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 Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........
PostPosted: Fri Oct 09, 2009 8:42 pm 
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rah e ulffat pe ye ham loog bhi kia kartay hain
shama ki missl sar e sham jala kartay hain

tou chalay ya na chalay sath hamaray, lakin
ham teri yaad k kantoon pe chala kartay hain

aks shayad kisi chehray main nazar aa jai
bas isi aas pe logon say mila kartay hain

go ye maqbool kabhi ho na sakain gi phir bhi
tujh say milnay ki her ek sham dua kartay hain

yaad e maazi say jo khushbu e hina aati hai
ham teray qurb ko mehsoos kia kartay hain

un say milnay ki tamanna hai adhoori hamid
qurb k khuwab kyun aankhon may basa kartay hain



kamal hud-e-kamal gazal he kia kehny mohib sahab wahhhhhhhhhhh

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 Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........
PostPosted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 11:12 am 
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Sayyid Randeri wrote:
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main bhee kia aasmaa banata hoon
dhoop main saebaan banata hoon

pyar karta hoon saray alam say
doost khud ko kahan banata hoon

raastay k har aik paththar ko
chahatoon ka nishan banata hoon

poochta hee nahi koe mujh say
rait par quoon makan banata hoon

shoor sunta hoon biphri mojoon ka
main safina jahan banata hoon

jo k dushman hay razdari ka
main usay razdaan banata hoon

zindagi nazr kar k ay hamid
moat ko apni jaan banata hoon


Aap ke tamam ash'ar bohot umda or qabil-e-tareef hain, dil se daad hazir hai muhib bhaai, magar ye ghazal to lajawaab hai, is ke tamam ash'ar bohot hi pasand aaye...kya a'ala khayaal hai, or bohot hi khoobsurat andaaz hai... bohot khoob janaab...

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 Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........
PostPosted: Tue Oct 13, 2009 2:51 pm 
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MUHIB wrote:
rah e ulffat pe ye ham loog bhi kia kartay hain
shama ki missl sar e sham jala kartay hain

tou chalay ya na chalay sath hamaray, lakin
ham teri yaad k kantoon pe chala kartay hain

aks shayad kisi chehray main nazar aa jai
bas isi aas pe logon say mila kartay hain

go ye maqbool kabhi ho na sakain gi phir bhi
tujh say milnay ki her ek sham dua kartay hain

yaad e maazi say jo khushbu e hina aati hai
ham teray qurb ko mehsoos kia kartay hain

un say milnay ki tamanna hai adhoori hamid
qurb k khuwab kyun aankhon may basa kartay hain


Bohat khoob hamid je..... :buke:


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PostPosted: Fri Oct 16, 2009 11:45 pm 
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ay khuda mujh ko ata lafzoon ka darya karday
hamd likhna hai takhayool may ujala karday

jab talak saans hai main zikr tera karta rahon
tou ata mujh ko sana khowan ka rutba karday

rehmatain teray iradoon say baras jati hain
tou vo qadir hai k beemar ko acha karday

jis ko chahay ussay sajday ka hunar aa jaay
zarf o eeman ki qamat ko bhi bala karday

tu nabi jis ko kahay us ko khudaee mil jae
chand ho shaq jo vo ungli ka ishara karday

rah e eeman ka dushwar safar tay kar loon
mujh pay bus sura e yaseen ka saya karday

zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
pori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday



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zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
pori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday...


bohat khob :b)b:



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Muhib ji
Aapka kalam parhna aur mehsoos karna achchha laga daad qubool karein


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MUHIB wrote:
ay khuda mujh ko ata lafzoon ka darya karday
hamd likhna hai takhayool may ujala karday

jab talak saans hai main zikr tera karta rahon
tou ata mujh ko sana khowan ka rutba karday

rehmatain teray iradoon say baras jati hain
tou vo qadir hai k beemar ko acha karday

jis ko chahay ussay sajday ka hunar aa jaay
zarf o eeman ki qamat ko bhi bala karday

tu nabi jis ko kahay us ko khudaee mil jae
chand ho shaq jo vo ungli ka ishara karday

rah e eeman ka dushwar safar tay kar loon
mujh pay bus sura e yaseen ka saya karday

zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
pori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday



boht hi khoobsorat dua kahi he ap ny .. jazakallah. khush rahen hamid sahib..

