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 Post subject: Lafzon Ki Bait Bazi
PostPosted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 12:23 am 
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Ye kyaa keh sab say bayaa(n) dill kee haalatai(n) karnee
Faraz, tojh ko na aayee(n) mohabbatai(n) karnee...
( Again Ye )



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PostPosted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 6:55 am 
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Yahi nahi key zaminey meri achuti hein
May assmaan bhi apney nayai banati hun

"nunn"



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 Post subject: Reply for 'nuun'
PostPosted: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:58 am 
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Na-Jaany kon Sa Aansoo kiSsi Say kia Kah Day ~
Hum ISsi Khiyal Say Nazar Jhukaye Baithy Hain
(should be 'nuun' Again)


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he aap ka aisa muskarana ke chand bhi sharmagaya
he aapka aisa muskarana ke phool ko pasina aagaya
(alif...i think lol)


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 12:26 am 
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Ye kiss maqaam pay soojhee tojhay bich'harnay kee
Abhee to jaa kay kaheen dinn sawarnay waalay t'hay
( Again Ye )



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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 4:34 am 
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ye asmaan wala hi akhir kabhi baatayega
key wafa shu~aron ka hasil q hey tanhayi

"ye"



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main ye kehta hun her rukh se basar ki zindagi
zindagi kehti hai, "her pehlu adhoora reh gaya"...
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 Post subject: Reply for "yeh"
PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 8:54 am 
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Yah Khud Aziyati Kab Tak Faraz To Bhe Ussay ~
Na Yaad Kar Kah Jissy Bholny Ke Aadat Hay.
It Should be 'yeh' Again, I think.


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 9:17 am 
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Woh Na Louta To Ussay Lout Kar Aana Bhe Na Tha ~
Yo'n Bhee Ik Khuwab-e-Muqarar Nahin Daikha Jata.
Should Be 'Alif'.


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 9:34 am 
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Yeh Bhi Theek Hai K Woh Chala Gaya Mujhay Band Raastay Par Chor Kar
Yeh Bhi Theek Hai K Na Aaye Ga Woh Kabhi Buut Ana Ka Tor Kar
Woh Juda Bhi Kaisay Huwa, Main Koi Rasm Bhi Na Nibha Saka
Woh Hansi Hansi Mein Hi Chala Gaya Mein Hath Tak Na Hila Saka
Should Be 'Alif'.


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 9:47 am 
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Yah Aarzo The Kah Tujhy Gul Kay RoBaru karty ~
Hum Aor BulBul-e-BayTab Gufatgu Karty.
Should Be 'yeh'.


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 9:57 am 
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Yah Khatam-e-Visal Ka Lamha Hay Issy Raiga`n Na Samjh
Kah IS Kay Baad Wohi Doriyo`n Ka Sehra Hay.
Enough 'yeh' Now, Start Something New , But Free To PosT.


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 10:09 am 
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Guftagoo Keejeay Keh Yeh Fitrat-e-Insaan Hai ~Shakaib
Jalay Lag Jatay Hain Jab Band Makann Hotay Hain.
Should Be 'noun'


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 10:24 am 
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Sada Hon Apny Piyar Kee Jahan Say Main BayNiyaz Hon ~
koi Na Jo Samajh Saky Woh ZindaGi ka Raaz Ho'n.
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 10:31 am 
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Na Fana Meri Na Baqa Meri Mujhy Ay Shakeel, Na Dhoondiye ~
Main Kissi Ka Husn E Khayal Hon Mera Kuch Wajood E Adam Nahin.
should Be Again 'noun'.


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PostPosted: Thu Dec 09, 2004 10:49 am 
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Howa Hay Tujh Say Bicharny Kay Baad Ab Maloom ~
Kah Tu Nahin Tha Tery Saath Aik Duniya Thee.
Should be 'yeh'


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 2:24 am 
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laila wrote:
Nama hai dil jaloon ka zara bach k kholna….
Aaaheen bhari hain is main kaheen hath jal na jaye….

YE :oops: [/b]

Last Word Was 'The' Mean End With 'yeh' And Your Shair Is Starting With "noun" So You LoSe Bibi.


