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 Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah
PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 1:56 pm 
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mubee , waheed ahmed,talash e zeest,chandni
aap sab sathiyun ka buhat buhat shukria..
khush rahain
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soraj ki sona kirnaen dastak daen jab dar o dewar per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
paon pehla qadam uthae jab sung-e-marmar ki dehlez per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe jo pehla shakhs mele muskera ke jab salam kere
mujhe tum yad ate ho
kam kerte kerte yaksooe kho jae zahn rasta bhatak jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
koi aas toot jae jab khushi roth ke wapis na aae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jhil mil tare raat ko jab ankh micholi khaylaen chanda se
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bistar ki chadar gudgodae jab takia gal sehlae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
qudrat ke haseen nazarun me jab tumhara rang nazar na aee
mujhe tum yad ate ho
ghazal koi ashiqana geet koi suhana rooh me uter jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
fasan e muhabbat maen do dil jab ek doje ko tas'kheer kerlaen
mujhe tum yad ate ho
tanhai maen sannata jab sergushian dhundhne nikle
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jism ki zerkhaez mitti jab apne raz ugalti hae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bhool jate ho yad rakhna jab chand yad'ga'rain
mujhe tum yad ate ho
soch ke perde pe jab judai ka manzar tt'her sa jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
nazar talash kerti hae jab hathun me un-toot rishte ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
muqam e berzakh pe pohanch ke rooh chahti he jab kisi sathi ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hud yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hisab hud se zayadah yad ate ho

subah..




Beautiful collection Subah jee keep it up dear wish u a good luck :b)b: :b)b:



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 Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah
PostPosted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 3:27 pm 
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bohat hee aala kawishain hain aap kee subahh,

keep it up my best wishes with you.


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Salasal
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salasal ki sakht zameen pe bethe

zanjeer ki karyun ko khunkhanane lage the

sun'nata sain sain kerta tha

koi ja esi na thee jahan amaN pain

na koi ehsas baqi

bajuz ess ke............

ke haan ! abhi sans baqi hae

abhi mout nahi aaee

mout kyun na aee????

tub phir kisi ki yad main gum

ghari ki raftar se tez bhagne lage the

kai sadyan...............

aek lamhe ki chah main

yun hi salasal main raegan guzar gain

un ka pecha kerte rahe ke kash hath lag jain

woh muhabbat kay lamhe

jo kabhi apne na hoae

subah..

Bohat zabardast Sabia,
Aik achhoota andaaz, aik ahsaas, aik pyaas hai iss kalaam main
Bohat si daad qubool karain
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wah ...yuunh hi salasal main raigan guzar gaien

sabia buhat rulati hain ap
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boht aala nazam he subah gi wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh


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sahil e tamanah aur raza
aap ka behud shkria ...aapne waqt nikala aur ...mere soopurd kia ...nawazish he aap dostun ki ..



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aap ki shairy bohat achi hai jii...keep it up :buke: :buke: :buke:


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aap ki shairy bohat achi hai jii...keep it up :buke: :buke: :buke:

buhat nawazish ...karam...mehrbani...ahsan o shukria



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 Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah
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subah ji sahiba kya khoob andaz hey sub se judah sub se gehra .
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subah ji hum aap ke new kalam ke intazar men hen....

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 Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah
PostPosted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 10:39 pm 
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kisi aur sai'yare ki makhlooq ho jese
maa ne tujhay janam na dia ho jesay

essay kessay hojate hain insaan bewafa
jesse ko tessa kabhi na mila ho jesse

essa nahi ke jannat ki hoor na thi
kisi ki khata ne be-ghar kiya ho jesse

siyah kaghaz pe siyahi ne likha tha
siyah-bakhti hud se sewa ho jesse

naseebun-jali se hum door hi bhalay
so baat ki ek baat woh kergaya ho jesse

jisko dhundhti hae nazr dur-badur
kisi aur sai'yare pe ja busa ho jese

dustarus ke aas-pas gumaN ke qarib
khuda apne hi ghar reh raha ho jese


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 Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah
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subahh wrote:
kisi aur sai'yare ki makhlooq ho jese
maa ne tujhay janam na dia ho jesay

essay kessay hojate hain insaan bewafa
jesse ko tessa kabhi na mila ho jesse

essa nahi ke jannat ki hoor na thi
kisi ki khata ne be-ghar kiya ho jesse

siyah kaghaz pe siyahi ne likha tha
siyah-bakhti hud se sewa ho jesse

naseebun-jali se hum door hi bhalay
so baat ki ek baat woh kergaya ho jesse


subah gi ye gazal nahi he ak pursoze hayat per noha wa aah o zari he. kia kehny wah gi wah... ap ke kalam men ak mobhum dard chupa he jo likhny waly ke saath beeta ho.......issy per humen apna ak sher yaad aaya ke..


