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 Post subject: ay husn-e beparwa tujhe shabnam kahu, shola kahu
PostPosted: Thu Nov 24, 2011 10:37 am 
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Hello all,

It's my first post here. I'd be grateful if someone is kind enough to provide an English translation of this ghazal for me. The text of the this ghazal, as far as I know, goes:

ay husn-e beparwaa tujhe shabnam kahuu shola kahuun?
phulo.n mei.n bhi shokhi to hai, kisko magar tujhsa kahuun?

saa.nso.n mei.n hai khoshbuu teri aa.nko.n mei.n hai jaaduugari
kis shaakh kaa ghuncha hai tuu? kis rang ka jaunka kahuun?

gisuu uRei meh ki fazaa jaaduu kare.n aa.nkhei.n teri
soyaa huaa manzar kahuun yaa jaagtaa sapna kahuun

chandaa ki tuu hain chaandani lehro.n ki tuu hai.n raagini
jaan e tamana mei.n tujhe kyaa kyaa kahuun kyaa na kahuun


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PostPosted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 6:44 pm 
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PostPosted: Fri Nov 25, 2011 9:21 pm 
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PostPosted: Mon Nov 28, 2011 12:49 pm 
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MirzaBedil wrote:
Hello all,

It's my first post here. I'd be grateful if someone is kind enough to provide an English translation of this ghazal for me. The text of the this ghazal, as far as I know, goes:

ay husn-e beparwaa tujhe shabnam kahuu shola kahuun?
phulo.n mei.n bhi shokhi to hai, kisko magar tujhsa kahuun?

saa.nso.n mei.n hai khoshbuu teri aa.nko.n mei.n hai jaaduugari
kis shaakh kaa ghuncha hai tuu? kis rang ka jaunka kahuun?

gisuu uRei meh ki fazaa jaaduu kare.n aa.nkhei.n teri
soyaa huaa manzar kahuun yaa jaagtaa sapna kahuun

chandaa ki tuu hain chaandani lehro.n ki tuu hai.n raagini
jaan e tamana mei.n tujhe kyaa kyaa kahuun kyaa na kahuun



Dear Mirza sb, I wonder if this is your real name, however, your interest towards urdu is appreciable. the couplets you have mentioned are from a ghazal said by Dr. Basheer Bader a well known poet. I am not that good at translation, however, will try to help you a bit...

ai husn-e-be-paravaah tujhe shabnam kahuu.N sholaa kahuu.N
O! the careless beauty, shall I call you the morning dew or shall I call you the fire,

phuulo.n me.n bhii shoKhii to hai kisako magar tujh saa kahuu.N
Even the flowers have brightness but to whom shall I say resembles you,


gesuu u.De mahakii fizaa jaduu kare.n aa.Nkhe terii
Your hair flying in the air spreads fragrance, your eyes spell magic

soyaa huaa ma.nzar kahuu.N yaa.N jaagataa sapanaa kahuu.N
shall I call it a sleeping scene or an awaken dream...

cha.ndaa kii tuu hai chaa.Ndanii laharo.n kii tuu hai raaginii
you are the brightness of the moon, you are the rhythm of the waves


jaan-e-tamannaa mai.n tujhe kyaa kyaa kahuu.N kyaa na kahuu.N
O! My life’s desire what shall i call you, and what i should’nt .



As I mentioned earlier, I am not good at enlgish, but this is just to help you understand the poetry, there may be so many mistakes but I hope you would be able to make out the meanings of the couplets and can translate it in to your own words in a better way....

Keep reading and keep asking too.........we all are here to help you.

Regards
Asad Qureshi



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PostPosted: Sat Dec 03, 2011 2:02 am 
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