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PostPosted: Mon Oct 19, 2009 4:23 pm 
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MUHIB wrote:
ay khuda mujh ko ata lafzoon ka darya karday
hamd likhna hai takhayool may ujala karday

jab talak saans hai main zikr tera karta rahon
tou ata mujh ko sana khowan ka rutba karday

rehmatain teray iradoon say baras jati hain
tou vo qadir hai k beemar ko acha karday

jis ko chahay ussay sajday ka hunar aa jaay
zarf o eeman ki qamat ko bhi bala karday

tu nabi jis ko kahay us ko khudaee mil jae
chand ho shaq jo vo ungli ka ishara karday

rah e eeman ka dushwar safar tay kar loon
mujh pay bus sura e yaseen ka saya karday

zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
pori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday



Bohat khoob Hamid je... :b)b:

Khush rahiye.... :buke:


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buhat hi khubsoorat kavish ...imanafroz ...taqwa o mumin ki shan k mutabiq dua ...tehseen o dad k qabil
khush rahain
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dua'ia ghazal achhi hay. shukria



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PostPosted: Tue Nov 03, 2009 3:47 am 
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MUHIB wrote:
Ghum ki tazheek uratay huye dar lagta hai,
apni roodad sunatay huye dar lagta hai

Ab tu apnon main bhi milta nahi kuch apna pan,
Ghair ko apna batatay huye dar lagta hai

Dena par jaay na mujhko bhi kaheen iska hisaab,
paaon matti main jamatay huye dar lagta hai

jaag utthay tu jaganay ka sabab poochin gay
sonay walon ko jagatay huye dar lagta hai

jab se dekha hai Mah o mehr ko gehnaay huye
apna ghar baar sajatay huye dar lagta hai

ghar ki taqseem se hoti hai diloon ki taqseem
koi deewar uthatay huye dar lagta hai

Dhoop se bachtay hain per roshni chin jati hai
Sehen main peir(tree) lagatay huye dar lagta hai

Pehle jaisa nahi Hamid woh adab kiya kahiye
Ab kisi bazm main jatay huye dar lagta hai

buhat kamal kavish...jitni tareef ki jai utni kam hae alf dhundhnay perain gay urdu lughat me tareef likhny k liae...,,khayal ki ooran lamuntaha tak ...rawangi o tasalsul balaka...WWAHhh!!
khush rahain
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MUHIB wrote:
Mai tahay dil se ap sub ka mashkoor hoon. Be-intaha shukreya.
Aik aur ghazal paish e khidmat mai, mulhaiza kegea, shayad kisse qabil ho.

Jo lafz bhi laga hai woh pathar laga mujhe
is baar doston se bara dar laga mujhe

choukhat pe apnay naam ki takhti nahi mili
barsoon purana ghar bhi naya ghar laga mujhe

sahil se keh raha tha main piyasa bala ka hoon
woh aik aadmi jo samandar laga mujhe

apni uraan saray jahan ko dikhaonga
parwana keh raha hai kabhi par laga mujhe

tasveer keh raha hai jisay mera aks hai
tasveer keh rahi hai palat kar laga mujhe

yeh husn e ittafaq nahi inqalab hai
khanjar nahi tha jo kabhi khanjar laga mujhe

teraak ban ke meri tehoon tak utar gaya
Hamid samandaron ka shanawar laga mujhe.


aapki ki shairy ko perhna shuru kia hae kamal adaigi ,pukhtagi nayyapun aur khayal ki gehrai bari jiddat k sath ...buhat khub
khush rahain
subah..



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 Post subject: Re: Shayad kisse qabil ho........
PostPosted: Wed Nov 04, 2009 4:14 am 
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Mashallah, Subahh, jess andaz se ap nay zarra navaze fermaye hai, auss se meri qabil e islah shairy se ziada zubane urdu per ap ka uboor, aur husn e biyaan jhalakta hai. itnay saleeqay aur itnee ziada zarra navaze ka bhout bhout shukreya.