teri be rookhi dekhi to lugi ye kahawut jhooti,
ke piyar wahshi ko kurta he insan kabhi kabhi...

:((: :((: :((: :((: :((: :((: :((: :((: :((: :((:



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 Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah
PostPosted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:00 am 
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Judaganah yaarana
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woh bhi shairy kerta tha kisi ke lie
meri bhi hikayat theen kisi aur ke naam
osne kaha "mujhay tum achi lagti ho
shaid ke muhabbat kerne laga hon"
main ne kaha ....
"tum bhi zaghm-khurdah ho
main bhi hon parah parah
nahi yeh muhabbat nahi
ek bahana he
haar maanke samjhhota kerne ka
hum phir bhi peech'hli muhabbatun ke
sehr main rahain ge
peech'hloun ki nai muhabbat ki aaqqibat
phir bhi saanwer hi jai ge
peech'hloun ne sab assbaaq
seekh lie hain hum se...
kabhi na bhoolne wale
hum ko bhi koi naya tajrooba kerna hoga...
per...phir bhi...choonke....choonache....
aae humdard humdam mere yaar....!!!
aab yarah nahi ...
piyar kerne ka."

subah..



Mashaallah bahut khoobsurat likha hai. har ek lafz dil mein utarnewala...

Khush rahein Hamesha.


subah! kia bat hay ,ki kitna sach likha hay aao nay,bohat khoob, dheron daad qubool famayyay



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sahil-E-tamana wrote:
subahh wrote:
soraj ki sona kirnaen dastak daen jab dar o dewar per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
paon pehla qadam uthae jab sung-e-marmar ki dehlez per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe jo pehla shakhs mele muskera ke jab salam kere
mujhe tum yad ate ho
kam kerte kerte yaksooe kho jae zahn rasta bhatak jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
koi aas toot jae jab khushi roth ke wapis na aae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jhil mil tare raat ko jab ankh micholi khaylaen chanda se
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bistar ki chadar gudgodae jab takia gal sehlae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
qudrat ke haseen nazarun me jab tumhara rang nazar na aee
mujhe tum yad ate ho
ghazal koi ashiqana geet koi suhana rooh me uter jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
fasan e muhabbat maen do dil jab ek doje ko tas'kheer kerlaen
mujhe tum yad ate ho
tanhai maen sannata jab sergushian dhundhne nikle
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jism ki zerkhaez mitti jab apne raz ugalti hae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bhool jate ho yad rakhna jab chand yad'ga'rain
mujhe tum yad ate ho
soch ke perde pe jab judai ka manzar tt'her sa jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
nazar talash kerti hae jab hathun me un-toot rishte ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
muqam e berzakh pe pohanch ke rooh chahti he jab kisi sathi ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hud yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hisab hud se zayadah yad ate ho

subah..




Beautiful collection Subah jee keep it up dear wish u a good luck :b)b: :b)b:

boht umdeh ahsasat mujhey tum yad atey ho.............. :b)b:



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 Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah
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jisko dhundhti hae nazr dur-badur
kisi aur sai'yare pe ja busa ho jese

dustarus ke aas-pas gumaN ke qarib
khuda apne hi ghar reh raha ho jese


WAH GI WAH kia kehny subah gi wah.... khas tor per 2nd sher wah.. iss sher men soofiyana rung dekh raha hon.......boht khubsoorat edit kiye hen ap ny ye ashaar...... iss bat per ak hamara sher aap ki nazr he..

israr aekaai baseerat madoom se daaim hoa,
qutra qoolzum bun gaya huq haqeeqat jaam se.
(qoolzum= samander)....

miskeen.



