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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah  Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 8:58 am |
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subahh wrote: soraj ki sona kirnaen dastak daen jab dar o dewar per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
paon pehla qadam uthae jab sung-e-marmar ki dehlez per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe jo pehla shakhs mele muskera ke jab salam kere
mujhe tum yad ate ho
kam kerte kerte yaksooe kho jae zahn rasta bhatak jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
koi aas toot jae jab khushi roth ke wapis na aae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jhil mil tare raat ko jab ankh micholi khaylaen chanda se
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bistar ki chadar gudgodae jab takia gal sehlae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
qudrat ke haseen nazarun me jab tumhara rang nazar na aee
mujhe tum yad ate ho
ghazal koi ashiqana geet koi suhana rooh me uter jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
fasan e muhabbat maen do dil jab ek doje ko tas'kheer kerlaen
mujhe tum yad ate ho
tanhai maen sannata jab sergushian dhundhne nikle
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jism ki zerkhaez mitti jab apne raz ugalti hae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bhool jate ho yad rakhna jab chand yad'ga'rain
mujhe tum yad ate ho
soch ke perde pe jab judai ka manzar tt'her sa jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
nazar talash kerti hae jab hathun me un-toot rishte ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
muqam e berzakh pe pohanch ke rooh chahti he jab kisi sathi ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hud yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hisab hud se zayadah yad ate ho
subah.. Beautiful collection Subah jee keep it up dear wish u a good luck 
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kehte hai gam baatne se hota hai kam,
aisa hi kabhi pele maante the hum,
tere pyar ki nishani tera gam hi to mere paas,
wo bhi baat du to rahega kya mere paas**
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 10:27 am |
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bohat hee aala kawishain hain aap kee subahh,
keep it up my best wishes with you.
Regards,
Saleem
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Post subject: Re: salasal Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 1:51 pm |
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subahh wrote: Salasal
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salasal ki sakht zameen pe bethe
zanjeer ki karyun ko khunkhanane lage the
sun'nata sain sain kerta tha
koi ja esi na thee jahan amaN pain
na koi ehsas baqi
bajuz ess ke............
ke haan ! abhi sans baqi hae
abhi mout nahi aaee
mout kyun na aee????
tub phir kisi ki yad main gum
ghari ki raftar se tez bhagne lage the
kai sadyan...............
aek lamhe ki chah main
yun hi salasal main raegan guzar gain
un ka pecha kerte rahe ke kash hath lag jain
woh muhabbat kay lamhe
jo kabhi apne na hoae
subah.. Bohat zabardast Sabia,
Aik achhoota andaaz, aik ahsaas, aik pyaas hai iss kalaam main
Bohat si daad qubool karain
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Sat Nov 07, 2009 4:24 pm |
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wah ...yuunh hi salasal main raigan guzar gaien
sabia buhat rulati hain ap
khush rahiye
dua go
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Zindagi pehlay bhugat phr Tu Qaza ki Bat kar.
drd e Hijraa'n ka Asasa pass rakhta hun sameer
bat karni hai to dard e la-dawa ki Bat kar
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 2:54 pm |
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subah ji sahiba kya khoob andaz hey sub se judah sub se gehra . thanks togiving us johrenayab.
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tawakel ALALLAH
kon kehta he k mer jaon ga
main derya hon samender main utter jaon.
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Sun Nov 08, 2009 7:00 pm |
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ch@ndni wrote: subahh wrote: Judaganah yaarana
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woh bhi shairy kerta tha kisi ke lie
meri bhi hikayat theen kisi aur ke naam
osne kaha "mujhay tum achi lagti ho
shaid ke muhabbat kerne laga hon"
main ne kaha ....