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MUHIB wrote:
Mai tahay dil se ap sub ka mashkoor hoon. Be-intaha shukreya.
Aik aur ghazal paish e khidmat mai, mulhaiza kegea, shayad kisse qabil ho.

Jo lafz bhi laga hai woh pathar laga mujhe
is baar doston se bara dar laga mujhe

choukhat pe apnay naam ki takhti nahi mili
barsoon purana ghar bhi naya ghar laga mujhe

sahil se keh raha tha main piyasa bala ka hoon
woh aik aadmi jo samandar laga mujhe

apni uraan saray jahan ko dikhaonga
parwana keh raha hai kabhi par laga mujhe

tasveer keh raha hai jisay mera aks hai
tasveer keh rahi hai palat kar laga mujhe

yeh husn e ittafaq nahi inqalab hai
khanjar nahi tha jo kabhi khanjar laga mujhe

teraak ban ke meri tehoon tak utar gaya
Hamid samandaron ka shanawar laga mujhe.


Bohat he aa'la ghazal hai. Bohat khoob! Samajh nahi a raha kis shair ko highlight karoon...



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SAAILL wrote:
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shukreya, aik aur ghazal paise khidmat hai:


Takleef ab na dengay kisi aur shakhs ko
guzray gi jaisi umr guzara karain gay hum

jo tujhko na pasand hai Ay husn e bemisaal
ab koi aisa roop na dhara karain gay hum

Hum chand se nigah milatay nahi kabhi
jugnoo ko kis tarah se sitara karain gay hum



bohat khoooooob MUHIB bhai................ bohat khooooooob " ab koi aisa rooop..... " wala shair to simply kamaaaal hai .........keeep sharing ji

muhib
wahhhh kisqader khubsoorat khayal hae ...muhabbat ki yaktaee aur wahdaniat pe pura pura utarta hae
buhat see dad qabool kerain
khush rahain
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miskeen wrote:
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rah e ulffat pe ye ham loog bhi kia kartay hain
shama ki missl sar e sham jala kartay hain

tou chalay ya na chalay sath hamaray, lakin
ham teri yaad k kantoon pe chala kartay hain

aks shayad kisi chehray main nazar aa jai
bas isi aas pe logon say mila kartay hain

go ye maqbool kabhi ho na sakain gi phir bhi
tujh say milnay ki her ek sham dua kartay hain

yaad e maazi say jo khushbu e hina aati hai
ham teray qurb ko mehsoos kia kartay hain

un say milnay ki tamanna hai adhoori hamid
qurb k khuwab kyun aankhon may basa kartay hain


buhat hi ba-kamal kavish
jo seedhi dil main jakay pewast hogai....jitne alfaz talash kerna chahun urdu lughat se...tareef k lia ...woh bhi kam hi hungay...ess ghazal k lia...muhabbat ka lateef ehsas...narm resham sa ...gudaz
khush rahain
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MUHIB, apka kalam parha .apki tamam ghazlen bhut class ki hain .kalam sada aour asarangez hai .meree nek khawahisht aur duain apke sath hain .umeed karta hun apke kalam mein aour nikhar aayega .

apke taza kalam ka muntazir MASOOD ZUBERI



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bohat hee all muhib jee, lawjab, umda, afreen, amazing, cool. keep it up.

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ay khuda mujh ko ata lafzoon ka darya karday
hamd likhna hai takhayool may ujala karday

jab talak saans hai main zikr tera karta rahon
tou ata mujh ko sana khowan ka rutba karday

rehmatain teray iradoon say baras jati hain
tou vo qadir hai k beemar ko acha karday

jis ko chahay ussay sajday ka hunar aa jaay
zarf o eeman ki qamat ko bhi bala karday

tu nabi jis ko kahay us ko khudaee mil jae
chand ho shaq jo vo ungli ka ishara karday

rah e eeman ka dushwar safar tay kar loon
mujh pay bus sura e yaseen ka saya karday

zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
pori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday

boht khoob :buke:



