tue Feb 09, 2010 3:36 am

subahh wrote:

chaar-o-naachaar
-------------------------
aankhon se aansooun ki baarish
jism ki chikni mitti pe hoty rahi raat bher
issi se kabhi main ne seenchay thay
muhabbat ke pusmurdah phool

aaj kismat ke larazte hathon ne
kaghaz ki zerghaiz zameen per
chaar-o-naa'chaar.....
chund beej boay hain.......

""""judaii hamara muqadder hae !!""""

sirf chund mah ki doori se
fasl-e-juddaii
pak ker tayyar hogi
kal jesse hum dono
mil ker kaatain ge

subah..

Mashallah Subha g Buhat Nice

kheyal · **Joined:** Wed Jul 22, 2009 6:00 am **Posts:** 231

subahh wrote:

Woh....!!!

woh jo tha mera
abb kahaan hae mera
khaamoshi ke aalam main
faramoshii ke kalam main
main ne tumhara naam likha
phir kuch soch ke meeta diaa
aata pataa na thekana pataa
kahan jaake dhoondain
kahan jaake khojjain
sab talaash hae laa-haasil
aab to hain mere sathii.....
khaamoshii,faraamoshii aur fiiraaq

wah...subah....
khubsuret bahana.....zindgi kernay ka...
yaani intezaar......!!
jub sheh're dil.....ajnabi ho jae,
ksi ka naam likhna bhi gunah bun jae...
phir kiya reh jata hai.....sans ki ruftar ginnay k elawa.
khubsuret izhar.....ksi dost k liye.

ibne sultan narvi · **Joined:** Wed Dec 16, 2009 11:09 am **Posts:** 57

SUBHA JEE kamal ka kalaam hey fann se aap ki sanjidgee aur zaban wa beyan ka maeyar bohot he aala hey nafees andaz hey lafz kya khoob muntakhib kartee hein aap vey nice sachi bat hey mein zate tor per aap ki khosort zaban se mutasir howa hon likhte rahein apney leye dosron k leye subah wa sham khush rahein

subahh · **Posted:** Tue Feb 09, 2010 10:05 pm

buhat nawazish arslan....
khush rahain... :buke:

lonely_life1 · **Posted:** Tue Feb 09, 2010 10:22 pm

subahh wrote:

chaar-o-naachaar
-------------------------
aankhon se aansooun ki baarish
jism ki chikni mitti pe hoty rahi raat bher
issi se kabhi main ne seenchay thay
muhabbat ke pusmurdah phool

aaj kismat ke larazte hathon ne
kaghaz ki zerghaiz zameen per
chaar-o-naa'chaar.....
chund beej boay hain.......

""""judaii hamara muqadder hae !!""""

sirf chund mah ki doori se
fasl-e-juddaii
pak ker tayyar hogi
kal jesse hum dono
mil ker kaatain ge

subah..

yaar subah pata nahi God ne apko kasi soch day k baja hai sab se alag ho ap yaar. ya lafaz tu apke gulam lagtay hai pata nhi kaha se bag bag ker apke dimag main aa jata hai aur poetry mian jaan dal datay hai. mashallah buaht hi nice sharing. yaar. hamasa ki tarha.. khus rahay

talaash_e_zeest · **Posted:** Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:10 pm

subahh wrote:

chaar-o-naachaar
-------------------------
aankhon se aansooun ki baarish
jism ki chikni mitti pe hoty rahi raat bher
issi se kabhi main ne seenchay thay
muhabbat ke pusmurdah phool

aaj kismat ke larazte hathon ne
kaghaz ki zerghaiz zameen per
chaar-o-naa'chaar.....
chund beej boay hain.......

""""judaii hamara muqadder hae !!""""

sirf chund mah ki doori se
fasl-e-juddaii
pak ker tayyar hogi
kal jesse hum dono
mil ker kaatain ge

subah..

