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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah  Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 9:48 am |
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 5:39 pm |
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biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: huzn ka saal Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 6:00 pm |
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subahh wrote: apni jawan saal betti o bettay ki mout kay waqt
'Huzn ka saal"
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harf e shika'et nahi
saal e huzn hae to kya
HASEEB ne haseen taqdeer to likh dali
yum e hisab hasrat na rahe baqi
hikmat e Elahi,hikmat e qattai
haqaeeq ka pardah jab chak kerke dekha
kisi ne meri nazr se munzar ko na dekha
hungae jab sab ke sab hawas bakhta
bhari bheedh main hum hunge sanadyaftah
resham kamkhab atlas abraq pehne hoe
lal gohar yaqoot ke bala khanun main sakunyaftah
na khana weerani
na khana kharabi
ghamun main palna
dard e judai sehna
sabr kerna
darasal khabaes se bachne ka hae ek rasta
main khud ko deelasa deti rahi
samjhati rahi ke ye koi kham khayali nahi
es main taqdeer ki zara bhi khami nahi
khamosh..!!!
khuda wasta...khamosh aee hawa
ye raz o nayaz guft o shooneed
koi aur son na lae
khabar rasaN na ban
razdaN ban
gar tujhe zara sa hae meri khabargiri ka pas
kisi se na kehna jo dil pe hae guzri
bilashubah WOH Khabeer bhi hae
Aleem bhi hae
samee o Baseer bhi
hum hazir hain khidmat main uski
labbaek Allahum'ma labbaek kehte hoe
yak lakht yak ba yak darood parhte hoe
subah.. subahh,kia kahon main,alfaz nahi meray pas,ye hi kahon ga keh har fikr o runj ,dukh o pareshani mein yaqinan hamari dhaal SABR hi he,
ham hazir hain khidmat mein us ki
labbaik Allah humma labbaik kehtay hoe
kia eman afrooz alfaz istimal kiyay hen aap nay,main aap kay is yaqin e kamil ko salam paish karta hon,Allah tah\la aap ko jaza e khair ataa farmayay aur sukoon e dil ki daolat say mala maal farmayay.Aameen
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Nam e jamhoor pe bazaar saja rakha hay
biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: huzn ka saal Posted: Sat Oct 31, 2009 10:02 pm |
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mahtabhashmi wrote: subahh wrote: apni jawan saal betti o bettay ki mout kay waqt
'Huzn ka saal"
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harf e shika'et nahi
saal e huzn hae to kya
HASEEB ne haseen taqdeer to likh dali
yum e hisab hasrat na rahe baqi
hikmat e Elahi,hikmat e qattai
haqaeeq ka pardah jab chak kerke dekha
kisi ne meri nazr se munzar ko na dekha
hungae jab sab ke sab hawas bakhta
bhari bheedh main hum hunge sanadyaftah
resham kamkhab atlas abraq pehne hoe
lal gohar yaqoot ke bala khanun main sakunyaftah
na khana weerani
na khana kharabi
ghamun main palna
dard e judai sehna
sabr kerna
darasal khabaes se bachne ka hae ek rasta
main khud ko deelasa deti rahi
samjhati rahi ke ye koi kham khayali nahi
es main taqdeer ki zara bhi khami nahi
khamosh..!!!
khuda wasta...khamosh aee hawa
ye raz o nayaz guft o shooneed
koi aur son na lae
khabar rasaN na ban
razdaN ban
gar tujhe zara sa hae meri khabargiri ka pas
kisi se na kehna jo dil pe hae guzri
bilashubah WOH Khabeer bhi hae
Aleem bhi hae
samee o Baseer bhi
hum hazir hain khidmat main uski
labbaek Allahum'ma labbaek kehte hoe
yak lakht yak ba yak darood parhte hoe
subah.. subahh,kia kahon main,alfaz nahi meray pas,ye hi kahon ga keh har fikr o runj ,dukh o pareshani mein yaqinan hamari dhaal SABR hi he,
ham hazir hain khidmat mein us ki
labbaik Allah humma labbaik kehtay hoe
kia eman afrooz alfaz istimal kiyay hen aap nay,main aap kay is yaqin e kamil ko salam paish karta hon,Allah tah\la aap ko jaza e khair ataa farmayay aur sukoon e dil ki daolat say mala maal farmayay.Aameen
Allah o akbar ! subah kia likha he? samujh nahi aara he ke kia dad don? alfaz ki zumbeel men kuch nahi.... wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh boht hi khoob likha he.