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sehar nay shaam ko paya tou teri yaad aye
galay se shab ko lagaya tou teri yaad aye

darecha phand k aate howay charagh k sath
hawa ne hath milaya tou teri yaad aye

milan ki raat ka dholak ki naram thapooun per
kise ne geet sunaya tou teri yaad aye

buri ghari main tere pyaar k dino ki qasam
koi qareeb na aaya tou teri yaad aye

kisi ka hath kisi shaks se khafa ho kar
gulaab toor k laya tou teri yaad aye

khyal-e-yaar teri subz orni ki qasam
kahin peh deakha jo saya tou teri yaad aye

khuda gawah k Hamid kisi ki hatoun nay
humare ghar ko sajaya tou tere yaad aye


hamid
buhat hi dilkharash si ghazal .....
jo dil ko cheerti hoi nikal gai... :guns:
feeraq,yad e yaar,udasi aur tanhai...
in sab ka kis qader choli damman ka sath hae...
ek muhib k sath ... :^^: kyun :?:
judai falsafa e hayyat ki kittab ka akhri panna he .... :fr: afsoos...
khush rahain.. :buke:
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sono wrote:
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arsa e tarr tarr may rehna
rastoon k gubaar may rehna

sub ki taqdeer may kahan pyaray
zindagi bhar bahar may rehna

umr bhar such ka aeena lay kar
wadi e kohsaar may rehna

chandni farsh ho gee pairoon ka
aik shub ko e yar may rehna

qasr e shahi agar banana hay
khar o khass ki qataar may rehna

dhoop ka farsh paoon may rakh kar
chaoon k intizar may rehna

umr hamid guzarni hay mujhay
khanjaroon ki kachaar may rehna


muhib
buhat aala khayal....
aek infiradi rang hae aapki shairy me
buhat bhai yeh ghazal...
sirf akhri shr me lafz 'kachaar' ka matlab likh dain
hamain yeh lafz jadeed urdu lughat me nahi mila
buhat si dad qabool kerain



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Sub se pehlay tou mai ap ka nehayet he mamnoon o mashkoor hon k ap nay meri shairy ki pasand keye aur apnay keemte mashwaray se bhi nawaza.

Dosra ye k ap nay lafz kachaar ka mutlab poucha hai, mumkin he k agar ye lafz mai urdu mai likta tou shayad ye confusion nahe hota. kachaar auss jagah ko kehtay hain k jaha jab sher ya babbar shikaar k qabil nahe rehta, tou waha aa ker rehna shruu ker daita hai. aussay apnay honour ka bhi lehaaz rehta hai, aur vo kisee murda khoor janwar ki phounch se bhi doour rehta hai, buss sher ka akhree lamhaat iss he kachaar may guzzartay hai, jab jak vo marr na jai.



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buhat nawazish...
khush rahain
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MUHIB wrote:

ratjagon ki halat main khuaab dekhnay walay
ro rahay hain ujlat main khuaab dekhnay walay

chashm e num ke khultay hi kis qadar huye masroof
roz o shub ko fursat main khuaab dekhnay walay

anginat khayalon se, khuaab se huye mehroom
maal o zar ki soorat main khuaab dekhnay walay

jaagtay hi loogon ki nafraton se mil bethay
aapki mohabbat main khuaab dekhnay walay

aur kitna sona hai faisla na kar paay
Umr ki adalat main khuaab dekhnay walay

jaag uthay tu youn jagay,so sakay na jee bhar ke
janay kis zaroorat main khuaab dekhnay walay

so sakay na jee bhar ke aik pal ko bhi Hamid
khuaabgah e shohrat main khuaab dekhnay walay


muhib....
kia kamal kavish hae ...jis ka koi jawab nahi...aek tassalsul o rawani...hud dergah khayal ki ooran ...quwat e bazu se zayadah...mujhay awwal ta akhir ...puri ghazal buhat buhat achi lagi ...khas kamal e fun akhir k 2 ashar me behud numaya hae... aek shr ka dosre se rapt o ta'alouq qaaem rakha hoa hae bara husn he ess me:

jjaag uthay tu youn jagay,so sakay na jee bhar ke
janay kis zaroorat main khuaab dekhnay walay

so sakay na jee bhar ke aik pal ko bhi Hamid
khuaabgah e shohrat main khuaab dekhnay walay

khush rahain subah..