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meri rooh
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aee meri rooh ke sathee

aj se kuch hi arse bad

main jab mar jaun gee

khushboo ka badan ban ke

raat ke kisi akhair paher

tere pas aoun gee

band derecha dekh ke

dam-bakhud reh jaun gee

phir kisi khirki ke raste

dabe paoun

kamre main aaun gee

tum ko bister pe

neem'daraz dekh ke

thora sa muskuraun gee

tumhain chhoone ke koshish main

tumhare paer gudgudaun gee

tumhe pehlu badalta dekh ke

buhat maa'yus hojaun gee

tumhare sarhane aake

kaNun main sergoshian kerun gee

jo tum son na pao ge

jo main keh paun gee

tumhain eek lams e muhabbat se choom ke

wapis lot jaun gee

subah..



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meri rooh
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aee meri rooh ke sathee

aj se kuch hi arse bad

main jab mar jaun gee

khushboo ka badan ban ke

raat ke kisi akhair paher

tere pas aoun gee

band derecha dekh ke

dam-bakhud reh jaun gee

phir kisi khirki ke raste

dabe paoun

kamre main aaun gee

tum ko bister pe

neem'daraz dekh ke

thora sa muskuraun gee

tumhain chhoone ke koshish main

tumhare paer gudgudaun gee

tumhe pehlu badalta dekh ke

buhat maa'yus hojaun gee

tumhare sarhane aake

kaNun main sergoshian kerun gee

jo tum son na pao ge

jo main keh paun gee

tumhain eek lams e muhabbat se choom ke

wapis lot jaun gee

subah..



nice yaar nice sharing.. pata nahi kaha kaha se lafaz ati hai ap.. . perta ho apki peotry bus reply nahi kerta tha..sorry .



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habss-e-dil
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habss e dil main rooh ko ghutan si hoti hae
ae mere masiha tou hae kahaN aaj ki raat

kuch faslun ke beej hum nae boe the jo
tanhaiyun ke beech main kataiN aaj ki raat

kuch batain unkahi,muhlat bhi na-kafi hae
kuch naza ka bhi hae imkaN aaj ki raat

kal subh ho ke na ho,beyaqeeni si raat
dawa ,dua bartaraf,raho yahiN aaj ki raat

kal ka soraj ek naya din leke jab ubhre ga
yadun ki qabr main kerdena daffN aaj ki raat

subah..



zabardat yaar.. wasay book likhana shorao ker day mam.. i tell u..



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Nice yar.



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lonely_life1 wrote:
subahh wrote:
habss-e-dil
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habss e dil main rooh ko ghutan si hoti hae
ae mere masiha tou hae kahaN aaj ki raat

kuch faslun ke beej hum nae boe the jo
tanhaiyun ke beech main kataiN aaj ki raat

kuch batain unkahi,muhlat bhi na-kafi hae
kuch naza ka bhi hae imkaN aaj ki raat

kal subh ho ke na ho,beyaqeeni si raat
dawa ,dua bartaraf,raho yahiN aaj ki raat

kal ka soraj ek naya din leke jab ubhre ga
yadun ki qabr main kerdena daffN aaj ki raat

subah..



zabardat yaar.. wasay book likhana shorao ker day mam.. i tell u..


uffffffffff....ye gazal aap ki he subah gi? boht dino se soch raha tha ke jo dost ny sms ki thi gazal (aaj ki raat) wo boht classical gazal thi kis ki hogi? aaj ap ke thread men purhi.. boht aala gazal he waaaaaaaaaaaaah..... nazam bhi boht achi he.. likhti rahen khush rahen...

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subahh wrote:
meri rooh
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aee meri rooh ke sathee



subah..


Very nice poem Subahh g.


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azhar munir,miskeen,ramsha,desireable,lonely-life (aur jis kisi ka nam reh gaya ho)aap sab sathiyun ka buhat buhat shukria
khush rahain'subah..