ak sher mera he jo ap ki nazum per fit aata he..
mushoor ho gaya he jo undaaz-e-bayaN galib,
uss se behtur kahin undaz-e-bayaN aaj bhi hen. (miskeen)
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Post subject: Re: huzn ka saal Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 6:50 am |
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mahtabhashmi wrote: subahh wrote: apni jawan saal betti o bettay ki mout kay waqt
'Huzn ka saal"
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harf e shika'et nahi
saal e huzn hae to kya
HASEEB ne haseen taqdeer to likh dali
yum e hisab hasrat na rahe baqi
hikmat e Elahi,hikmat e qattai
haqaeeq ka pardah jab chak kerke dekha
kisi ne meri nazr se munzar ko na dekha
hungae jab sab ke sab hawas bakhta
bhari bheedh main hum hunge sanadyaftah
resham kamkhab atlas abraq pehne hoe
lal gohar yaqoot ke bala khanun main sakunyaftah
na khana weerani
na khana kharabi
ghamun main palna
dard e judai sehna
sabr kerna
darasal khabaes se bachne ka hae ek rasta
main khud ko deelasa deti rahi
samjhati rahi ke ye koi kham khayali nahi
es main taqdeer ki zara bhi khami nahi
khamosh..!!!
khuda wasta...khamosh aee hawa
ye raz o nayaz guft o shooneed
koi aur son na lae
khabar rasaN na ban
razdaN ban
gar tujhe zara sa hae meri khabargiri ka pas
kisi se na kehna jo dil pe hae guzri
bilashubah WOH Khabeer bhi hae
Aleem bhi hae
samee o Baseer bhi
hum hazir hain khidmat main uski
labbaek Allahum'ma labbaek kehte hoe
yak lakht yak ba yak darood parhte hoe
subah.. subahh,kia kahon main,alfaz nahi meray pas,ye hi kahon ga keh har fikr o runj ,dukh o pareshani mein yaqinan hamari dhaal SABR hi he,
ham hazir hain khidmat mein us ki
labbaik Allah humma labbaik kehtay hoe
kia eman afrooz alfaz istimal kiyay hen aap nay,main aap kay is yaqin e kamil ko salam paish karta hon,Allah tah\la aap ko jaza e khair ataa farmayay aur sukoon e dil ki daolat say mala maal farmayay.Aameen buhut khoob likha hy 
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tawakel ALALLAH
kon kehta he k mer jaon ga
main derya hon samender main utter jaon.
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Post subject: Re: ohhh khudaya!!! Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:02 am |
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subahh wrote: Oh Khudaya
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ohh khudayya ! ! !
woh kya tha ? ? ?
dekhne main gada
aur dil ka badshah !!!
main kia thee ? ? ?
dekhne main malika
aur pyar ki bhukee bhikarun !!!
woh sab daan kar raha tha
muhabbat , ulfat , qurbat
main sab samaet rahee thee
tar tar jhuli main apni
eek bewah raat thee
par eek nai subh kee
suhag raat
main soch ke tanaybanay main uljhee
tammam zawiun se usko dekhtee rahee
yakdam cheekh ke boli
bas karo ab bas bhi karo ! ! !