"tum bhi zaghm-khurdah ho
main bhi hon parah parah
nahi yeh muhabbat nahi
ek bahana he
haar maanke samjhhota kerne ka
hum phir bhi peech'hli muhabbatun ke
sehr main rahain ge
peech'hloun ki nai muhabbat ki aaqqibat
phir bhi saanwer hi jai ge
peech'hloun ne sab assbaaq
seekh lie hain hum se...
kabhi na bhoolne wale
hum ko bhi koi naya tajrooba kerna hoga...
per...phir bhi...choonke....choonache....
aae humdard humdam mere yaar....!!!
aab yarah nahi ...
piyar kerne ka."
subah.. Mashaallah bahut khoobsurat likha hai. har ek lafz dil mein utarnewala... Khush rahein Hamesha. subah! kia bat hay ,ki kitna sach likha hay aao nay,bohat khoob, dheron daad qubool famayyay
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Nam e jamhoor pe bazaar saja rakha hay
biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 12:07 am |
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sahil-E-tamana wrote: subahh wrote: soraj ki sona kirnaen dastak daen jab dar o dewar per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
paon pehla qadam uthae jab sung-e-marmar ki dehlez per
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe jo pehla shakhs mele muskera ke jab salam kere
mujhe tum yad ate ho
kam kerte kerte yaksooe kho jae zahn rasta bhatak jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
koi aas toot jae jab khushi roth ke wapis na aae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jhil mil tare raat ko jab ankh micholi khaylaen chanda se
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bistar ki chadar gudgodae jab takia gal sehlae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
qudrat ke haseen nazarun me jab tumhara rang nazar na aee
mujhe tum yad ate ho
ghazal koi ashiqana geet koi suhana rooh me uter jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
fasan e muhabbat maen do dil jab ek doje ko tas'kheer kerlaen
mujhe tum yad ate ho
tanhai maen sannata jab sergushian dhundhne nikle
mujhe tum yad ate ho
jism ki zerkhaez mitti jab apne raz ugalti hae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
bhool jate ho yad rakhna jab chand yad'ga'rain
mujhe tum yad ate ho
soch ke perde pe jab judai ka manzar tt'her sa jae
mujhe tum yad ate ho
nazar talash kerti hae jab hathun me un-toot rishte ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
muqam e berzakh pe pohanch ke rooh chahti he jab kisi sathi ko
mujhe tum yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hud yad ate ho
mujhe tum be-hisab hud se zayadah yad ate ho
subah.. Beautiful collection Subah jee keep it up dear wish u a good luck boht umdeh ahsasat mujhey tum yad atey ho..............
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tawakel ALALLAH
kon kehta he k mer jaon ga
main derya hon samender main utter jaon.
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 10:41 am |
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jisko dhundhti hae nazr dur-badur
kisi aur sai'yare pe ja busa ho jese
dustarus ke aas-pas gumaN ke qarib
khuda apne hi ghar reh raha ho jese
WAH GI WAH kia kehny subah gi wah.... khas tor per 2nd sher wah.. iss sher men soofiyana rung dekh raha hon.......boht khubsoorat edit kiye hen ap ny ye ashaar...... iss bat per ak hamara sher aap ki nazr he..
israr aekaai baseerat madoom se daaim hoa,
qutra qoolzum bun gaya huq haqeeqat jaam se.
(qoolzum= samander)....
miskeen.
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 8:43 pm |
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subahh wrote: meri rooh
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aee meri rooh ke sathee
aj se kuch hi arse bad
main jab mar jaun gee
khushboo ka badan ban ke
raat ke kisi akhair paher
tere pas aoun gee
band derecha dekh ke
dam-bakhud reh jaun gee
phir kisi khirki ke raste
dabe paoun
kamre main aaun gee
tum ko bister pe
neem'daraz dekh ke
thora sa muskuraun gee
tumhain chhoone ke koshish main
tumhare paer gudgudaun gee
tumhe pehlu badalta dekh ke
buhat maa'yus hojaun gee
tumhare sarhane aake
kaNun main sergoshian kerun gee
jo tum son na pao ge
jo main keh paun gee
tumhain eek lams e muhabbat se choom ke
wapis lot jaun gee
subah.. nice yaar nice sharing.. pata nahi kaha kaha se lafaz ati hai ap.. . perta ho apki peotry bus reply nahi kerta tha..sorry .