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MUHIB wrote:
shaam

shaam ko jab ghar aata hoon
sehra saath mein laata hoon

ghar angan mein shaam dhaley
roz thakkan lay jaata hoon

sabro shukar kay mevon se
dastar khaan sajata hoon

hichki nay chaw-kaya hai
mein kisko yaad aata hoon

yaadon kay kuch lamho se
bhoola basra naata hoon

chadar dekh ker shab-bhar, mein
pairo koh phelata hoon

sub he mere jaise hain
sub ko tanha pata hoon

humd-e-khuda kay sazon par
hamid, hamid gaata hoon


buhat hi achi lagi aapki ghazal...kisqader asani k sath dil ka ahwal likh dena....
..yeh bhi khas aek khoobi hae aek ache shair ki...akhri shr tou mere rung o mizaj ko buhat acha laga hamid.

albat'tah yeh shr kuch kehte hoe lutf kho raha hae ...ya kuch pemaish o wazn se zayadah he ...bar bar perhne se ehsas hota hae ...

chader dekh ke shab bher main
pairon ko phelata hon

zahir he raat ki shab-khoabi ki baat horahi he 'shab'bhar' kafi lamba horaha hae
ger yun hojae tou bhi baat wohi he matlab bhi wohi rehega :

chader dekh ke shab ko main
pairon ko phelata hon

shab bher se musalsal aek hi ammal dohrae jane ki halat wazeh horahi hae k sari raat aek hi ammal kia jaraha he ..umeed he k aap ko meri rae o khayal giran bar na lage honge ..aap se mazrat o maffi chahungee...ger aap ko khud sahi lagta he tou yeh aap ki apni chah o merzi bhi hosakti he..aek bar phir ess jasarat ki maffi talab kerti hon
khush rahain
subah..

chader dekh ke shab ko main
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kis manzil ke deewanay nahi hain
musafir janay pehchanay nahi hain

woh jab chahain gay ajain gay milnay
meri rahon se anjanay nahi hain

bano kaisay kiraay ka main qatil
meray hathon main tastanay nahi hain

buhat hongay magar saray jahan mai,
hum jaisay deewanay nahi hain

bikhar saktay nahi hain zindagi bhar
ke hum tasbeeh ke danay nahi hain

karain majboor humko pojnay per
yahan aisay sanam khanay nahi hain

karain kiya nazr mushkil aa pari hai
humaray paas nazranay nahi hain

karain gay must Hamid kaisay humko
Mae ulfat ke paimanay nahi hain

muhib main aapke thread ke pages ki roogerdani kerahi thi ..kamal likhte hain ...khayal ki perwaz buhat oonchi k hamari fiker o takhayul wahan pohnch na pae...naya or achuta sa undaz e bayan ...mujhe aapki kavishat me aek munfarid soch o fehm ke tane bane aapas me bari nafasat se mile jule se nazr aae...sab hi aek alag munfarid muqam rakhti hain ...kis ko quote kerain kis ko nahi ...waqt ki kami k baes aaj itna hi kafi he k mutala kerahe hain....

dad qabool kerain ...khush rahain
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MUHIB wrote:
ay khuda mujh ko ata lafzoon ka darya karday
hamd likhna hai takhayool may ujala karday

jab talak saans hai main zikr tera karta rahon
tou ata mujh ko sana khowan ka rutba karday

rehmatain teray iradoon say baras jati hain
tou vo qadir hai k beemar ko acha karday

jis ko chahay ussay sajday ka hunar aa jaay
zarf o eeman ki qamat ko bhi bala karday

tu nabi jis ko kahay us ko khudaee mil jae
chand ho shaq jo vo ungli ka ishara karday

rah e eeman ka dushwar safar tay kar loon
mujh pay bus sura e yaseen ka saya karday

zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
pori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday

boht hi khoobsorat dua kahi he ap ny .. jazakallah. khush rahen hamid sahib..
:)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O :)O

