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subahh
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Post subject: poetry by Subah  Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 1:22 am |
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Naya saal aur purani mohabbat,
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TumheN kia me doN,
Kay mere ekhtayar-o-bas ke sabhi iraday
mohtaj haeN,
DuaeN,Piyar aur WafaeN,
Tumeh soNpti hoN
nayay saal ki amad pay,
mere jazbe,meri soNchaeN ,
mera kirdar,
meri wafaeN,
saal ha saal ke bad bhi wohi rahaeN gi,
aj nae saal ki amad pe phir se aek bar,
khush-Aamdeed kehti hoi
lipat jaon gi tum se,
ke naye saal may bhi tum
hazir-o-mojood ho,
jab kabhi
kisi saal
ye sab kuch na ho pae,
kissi anay walay nae saal ki dastk sono tum,
aur mujeh na pao,(tum muje dor se door-tar hota hoa daekho).
to jan lena
naya saal hamare muqader ki kitaboN pe
siyahi mal ke aya hae
na os me maiN hoN ,
na os me tum ho,
bas ek sayah raat hae,
is sayah raat me
ek benam si khalish hae,
is benam si khalish me
ik ajab kashish hae,
jo chaiN se jinay na day,
jo pal pal kuch DhonDhti phir rahi hae,
aur ose nahi pa rahi hae ,
laut kay,mayoos arahi hae,
aur ab......
najane kab se
thak ke so gai hae
subahh..
Last edited by subahh on Wed Oct 28, 2009 10:54 pm, edited 4 times in total.
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israr
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 6:50 am |
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Muhammad Ali
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Post subject: nice Posted: Sat Dec 10, 2005 1:54 pm |
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Hi,
Nice effort dear
keep it up
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waqas quareshi
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Post subject: Re: yarghmaal muhabbat Posted: Sat Dec 17, 2005 8:57 am |
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[quote="subahh"]muhabbat kerte rehne ka wada
aur woh bhi ghair mashroot
muhabbat main khud_gharzi essi !
ke yurghmaal kerlia mere apnepun ko
yarqan sa hogaya mere jazbun ko
yakmusht mar dia muhabbatun ko
apni marzi ki bun'dook meri kun'patti pe rakhi
aur kaha .........
"jesa main kehta jaun
wesa hi kerti jao"[/quote]
Aslam_O_alikum subha ji
bohat acha likhte hai ap
khoda ap ko aur bhy tufeeq de
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subahh
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Post subject: Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 3:52 pm |
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jiarao wrote: Ooohhh!!!
its realy beautiful..............
u have a unique type of thinking.
keep it up ......Subahh.
be happy  jiarao
thnxs for giving your presious time to my poetry ....though its unique in its way but it moves u to the core of your heat as well.. coz actual facts and reality do hurt sensitive heart...and at times u listen to your brain rather than your heart...but hard luck we do just the opposite...is'nt it so ...we all do that and regrets when we end up no where
regards
subah..
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Zafar M.
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Post subject: Re: ohhh khudaya!!! Posted: Sun Feb 05, 2006 4:39 pm |
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subahh wrote: sab sathiyun ko salam azr hae ...aek purani nazm jo 9th july 2003 ko aek shairy ke forum pe post ki thee..aj apki basaratun ki nazr hae apni aara se zaroor nawazain...shukria
ohh khudayya ! ! !
woh kya tha ? ? ?
dekhne main gada
aur dil ka badshah !!!
main kia thee ? ? ?
dekhne main malika
aur pyar ki bhukee !!!
woh sab dan kar raha tha
muhabbat , ulfat , qurbat
main sab samaet rahee thee
tar tar jhuli main apni
eek bewah raat thee
par eek nai subah kee
suhag raat
main soch ke tanaybanay main uljhee
tammam zawiun se usko dekhtee rahee
yakdam cheekh ke boli
bas karo ab bas bhi karo ! ! !
yeh sab dan apni wapis lo
issay hawis ki boo aatee hay
woh ja chuka tha
main uski bebasee
aur apni har pe hans rahee thee
main nay bari hoshyaree se
muhabbat ka khun kia
uski lash ko
apne dil main dafn kia
Bahut hi pyari si aur dil ko gehraiyon tak chho jane wali nazm pesh ki hai aapney..........Zindabaad !!!
