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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........  Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 6:12 am |
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Sayyid Randeri wrote: MUHIB wrote: main bhee kia aasmaa banata hoon
dhoop main saebaan banata hoon
pyar karta hoon saray alam say
doost khud ko kahan banata hoon
raastay k har aik paththar ko
chahatoon ka nishan banata hoon
poochta hee nahi koe mujh say
rait par quoon makan banata hoon
shoor sunta hoon biphri mojoon ka
main safina jahan banata hoon
jo k dushman hay razdari ka
main usay razdaan banata hoon
zindagi nazr kar k ay hamid
moat ko apni jaan banata hoon Aap ke tamam ash'ar bohot umda or qabil-e-tareef hain, dil se daad hazir hai muhib bhaai, magar ye ghazal to lajawaab hai, is ke tamam ash'ar bohot hi pasand aaye...kya a'ala khayaal hai, or bohot hi khoobsurat andaaz hai... bohot khoob janaab...
pasand aai aapki poetry
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 9:51 am |
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MUHIB wrote: rah e ulffat pe ye ham loog bhi kia kartay hain
shama ki missl sar e sham jala kartay hain
tou chalay ya na chalay sath hamaray, lakin
ham teri yaad k kantoon pe chala kartay hain
aks shayad kisi chehray main nazar aa jai
bas isi aas pe logon say mila kartay hain
go ye maqbool kabhi ho na sakain gi phir bhi
tujh say milnay ki her ek sham dua kartay hain
yaad e maazi say jo khushbu e hina aati hai
ham teray qurb ko mehsoos kia kartay hain
un say milnay ki tamanna hai adhoori hamid
qurb k khuwab kyun aankhon may basa kartay hain Bohat khoob hamid je..... 
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 6:45 pm |
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ay khuda mujh ko ata lafzoon ka darya karday
hamd likhna hai takhayool may ujala karday
jab talak saans hai main zikr tera karta rahon
tou ata mujh ko sana khowan ka rutba karday
rehmatain teray iradoon say baras jati hain
tou vo qadir hai k beemar ko acha karday
jis ko chahay ussay sajday ka hunar aa jaay
zarf o eeman ki qamat ko bhi bala karday
tu nabi jis ko kahay us ko khudaee mil jae
chand ho shaq jo vo ungli ka ishara karday
rah e eeman ka dushwar safar tay kar loon
mujh pay bus sura e yaseen ka saya karday
zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
pori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 7:04 pm |
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zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray pori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday... bohat khob 
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Sun Oct 18, 2009 11:52 am |
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Muhib ji
Aapka kalam parhna aur mehsoos karna achchha laga daad qubool karein
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 11:23 am |
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MUHIB wrote: ay khuda mujh ko ata lafzoon ka darya karday
hamd likhna hai takhayool may ujala karday
jab talak saans hai main zikr tera karta rahon
tou ata mujh ko sana khowan ka rutba karday
rehmatain teray iradoon say baras jati hain
tou vo qadir hai k beemar ko acha karday
jis ko chahay ussay sajday ka hunar aa jaay
zarf o eeman ki qamat ko bhi bala karday
tu nabi jis ko kahay us ko khudaee mil jae
chand ho shaq jo vo ungli ka ishara karday
rah e eeman ka dushwar safar tay kar loon
mujh pay bus sura e yaseen ka saya karday
zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
pori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday Bohat khoob Hamid je... Khush rahiye....
