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 Post subject: Poet of the month Nov. *Khwaab* winner miskeen ji
PostPosted: Tue Nov 05, 2013 4:13 pm 
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Friends Aj Is Silsile Ke Liye New Competition Start Kiya Ja Raha Hey

Jis Competition Mein Aap Sab Ki Participation Qabil-e-Sataish Hai Or Aj Usi Silsiley K Next Muqabley Ka Aghaz Kiya Ja Raha Hey Jis Main Members Sirf Apni Likhi Hui Poem, Ghazals Or Ashaar Share Ker Sakain Gey,

Competitions Ka Tareeq-a-Kaar Same Wohi Hey Jaisey Doosrey Competitions Run Ker Rahey Hain Albatah Is Competition K Jo Rules Hain Woh Main Neechey Share Ker Rahi Hoon :) ....... Thanx


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Rules Of This Competition...!!!

:arrow: Aik Member Sirf Apni Likhi Hui Aik (1) Ghazal, Nazam Ya Sher Share Ker Sakta Hey

:arrow: Ghazal, Nazam, Ya Sher Sirf Aap Ka Likha Huwa Ho Ga Tu Competition Main Shamil Kiya Jye Ga Werna Usey Delete Ker DIya Jye Ga

:arrow: Apni Poetry Share Kerney Ki Last Date 20th November", Hai

:arrow: Is Thread Main Kisi B Member Ko "20th ", Tak Kisi Qisam Ki Chit Chat Ki Ijazat Nahi HO Gi Aap Sirf Apni Sharings Ker Sakte Hain. "21st , ko InshaAllah voting open kar di jayay gi aur phir Aap Jo Kehna Chahain Jo Comments Dena Chahain De Sakte Hain Or Her Qisam Ki Gup Shup Bhi Ker Saktey Hain :)




Is Mah ka Lafz Hai *Khwaab*


Aaiyey, Agey Berhiyey, Baghair Kisi Hichakichahat K Apna Likha Huwa Kalam Yahan Share Kijiyey Becoz Isi Tarah Aap Ki Shairy Main Nikhaar Aa Sakta Hey.
Ho Sakta Hai Is Baar Ke "Poet Of The Month" Aap Hi Ho :) .... Aap Sab Ki Sharings Ka Intezaar Hai ......... Thanx

Happy Writing :)


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PostPosted: Tue Nov 05, 2013 4:27 pm 
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 07, 2013 8:39 am 
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غزل

خوبصورت کتاب چاہتا ہوں
منفرد انتخاب چاہتا ہوں

جو مجھے عمر بھر نہ سونے دے
میں کوئی ایسا
خواب چاہتا ہوں

آپ میرا یہ کام کر دیجے
دل ہوں اور اضطراب چاہتا ہوں

بے حجابی مجھے پسند نہیں
حسن زیرِ نقاب چاہتا ہوں

التجا ہے مری بہاروں سے
میں بھی کوئی گلاب چاہتا ہوں

یہ محبت نہیں، عبادت ہے
اور اس کا ثواب چاہتا ہوں

ظلمتیں زیست کی مٹانے کو
انجم و ماہتاب چاہتا ہوں

شاید ایسے ہی پیاس بجھ جائے
راستے میں سراب چاہتا ہوں

ہے کڑی دھوپ زندگی میں فصیح
سر پہ کوئی سحاب چاہتا ہوں

شاہین فصیح ربانی



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 Post subject: Re: Poet of the month Nov. *Khwaab*
PostPosted: Wed Nov 13, 2013 6:10 pm 
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مجھ سے کیا ناراض ہو نندیا
مجھ سے مللنے
کیوں نہیں آتییں
بچپن والی لوری بھی
اب نہیں سناتیں

مجھ سے ملنے
آؤ ناں نندیا
تھوڑا ترس
تو کھاؤ ناں نندیا
مجھ سے ملنے
کب آؤ گی

مجھ سے ملنے
جب آؤ گی
خوش ہو کر ہم
ملیں گے نندیا
خواب جزیرے
چلیں گے نندیا





mujh say kya naraz ho nindiya
mujh say milnay
kun nahe aten
bachpan vali lori bhi ab
nahen sunateen
mujh say milnay
Aao na nindiya
thora tars tu khao na nindya
mujh say milnay
kab Aao gi
mujh say milnay
jab Aao gi
khosh ho kar
ham milan gay nindiya
khvab jazeray
chalain gay nindiya

