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 Post subject: PLZZZZZZ
PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 7:32 pm 
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hamain mohsin naqvi ki ye ghazal chahiey

hath uljhey hoey resham main phansa baithey hain



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 Post subject: Re: PLZZZZZZ
PostPosted: Tue Mar 27, 2012 11:46 pm 
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ye lijye Rabia aap ki farmaish puri kar di hai :)


Baat ye tere siwa aur bhala kis se karen
Tu jafa kaar hua hai to wafa kis se karen

Aaina saamne rakhen to nazar tu aye
Baat jo tujh se chupani ho kaha kis se karen

Hath uljhe hue resham mein phansa bethe hein
ab bata konse dhage ko juda kis se karen

Zulf se, chashm, lab o rukh se, ke tere gham se
Baat ye hai ke dil o jaan ko juda kis se karen

Tu nahi hai to phir ai husn e saaz bata
Is bharay shehr mein hum jaise mila kis se karen

Tu ne to apni si karni thi so kar li khawar
Masla ye hy ke hum iss ka gila kis se karen



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 Post subject: Re: PLZZZZZZ
PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 1:30 am 
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nice ghazal...
Nice choice cuty..
Thanx sono :buke:



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 Post subject: Re: PLZZZZZZ
PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 2:01 pm 
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بات یہ تیرے سوا اور بھلا کس سے کریں
توُ جفا کار ہوا ہے تو وفا کس سے کریں

آئینہ سامنے رکھیں تو نظرآئے توُ
تُجھ سے جو بات چُھپانی ہو، کہا کس سے کریں

ہاتھ اُلجھے ہوئے ریشم میں پھنسا بیٹھے ہیں
اب بتا! کون سے دھاگے کو جُدا کس سے کریں

زُلف سے چشم و لب و رُخ سے کہ تیرے غم سے
بات یہ ہے کہ دل و جاں کو رہا کس سے کریں

توُ نہیں ہے تو پھر اے حُسنِ سخن ساز، بتا
اس بھرے شہر میں ہم جیسے مِلا کس سے کریں

توُ نے تو اپنی سی کرنی تھی، سو کر لی خاور
مسئلہ یہ ہے کہ ہم اس کا گلا کس سے کریں

ایوب خاور



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 Post subject: Re: PLZZZZZZ
PostPosted: Wed Mar 28, 2012 7:41 pm 
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cuty aapki amad ka bhi shukria....!!!
lijea aapki fermaish bhi fori tor per pori krdi gai hae
kab aap apna naya kalam hum sab k samnay pesh kerain gi...?
hum sab ko shidad se intezaar rahe ga

buhat shukria sono aur asad.....!!!
khush rahain aap sab :dua



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 Post subject: Re: PLZZZZZZ
PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 12:30 pm 
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Sonu mam ne jab English words me poetry di thi Cuty ji ko To Tabs ne wapas se Urdu me Q send ki?ye logic mujhey Tabs batayengey..
:^^: :mrgreen: :argue: :guns: :guns: :guns:



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Kahin Main ,Mohabbat Aur Tum
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 Post subject: Re: PLZZZZZZ
PostPosted: Sun Apr 08, 2012 8:23 pm 
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shagufta subhani wrote:
Sonu mam ne jab English words me poetry di thi Cuty ji ko To Tabs ne wapas se Urdu me Q send ki?ye logic mujhey Tabs batayengey..
:^^: :mrgreen: :argue: :guns: :guns: :guns:



Sono mam ne jo Roman maiN post ki thi us maiN do aik jagah per correction thi is liye urdu rasm al khat maiN durust ghazal share ki hai.........



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 Post subject: Re: PLZZZZZZ
PostPosted: Mon Apr 09, 2012 8:24 am 
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Oh :thinking I c :argue: :guns: thankoo



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 Post subject: Re: PLZZZZZZ
PostPosted: Tue Apr 10, 2012 10:03 pm 
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ufff.............
yahan humko isqader pazeerai mil rahi hy
or hum ney daikha bhi nahin
sab sey pehley hum sono ji k bey hud shuker guzar hain
jinhon ney hamari fermaish per fori tawajeh di
tah e dil sey shukria sono ji
phir TM ka bhi bey hud shukria k unki kawish sey urdu rasm ul khat main ye nazam hum tak pohnchi
or urdu shairy sey unka jo rishta hy
to ye to muwaqey thi unki taraf sey
phir sabiha aapi aapka bhi shukria
bus hum aajkal zara busy hain
is liey kuch likh nahin pa rahy
jald hi intizar ki gheryan khatm ho jaein gi
humko acha laga aap ney hamari kami ko mehsus kia
ye bhi mohobbat ki bat hy
or sab sey last main shagufta ka shkria
jinki sharat bhari posts ny is thread ki or bhi pur kashish bana dia



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 Post subject: Re: PLZZZZZZ
PostPosted: Thu Apr 12, 2012 10:42 am 
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any time Rabia :)O



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