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Fri Oct 30, 2009 5:12 am |
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dua'ia ghazal achhi hay. shukria
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Mon Nov 02, 2009 10:47 pm |
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MUHIB wrote: Ghum ki tazheek uratay huye dar lagta hai,
apni roodad sunatay huye dar lagta hai
Ab tu apnon main bhi milta nahi kuch apna pan,
Ghair ko apna batatay huye dar lagta hai
Dena par jaay na mujhko bhi kaheen iska hisaab,
paaon matti main jamatay huye dar lagta hai
jaag utthay tu jaganay ka sabab poochin gay
sonay walon ko jagatay huye dar lagta hai
jab se dekha hai Mah o mehr ko gehnaay huye
apna ghar baar sajatay huye dar lagta hai
ghar ki taqseem se hoti hai diloon ki taqseem
koi deewar uthatay huye dar lagta hai
Dhoop se bachtay hain per roshni chin jati hai
Sehen main peir(tree) lagatay huye dar lagta hai
Pehle jaisa nahi Hamid woh adab kiya kahiye
Ab kisi bazm main jatay huye dar lagta hai buhat kamal kavish...jitni tareef ki jai utni kam hae alf dhundhnay perain gay urdu lughat me tareef likhny k liae...,,khayal ki ooran lamuntaha tak ...rawangi o tasalsul balaka...WWAHhh!! khush rahain subah..
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Post subject: Re: Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:53 pm |
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MUHIB wrote: Mai tahay dil se ap sub ka mashkoor hoon. Be-intaha shukreya.
Aik aur ghazal paish e khidmat mai, mulhaiza kegea, shayad kisse qabil ho.
Jo lafz bhi laga hai woh pathar laga mujhe
is baar doston se bara dar laga mujhe
choukhat pe apnay naam ki takhti nahi mili
barsoon purana ghar bhi naya ghar laga mujhe
sahil se keh raha tha main piyasa bala ka hoon
woh aik aadmi jo samandar laga mujhe
apni uraan saray jahan ko dikhaonga
parwana keh raha hai kabhi par laga mujhe
tasveer keh raha hai jisay mera aks hai
tasveer keh rahi hai palat kar laga mujhe
yeh husn e ittafaq nahi inqalab hai
khanjar nahi tha jo kabhi khanjar laga mujhe
teraak ban ke meri tehoon tak utar gaya
Hamid samandaron ka shanawar laga mujhe. aapki ki shairy ko perhna shuru kia hae kamal adaigi ,pukhtagi nayyapun aur khayal ki gehrai bari jiddat k sath ...buhat khub khush rahain subah..
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:14 pm |
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Mashallah, Subahh, jess andaz se ap nay zarra navaze fermaye hai, auss se meri qabil e islah shairy se ziada zubane urdu per ap ka uboor, aur husn e biyaan jhalakta hai. itnay saleeqay aur itnee ziada zarra navaze ka bhout bhout shukreya.
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MUHIB wrote: Mai tahay dil se ap sub ka mashkoor hoon. Be-intaha shukreya.
Aik aur ghazal paish e khidmat mai, mulhaiza kegea, shayad kisse qabil ho.
Jo lafz bhi laga hai woh pathar laga mujhe
is baar doston se bara dar laga mujhe
choukhat pe apnay naam ki takhti nahi mili
barsoon purana ghar bhi naya ghar laga mujhe
sahil se keh raha tha main piyasa bala ka hoon
woh aik aadmi jo samandar laga mujhe
apni uraan saray jahan ko dikhaonga
parwana keh raha hai kabhi par laga mujhe
tasveer keh raha hai jisay mera aks hai
tasveer keh rahi hai palat kar laga mujhe
yeh husn e ittafaq nahi inqalab hai
khanjar nahi tha jo kabhi khanjar laga mujhe
teraak ban ke meri tehoon tak utar gaya
Hamid samandaron ka shanawar laga mujhe.
Bohat he aa'la ghazal hai. Bohat khoob! Samajh nahi a raha kis shair ko highlight karoon...
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Post subject: Re: Re: Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:20 am |
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SAAILL wrote: MUHIB wrote: shukreya, aik aur ghazal paise khidmat hai:
Takleef ab na dengay kisi aur shakhs ko
guzray gi jaisi umr guzara karain gay hum
jo tujhko na pasand hai Ay husn e bemisaal
ab koi aisa roop na dhara karain gay hum
Hum chand se nigah milatay nahi kabhi
jugnoo ko kis tarah se sitara karain gay hum
bohat khoooooob MUHIB bhai................ bohat khooooooob " ab koi aisa rooop..... " wala shair to simply kamaaaal hai .........keeep sharing jimuhib wahhhh kisqader khubsoorat khayal hae ...muhabbat ki yaktaee aur wahdaniat pe pura pura utarta hae buhat see dad qabool kerain khush rahain subah..