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bohat hee umeda kalam sabahh jee,

kal ka soraj ek naya din leke jab ubhre ga
yadun ki qabr main kerdena daffN aaj ki raat


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QATRAH QATRAH
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qatrah qatrah , moti moti

ansoouN ki lari khul gaye hai

kaesi cho'tt lagi hai dil per

jisse haal yeh huwa hai

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sub ka zaiqa aek sa hae

ta'alook rog hae aisa la-eelaj

dua, dawa, daru bekaar

mai hosh mai nahi thi

mai kya kho chuki thi

iss-qaddr,...qaddr huee hae jab

jiss qaddr, door hoe ho tab

mai woh son rahi thee

woh jo tum keh rahe the

rooz-e-awal ho tum

rooz-e-akhir ho tum

meri zindagi ho tum

yani maut bhi tum

tere paseene ke woh qatre jab

mere jism-o-jaaN pe

mushq banke mehke

tere ansouN ke woh gohar

mere ehsaas-e-sard pe

kholta seesa banke tapke

tere khoon-e-jigar ke woh mohre

meri bisa'at-e-jaaN pe

maat se pehle....

zara se jhijhke

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sab ka zaiqa ek sa hae

meri be-hissi se lipat ke roeen

tere ehsaas-e-ghum ki yaadain

mujhe kuch yaad agaya

mujhe kuch hosh agaya

zamana woh purana

woh saal woh mahina

mere hum-nafas !!!

teri chahat ki had ki

kahin had bandi nahi hae

jo hadse guzar jaye

aesi chahat bhi kum nahi hae

meri kismaat pe haiN nazaaN

jo yeh qissa-e-muhabbat hain sunte

yeh mai kaise maan jaon

unhaiN hasad tak nahi hae

pari washoon ke tujh pe

nazr-e-bad bhi nahi hae

tu bahar banke aya

suroor banke chaya

tujh pe rashq hai bala ka

tu enaam hai khuda ka

tuhi mera sahara tuhi mera kinara

meri duain sari

ho'een tujh pe wari

tera qarz hai mujh pe jari

mera piyar wajib-ul-ada hai

tera ishq hai walehanah

is maiN hae woh wussat

jo wasila hai zindagi ka

tere visaal se pehle

meri wasiat se pehle

phir ek baar ghour kar lain

safr-e-hayyat maiN saath ho lain

subah..



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Bohat hee ummeda, afreen, lawjawab, sada bahar:

Zindabad subah jee

keep it up with great energy..


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QATRAH QATRAH
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qatrah qatrah , moti moti

ansoouN ki lari khul gaye hai

kaesi cho'tt lagi hai dil per

jisse haal yeh huwa hai

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sub ka zaiqa aek sa hae

ta'alook rog hae aisa la-eelaj

dua, dawa, daru bekaar

mai hosh mai nahi thi

mai kya kho chuki thi

iss-qaddr,...qaddr huee hae jab

jiss qaddr, door hoe ho tab

mai woh son rahi thee

woh jo tum keh rahe the

rooz-e-awal ho tum

rooz-e-akhir ho tum

meri zindagi ho tum

yani maut bhi tum

tere paseene ke woh qatre jab

mere jism-o-jaaN pe

mushq banke mehke

tere ansouN ke woh gohar

mere ehsaas-e-sard pe

kholta seesa banke tapke

tere khoon-e-jigar ke woh mohre

meri bisa'at-e-jaaN pe

maat se pehle....

zara se jhijhke

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sab ka zaiqa ek sa hae

meri be-hissi se lipat ke roeen

tere ehsaas-e-ghum ki yaadain

mujhe kuch yaad agaya

mujhe kuch hosh agaya

zamana woh purana

woh saal woh mahina

mere hum-nafas !!!

teri chahat ki had ki

kahin had bandi nahi hae

jo hadse guzar jaye

aesi chahat bhi kum nahi hae

meri kismaat pe haiN nazaaN

jo yeh qissa-e-muhabbat hain sunte

yeh mai kaise maan jaon

unhaiN hasad tak nahi hae

pari washoon ke tujh pe

nazr-e-bad bhi nahi hae

tu bahar banke aya

suroor banke chaya

tujh pe rashq hai bala ka

tu enaam hai khuda ka

tuhi mera sahara tuhi mera kinara

meri duain sari

ho'een tujh pe wari

tera qarz hai mujh pe jari

mera piyar wajib-ul-ada hai

tera ishq hai walehanah

is maiN hae woh wussat

jo wasila hai zindagi ka

tere visaal se pehle

meri wasiat se pehle

phir ek baar ghour kar lain

safr-e-hayyat maiN saath ho lain

subah..


wahhhhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bohat khoob subah jee, bohat umda bohat achi nazm kahi hay aap nay,bohat si daad qubool farmayyay.