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zindagi_soul1
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Post subject: hi Posted: Sat Jul 22, 2006 5:32 pm |
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ache koshish hai keep it up
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khush rahein aur dosro ko khush rakhein
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ghazal_ejaz
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Post subject: Re: hum say pouchoo tou sahi Posted: Thu May 17, 2007 6:13 pm |
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subahh wrote: ehbab e mehfil
aap sab dostun ko salam
aek taveel arsay k bad aek kalam apki nazr he jo 10 may 2003 ko aek forum pay post kia tha jis ki paziraee kafi sathi dostun nay kee thi..apki tawajah ki nazr ..gar waqt se fursat pain ...ba alfaz e digar ...waqt mayyasar ho tou apni ara se nawazain
shukria,
hum se po0chhou to sahi kabhi dil ka aalam
kese sab gaNwaN ke khush-hal bethe haeN
aNsoo-oN ko pia he sehra ki piyas maeN
dil ka khuN kia to azad bethe haeN
teri yad se mehakta tha gulzar-e-khayyal
bhula ke tujh ko,dunya se dil lagae bethe haeN
oodu ki mehfil aur ap sanum ke pehlu maeN
hum se khud-ser zara door ja ke bethe haeN
hum se kia pochhte ho achhe bure ki tameez
hum to sab ko shariat baNae bethe haeN
Very nice subbah.........
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Mairi zameen,tairi mitti ka mashwara kiya hy??
Bikhr raha hoon teri tarah mein b aey rad e gul
So tujh sy poochta ho0n,taira tajarba kiya hy ??
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Aadi
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Post subject: Re: pursan e hal koi nahi Posted: Sat May 19, 2007 6:08 pm |
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subahh wrote: gungay behray logun main
meri awaz sunnay wala koi nahi
mere hal pay mehrban koi nahi
be-rehm sangdil logun main
zaghmun ka murhum koi nahi
koi masiha , ghumkhoar,koi nahi
har ja bud-bakht nafrat pheli hae
sathee,aman e muhabbat koi nahi
qaber bolati hae mujhay har roz
aja meri jaan main hun aur koi nahi
aja meri goud me sab ghum bhool kay
main hun teri apni dushman koi nahi
aaja meri aghosh ki panah main
main hun teri maaN aur tera koi nahi
Very Nice Post
Keep Sharing!!!
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jazbaat k dharay mai beh gaya ho mai
jo na kehni thi wo baat keh gaya ho mai
itna sung dil aaj mai hoa ho...
k bhari mehfil mai tanha reh gaya ho mai
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tahira liaqat
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Post subject: Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 3:46 am |
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aap ne bohat khobsorat baat ki heh...waqay hi agar hum khushian talaash karna chahen to vo hamaray aas pas hi kaheen mojood hoti hen...
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Broken heart
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Jiya
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Post subject: Re: chalo khushi talash karo! Posted: Sat Jul 07, 2007 11:45 am |
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subahh wrote: chalo khushi talash karo!
subah-bakhair main
aasman ki wussat main
hawa ki raftar main
soraj ki kirnun main
shabnam ki boudun main
phoollun kay khilnay main
khushboo ki parwaz main
paerun kay khud o khal main
sabzay ki rungat main
gulistan ki shadabi main
chalo khushi talash karo!
ankhun ki binai main
qadmun ki chal main
ungliyun kay porun main
apnay wajood ki gehrai main
sansun kay anay janay main
apni harkaat main
apni saknaat main
apni baat baat main
apni jeet o maat main
har chay kamai main
har chay ganwai main
har chay zawal main
har chay visal main
chalo khushi talash karo!
apnay parayun kay ghum main
bad-saal main
bad-hal main
apni mout main
zindagi say haar main
Achi koshish hai.. idea kaafi acha hai is nazm ka.. laikin aap is se bhi behtar likh sakti hai aisa mujhe lagta hai .. so keep trying .. All the best
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