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 Post subject: sher se koi lafz le kar agla shair likhein
PostPosted: Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:04 am 
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salam friends...chalen hum yahan aik naya silsila shuro karte hain....mein aik shair likhti hon next member os mein se apni pasand ka lafz choose kare aur os lafz se shair de aur phir os se next member do the same thing...so on & on :)



kis ko dekhaa hai ki pindaar-e-nazar ke baavasaf
ek lamhe ke liye ruk gaii dil kii dharkan


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hi ,,,, chale hum bhi app k qadam-b-qadam mila lete he ur shuru kerte he,,, hum ne app k shair se DILL ka lafz choos kya he,
irshad he,

dua-e-bad nahi deta faqad itna hi kheta hu
k jis se DILL lage tera wo tujh sa bewafa nikle



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jiyenge magar muskuraa naa sakenge ke ab zindagii mein muhabbat nahiin hai
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bahut khoob silsila hai ye ''sono'' ji....

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gustaaKh ne shaayad dar-e-zindaaN nahiiN dekha

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GILLA;

TUJHE GILLA HE K US NE PHER LI ANKHE
AE DILL! YE TO SADHA RIVAJ THA US KA



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thnx Aabroo ji & balvinder ji :)

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yuun us ke bichhar jaane pe aansuu na bahaao
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tumhaarii yaad ke jab zaKhm bharane lagate hain
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ishq kyaa chiiz hai ye puuchhiye paravaane se
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bahut hi accha silsila shuru kiya hai sono... mubarkein!

aur hamara chuna hua lafz hai... mayyassar

aur sheir hazir hai



ab itni bhi mayyassar nahi maikhane mein

jitni chhod dete the kabhi paimaane mein.....


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''saki'' sahab aadaab...aapne sher to bahut khoob pesh kiyaa hai lekin ma'azirat ke sath ye kahnaa chaahtaa hooN ki iskii asl shakl kuchh yooN hai...

ab to itnii bhii mayassar nahiiN maikhaane meiN
jitnii ham chooRh diyaa karte the paimaane meiN


aour liijiye ab aapke sher se lafz lete haiN....''maikhaane''.....aour isii ghazal ka ye sher bhii dekhiye is lafz par...

dafn karnaa merii maiyyat ko bhii maikhaane meiN
taa ke maikhaane ki maTTii rahe maikhaane meiN



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bohat bohat shukria saki ji :)

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apanii maTTii hii pe chalane kaa saliiqaa siikho
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dil meN dard aah b-lab chashm guhar-baar liye
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patthar ke jigar vaalon Gam mein vo ravaanii hai
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