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 Post subject: Ghazal Of The Month Jan 2015 WINNER/Mysterious ji
PostPosted: Fri Jan 02, 2015 2:12 pm 
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Friends Aaj Is Silsiley K Liyey New Competition Start Kiya Ja Raha Hai :)
Competitions Ka Tareeq-a-Kaar Tu Aap Sab Jantey Hi Hain Jo Rules Pehley They Wohi Rules Ab Bhi Lagoo Hongey :)

Un Rules Ko Main Share Kar Rahi Hoon Taake Jo New Members Participate Karain Un K Liyey Koi Problem Na Ho Or Woh Easily Apni Pasand Share Ker Sakain :)....... Thanx


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Rules Of This Competition...!!!


:arrow: Aik Member Aik Ghazal Hi Share Ker Sakta Hey

:arrow: Ghazal Urdu, Roman Urdu, Or Image Ki Soorat Main B Share Ki Ja Sakti Hey

:arrow: Agar Aap Ghazal Urdu Main Post Karen To Pls Usko Roman Main Bhi Likhden..Aise Jo Members Urdu Nahi Parh Sakte Unke Liye Asani Ho Jaye Gi

:arrow: Apni Pasandeedah Ghazal Share Kerney Sey Pehley Yeh Zaroor Check Ker Lijiyey Keh Kahin Yeh Ghazal Is Competition Main Pehley Share Tu Nahi Ho Chuki ...... Agar Ho Chuki Ho Tu Woh Poem Doobara Share Nahi Ki Ja Sakti Or Agar Kisi Ney Doobara Share Ker Di Tu Woh Ghazal Delete Ker Di Jye Gi

:arrow: Is Comp Mein Participate Kerney Sey Pehley Yeh Confirm Ker Lijiyey K Aap Jo Sharing Ker Rahey Hein Woh Ghazal Hi Hey Becoz Kaafi Time Is Comp Mein Nazm Share Ker Di Gye Theen So Please Aap Yahan Sirf Ghazal Share Kijiyey. Agar Koi Nazm Share Kerey Ga Tu Usey Voting Mein Shamil Nahi Kiye Jye Ga ………. Thanx

:arrow: Ghazal Share Kerney Ki Last Date "20th January" Hai

:arrow: Is Thread Main Kisi B Member Ko 20th Tak Kisi Qisam Ki Chit Chat Ki Ijazat Nahi HO Gi Aap Sirf Apni Sharings Ker Saktey Hain 21st , Ko Inshallaah Voting Start Ker DI Jye Gi Phir Aap Jo Kehna Chahain Jo Comments Dena Chahain Dey Saktey Hain Or Her Qisam Ki Gup Shup Bhi Ker Saktey Hain :)



Iss Mah ka word hai ... "Bahaar"

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Aaiyey, Agey Berhiyey Apni Pasand Yahan Share Kijiyey Ho Sakta Hey Is Baar K Winner Aap Hi Hon :) .... Aap Sab Ki Sharings Ka Intezaar Hai ......... Thanx

Happy Sharing :)


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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal Of The Month 2015, "Topic/Bahaar"
PostPosted: Sat Jan 03, 2015 12:01 pm 
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Tum agar bahaar ho to phool kuch khilaao na.
So rahi hain dharknain tum in ko bhi jagaao na.

Mera bas chale agar zameen ko main thaam loon.
Chaand ko kahoon ke apni gardishen bhulaao na.

Jism o jaan ke fasilon ko ab simattna chahiye.
Meri baat maan lo mujhe tum ab sataao na.

Kaaley kaaley baadlon mein chaandni udas hai.
Apne goray hath se tum ik diya jalaao na.

Mujh ko apne sath rakho khushbuyon ke raqss min.
Gungunaa rahi hai raat tum bhi geet gaao na..



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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal Of The Month 2015, "Topic/Bahaar"
PostPosted: Wed Jan 07, 2015 12:56 pm 
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Ye kasia mor hai main kis ke intazar me hu
sab e siyah me bhala koi sath kya deta
me bhi chirag musafir hu or gubar me hu
mera shaour badalta nai hai lafzon se
me tere khat ke nai tere intazar me hu
badan me roshni khusboo ke sath aai hai
me tere khuwab me ya mosam e bahar me hu
kisi se koi gila hai na khush gumani e dil
kai dino se ajab tarah ke fashar me hu



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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal Of The Month 2015, "Topic/Bahaar"
PostPosted: Wed Jan 07, 2015 1:47 pm 
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Location: *Mehsoos kijiye in HAWAON main hon
Bahar aayi to jaise ek bar
laut aaye hain phir adam se
wo khvab sare, shabab sare
jo tere honthon pe mar mite the
jo mit ke har bar phir jiye the
nikhar gaye hain gulab sare
jo teri yadon se mushkbu hain
jo tere ushshaq ka lahu hain
ubal pade hain azab sare
malal-e-ahaval-e-dostan bhi
khumar-e-agosh-e-mahavashan bhi
gubar-e-khatir ke bab sare
tere hamare
saval sare, javab sare
bahar aayi to khul gaye hain
naye sire se hisab sare.....