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Post subject: Re: habss e dil Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 8:46 pm |
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subahh wrote: habss-e-dil
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habss e dil main rooh ko ghutan si hoti hae
ae mere masiha tou hae kahaN aaj ki raat
kuch faslun ke beej hum nae boe the jo
tanhaiyun ke beech main kataiN aaj ki raat
kuch batain unkahi,muhlat bhi na-kafi hae
kuch naza ka bhi hae imkaN aaj ki raat
kal subh ho ke na ho,beyaqeeni si raat
dawa ,dua bartaraf,raho yahiN aaj ki raat
kal ka soraj ek naya din leke jab ubhre ga
yadun ki qabr main kerdena daffN aaj ki raat
subah.. zabardat yaar.. wasay book likhana shorao ker day mam.. i tell u..
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 10:24 pm |
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Nice yar.
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[color=#FF0000][i]Shair na bani ik sawal ban gai,
mere dil ka ik haseen khayal ban gai... [/i]
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 6:38 am |
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subahh wrote: meri rooh
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aee meri rooh ke sathee
subah.. Very nice poem Subahh g.
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 9:28 am |
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bohat hee umeda kalam sabahh jee,
kal ka soraj ek naya din leke jab ubhre ga
yadun ki qabr main kerdena daffN aaj ki raat
Regards,
Saleem
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 11:19 am |
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Bohat hee ummeda, afreen, lawjawab, sada bahar:
Zindabad subah jee
keep it up with great energy..
Regards,
Saleem
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 4:27 pm |
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subahh wrote: QATRAH QATRAH
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qatrah qatrah , moti moti
ansoouN ki lari khul gaye hai
kaesi cho'tt lagi hai dil per
jisse haal yeh huwa hai
ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar
sub ka zaiqa aek sa hae
ta'alook rog hae aisa la-eelaj
dua, dawa, daru bekaar
mai hosh mai nahi thi
mai kya kho chuki thi
iss-qaddr,...qaddr huee hae jab
jiss qaddr, door hoe ho tab
mai woh son rahi thee
woh jo tum keh rahe the
rooz-e-awal ho tum
rooz-e-akhir ho tum
meri zindagi ho tum
yani maut bhi tum
tere paseene ke woh qatre jab
mere jism-o-jaaN pe
mushq banke mehke
tere ansouN ke woh gohar
mere ehsaas-e-sard pe
kholta seesa banke tapke
tere khoon-e-jigar ke woh mohre
meri bisa'at-e-jaaN pe
maat se pehle....
zara se jhijhke
ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar
sab ka zaiqa ek sa hae
meri be-hissi se lipat ke roeen
tere ehsaas-e-ghum ki yaadain
mujhe kuch yaad agaya
mujhe kuch hosh agaya
zamana woh purana
woh saal woh mahina
mere hum-nafas !!!
teri chahat ki had ki
kahin had bandi nahi hae
jo hadse guzar jaye
aesi chahat bhi kum nahi hae
meri kismaat pe haiN nazaaN
jo yeh qissa-e-muhabbat hain sunte
yeh mai kaise maan jaon
unhaiN hasad tak nahi hae
pari washoon ke tujh pe
nazr-e-bad bhi nahi hae
tu bahar banke aya
suroor banke chaya
tujh pe rashq hai bala ka
tu enaam hai khuda ka
tuhi mera sahara tuhi mera kinara
meri duain sari
ho'een tujh pe wari
tera qarz hai mujh pe jari
mera piyar wajib-ul-ada hai
tera ishq hai walehanah
is maiN hae woh wussat
jo wasila hai zindagi ka
tere visaal se pehle
meri wasiat se pehle
phir ek baar ghour kar lain
safr-e-hayyat maiN saath ho lain
subah.. wahhhhhhhhhhhhh wahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh bohat khoob subah jee, bohat umda bohat achi nazm kahi hay aap nay,bohat si daad qubool farmayyay.