muhib...hamd o dua ....alfaz nahi mil rahe ...k tareef me likhain tou kiya likhain.... :thinking ...urdu lughat k tamam tareefi alfaz kam hain ...ess hamd o dua k lia...jazak Allah ...aapki duain ...mustajab ki munzil pa lain...:dua Ameen
khush rahain
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zakhm e tanhae taazyana hai
zindagi hai ya qaid khana hai

dou dilloon ki sada bhi sunta nahi
kitna bay dard yay zamana hai

bagh e jannat bana hai mera ghar
aap ka jab say aana jana hai

bistar e karb or yay beemari
tujh say milnay ka ik bahana hai

jab say aae ho tum meray dill mai
dard ka mustaqill thikana hai

tum say chout kar hoa mujhay mallom
kitna mushkil tumhay bhulana hai

aashiq e bahunar hoon may hamid
mera anddaz shairana hai



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hamid
taveel arse ke bad apko yahan paya aur apka kalam perh ke ji khush hoa....

bistar e karb or yay beemari
tujh say milnay ka ik bahana hai

buhat si dad wasool kerain aur yun hi mehfil e shairy ki rounq main izafa kerterahain
khush rahain.. :buke:



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MUHIB wrote:
zakhm e tanhae taazyana hai
zindagi hai ya qaid khana hai

bagh e jannat bana hai mera ghar
aap ka jab say aana jana hai

jab say aae ho tum meray dill mai
dard ka mustaqill thikana hai

aashiq e bahunar hoon may hamid
mera anddaz shairana hai

Bohat khoob ji...ye ashaar zyaada pasand aaye...
bohat arsay baad aaye aap...khairiyat rahi na? :buke:
aatay raha kijiye...



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ay khuda mujh ko ata lafzoon ka darya karday
hamd likhna hai takhayool may ujala karday

jab talak saans hai main zikr tera karta rahon
tou ata mujh ko sana khowan ka rutba karday

rehmatain teray iradoon say baras jati hain
tou vo qadir hai k beemar ko acha karday

jis ko chahay ussay sajday ka hunar aa jaay
zarf o eeman ki qamat ko bhi bala karday

tu nabi jis ko kahay us ko khudaee mil jae
chand ho shaq jo vo ungli ka ishara karday

rah e eeman ka dushwar safar tay kar loon
mujh pay bus sura e yaseen ka saya karday

zindagi meri shariyat k mutabiq guzray
poori hamid ki tamana ye khudaya karday

Intahaai khoobsoorat kaavish hai Janab! Mere paas lafz nahin hain saraahne k liye... :buke:



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meray malik ye kaysa imtahan hai
meri her sanse ab mujh per giran hai

mera hona nahona hay barabar
meri yay zindgani raegaan hai

mai apni baat bhi sunta nahi hoon
mera hamzaad shayad bay zubaan hai

musafat woh k thakta ja raha hoon
abhi tou aik dasht e baykaraan hai

ghazal bay sakhta hamid likhi hay
mujhay jazbaat per qaabo kahan hai



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bohot khubsurat andaz e biyan or bohot khubsurat khayal pe likhte hain ap har tehrer par ke bht acha laghta ha chaiye wo nazam ho ghazal ho ya dua
ap ne jo dua likhi ha wo mashAllah nihayat hi khubsurat or umdah ha khush rahiye :buke:



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Ghum ki tazheek uratay huye dar lagta hai,
apni roodad sunatay huye dar lagta hai

Ab tu apnon main bhi milta nahi kuch apna pan,
Ghair ko apna batatay huye dar lagta hai

Dena par jaay na mujhko bhi kaheen iska hisaab,
paaon matti main jamatay huye dar lagta hai

jaag utthay tu jaganay ka sabab poochin gay
sonay walon ko jagatay huye dar lagta hai

jab se dekha hai Mah o mehr ko gehnaay huye
apna ghar baar sajatay huye dar lagta hai

ghar ki taqseem se hoti hai diloon ki taqseem
koi deewar uthatay huye dar lagta hai

Dhoop se bachtay hain per roshni chin jati hai
Sehen main peir(tree) lagatay huye dar lagta hai