yeh sab daan apni wapis lo
issay hawis ki boo aatee hay
woh ja chuka tha
main uski bebasee
aur apni har pe hans rahee thee
main nay bari hoshyaree se
muhabbat ka khun kia
uski lash ko
apne dil main dafn kia
subah.. Subah, Sub se pehlay aap se ma'azrat k main ne aap ko sinf e qavi tasavur kr k mukhatib kiya, dar asl mjhe aap k screen name se andaza na ho saka. aap k batlanay per aap k kalam ko ghor se padha to andazah huwa ki kis qadr khata e faash sirzad huwi hai....Khair aap wasee ul qalb khatoon hain to umeed karta hon k dar guzr farmain gi.... Mazkoorah nazm aik mukamal, nafees aur sada takhleeq hai, tamam tar jazbaat se muzayyan o arasta.....ik dastaan e dil e figar bohat khobsorti se nibhai hai aap ne.... Bohat si daad qabool kijiye.... Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:05 am |
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miskeen wrote: subahh wrote: eek paagal deewani
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eek paagal deewani mast malaNggi
pereeshaN hal
chak garebaN
paoN se naNggi
khak maeN unglian peeroe
kuch dhoNdh rahi thi
phir eek muthi bhar khak utha ke
sar pe apne dal rahi thi
aur mad-dham soorun maen
apne ap kuch bol rahi thi
maen paagal nahi hun ....maen paagal nahi hun...
pagal to woh tha .......
jo apni muhabbat ki sari doulat
eek bejaan sone ki moorti pe waar aya
paagla kahin ka ....  ....!!!!!
subah.. boht aala nuzm he... khush rahen
buhat shukria ' ek pagal deewani must malungee ' aur ' huzn ka saal ' pasund kernay ka khush rahain subah,,
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Post subject: Re: sham Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:12 am |
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subahh wrote: Sham
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sham say khumar hay
sharab ka shabab hay
tou bhi aspas hay
nazr,nazr kay par hay
sanam jab be-hijab hay
takhliay main kya aar hay
kal jo tha woh aaj hay
jo aaj hay kal khayal hay
khayal main malal hay
malal faas'looN ka hay
na-yaft hay door hay
dil kay jo aspas hay Subah, Bohat achi nazm hai, per 5 martaba k baad bhi behtri ki gunjaish hai.... I don't want to disheartened you but still there are a few more changes required in order to have an uninterrupted flow of words. I hope you won't mind my comments, this is what I felt....I could be wrong... Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 9:18 am |
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Subah aap ki tamam nigarishat ka ahata to mumkin na huwa, per jitna bhi padha hai bohat achay khaylat hain.....
Meray khayal main aap ko aik kumhar (Mitti k bartan bananay wala) ki zarorat hai......
Bohat si daad qabool kijiye, Bohat khush rahiye.
Adab...
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:40 pm |
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tabs wrote: Subah aap ki tamam nigarishat ka ahata to mumkin na huwa, per jitna bhi padha hai bohat achay khaylat hain.....
Meray khayal main aap ko aik kumhar (Mitti k bartan bananay wala) ki zarorat hai......
Bohat si daad qabool kijiye, Bohat khush rahiye.
Adab... tabs, shukria janab ...,baat yeh hae k mene jo shairi ki ...diary ...ya aek aur forum pe ....woh yahan muntaqil kerdi aajkal ...meri chutiyan hain tunhai hae fursat hae ...tou post ko edit nahi kiya uski nokpalak rung o text se sanwar dee....jo haqiqat he bayan kerdi. aapnay kaha kumhar ki zaroorat hae...  yani chikni mitti wafar miqdar me moujood he...???aek hunermund hath chahea ghazal o nazm k burtan o zaroof bana'nay k lia??khud kumhar hoti kash..  tou ger koi essa kumhar he ...tou plz nam o pata bhi bata dain  aap ki qaderdan hun jo aap apni qeemti ra'ye detay hain khush rahain subah..