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 13, 2013 8:47 pm 
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PostPosted: Thu Nov 14, 2013 7:34 pm 
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مجھ سے کیا ناراض ہو نندیا
مجھ سے مللنے
کیوں نہیں آتییں
بچپن والی لوری بھی
اب نہیں سناتیں

مجھ سے ملنے
آؤ ناں نندیا
تھوڑا ترس
تو کھاؤ ناں نندیا
مجھ سے ملنے
کب آؤ گی

مجھ سے ملنے
جب آؤ گی
خوش ہو کر ہم
ملیں گے نندیا
خواب جزیرے
چلیں گے نندیا





mujh say kya naraz ho nindiya
mujh say milnay
kun nahe aten
bachpan vali lori bhi ab
nahen sunateen
mujh say milnay
Aao na nindiya
thora tars tu khao na nindya
mujh say milnay
kab Aao gi
mujh say milnay
jab Aao gi
khosh ho kar
ham milan gay nindiya
khvab jazeray
chalain gay nindiya
poetry by/zeest.sun
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PostPosted: Sun Nov 17, 2013 1:18 am 
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dedicate this 1 to BBK bole to big bro khayal...
And mera vote faseeh bhai k liye hai ... mods
Note kar len pl.


NAZAM
( rejoinder"an attempt" )

Tere dhoke mai rehta huun shab bhar
Jane mai kis se baat karta huun?
Kehne ko bas ye khud farebi hai
Khud ko baaqayedgi se deta huun
Bhool jaonga keh to deta huun
mai jo kehta huun kahan karta huun
Mai to
Mai wo mujrim k qatl ho k bhi
Apne qatil ko duaa deta huun
Tu meri aarzoo e khaam sahi
Khwab phir bhi me tere dekhta huun
Khwab zanjeer kyn na bolon mai
jin se har aan juura rehta huun
Roota huun
girrgirrata huun
Tu samander kabhi hua na mera
Phir b
na jaane kiyn
Mai teri simt mai hi behta huun


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 Post subject: Re: Poet of the month Nov. *Khwaab*
PostPosted: Wed Nov 20, 2013 5:16 pm 
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.............(kalam).......


jub shamat-e-emaal hon phr kiya gila tuqdeer sy.
hijr o balaa ky murz ki na hy dawa tudbeer sy.


mareefat ho ya haqeeqat,ho tareeqat ya sharee'at,
Rub chaar in aayaat ki mujh ko mila tufseer sy.


janaan-e-ghum,aankiN hen num,dunya sy men bezar hon,
ab kiya tamaa-e-seem o zar ho,kiya bhala jageer sy.


rukhsat hoa ye ishQ bhi us waqt hi iss dehar sy,
piyaala bhara suQrat ny jub,zehr-e-laa'taseer sy.


hurgiz dil-e-mayoos ko,manoos-e-dilbar tum na kar,
bus dil ko behlaaty raho ik khush'numa tasweer sy.


barsoN sy aadat par chuki aankhoN ko intazaar ki,
aati hy milny khuwaab main jo dilruba takheer sy.


men hulQa-e-yaraN main gar jo bewafa kehlaoN phir,
to iss behtar ho meri gardan juda shumsheer sy.


umeed-e-wasl yaar ki men aarizoo main Qaed hon,
pabund hen mery aaj tak yun dast o paa zunjeer sy.


deti nahi muslim tujhy ye chaaploosi zaib jo,
hy shaan teri khoob'tar iss bud'numa toQeer sy.


miskeen ye alfaaz ki hy shairy baazigari,
tujh ko mila hy kiya bhala iss be'baQa tehreer sy.

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Ehd e Peeri shabab kee batein
aisee hein jaise khwaab ki batein
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chand ashaar.....
Piyar mein ehtesaab ki batein
Dil dukhayein janaab ki batein
Aa ee ye kuch amal bhi ho jaye
Keejiye bus kitaab ki batein
Maana subjects saaray achay hein
Bus buri hein hisaab ki batein
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