Pehle jaisa nahi Hamid woh adab kiya kahiye
Ab kisi bazm main jatay huye dar lagta hai

bohot khuub,bohot achi gazal likhte hai aap,mai to aap ki har gazal quote karna chahita tha lekin aap ki thread ka bewaja space badakar aap ki shaan mai gustakhi nahi ki,is liye aap ki pehli gazal ki quo ki,aap ki bohot sari gazale padhe humne sari ki sari achi lagi,khuda aap ko khush w abaad rakhe aur yhi aap ki gazale hume padhne ko mila kare :dua


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bhout, bhout shukreya Waseem ap ka, bhout sada, magar pe inteha pur asr andaaz mai ap ki zarra nawazi ka. aur Mehre ap ki pasandeedge ka bhi bhout, bhout shukreya. :buke:



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MUHIB wrote:
meray malik ye kaysa imtahan hai
meri her sanse ab mujh per giran hai

mera hona nahona hay barabar
meri yay zindgani raegaan hai

mai apni baat bhi sunta nahi hoon
mera hamzaad shayad bay zubaan hai

musafat woh k thakta ja raha hoon
abhi tou aik dasht e baykaraan hai

ghazal bay sakhta hamid likhi hay
mujhay jazbaat per qaabo kahan hai


wah wah wah...kiya kehne ...dilkash undaz e sukhan...dil ko bhaya...kiya berjustagi kiya besakhtagi ke sath likhi hae ghazal ....
khush rahain :dua



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MUHIB wrote:
meray malik ye kaysa imtahan hai
meri her sanse ab mujh per giran hai

mera hona nahona hay barabar
meri yay zindgani raegaan hai

mai apni baat bhi sunta nahi hoon
mera hamzaad shayad bay zubaan hai

musafat woh k thakta ja raha hoon
abhi tou aik dasht e baykaraan hai

ghazal bay sakhta hamid likhi hay
mujhay jazbaat per qaabo kahan hai


boht khoob ..khush rahen...

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MUHIB wrote:
zakhm e tanhae taazyana hai
zindagi hai ya qaid khana hai

dou dilloon ki sada bhi sunta nahi
kitna bay dard yay zamana hai

bagh e jannat bana hai mera ghar
aap ka jab say aana jana hai

bistar e karb or yay beemari
tujh say milnay ka ik bahana hai

jab say aae ho tum meray dill mai
dard ka mustaqill thikana hai

tum say chout kar hoa mujhay mallom
kitna mushkil tumhay bhulana hai

aashiq e bahunar hoon may hamid
mera anddaz shairana hai


SubhanAllah! Boht Khoob! Boht Khoobsoorat Jnaab! Taareef k liye alfaaz kam hain! Jo Kuch kehna tha oopar baaki sathiyon ne kehdiya ab dohrane se faida nahi! Khush Rahen!
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insan bay hisi ki hadh say guzar gaya hai
hai aadmi tou zinda,ehsas mar gaya hai

bhoola nahi may us ki chahat vo narm lehja
vo shaks meray dil ko taskheer kar gaya hai

vo sath tha tou may bhi ik zinda aadmi tha
hokar juda vo mujh say janay kidhar gaya hai

mujh per meray khudaya, hai waqt kaysa aaya
mayra wajood apnay saae say dar gaya hay

mashhoor doostoo mai thi jis ki khush kallami
tanhaeyoun ki doulat lay kar vo ghar gaya hay

ikhlaas or muhabat shaywa raha hai jis ka
us shahr e baywafa mai bus us ka sar gaya hai

us shaks ko a hamid may kaysay bhool jaoon
aankhoo ki raah say jo dil mai utar gaya hai



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Bohat khoobsoorat ghazal... Dard, karb, gham, shiddat_e_gham... Aik aik shair dil per asar kerne wala aur asar he na kerne wala balke apna naqsh chhorr jaane wala... Ye 3 ashaar bohat he ziada pasand aaye... :)O
mujh per meray khudaya, hai waqt kaysa aaya
mayra wajood apnay saae say dar gaya hay

mashhoor doostoo mai thi jis ki khush kallami
tanhaeyoun ki doulat lay kar vo ghar gaya hay

ikhlaas or muhabat shaywa raha hai jis ka
us shahr e baywafa mai bus us ka sar gaya hai



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