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Nam e jamhoor pe bazaar saja rakha hay
biktay hen log yahan daam laga kar dekho
Ham say Mahtab kahan zakhm sajanay walay
tum koi teer naya dil pe chala kar dekho
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 9:01 pm |
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subahh wrote: QATRAH QATRAH
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qatrah qatrah , moti moti
ansoouN ki lari khul gaye hai
kaesi cho'tt lagi hai dil per
jisse haal yeh huwa hai
ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar
sub ka zaiqa aek sa hae
ta'alook rog hae aisa la-eelaj
dua, dawa, daru bekaar
mai hosh mai nahi thi
mai kya kho chuki thi
iss-qaddr,...qaddr huee hae jab
jiss qaddr, door hoe ho tab
mai woh son rahi thee
woh jo tum keh rahe the
rooz-e-awal ho tum
rooz-e-akhir ho tum
meri zindagi ho tum
yani maut bhi tum
tere paseene ke woh qatre jab
mere jism-o-jaaN pe
mushq banke mehke
tere ansouN ke woh gohar
mere ehsaas-e-sard pe
kholta seesa banke tapke
tere khoon-e-jigar ke woh mohre
meri bisa'at-e-jaaN pe
maat se pehle....
zara se jhijhke
ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar
sab ka zaiqa ek sa hae
meri be-hissi se lipat ke roeen
tere ehsaas-e-ghum ki yaadain
mujhe kuch yaad agaya
mujhe kuch hosh agaya
zamana woh purana
woh saal woh mahina
mere hum-nafas !!!
teri chahat ki had ki
kahin had bandi nahi hae
jo hadse guzar jaye
aesi chahat bhi kum nahi hae
meri kismaat pe haiN nazaaN
jo yeh qissa-e-muhabbat hain sunte
yeh mai kaise maan jaon
unhaiN hasad tak nahi hae
pari washoon ke tujh pe
nazr-e-bad bhi nahi hae
tu bahar banke aya
suroor banke chaya
tujh pe rashq hai bala ka
tu enaam hai khuda ka
tuhi mera sahara tuhi mera kinara
meri duain sari
ho'een tujh pe wari
tera qarz hai mujh pe jari
mera piyar wajib-ul-ada hai
tera ishq hai walehanah
is maiN hae woh wussat
jo wasila hai zindagi ka
tere visaal se pehle
meri wasiat se pehle
phir ek baar ghour kar lain
safr-e-hayyat maiN saath ho lain
subah.. hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.. zabardast yaar.. kaha kaha se lati hai ap lafaz yaar. i can't believe . wasay ap jab likhti hai kuch tu sochoti ho gi .. hmmmmmm lakin jo b sochti hai. paper uska double ahsas utarti hai.. really nice..
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 11:00 pm |
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subahh wrote: QATRAH QATRAH
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qatrah qatrah , moti moti
ansoouN ki lari khul gaye hai
kaesi cho'tt lagi hai dil per
jisse haal yeh huwa hai
ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar
sub ka zaiqa aek sa hae
ta'alook rog hae aisa la-eelaj
dua, dawa, daru bekaar
mai hosh mai nahi thi
mai kya kho chuki thi
iss-qaddr,...qaddr huee hae jab
jiss qaddr, door hoe ho tab
mai woh son rahi thee
woh jo tum keh rahe the
rooz-e-awal ho tum
rooz-e-akhir ho tum
meri zindagi ho tum
yani maut bhi tum
tere paseene ke woh qatre jab
mere jism-o-jaaN pe
mushq banke mehke
tere ansouN ke woh gohar
mere ehsaas-e-sard pe
kholta seesa banke tapke
tere khoon-e-jigar ke woh mohre
meri bisa'at-e-jaaN pe
maat se pehle....
zara se jhijhke
ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar
sab ka zaiqa ek sa hae
meri be-hissi se lipat ke roeen
tere ehsaas-e-ghum ki yaadain
mujhe kuch yaad agaya
mujhe kuch hosh agaya
zamana woh purana
woh saal woh mahina
mere hum-nafas !!!
teri chahat ki had ki
kahin had bandi nahi hae
jo hadse guzar jaye
aesi chahat bhi kum nahi hae
meri kismaat pe haiN nazaaN
jo yeh qissa-e-muhabbat hain sunte
yeh mai kaise maan jaon
unhaiN hasad tak nahi hae
pari washoon ke tujh pe
nazr-e-bad bhi nahi hae
tu bahar banke aya
suroor banke chaya
tujh pe rashq hai bala ka
tu enaam hai khuda ka
tuhi mera sahara tuhi mera kinara
meri duain sari
ho'een tujh pe wari
tera qarz hai mujh pe jari
mera piyar wajib-ul-ada hai
tera ishq hai walehanah
is maiN hae woh wussat
jo wasila hai zindagi ka
tere visaal se pehle
meri wasiat se pehle
phir ek baar ghour kar lain
safr-e-hayyat maiN saath ho lain
subah.. humesha ki tarah sub se aala aur seb se munfarid aik nehayet hi baviqar suljhi huwi tehreer. congratulation subah jee A llah ap ki her tamna poori kerey,amin. humesha khosh rahen dua go ...