Subaah jee bohot he khoob bohot acha laga aap ki kavish parh k hamesha ki tarha ik sama sa band jata hay aap ko parh k wah bohot he khoob.... :)O

Miss tip top · **Posted:** Wed Feb 10, 2010 1:16 pm

subahh wrote:

chaar-o-naachaar
-------------------------
aankhon se aansooun ki baarish
jism ki chikni mitti pe hoty rahi raat bher
issi se kabhi main ne seenchay thay
muhabbat ke pusmurdah phool

aaj kismat ke larazte hathon ne
kaghaz ki zerghaiz zameen per
chaar-o-naa'chaar.....
chund beej boay hain.......

""""judaii hamara muqadder hae !!""""

sirf chund mah ki doori se
fasl-e-juddaii
pak ker tayyar hogi
kal jesse hum dono
mil ker kaatain ge

subah..

subah g bht he zbardast lekha ha ap nay............ik dum fit or ala

ALLAH bless u always dear........ :buke:

subahh · **Posted:** Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:29 pm

kheyal wrote:

subahh wrote:

Woh....!!!

wah...subah....
khubsuret bahana.....zindgi kernay ka...
yaani intezaar......!!
jub sheh're dil.....ajnabi ho jae,
ksi ka naam likhna bhi gunah bun jae...
phir kiya reh jata hai.....sans ki ruftar ginnay k elawa.
khubsuret izhar.....ksi dost k liye.

shukria kheyal ....khubsoorat jawab ka ....hamare lia apna qeemty waqt dene ka
khush rahain... :buke:

subahh · **Posted:** Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:35 pm

ibne sultan narvi wrote:

SUBHA JEE kamal ka kalaam hey fann se aap ki sanjidgee aur zaban wa beyan ka maeyar bohot he aala hey nafees andaz hey lafz kya khoob muntakhib kartee hein aap vey nice sachi bat hey mein zate tor per aap ki khosort zaban se mutasir howa hon likhte rahein apney leye dosron k leye subah wa sham khush rahein

buhat nawazish o mehrbaani inbne sultan ...buhat khubsoorty se jawab dia hae ....aap se qari'een o madda hon shairy ke to hum ko mazid acha likhne ki targheeb ....aur ..fon ko jila bakhshne ki himmat milty hae
khush rahain :buke:

subahh · **Posted:** Wed Feb 10, 2010 8:38 pm

lonely_life1 wrote:

subahh wrote:

chaar-o-naachaar

yaar subah pata nahi God ne apko kasi soch day k baja hai sab se alag ho ap yaar. ya lafaz tu apke gulam lagtay hai pata nhi kaha se bag bag ker apke dimag main aa jata hai aur poetry mian jaan dal datay hai. mashallah buaht hi nice sharing. yaar. hamasa ki tarha.. khus rahay

buhat shukria mozam.....yon hi serhate rahain.....hum kath'than safr e shairy jari rakh sakain ge
khush rahain

Imran Shanawar · **Joined:** Tue May 12, 2009 9:28 am **Posts:** 138

char-o-nachar achhi nazm hay.

subahh · **Posted:** Fri Feb 12, 2010 9:27 pm

Be-faiz
---------------------------------------
aasman roz apne rung badalta rahay
main ab bhi wohi hun
barishun ki bundun ki piyasi
daer talak uski rah dekhti hun
shaid main bunjar hogai hun
ya usse nai zameen mil gai hae
woh mere ujre chehre ko dekh kay
mun bana ke guzar jata hae
na uski ankhun main woh muhabbat
mujhe zarkhaiz jo karti thi
na uski baatun main woh halawat
mujhe noukhaiz jo karti thi
na uske piyar ki rimjhim
mujhe junoon khaiz jo karti thi

uski rahain main nay naapi hain
mujh se buhat door ja chuki hain
main nazr se kyun gir gai hun?
uski nazr main kon bas gaya hae?
woh azad ooran ka tha rasiya
jahan chahta basera kerta
woh essa abr-e-karam tha
jahan chahta barsaat kerta
usse main nay jo samr diae
usse un ki ab qadr nahi hae
usse aur zameen ki talash hae
jo mujh se zayadah ajjar dae usko
mujhe na-cheez jan kay chora ussne
Khuda bhala kare us be-faiz , be-dil , be-imaan ka
mere apne ansoo ab marhum hain
mujhe barishun ki bundun se kia lena dena
aasman roz apne rung badalta rahay
mujhe zameen ke logun se hae sarsabz rehna