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 1:27 am |
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miskeen wrote: MUHIB wrote: rah e ulffat pe ye ham loog bhi kia kartay hain
shama ki missl sar e sham jala kartay hain
tou chalay ya na chalay sath hamaray, lakin
ham teri yaad k kantoon pe chala kartay hain
aks shayad kisi chehray main nazar aa jai
bas isi aas pe logon say mila kartay hain
go ye maqbool kabhi ho na sakain gi phir bhi
tujh say milnay ki her ek sham dua kartay hain
yaad e maazi say jo khushbu e hina aati hai
ham teray qurb ko mehsoos kia kartay hain
un say milnay ki tamanna hai adhoori hamid
qurb k khuwab kyun aankhon may basa kartay hain
jo seedhi dil main jakay pewast hogai....jitne alfaz talash kerna chahun urdu lughat se...tareef k lia ...woh bhi kam hi hungay...ess ghazal k lia...muhabbat ka lateef ehsas...narm resham sa ...gudaz
khush rahain
subah..
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:18 am |
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MUHIB, apka kalam parha .apki tamam ghazlen bhut class ki hain .kalam sada aour asarangez hai .meree nek khawahisht aur duain apke sath hain .umeed karta hun apke kalam mein aour nikhar aayega .
apke taza kalam ka muntazir MASOOD ZUBERI
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:31 am |
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bohat hee all muhib jee, lawjab, umda, afreen, amazing, cool. keep it up.
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:29 am |
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MUHIB wrote: ay khuda mujh ko ata lafzoon ka darya karday
hamd likhna hai takhayool may ujala karday
jab talak saans hai main zikr tera karta rahon
tou ata mujh ko sana khowan ka rutba karday
rehmatain teray iradoon say baras jati hain
tou vo qadir hai k beemar ko acha karday
jis ko chahay ussay sajday ka hunar aa jaay
zarf o eeman ki qamat ko bhi bala karday
tu nabi jis ko kahay us ko khudaee mil jae
chand ho shaq jo vo ungli ka ishara karday
rah e eeman ka dushwar safar tay kar loon
mujh pay bus sura e yaseen ka saya karday
zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
pori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday boht khoob
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kon kehta he k mer jaon ga
main derya hon samender main utter jaon.
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:50 pm |
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sono wrote: MUHIB wrote: arsa e tarr tarr may rehna
rastoon k gubaar may rehna
sub ki taqdeer may kahan pyaray
zindagi bhar bahar may rehna
umr bhar such ka aeena lay kar
wadi e kohsaar may rehna
chandni farsh ho gee pairoon ka
aik shub ko e yar may rehna
qasr e shahi agar banana hay
khar o khass ki qataar may rehna
dhoop ka farsh paoon may rakh kar
chaoon k intizar may rehna
umr hamid guzarni hay mujhay
khanjaroon ki kachaar may rehna
buhat aala khayal....
aek infiradi rang hae aapki shairy me
buhat bhai yeh ghazal...
sirf akhri shr me lafz 'kachaar' ka matlab likh dain
hamain yeh lafz jadeed urdu lughat me nahi mila
buhat si dad qabool kerain
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Fri Nov 06, 2009 9:14 pm |
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Sub se pehlay tou mai ap ka nehayet he mamnoon o mashkoor hon k ap nay meri shairy ki pasand keye aur apnay keemte mashwaray se bhi nawaza.