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tawakel ALALLAH
kon kehta he k mer jaon ga
main derya hon samender main utter jaon.
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 5:52 am |
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kehtay hain..aankhen bhi sma'ut rukhti hain....aur hurf....koi shukl...koi suret.
woh aa'hateN.....jo zird puttoN pe...kisi beetay wuqt ki chap hain.
hawa k woh jhonkay....jo ub bhi bund d'reechon se tukratay hain.
khubsuret kheyalat hain....likhtay raheN k behtri ki gunjaesh hamesha rehti hai.
shadab rahen....
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 7:12 am |
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subahh,
kamal ki nazm likhi apne . english adab mein keats ki shairy bhi bhut dukh liye hai .apka kalam bhi keats ki jaisa hai .likhtee rahen .
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 9:13 am |
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subahh wrote: shari wrote: aap ki shairy bohat achi hai jii...keep it up buhat nawazish ...karam...mehrbani...ahsan o shukria
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 1:57 pm |
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subahh wrote: FANA O BAQA
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udas rahun pay tanha chalna dushwar tou nahi
dua kero koi rah-ber milay rah-zan nahi
main safr main rahi
safr mujh main raha
rastay ki oonch-neech
nashaib-o-faraz,
naqsh-bund kerty hoi
logun kay haseen chehrun ko
nigah-bund kerty hoi
patiyun kay naqsh o nigar
khad o khaal main gum
phoolun ki tarash kharash
rung o boo main mehw
mussawer kay tejreedi fun ko samjhtay hoay
USKI yad ko zahn'nasheen kertay hoay
taalab o duldul say bachtay bacha'tay
main nungay paun
chalti rahi
safr kerty rahi
agay berhty rahi
apni manzil e maqsood se zara pary
apni ishq ki masti say zara qarib
kuch der sustany ko
burgud ki ch'haun talay
ankh meech kay
ta'ssvo'raat ki duniya main kho kay
khwabun ki serhad tak pohnch gai
main nay dekha
ek shakhs unjan
meray dil main cho'hra ghounp kay
mera zad-e-rah kundhay pay lad kay
yeh ja woh ja
ankh khuli......
main nay dekha
meray tun pay
surkh gulabun ki chader tunni thi
hath berha kay jo ek phool chun'na chaha
surkh lahoo se hath hina alood hoay
"ISHQ KA BHOOT" haatheli pay
qehqahay laga kay
rags kernay laga
aur kehnay laga
"log ishq main fana hoty hain
wohi log qatl hotay hain
dar'assl baqa hotay hain
qatil kay chehray pay naqab
hathun main dustar hoty hain
kya ab bhi na samjhi paglee ?
woh tera rah-bar.....tera ashiq
tera rah-zan ......tera qatil nikla "
subah.. wah sabia...
kitna haqeeqi kalaam hai,
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waheed ahmed
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 2:03 pm |
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subahh wrote: FANA O BAQA
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udas rahun pay tanha chalna dushwar tou nahi
dua kero koi rah-ber milay rah-zan nahi
main safr main rahi
safr mujh main raha
rastay ki oonch-neech
nashaib-o-faraz,
naqsh-bund kerty hoi
logun kay haseen chehrun ko
nigah-bund kerty hoi
patiyun kay naqsh o nigar
khad o khaal main gum
phoolun ki tarash kharash
rung o boo main mehw
mussawer kay tejreedi fun ko samjhtay hoay
USKI yad ko zahn'nasheen kertay hoay
taalab o duldul say bachtay bacha'tay
main nungay paun
chalti rahi
safr kerty rahi
agay berhty rahi
apni manzil e maqsood se zara pary
apni ishq ki masti say zara qarib
kuch der sustany ko
burgud ki ch'haun talay
ankh meech kay
ta'ssvo'raat ki duniya main kho kay
khwabun ki serhad tak pohnch gai
main nay dekha
ek shakhs unjan
meray dil main cho'hra ghounp kay
mera zad-e-rah kundhay pay lad kay
yeh ja woh ja
ankh khuli......