subah

Arooj Amjad · **Posted:** Fri Feb 12, 2010 10:35 pm

itni sad nazm....
And very true...at the end of the day insaan ko khud apna khayaal karna paRta hai.Hanstay k saath sab hanstay hain...rotay k saath koi nahin rota!!!apne aap ko khud samjhaana paRta hai :roll:

Masooma · **Posted:** Sat Feb 13, 2010 9:12 am

subahh wrote:

Be-faiz

First of all yeh kahoon gi kay badi speed hai aapki. :twisted:

Main na chahtay huway bhi commenting main peechay reh gayi. :Mad:

So sorry.. jald he sab par comment karoon gi. :blushh:

Second, yeh naz'm... as usual, a gem. MashAllah! Kya khayalaat hain. Main Arooj jee ki baaton say sau feesad sehmat hoon. Sahi kaha unhoon nay.

aasman roz apne rung badalta rahay
main ab bhi wohi hun

Laug badal jatay hain, hum shayad, halaat ya phir (jahan tak mohabbat ka taluq hai) dil say majboor wohi rehnay ki koshish kartay hain. Laikin meray bohat pyaray dost kehtay hain kay "Sab mausami khel hain janaa" aur shayad yeh baat insaan tab tak nahi samajhta jab tak usmain mushkiloon ka saamna karna nahi ata aur uss change ko accept karna nahi ata. Aur phir ahista ahista, waqt kay hathoon majboor hum bhi shayad badal he jatay hain. The only thing constant in life is change itself!

Likhti rahiye.

:buke:

miskeen · **Posted:** Sat Feb 13, 2010 3:17 pm

subah gi coments nahi likha ja raha ..

:((:

waheed ahmed · **Posted:** Sat Feb 13, 2010 3:39 pm

subahh wrote:

Be-faiz
---------------------------------------
aasman roz apne rung badalta rahay
main ab bhi wohi hun
barishun ki bundun ki piyasi
daer talak uski rah dekhti hun
shaid main bunjar hogai hun
ya usse nai zameen mil gai hae
woh mere ujre chehre ko dekh kay
mun bana ke guzar jata hae
na uski ankhun main woh muhabbat
mujhe zarkhaiz jo karti thi
na uski baatun main woh halawat
mujhe noukhaiz jo karti thi
na uske piyar ki rimjhim
mujhe junoon khaiz jo karti thi

uski rahain main nay naapi hain
mujh se buhat door ja chuki hain
main nazr se kyun gir gai hun?
uski nazr main kon bas gaya hae?
woh azad ooran ka tha rasiya
jahan chahta basera kerta
woh essa abr-e-karam tha
jahan chahta barsaat kerta
usse main nay jo samr diae
usse un ki ab qadr nahi hae
usse aur zameen ki talash hae
jo mujh se zayadah ajjar dae usko
mujhe na-cheez jan kay chora ussne
Khuda bhala kare us be-faiz , be-dil , be-imaan ka
mere apne ansoo ab marhum hain
mujhe barishun ki bundun se kia lena dena
aasman roz apne rung badalta rahay
mujhe zameen ke logun se hae sarsabz rehna

subah

buht umdah subah ji younhi likhte rahyee

subahh · **Posted:** Sat Feb 13, 2010 6:51 pm

Arooj Amjad wrote:

itni sad nazm....
And very true...at the end of the day insaan ko khud apna khayaal karna paRta hai.Hanstay k saath sab hanstay hain...rotay k saath koi nahin rota!!!apne aap ko khud samjhaana paRta hai :roll:

buhat shukria arooj...mamnoon hain ke aap ne apni rae ka izhar kiya
khush rahain..

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