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Post subject: Re: sham Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 1:17 pm |
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tabs wrote: subahh wrote: Sham
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sham say khumar hae
sharab ka shabab hae
tou bhi aspas hae
nazr,nazr kay par hae
sanam jab be-hijab hae
takhliay main kya aar hae
kal jo tha woh aaj hae
jo aaj hay kal khayal hae
khayal main ek malal hae
malal bhi kiya kamal hae
kamal main ek jamal hae
jamal bhi be-misaal hae Subah, Bohat achi nazm hai, per 5 martaba k baad bhi behtri ki gunjaish hai.... I don't want to disheartened you but still there are a few more changes required in order to have an uninterrupted flow of words. I hope you won't mind my comments, this is what I felt....I could be wrong... Tabassum hum nay kuch taseh o islah ker tou li hae per esse zayadah kuch ban na para....kumhar ki zaroorat hae ... aap perhain aur batain ...kumhar kya kerta insaf eskay sath
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 4:21 pm |
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subahh wrote: soraj ki sona kirnaen dastak daen jab dar o dewar per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
paon pehla qadam uthae jab sung-e-marmar ki dehlez per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe jo pehla shakhs mele muskera ke jab salam kere
mujhe tum yad ate ho
kam kerte kerte yaksooe kho jae zahn rasta bhatak jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
koi aas toot jae jab khushi roth ke wapis na aae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jhil mil tare raat ko jab ankh micholi khaylaen chanda se
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bistar ki chadar gudgodae jab takia gal sehlae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
qudrat ke haseen nazarun me jab tumhara rang nazar na aee
mujhe tum yad ate ho
ghazal koi ashiqana geet koi suhana rooh me uter jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
fasan e muhabbat maen do dil jab ek doje ko tas'kheer kerlaen
mujhe tum yad ate ho
tanhai maen sannata jab sergushian dhundhne nikle
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jism ki zerkhaez mitti jab apne raz ugalti hae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bhool jate ho yad rakhna jab chand yad'ga'rain
mujhe tum yad ate ho
soch ke perde pe jab judai ka manzar tt'her sa jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
nazar talash kerti hae jab hathun me un-toot rishte ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
muqam e berzakh pe pohanch ke rooh chahti he jab kisi sathi ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hud yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hisab hud se zayadah yad ate ho
subah.. [b][/center][/b]
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Nam e jamhoor pe bazaar saja rakha hay
biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Sun Nov 01, 2009 4:41 pm |
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subahh wrote: soraj ki sona kirnaen dastak daen jab dar o dewar per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
paon pehla qadam uthae jab sung-e-marmar ki dehlez per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe jo pehla shakhs mele muskera ke jab salam kere
mujhe tum yad ate ho
kam kerte kerte yaksooe kho jae zahn rasta bhatak jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
koi aas toot jae jab khushi roth ke wapis na aae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jhil mil tare raat ko jab ankh micholi khaylaen chanda se
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bistar ki chadar gudgodae jab takia gal sehlae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
qudrat ke haseen nazarun me jab tumhara rang nazar na aee
mujhe tum yad ate ho
ghazal koi ashiqana geet koi suhana rooh me uter jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
fasan e muhabbat maen do dil jab ek doje ko tas'kheer kerlaen
mujhe tum yad ate ho
tanhai maen sannata jab sergushian dhundhne nikle
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jism ki zerkhaez mitti jab apne raz ugalti hae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bhool jate ho yad rakhna jab chand yad'ga'rain
mujhe tum yad ate ho
soch ke perde pe jab judai ka manzar tt'her sa jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
nazar talash kerti hae jab hathun me un-toot rishte ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
muqam e berzakh pe pohanch ke rooh chahti he jab kisi sathi ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hud yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hisab hud se zayadah yad ate ho
subah.. very Nice subah je... likhti rahiye 
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Post subject: Re: yargh'maal muhabbat Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 6:14 am |
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subahh wrote: Yargh'maal Muhabbat
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muhabbat kerte rehne ka wada
aur woh bhi ghair mashroot !!!
muhabbat main khud_gharzi essi !
ke yarghmaal kerlia mere apnepun ko
yarqan sa hogaya mere jazbun ko
yak-musht mar dia muhabbatun ko
apni marzi ki bun'dook meri kun'patti pe rakhi
aur kaha ..................
" jesa main kehta jaun ...
wesa hi kerti jao "
subah.. Sabia!
nihayat umda...
Parrh kar ehsaas hua k 'yahan to taqreeban tamaam muhabbatain hi yargh'maal hain ...
Best of luck to all true lovers....