Dosra ye k ap nay lafz kachaar ka mutlab poucha hai, mumkin he k agar ye lafz mai urdu mai likta tou shayad ye confusion nahe hota. kachaar auss jagah ko kehtay hain k jaha jab sher ya babbar shikaar k qabil nahe rehta, tou waha aa ker rehna shruu ker daita hai. aussay apnay honour ka bhi lehaaz rehta hai, aur vo kisee murda khoor janwar ki phounch se bhi doour rehta hai, buss sher ka akhree lamhaat iss he kachaar may guzzartay hai, jab jak vo marr na jai.
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MUHIB wrote:
ratjagon ki halat main khuaab dekhnay walay
ro rahay hain ujlat main khuaab dekhnay walay
chashm e num ke khultay hi kis qadar huye masroof
roz o shub ko fursat main khuaab dekhnay walay
anginat khayalon se, khuaab se huye mehroom
maal o zar ki soorat main khuaab dekhnay walay
jaagtay hi loogon ki nafraton se mil bethay
aapki mohabbat main khuaab dekhnay walay
aur kitna sona hai faisla na kar paay
Umr ki adalat main khuaab dekhnay walay
jaag uthay tu youn jagay,so sakay na jee bhar ke
janay kis zaroorat main khuaab dekhnay walay
so sakay na jee bhar ke aik pal ko bhi Hamid
khuaabgah e shohrat main khuaab dekhnay walay
muhib.... kia kamal kavish hae ...jis ka koi jawab nahi...aek tassalsul o rawani...hud dergah khayal ki ooran ...quwat e bazu se zayadah...mujhay awwal ta akhir ...puri ghazal buhat buhat achi lagi ...khas kamal e fun akhir k 2 ashar me behud numaya hae... aek shr ka dosre se rapt o ta'alouq qaaem rakha hoa hae bara husn he ess me: jjaag uthay tu youn jagay,so sakay na jee bhar ke janay kis zaroorat main khuaab dekhnay walay so sakay na jee bhar ke aik pal ko bhi Hamid khuaabgah e shohrat main khuaab dekhnay walay khush rahain subah..
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Mon Nov 09, 2009 4:24 pm |
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MUHIB wrote: shaam
shaam ko jab ghar aata hoon
sehra saath mein laata hoon
ghar angan mein shaam dhaley
roz thakkan lay jaata hoon
sabro shukar kay mevon se
dastar khaan sajata hoon
hichki nay chaw-kaya hai
mein kisko yaad aata hoon
yaadon kay kuch lamho se
bhoola basra naata hoon
chadar dekh ker shab-bhar, mein
pairo koh phelata hoon
sub he mere jaise hain
sub ko tanha pata hoon
humd-e-khuda kay sazon par
hamid, hamid gaata hoon buhat hi achi lagi aapki ghazal...kisqader asani k sath dil ka ahwal likh dena.... ..yeh bhi khas aek khoobi hae aek ache shair ki...akhri shr tou mere rung o mizaj ko buhat acha laga hamid. albat'tah yeh shr kuch kehte hoe lutf kho raha hae ...ya kuch pemaish o wazn se zayadah he ...bar bar perhne se ehsas hota hae ... chader dekh ke shab bher main pairon ko phelata hon zahir he raat ki shab-khoabi ki baat horahi he 'shab'bhar' kafi lamba horaha hae ger yun hojae tou bhi baat wohi he matlab bhi wohi rehega : chader dekh ke shab ko main pairon ko phelata hon shab bher se musalsal aek hi ammal dohrae jane ki halat wazeh horahi hae k sari raat aek hi ammal kia jaraha he ..umeed he k aap ko meri rae o khayal giran bar na lage honge ..aap se mazrat o maffi chahungee...ger aap ko khud sahi lagta he tou yeh aap ki apni chah o merzi bhi hosakti he..aek bar phir ess jasarat ki maffi talab kerti hon khush rahain subah.. chader dekh ke shab ko main pairon ko phelata hon
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MUHIB wrote: kis manzil ke deewanay nahi hain
musafir janay pehchanay nahi hain
woh jab chahain gay ajain gay milnay
meri rahon se anjanay nahi hain
bano kaisay kiraay ka main qatil
meray hathon main tastanay nahi hain
buhat hongay magar saray jahan mai,
hum jaisay deewanay nahi hain
bikhar saktay nahi hain zindagi bhar
ke hum tasbeeh ke danay nahi hain
karain majboor humko pojnay per
yahan aisay sanam khanay nahi hain
karain kiya nazr mushkil aa pari hai
humaray paas nazranay nahi hain
karain gay must Hamid kaisay humko
Mae ulfat ke paimanay nahi hain muhib main aapke thread ke pages ki roogerdani kerahi thi ..kamal likhte hain ...khayal ki perwaz buhat oonchi k hamari fiker o takhayul wahan pohnch na pae...naya or achuta sa undaz e bayan ...mujhe aapki kavishat me aek munfarid soch o fehm ke tane bane aapas me bari nafasat se mile jule se nazr aae...sab hi aek alag munfarid muqam rakhti hain ...kis ko quote kerain kis ko nahi ...waqt ki kami k baes aaj itna hi kafi he k mutala kerahe hain.... dad qabool kerain ...khush rahain subah..
