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 Post subject: Winner Ghazal for the month of Feb. *Tajdeed (تجدید)* Dignit
PostPosted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 11:25 pm 
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Friends Aaj Is Silsiley K Liyey New Competition Start Kiya Ja Raha Hai :)
Competitions Ka Tareeq-a-Kaar Tu Aap Sab Jantey Hi Hain Jo Rules Pehley They Wohi Rules Ab Bhi Lagoo Hongey :)

Un Rules Ko Main Share Kar Rahi Hoon Taake Jo New Members Participate Karain Un K Liyey Koi Problem Na Ho Or Woh Easily Apni Pasand Share Ker Sakain :)....... Thanx

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Rules Of This Competition...!!!

:arrow: Aik Member Aik Ghazal Hi Share Ker Sakta Hey

:arrow: Ghazal Urdu, Roman Urdu, Or Image Ki Soorat Main B Share Ki Ja Sakti Hey

:arrow: Agar Aap Ghazal Urdu Main Post Karen To Pls Usko Roman Main Bhi Likhden..Aise Jo Members Urdu Nahi Parh Sakte Unke Liye Asani Ho Jaye Gi

:arrow: Apni Pasandeedah Ghazal Share Kerney Sey Pehley Yeh Zaroor Check Ker Lijiyey Keh Kahin Yeh Ghazal Is Competition Main Pehley Share Tu Nahi Ho Chuki ...... Agar Ho Chuki Ho Tu Woh Poem Doobara Share Nahi Ki Ja Sakti Or Agar Kisi Ney Doobara Share Ker Di Tu Woh Ghazal Delete Ker Di Jye Gi

:arrow: Is Comp Mein Participate Kerney Sey Pehley Yeh Confirm Ker Lijiyey K Aap Jo Sharing Ker Rahey Hein Woh Ghazal Hi Hey Becoz Kaafi Time Is Comp Mein Nazm Share Ker Di Gye Theen So Please Aap Yahan Sirf Ghazal Share Kijiyey. Agar Koi Nazm Share Kerey Ga Tu Usey Voting Mein Shamil Nahi Kiye Jye Ga ………. Thanx

:arrow: Ghazal Share Kerney Ki Last Date "20th February" Hai

:arrow: Is Thread Main Kisi B Member Ko 20th Tak Kisi Qisam Ki Chit Chat Ki Ijazat Nahi HO Gi Aap Sirf Apni Sharings Ker Saktey Hain 21st , Ko Inshallaah Voting Start Ker DI Jye Gi Phir Aap Jo Kehna Chahain Jo Comments Dena Chahain Dey Saktey Hain Or Her Qisam Ki Gup Shup Bhi Ker Saktey Hain :)



Iss Mah ka word hai ...*Tajdeed*


Aaiyey, Agey Berhiyey Apni Pasand Yahan Share Kijiyey Ho Sakta Hey Is Baar K Winner Aap Hi Hon :) .... Aap Sab Ki Sharings Ka Intezaar Hai ......... Thanx

Happy Sharing :)

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 Post subject: Re: Gazal for the month of Feb. *Tajdeed*
PostPosted: Wed Feb 05, 2014 11:33 pm 
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Tera khayal Agar Juzw-e-Zindgi Na Rahy,
Jahan Main Mery Liye koi Dil'kashi Na Rahy,

Main Aa Gaya Hoon Wahan Tak Teri Tamanna Main,
Jahan Sy Koi Bhi Imkan-e Waapsi Na Rahy,

Tu Theek Kehta Hy, Ay Mohsin Theek kehta Hy,
K Hum Hi QabiL-e-TajDeeD-e-MOHBBAT Na Rahy,

Mera To khair AzaL Hi Sy Gham MuQaddar Hy,
Teri NIGAH Ki Pehchan BERUKHI Na Rahy,

Teray Firaaq Ka Mosam Azaab Hy M0hsiN,
Kabi kabi To Main kehta Hoon Zindgi Na Rahy.