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:22 pm |
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subahh wrote: soraj ki sona kirnaen dastak daen jab dar o dewar per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
paon pehla qadam uthae jab sung-e-marmar ki dehlez per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe jo pehla shakhs mele muskera ke jab salam kere
mujhe tum yad ate ho
kam kerte kerte yaksooe kho jae zahn rasta bhatak jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
koi aas toot jae jab khushi roth ke wapis na aae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jhil mil tare raat ko jab ankh micholi khaylaen chanda se
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bistar ki chadar gudgodae jab takia gal sehlae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
qudrat ke haseen nazarun me jab tumhara rang nazar na aee
mujhe tum yad ate ho
ghazal koi ashiqana geet koi suhana rooh me uter jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
fasan e muhabbat maen do dil jab ek doje ko tas'kheer kerlaen
mujhe tum yad ate ho
tanhai maen sannata jab sergushian dhundhne nikle
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jism ki zerkhaez mitti jab apne raz ugalti hae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bhool jate ho yad rakhna jab chand yad'ga'rain
mujhe tum yad ate ho
soch ke perde pe jab judai ka manzar tt'her sa jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
nazar talash kerti hae jab hathun me un-toot rishte ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
muqam e berzakh pe pohanch ke rooh chahti he jab kisi sathi ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hud yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hisab hud se zayadah yad ate ho
subah..
Lajawaab takhleeq subah jee... bohat khoob! Naz'm main kamaal ki rawangi hai. Wah!
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 6:35 am |
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kheyal o masooma aap dostun ka buhat shukria khush rahain
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:13 am |
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subahh,
aaj mujko ye moqa mila k apka kalam dekhun .iss tamam page ko bare inhamak se para. apki ghzlen aur nazmen bhut umda aur ek anokha andaz rakhtee hain .meree taraf se bhut bhut daad qabool karen .
khair andesh MASOOD ZUBERI
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:00 pm |
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masood_zuberi wrote: subahh,
aaj mujko ye moqa mila k apka kalam dekhun .iss tamam page ko bare inhamak se para. apki ghzlen aur nazmen bhut umda aur ek anokha andaz rakhtee hain .meree taraf se bhut bhut daad qabool karen .
khair andesh MASOOD ZUBERI buhat shkria masood
khush rahain..
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 11:56 pm |
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wah, bhout he khoob. asal mai achay kalaam ko sarhana bhi aik bhout bara funn hai, abhee, hum tou auss manzil pe bhi nahe phounchay. magar myaare aur rooh ko choo jana waly kalamm ki aik khaseyet ye bhi hai, k auusay puree tarah sarhanay, ye sumajtna se bhi barh ker aik aur maqaam hai jo ehsaas ha maqaam hai, buss iss he ehsaas, ko choota hai ap ka kalaam, auss ki looch, auss ki kasak.
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:40 am |
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MUHIB wrote: wah, bhout he khoob. asal mai achay kalaam ko sarhana bhi aik bhout bara funn hai, abhee, hum tou auss manzil pe bhi nahe phounchay. magar myaare aur rooh ko choo jana waly kalamm ki aik khaseyet ye bhi hai, k auusay puree tarah sarhanay, ye sumajtna se bhi barh ker aik aur maqaam hai jo ehsaas ha maqaam hai, buss iss he ehsaas, ko choota hai ap ka kalaam, auss ki looch, auss ki kasak. muhib apne qata'ee durust kermaya ...kalaam ko samajhne, serhane se barh ke ussay mehsoos kernay ka nam hi ....muntaha e ahsass hae es qader tehseen o tareef ka teh e dil se shukria khush rahain subah..
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 3:46 am |
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subahh wrote: aap sab ki nazr aek nazm jo bari nazakat o bareekbini se likhi gai hae
jo meri pasundidah nazmon me se aek hae...hazir e mehfil hae:
lams e rooh
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oski peshani se
shabnami qatre
tapak ker
meri jheel se
gehri ankhun main
gir pare the
eek thandak
rooh tak pohnchi thi
yeh do jism nahi
do rohain theen
jo gumgushta
jannat tak pohncheen theen
subah..