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QATRAH QATRAH
-----------------------------------------------
qatrah qatrah , moti moti

ansoouN ki lari khul gaye hai

kaesi cho'tt lagi hai dil per

jisse haal yeh huwa hai

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sub ka zaiqa aek sa hae

ta'alook rog hae aisa la-eelaj

dua, dawa, daru bekaar

mai hosh mai nahi thi

mai kya kho chuki thi

iss-qaddr,...qaddr huee hae jab

jiss qaddr, door hoe ho tab

mai woh son rahi thee

woh jo tum keh rahe the

rooz-e-awal ho tum

rooz-e-akhir ho tum

meri zindagi ho tum

yani maut bhi tum

tere paseene ke woh qatre jab

mere jism-o-jaaN pe

mushq banke mehke

tere ansouN ke woh gohar

mere ehsaas-e-sard pe

kholta seesa banke tapke

tere khoon-e-jigar ke woh mohre

meri bisa'at-e-jaaN pe

maat se pehle....

zara se jhijhke

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sab ka zaiqa ek sa hae

meri be-hissi se lipat ke roeen

tere ehsaas-e-ghum ki yaadain

mujhe kuch yaad agaya

mujhe kuch hosh agaya

zamana woh purana

woh saal woh mahina

mere hum-nafas !!!

teri chahat ki had ki

kahin had bandi nahi hae

jo hadse guzar jaye

aesi chahat bhi kum nahi hae

meri kismaat pe haiN nazaaN

jo yeh qissa-e-muhabbat hain sunte

yeh mai kaise maan jaon

unhaiN hasad tak nahi hae

pari washoon ke tujh pe

nazr-e-bad bhi nahi hae

tu bahar banke aya

suroor banke chaya

tujh pe rashq hai bala ka

tu enaam hai khuda ka

tuhi mera sahara tuhi mera kinara

meri duain sari

ho'een tujh pe wari

tera qarz hai mujh pe jari

mera piyar wajib-ul-ada hai

tera ishq hai walehanah

is maiN hae woh wussat

jo wasila hai zindagi ka

tere visaal se pehle

meri wasiat se pehle

phir ek baar ghour kar lain

safr-e-hayyat maiN saath ho lain

subah..


hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.. zabardast yaar.. kaha kaha se lati hai ap lafaz yaar. i can't believe . wasay ap jab likhti hai kuch tu sochoti ho gi .. hmmmmmm lakin jo b sochti hai. paper uska double ahsas utarti hai.. really nice..



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subahh wrote:
QATRAH QATRAH
-----------------------------------------------
qatrah qatrah , moti moti

ansoouN ki lari khul gaye hai

kaesi cho'tt lagi hai dil per

jisse haal yeh huwa hai

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sub ka zaiqa aek sa hae

ta'alook rog hae aisa la-eelaj

dua, dawa, daru bekaar

mai hosh mai nahi thi

mai kya kho chuki thi

iss-qaddr,...qaddr huee hae jab

jiss qaddr, door hoe ho tab

mai woh son rahi thee

woh jo tum keh rahe the

rooz-e-awal ho tum

rooz-e-akhir ho tum

meri zindagi ho tum

yani maut bhi tum

tere paseene ke woh qatre jab

mere jism-o-jaaN pe

mushq banke mehke

tere ansouN ke woh gohar

mere ehsaas-e-sard pe

kholta seesa banke tapke

tere khoon-e-jigar ke woh mohre

meri bisa'at-e-jaaN pe

maat se pehle....

zara se jhijhke

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sab ka zaiqa ek sa hae

meri be-hissi se lipat ke roeen

tere ehsaas-e-ghum ki yaadain

mujhe kuch yaad agaya

mujhe kuch hosh agaya

zamana woh purana

woh saal woh mahina

mere hum-nafas !!!