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 Post subject: Re: Gazal for the month of Feb. *Tajdeed*
PostPosted: Thu Feb 06, 2014 7:55 pm 
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ab k tajdeed-e-wafa ka nahi imkaaN jaana
yaad kya tujhko dilaaein tera paymaaN jaana

yunhi mosam ki ada daikh k yaad aaya hai
kis qadar jald badal jaatay hein insaaN jaana

zindagi teri ataa thi so tere naam ki hai
hum ne jaisi bhi basar ki tera ehsaaN jaana

dil ye kehta hai k shaayad ho fasurda tu bhi
dil ki kya baat karein, dil to hai naadaaN jaana

awwal awwal ki muhabbat k nashay yaad to kar
be-piye bhi tera chehra tha gulistaaN jaana

aakhir aakhir to ye aalam hai k ab hosh nahi
rag-e-meena sulag uthi k rag-e-jaaN jaana

muddaton se yehi aalam, na tavaqqo na umeed
dil pukaaray hi chala jaata hai “jaana jaana”

hum bhi kya saada thay, hum ne bhi samajh rakha tha
gham-e-doraaN se juda hai Gham-e-jaana jaana

ab k kuch aesi saji mehfil-e-yaaraN jaana
sar-ba-zaanu hai koi sar-ba-girebaaN jaana

har koi apni hi awaaz se kaanp uthta hai
har koi apnay hi saaey se hiraasaN jaana

jis ko dekho wohi zanjeer-ba-pa lagata hai
shehr ka shehr hua daaKhil-e-zindaaN jaana

ab tera zikr bhi shaayad hi Gazal mein aaye
aur se aur hua dard ka unvaaN jaana

hum k roothi hui rut ko bhi mana lete thay
hum ne dekha hi na tha mosam-e-hijraaN jaana

hosh aaya to sabhii Khwaab thay reza reza
jaisay urtay huay auraaq-e-pareshaaN jaana



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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal for the month of Feb. *Tajdeed (تجدید)*
PostPosted: Fri Feb 07, 2014 9:06 pm 
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چُھوٹا جو تیرا ہاتھ تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے
تم جو نہ رہے ساتھ تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے

چاہت کی تمنّا تھی اور زخم دیے تم نے
پائی جو یہ سوغات تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے

امکان نہ تھا دور تلک تجدیدِ تعلق کا
دیکھے جو یہ حالات تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے

انجان تھے ہم اب تک درد کی صورت سے
ہوئی جو ملاقات تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے

جیتی تھی سدا ہم نے ہر بازی تیرے ساتھ
تنہا جو سہی مات تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے

لوگوں نے بہت پوچھا سبب ویرانیٕ دل کا
جب ہو نہ سکی بات تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے

تھی دھوپ بہت تیز ہر سمت جدائی کی
برسی جو نہ برسات تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے

زد میں تھا خزاؤں کی اب کے دلِ برباد
بچھڑے جو شجر-پات تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے

دن بھر تو رہے چُپ کہ دنیا کی نظر تھی
بھیگی جو سیاہ رات تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے

سمجھا تھا سدا تم کو اپنا ہی کوئی حصہ
ٹکڑوں میں بٹی ذات تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے

ہم کرتے رہے آج تک اُس چاند کی خواہش
یاد آئی جو اوقات تو ہم ٹوٹ کے روئے


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chhootta jo tera haath to hum toott k roye
tum jo na rahe saath to hum toott k roye

chaahat ki tamanna thi aur zakhm diye tum ne
paai jo ye soghaat to hum toott k roye

imkaan na tha door talak tajdeed_e_talluq ka
dekhe jo ye haalaat to hum toott k roye

anjaan thay hum ab tak dard ki soorat se
hui jo mulaqaat tou hum toott k roye

jeeti thi sadaa hum ne her baazi tere saath
tanha jo sahi maat tou hum toott k roye

logon ne bohat poocha sabab wiraani_e_dil ka
jub ho na saki baat to hum toott k roye

thi dhoop bohat taiz her simt judaayi ki
barsi jo na bersaat to hum toott k roye

zadd meiN tha khazaaoN ki ab k dil_e_berbaad
bichrre jo shajr-paat tou hum toott k roye

din bhar to rahe chup k duniya ki nazar thi
bheegi jo siyah raat tou hum toott k roye

samjha tha sada tum ko apna he koi hissa
tukrron meiN batti zaat to hum toott k roye

hum kerte rahe aaj talak us chaaNd ki khwahish
yaad aayi jo auqaat to hum toott k roye

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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal for the month of Feb. *Tajdeed (تجدید)*
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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal for the month of Feb. *Tajdeed (تجدید)*
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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal for the month of Feb. *Tajdeed (تجدید)*
PostPosted: Wed Mar 26, 2014 10:31 am 
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 Post subject: Re: Winner Ghazal for the month of Feb. *Tajdeed (تجدید)* Di
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