Kya gehrai hai... wahh!
Iss naz'm par tou designing honi chahiye.
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Post subject: Re: huzn ka saal Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 6:09 am |
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subahh wrote: apni jawan saal betti o bettay ki mout kay waqt
'Huzn ka saal"
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harf e shika'et nahi
saal e huzn hae to kya
HASEEB ne haseen taqdeer to likh dali
yum e hisab hasrat na rahe baqi
hikmat e Elahi,hikmat e qattai
haqaeeq ka pardah jab chak kerke dekha
kisi ne meri nazr se munzar ko na dekha
hungae jab sab ke sab hawas bakhta
bhari bheedh main hum hunge sanadyaftah
resham kamkhab atlas abraq pehne hoe
lal gohar yaqoot ke bala khanun main sakunyaftah
na khana weerani
na khana kharabi
ghamun main palna
dard e judai sehna
sabr kerna
darasal khabaes se bachne ka hae ek rasta
main khud ko deelasa deti rahi
samjhati rahi ke ye koi kham khayali nahi
es main taqdeer ki zara bhi khami nahi
khamosh..!!!
khuda wasta...khamosh aee hawa
ye raz o nayaz guft o shooneed
koi aur son na lae
khabar rasaN na ban
razdaN ban
gar tujhe zara sa hae meri khabargiri ka pas
kisi se na kehna jo dil pe hae guzri
bilashubah WOH Khabeer bhi hae
Aleem bhi hae
samee o Baseer bhi
hum hazir hain khidmat main uski
labbaek Allahum'ma labbaek kehte hoe
yak lakht yak ba yak darood parhte hoe
subah.. inna lillahe w inna elehi rajeun .mere pas wo alfaz naheen jo apke liye dilase ka sabab ban saken .aap ke kalam ko parke ye andaza karna mushkil nahi k aap ek bhut paree likhee khatoon hain.ilm sabar karne walon kee meerass hai .allah ne hazoor ko ilm diya aur sabr bhi k apki aulad-e- nareena zinda n rahi.hum sab lagon ne kabhi n kabhi wahin lotkar jana hai.aulad hamaree bhut baree azmaish hai .dua karta hun Allah apko sabr de aur kisi ko aulad ka dukh n dekhai.ye dukh meree mama ne bhi uthaya .mein issko samajta hoon , aap ek maan hain app azeem hain .apka bhai Masood Zuberi
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:41 am |
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Masooma wrote: subahh wrote: aap sab ki nazr aek nazm jo bari nazakat o bareekbini se likhi gai hae
jo meri pasundidah nazmon me se aek hae...hazir e mehfil hae:
lams e rooh
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oski peshani se
shabnami qatre
tapak ker
meri jheel se
gehri ankhun main
gir pare the
eek thandak
rooh tak pohnchi thi
yeh do jism nahi
do rohain theen
jo gumgushta
jannat tak pohncheen theen
subah..
Kya gehrai hai... wahh!
Iss naz'm par tou designing honi chahiye.
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tawakel ALALLAH
kon kehta he k mer jaon ga
main derya hon samender main utter jaon.
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:37 pm |
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sabia ... yargmal e muhabat buhat passand ai
buhat khoob sada khush rahiye
ap kay liye dhairon duayen
dua go
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 7:54 pm |
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subahh wrote: aap sab ki nazr aek nazm jo bari nazakat o bareekbini se likhi gai hae
jo meri pasundidah nazmon me se aek hae...hazir e mehfil hae:
lams e rooh
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oski peshani se
shabnami qatre
tapak ker
meri jheel se
gehri ankhun main
gir pare the
eek thandak
rooh tak pohnchi thi
yeh do jism nahi
do rohain theen
jo gumgushta
jannat tak pohncheen theen
subah.. Subah, bohat hi khobsorat nazm hai....bohat say un kahay jazbaat ki tarjumaan, bohat gehrai liye huway. dil ki gehraiyon se daad qabool kijiye.... Tabassum
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:03 pm |
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Mehsus to karta hoon magar chu nahi sakta.
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:21 am |
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