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miskeen wrote: muhib...hamd o dua ....alfaz nahi mil rahe ...k tareef me likhain tou kiya likhain....  ...urdu lughat k tamam tareefi alfaz kam hain ...ess hamd o dua k lia...jazak Allah ...aapki duain ...mustajab ki munzil pa lain...  Ameen khush rahain subah..
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 12:23 am |
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zakhm e tanhae taazyana hai
zindagi hai ya qaid khana hai
dou dilloon ki sada bhi sunta nahi
kitna bay dard yay zamana hai
bagh e jannat bana hai mera ghar
aap ka jab say aana jana hai
bistar e karb or yay beemari
tujh say milnay ka ik bahana hai
jab say aae ho tum meray dill mai
dard ka mustaqill thikana hai
tum say chout kar hoa mujhay mallom
kitna mushkil tumhay bhulana hai
aashiq e bahunar hoon may hamid
mera anddaz shairana hai
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hamid taveel arse ke bad apko yahan paya aur apka kalam perh ke ji khush hoa.... bistar e karb or yay beemari tujh say milnay ka ik bahana hai buhat si dad wasool kerain aur yun hi mehfil e shairy ki rounq main izafa kerterahain khush rahain..
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Arooj Amjad
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:39 pm |
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MUHIB wrote: zakhm e tanhae taazyana hai
zindagi hai ya qaid khana hai
bagh e jannat bana hai mera ghar
aap ka jab say aana jana hai
jab say aae ho tum meray dill mai
dard ka mustaqill thikana hai
aashiq e bahunar hoon may hamid
mera anddaz shairana hai Bohat khoob ji...ye ashaar zyaada pasand aaye...
bohat arsay baad aaye aap...khairiyat rahi na?
aatay raha kijiye...
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Another day has gone...I'm still all alone....How could this be....You're not here with me....You never said goodbye...Someone tell me why did you have to go...And leave my world so cold..!
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Arooj Amjad
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Tue Mar 23, 2010 7:57 pm |
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MUHIB wrote: ay khuda mujh ko ata lafzoon ka darya karday
hamd likhna hai takhayool may ujala karday
jab talak saans hai main zikr tera karta rahon
tou ata mujh ko sana khowan ka rutba karday
rehmatain teray iradoon say baras jati hain
tou vo qadir hai k beemar ko acha karday
jis ko chahay ussay sajday ka hunar aa jaay
zarf o eeman ki qamat ko bhi bala karday
tu nabi jis ko kahay us ko khudaee mil jae
chand ho shaq jo vo ungli ka ishara karday
rah e eeman ka dushwar safar tay kar loon
mujh pay bus sura e yaseen ka saya karday
zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
poori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday Intahaai khoobsoorat kaavish hai Janab! Mere paas lafz nahin hain saraahne k liye...