teri chahat ki had ki

kahin had bandi nahi hae

jo hadse guzar jaye

aesi chahat bhi kum nahi hae

meri kismaat pe haiN nazaaN

jo yeh qissa-e-muhabbat hain sunte

yeh mai kaise maan jaon

unhaiN hasad tak nahi hae

pari washoon ke tujh pe

nazr-e-bad bhi nahi hae

tu bahar banke aya

suroor banke chaya

tujh pe rashq hai bala ka

tu enaam hai khuda ka

tuhi mera sahara tuhi mera kinara

meri duain sari

ho'een tujh pe wari

tera qarz hai mujh pe jari

mera piyar wajib-ul-ada hai

tera ishq hai walehanah

is maiN hae woh wussat

jo wasila hai zindagi ka

tere visaal se pehle

meri wasiat se pehle

phir ek baar ghour kar lain

safr-e-hayyat maiN saath ho lain

subah..

Wahh Jee Bohat Umda :buke:
Keep Sharing :)O



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subahh wrote:
QATRAH QATRAH
-----------------------------------------------
qatrah qatrah , moti moti

ansoouN ki lari khul gaye hai

kaesi cho'tt lagi hai dil per

jisse haal yeh huwa hai

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sub ka zaiqa aek sa hae

ta'alook rog hae aisa la-eelaj

dua, dawa, daru bekaar

mai hosh mai nahi thi

mai kya kho chuki thi

iss-qaddr,...qaddr huee hae jab

jiss qaddr, door hoe ho tab

mai woh son rahi thee

woh jo tum keh rahe the

rooz-e-awal ho tum

rooz-e-akhir ho tum

meri zindagi ho tum

yani maut bhi tum

tere paseene ke woh qatre jab

mere jism-o-jaaN pe

mushq banke mehke

tere ansouN ke woh gohar

mere ehsaas-e-sard pe

kholta seesa banke tapke

tere khoon-e-jigar ke woh mohre

meri bisa'at-e-jaaN pe

maat se pehle....

zara se jhijhke

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sab ka zaiqa ek sa hae

meri be-hissi se lipat ke roeen

tere ehsaas-e-ghum ki yaadain

mujhe kuch yaad agaya

mujhe kuch hosh agaya

zamana woh purana

woh saal woh mahina

mere hum-nafas !!!

teri chahat ki had ki

kahin had bandi nahi hae

jo hadse guzar jaye

aesi chahat bhi kum nahi hae

meri kismaat pe haiN nazaaN

jo yeh qissa-e-muhabbat hain sunte

yeh mai kaise maan jaon

unhaiN hasad tak nahi hae

pari washoon ke tujh pe

nazr-e-bad bhi nahi hae

tu bahar banke aya

suroor banke chaya

tujh pe rashq hai bala ka

tu enaam hai khuda ka

tuhi mera sahara tuhi mera kinara

meri duain sari

ho'een tujh pe wari

tera qarz hai mujh pe jari

mera piyar wajib-ul-ada hai

tera ishq hai walehanah

is maiN hae woh wussat

jo wasila hai zindagi ka

tere visaal se pehle

meri wasiat se pehle

phir ek baar ghour kar lain

safr-e-hayyat maiN saath ho lain

subah..


humesha ki tarah sub se aala aur seb se munfarid aik nehayet hi baviqar suljhi
huwi tehreer. congratulation subah jee A llah ap ki her tamna poori kerey,amin.
humesha khosh rahen dua go ...



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kehtay hain..aankhen bhi sma'ut rukhti hain....aur hurf....koi shukl...koi suret.
woh aa'hateN.....jo zird puttoN pe...kisi beetay wuqt ki chap hain.
hawa k woh jhonkay....jo ub bhi bund d'reechon se tukratay hain.

khubsuret kheyalat hain....likhtay raheN k behtri ki gunjaesh hamesha rehti hai.
shadab rahen....



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raza ,mahtabhashmi , lonely life
aap ka buhat shukria...qader dan hon aapki
khush rahain
subah..



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subahh,
kamal ki nazm likhi apne . english adab mein keats ki shairy bhi bhut dukh liye hai .apka kalam bhi keats ki jaisa hai .likhtee rahen .