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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal Of The Month January 2015, "Topic/Bahaar"
PostPosted: Thu Jan 08, 2015 5:15 pm 
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کب سماں تھا بہار سے پہلے
غم کہاں تھا بہار سے پہلے

ایک ننھا سا آرزو کا دیا
ضوفشاں تھا بہار سے پہلے

اب تماشا ہے چار تنکوں‌کا
آشیاں تھا بہار سے پہلے

اے مرے دل کے داغ یہ تو بتا
تو کہاں تھا بہار سے پہلے

پچھلی شب میں خزان کا سناٹا
ہم زباں‌تھا بہار سے پہلے

چاندنی میں‌یہ آگ کا دریا
کب رواں تھا بہار سے پہلے

بن گیا ہے سحابِ موسمِ گل
جو دھواں تھا بہار سے پہلے

لُٹ گئی دل کی زندگی ساغر
دل جواں‌تھا بہار سے پہلے



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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal Of The Month January 2015, "Topic/Bahaar"
PostPosted: Sat Jan 10, 2015 3:09 am 
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is *** maiN kon share kare gaa .....I was mistaken but never participate here agaiN
U people be happy this is my own decesion.


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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal Of The Month January 2015, "Topic/Bahaar"
PostPosted: Mon Jan 12, 2015 6:09 pm 
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ہر طرف سطوتِ ارژنگ دکھائی دے گی
رنگ برسیں گے زمین دنگ دکھائی دے گی
بارشِ خونِ شہیداں سے وہ آئے گی بہار
ساری دھرتی ہمیں گلرنگ دکھائی دے گی
پربتوں سے نکل آئیں گے تھرکتے پیکر
نغمہ زن خامشیِ سنگ دکھائی دے گی
راز میں رہ نہ سکے گی کوئی اظہار کی لے
اِک نہ اِک صورتِ آہنگ دکھائی دے گی
سوچ کو جراتِ پرواز تو مل لینے دو
یہ زمین اور ہمیں تنگ دکھائی دے گی
تاج کانٹوں کا سہی، ایک نہ اک دن لیکن
عاشقی زینتِ اورنگ دکھائی دے گی
جب بھی پرکھے گا کوئی پیار کے معیار قتیل
ساری دُنیا مرے پاسنگ دکھائی دے گی

Har Taraf Satwat-e-arzang Dikhai Day Gi
Rang Barsain Gay Zameen Dang Dikhai Day Gi
Barish-e-Khoon-e-Shaheedan Say Woh Aae Gi Bahar
Saari Dharti Gul Rang Dikhai Day Gi
Parbatoun Say Nikal Aaein Gay Tharaktay Paikar
Naghma Zann Khaamashi-e-Sang Dikhai Day Gi
Raaz Main Reh Nah Sakay Gi Koi Izhaar Ki Lay
Ek Nah Ek Soorat-e-Aahang Dikhai Day Gi
Soch Ko Jurrat-e-Parwaaz To Mil Lainay Do
Yeh Zameen Aur Hamain Tang Dikhai Day Gi
Taaj Kaantoun Ka Sahi,Aik Nah Ek Din lakin
Aashqui Zeenat-e-Aurang Dikhai Day Gi
Jab Bhi Parkhay Ga Koi payaar K Mayaar Qateel
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 Post subject: Re: Please Start Voting Ghazal Of The Month January 2015
PostPosted: Wed Jan 21, 2015 11:58 am 
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Please Start Voting
Please Start Voting
Please Start Voting
Please Start Voting
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 Post subject: Re: Please Start Voting Ghazal Of The Month January 2015
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 Post subject: Re: Please Start Voting Ghazal Of The Month January 2015
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dignity :b)b:

note:
semi ki ghazal ka pehla sher ghaaib hae sahil e tamana ne nazm share ki hae dono disqualiy ho gae hain ...sorry to mention



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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal Of The Month Jan 2015 WINNER/Mysterious ji
PostPosted: Sun Feb 01, 2015 12:18 pm 
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Asslam o Alaikum
Category: Ghazal
Winner: Mysterious ji
Congratulations
Winning shield will be added to your profile very doon.



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 Post subject: Re: Ghazal Of The Month Jan 2015 WINNER/Mysterious ji
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Again mubarakbaad Asif... :)O



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