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Another day has gone...I'm still all alone....How could this be....You're not here with me....You never said goodbye...Someone tell me why did you have to go...And leave my world so cold..!
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MUHIB
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 1:21 am |
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meray malik ye kaysa imtahan hai
meri her sanse ab mujh per giran hai
mera hona nahona hay barabar
meri yay zindgani raegaan hai
mai apni baat bhi sunta nahi hoon
mera hamzaad shayad bay zubaan hai
musafat woh k thakta ja raha hoon
abhi tou aik dasht e baykaraan hai
ghazal bay sakhta hamid likhi hay
mujhay jazbaat per qaabo kahan hai
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Fri Sep 24, 2010 7:06 am |
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bohot khubsurat andaz e biyan or bohot khubsurat khayal pe likhte hain ap har tehrer par ke bht acha laghta ha chaiye wo nazam ho ghazal ho ya dua ap ne jo dua likhi ha wo mashAllah nihayat hi khubsurat or umdah ha khush rahiye
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 5:10 pm |
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MUHIB wrote: Ghum ki tazheek uratay huye dar lagta hai,
apni roodad sunatay huye dar lagta hai
Ab tu apnon main bhi milta nahi kuch apna pan,
Ghair ko apna batatay huye dar lagta hai
Dena par jaay na mujhko bhi kaheen iska hisaab,
paaon matti main jamatay huye dar lagta hai
jaag utthay tu jaganay ka sabab poochin gay
sonay walon ko jagatay huye dar lagta hai
jab se dekha hai Mah o mehr ko gehnaay huye
apna ghar baar sajatay huye dar lagta hai
ghar ki taqseem se hoti hai diloon ki taqseem
koi deewar uthatay huye dar lagta hai
Dhoop se bachtay hain per roshni chin jati hai
Sehen main peir(tree) lagatay huye dar lagta hai
Pehle jaisa nahi Hamid woh adab kiya kahiye
Ab kisi bazm main jatay huye dar lagta hai bohot khuub,bohot achi gazal likhte hai aap,mai to aap ki har gazal quote karna chahita tha lekin aap ki thread ka bewaja space badakar aap ki shaan mai gustakhi nahi ki,is liye aap ki pehli gazal ki quo ki,aap ki bohot sari gazale padhe humne sari ki sari achi lagi,khuda aap ko khush w abaad rakhe aur yhi aap ki gazale hume padhne ko mila kare
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:52 pm |
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MUHIB wrote: meray malik ye kaysa imtahan hai
meri her sanse ab mujh per giran hai
mera hona nahona hay barabar
meri yay zindgani raegaan hai
mai apni baat bhi sunta nahi hoon
mera hamzaad shayad bay zubaan hai
musafat woh k thakta ja raha hoon
abhi tou aik dasht e baykaraan hai
ghazal bay sakhta hamid likhi hay
mujhay jazbaat per qaabo kahan hai wah wah wah...kiya kehne ...dilkash undaz e sukhan...dil ko bhaya...kiya berjustagi kiya besakhtagi ke sath likhi hae ghazal ....
khush rahain
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Fri Oct 08, 2010 9:48 am |
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Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........ Posted: Thu Apr 21, 2011 12:02 am |
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insan bay hisi ki hadh say guzar gaya hai
hai aadmi tou zinda,ehsas mar gaya hai
bhoola nahi may us ki chahat vo narm lehja
vo shaks meray dil ko taskheer kar gaya hai
vo sath tha tou may bhi ik zinda aadmi tha
hokar juda vo mujh say janay kidhar gaya hai
mujh per meray khudaya, hai waqt kaysa aaya
mayra wajood apnay saae say dar gaya hay
mashhoor doostoo mai thi jis ki khush kallami
tanhaeyoun ki doulat lay kar vo ghar gaya hay
ikhlaas or muhabat shaywa raha hai jis ka
us shahr e baywafa mai bus us ka sar gaya hai
us shaks ko a hamid may kaysay bhool jaoon
aankhoo ki raah say jo dil mai utar gaya hai
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