main nay dekha
meray tun pay
surkh gulabun ki chader tunni thi
hath berha kay jo ek phool chun'na chaha
surkh lahoo se hath hina alood hoay
"ISHQ KA BHOOT" haatheli pay
qehqahay laga kay
rags kernay laga
aur kehnay laga
"log ishq main fana hoty hain
wohi log qatl hotay hain
dar'assl baqa hotay hain
qatil kay chehray pay naqab
hathun main dustar hoty hain
kya ab bhi na samjhi paglee ?
woh tera rah-bar.....tera ashiq
tera rah-zan ......tera qatil nikla "
subah.. buht aalapoetry he ji keep it up 
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 6:36 pm |
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subahh wrote: QATRAH QATRAH
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qatrah qatrah , moti moti
ansoouN ki lari khul gaye hai
kaesi cho'tt lagi hai dil per
jisse haal yeh huwa hai
ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar
sub ka zaiqa aek sa hae
ta'alook rog hae aisa la-eelaj
dua, dawa, daru bekaar
mai hosh mai nahi thi
mai kya kho chuki thi
iss-qaddr,...qaddr huee hae jab
jiss qaddr, door hoe ho tab
mai woh son rahi thee
woh jo tum keh rahe the
rooz-e-awal ho tum
rooz-e-akhir ho tum
meri zindagi ho tum
yani maut bhi tum
tere paseene ke woh qatre jab
mere jism-o-jaaN pe
mushq banke mehke
tere ansouN ke woh gohar
mere ehsaas-e-sard pe
kholta seesa banke tapke
tere khoon-e-jigar ke woh mohre
meri bisa'at-e-jaaN pe
maat se pehle....
zara se jhijhke
ashk ho, paseena ho ya khoon-e-jigar
sab ka zaiqa ek sa hae
meri be-hissi se lipat ke roeen
tere ehsaas-e-ghum ki yaadain
mujhe kuch yaad agaya
mujhe kuch hosh agaya
zamana woh purana
woh saal woh mahina
mere hum-nafas !!!
teri chahat ki had ki
kahin had bandi nahi hae
jo hadse guzar jaye
aesi chahat bhi kum nahi hae
meri kismaat pe haiN nazaaN
jo yeh qissa-e-muhabbat hain sunte
yeh mai kaise maan jaon
unhaiN hasad tak nahi hae
pari washoon ke tujh pe
nazr-e-bad bhi nahi hae
tu bahar banke aya
suroor banke chaya
tujh pe rashq hai bala ka
tu enaam hai khuda ka
tuhi mera sahara tuhi mera kinara
meri duain sari
ho'een tujh pe wari
tera qarz hai mujh pe jari
mera piyar wajib-ul-ada hai
tera ishq hai walehanah
is maiN hae woh wussat
jo wasila hai zindagi ka
tere visaal se pehle
meri wasiat se pehle
phir ek baar ghour kar lain
safr-e-hayyat maiN saath ho lain
subah.. Bohat he aa'la naz'm hai subahh jee.. mainay yeh naz'm aik baar nahi balkay bohat baar parhi aur har baar underlined hissay par aakar ruk gayi. Itni khoobsorati say khayalaat ka izhaar kiya hai aapnay kay wahhh! Bohat khoob!
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Post subject: Re: poetry by Subah Posted: Thu Nov 12, 2009 11:39 am |
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masood_zuberi wrote: subahh,
kamal ki nazm likhi apne . english adab mein keats ki shairy bhi bhut dukh liye hai .apka kalam bhi keats ki jaisa hai .likhtee rahen . buaht hi nawazish masood umeed kerte hain aap aindah bhi yahan ate rahain gae aur perthe rahain gae thanks alot for replying khush rahain
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