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FANA O BAQA
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udas rahun pay tanha chalna dushwar tou nahi
dua kero koi rah-ber milay rah-zan nahi
main safr main rahi
safr mujh main raha
rastay ki oonch-neech
nashaib-o-faraz,
naqsh-bund kerty hoi
logun kay haseen chehrun ko
nigah-bund kerty hoi
patiyun kay naqsh o nigar
khad o khaal main gum
phoolun ki tarash kharash
rung o boo main mehw
mussawer kay tejreedi fun ko samjhtay hoay
USKI yad ko zahn'nasheen kertay hoay
taalab o duldul say bachtay bacha'tay

main nungay paun
chalti rahi
safr kerty rahi
agay berhty rahi

apni manzil e maqsood se zara pary
apni ishq ki masti say zara qarib
kuch der sustany ko
burgud ki ch'haun talay
ankh meech kay
ta'ssvo'raat ki duniya main kho kay
khwabun ki serhad tak pohnch gai
main nay dekha
ek shakhs unjan
meray dil main cho'hra ghounp kay
mera zad-e-rah kundhay pay lad kay
yeh ja woh ja
ankh khuli......
main nay dekha
meray tun pay
surkh gulabun ki chader tunni thi
hath berha kay jo ek phool chun'na chaha
surkh lahoo se hath hina alood hoay
"ISHQ KA BHOOT" haatheli pay
qehqahay laga kay
rags kernay laga
aur kehnay laga
"log ishq main fana hoty hain
wohi log qatl hotay hain
dar'assl baqa hotay hain
qatil kay chehray pay naqab
hathun main dustar hoty hain
kya ab bhi na samjhi paglee ?
woh tera rah-bar.....tera ashiq
tera rah-zan ......tera qatil nikla "

subah..



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subahh wrote:
shari wrote:
aap ki shairy bohat achi hai jii...keep it up :buke: :buke: :buke:

buhat nawazish ...karam...mehrbani...ahsan o shukria



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subahh wrote:
FANA O BAQA
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udas rahun pay tanha chalna dushwar tou nahi
dua kero koi rah-ber milay rah-zan nahi
main safr main rahi
safr mujh main raha
rastay ki oonch-neech
nashaib-o-faraz,
naqsh-bund kerty hoi
logun kay haseen chehrun ko
nigah-bund kerty hoi
patiyun kay naqsh o nigar
khad o khaal main gum
phoolun ki tarash kharash
rung o boo main mehw
mussawer kay tejreedi fun ko samjhtay hoay
USKI yad ko zahn'nasheen kertay hoay
taalab o duldul say bachtay bacha'tay

main nungay paun
chalti rahi
safr kerty rahi
agay berhty rahi

apni manzil e maqsood se zara pary
apni ishq ki masti say zara qarib
kuch der sustany ko
burgud ki ch'haun talay
ankh meech kay
ta'ssvo'raat ki duniya main kho kay
khwabun ki serhad tak pohnch gai
main nay dekha
ek shakhs unjan
meray dil main cho'hra ghounp kay
mera zad-e-rah kundhay pay lad kay
yeh ja woh ja
ankh khuli......
main nay dekha
meray tun pay
surkh gulabun ki chader tunni thi
hath berha kay jo ek phool chun'na chaha
surkh lahoo se hath hina alood hoay
"ISHQ KA BHOOT" haatheli pay
qehqahay laga kay
rags kernay laga
aur kehnay laga
"log ishq main fana hoty hain
wohi log qatl hotay hain
dar'assl baqa hotay hain
qatil kay chehray pay naqab
hathun main dustar hoty hain
kya ab bhi na samjhi paglee ?
woh tera rah-bar.....tera ashiq
tera rah-zan ......tera qatil nikla "

subah..


wah sabia...
kitna haqeeqi kalaam hai,




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subahh wrote:
FANA O BAQA
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udas rahun pay tanha chalna dushwar tou nahi
dua kero koi rah-ber milay rah-zan nahi
main safr main rahi
safr mujh main raha
rastay ki oonch-neech
nashaib-o-faraz,
naqsh-bund kerty hoi
logun kay haseen chehrun ko
nigah-bund kerty hoi
patiyun kay naqsh o nigar
khad o khaal main gum
phoolun ki tarash kharash
rung o boo main mehw
mussawer kay tejreedi fun ko samjhtay hoay
USKI yad ko zahn'nasheen kertay hoay
taalab o duldul say bachtay bacha'tay

main nungay paun
chalti rahi
safr kerty rahi
agay berhty rahi

apni manzil e maqsood se zara pary
apni ishq ki masti say zara qarib
kuch der sustany ko
burgud ki ch'haun talay
ankh meech kay
ta'ssvo'raat ki duniya main kho kay
khwabun ki serhad tak pohnch gai
main nay dekha
ek shakhs unjan
meray dil main cho'hra ghounp kay
mera zad-e-rah kundhay pay lad kay
yeh ja woh ja
ankh khuli......
main nay dekha
meray tun pay
surkh gulabun ki chader tunni thi
hath berha kay jo ek phool chun'na chaha
surkh lahoo se hath hina alood hoay
"ISHQ KA BHOOT" haatheli pay
qehqahay laga kay
rags kernay laga
aur kehnay laga
"log ishq main fana hoty hain
wohi log qatl hotay hain
dar'assl baqa hotay hain
qatil kay chehray pay naqab
hathun main dustar hoty hain
kya ab bhi na samjhi paglee ?
woh tera rah-bar.....tera ashiq
tera rah-zan ......tera qatil nikla "

subah..

buht aalapoetry he ji keep it up :b)b: :buke: :)



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sairana
buhat buhat shukria
khush rahain
subah..



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subahh wrote:
QATRAH QATRAH
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qatrah qatrah , moti moti

ansoouN ki lari khul gaye hai

kaesi cho'tt lagi hai dil per

jisse haal yeh huwa hai

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sub ka zaiqa aek sa hae

ta'alook rog hae aisa la-eelaj

dua, dawa, daru bekaar

mai hosh mai nahi thi

mai kya kho chuki thi

iss-qaddr,...qaddr huee hae jab

jiss qaddr, door hoe ho tab

mai woh son rahi thee

woh jo tum keh rahe the

rooz-e-awal ho tum

rooz-e-akhir ho tum

meri zindagi ho tum

yani maut bhi tum

tere paseene ke woh qatre jab

mere jism-o-jaaN pe

mushq banke mehke

tere ansouN ke woh gohar

mere ehsaas-e-sard pe

kholta seesa banke tapke

tere khoon-e-jigar ke woh mohre

meri bisa'at-e-jaaN pe

maat se pehle....

zara se jhijhke

ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar

sab ka zaiqa ek sa hae

meri be-hissi se lipat ke roeen

tere ehsaas-e-ghum ki yaadain

mujhe kuch yaad agaya

mujhe kuch hosh agaya

zamana woh purana

woh saal woh mahina

mere hum-nafas !!!

teri chahat ki had ki

kahin had bandi nahi hae

jo hadse guzar jaye

aesi chahat bhi kum nahi hae

meri kismaat pe haiN nazaaN

jo yeh qissa-e-muhabbat hain sunte

yeh mai kaise maan jaon

unhaiN hasad tak nahi hae

pari washoon ke tujh pe

nazr-e-bad bhi nahi hae

tu bahar banke aya

suroor banke chaya

tujh pe rashq hai bala ka

tu enaam hai khuda ka

tuhi mera sahara tuhi mera kinara

meri duain sari

ho'een tujh pe wari

tera qarz hai mujh pe jari

mera piyar wajib-ul-ada hai

tera ishq hai walehanah

is maiN hae woh wussat

jo wasila hai zindagi ka

tere visaal se pehle

meri wasiat se pehle

phir ek baar ghour kar lain

safr-e-hayyat maiN saath ho lain

subah..

Bohat he aa'la naz'm hai subahh jee.. mainay yeh naz'm aik baar nahi balkay bohat baar parhi aur har baar underlined hissay par aakar ruk gayi. Itni khoobsorati say khayalaat ka izhaar kiya hai aapnay kay wahhh! Bohat khoob!



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subahh,
kamal ki nazm likhi apne . english adab mein keats ki shairy bhi bhut dukh liye hai .apka kalam bhi keats ki jaisa hai .likhtee rahen .

buaht hi nawazish masood umeed kerte hain aap aindah bhi yahan ate rahain gae aur perthe rahain gae
thanks alot for replying
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