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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 2:36 am 
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Yeh Jo Deewany Say Do Chaar Nazar Aaty Hain ~
In Main Say Kuch Sahab-e-Asraar Nazar Aaty Hain ~
Kal Jinha'in Choo Nahin Sakti The Farishto'n Ke Nazar ~
Aaj Woh Ronaq-e-Bazaar Nazar Aaty Hain.
Should Be 'noun'.


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 Post subject: Ana
PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 1:02 pm 
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Haan theek hai main apni ana ka mareez hoon
Mere muamlaat mein kyon dakhal de koi.......!
Sabit hoa sakoo-e-dil-o-jaan kahin Nahi.........!
Rishtoon mein dhonta hai tu dhoonda phire koi


8)



na rang-o- roop ki tarah na khad-o-kaal ki tarah
woh mery man main aabasa hay kisi maalal ki tarah
main raastha hon or tumhari yaad qaafla hay jo
guzar rahi hay mujh say mery maah-o-saal ki tarah
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 10, 2004 4:28 pm 
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Mila to kia mila tumhein chahney kay baad
Bas dukh hi seh rahein hein, hamein sehney do



Tum ney to keh dala sab haal-e-dil apna
Ab mujh ko apni daastaan bhi kehney do


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PostPosted: Sat Dec 11, 2004 2:36 am 
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`~..FaIrY..~` wrote:
Mila to kia mila tumhein chahney kay baad
Bas dukh hi seh rahein hein, hamein sehney do



Tum ney to keh dala sab haal-e-dil apna
Ab mujh ko apni daastaan bhi kehney do


Last Letter Was 'Ye' So you also Lose, I dont think so that its BaitBaazi Anymore here. You both Active Users Losed Already.


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 9:26 am 
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laila wrote:
LoSted onE wrote:
`~..FaIrY..~` wrote:
Mila to kia mila tumhein chahney kay baad
Bas dukh hi seh rahein hein, hamein sehney do



Tum ney to keh dala sab haal-e-dil apna
Ab mujh ko apni daastaan bhi kehney do


Last Letter Was 'Ye' So you also Lose, I dont think so that its BaitBaazi Anymore here. You both Active Users Losed Already.



whatever... :twisted:


Woh Ek Hi Chera To, Nahi Sare Jahan Mein,
Jo Dur Hai Woh Dil Se Utar Kyon Nahi Jata,

Main Apni Hi Uljhi Hui Raho Ka Tamasha,
Jate Hain Jidhar Sab, Main Udhar Kyon Nahi Jata

waoo :wink:



For your 'Woo' Even its wrong :cry: Laila bibi,

Wo Dil Main Tabasum Ke Kiran Gholny Wala ~
Roothy To Rutoo`n Ko Bhee Sanwarny Nahin Daita.


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 9:28 am 
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From 'Alif',

Aik Aisee Bhe Ghari Ishq Main Aai The Kah Hum ~
Khak Ko Hath Lagaty To Sitara Karty.

Should Be 'yeh'


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PostPosted: Mon Dec 13, 2004 5:17 pm 
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Yeh aankhon se tumhe dekhon mein
In ankhon ko phir kholon naa
Tujhe apni baaton se bolo mein
Is duniya se phir mein bolo naa

I think its 'he', maybe not...lol


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 Post subject: appreciation
PostPosted: Tue Dec 14, 2004 3:15 pm 
[quote="laila"][color=darkblue]abhi to zid hay osay raastha badalnay ki
woh roye ga bhi bohut meri chahatoon kay liyee

YE[/color][/quote] :lol: waah laila, aap chahe laila ho ya majnu par kya kaha hai aapne khuda kasam ek na ek din vo apni raah to badlega hamare liye
plz agar aap ke pass aur aisi dil choone wali shairiyan hai to mujhe mere e mail par bhaje plz thankssssss :oops:


  
 
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PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 10:29 am 
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for you Laila Bibi, And alo Reply of 'yeh'.

Yah Hada'in Na Toor Daina Mery Dairy Main Rahna
Mujhy Apny Dil Main Rakhna Mairy Hafzay Main Rahna
Mairy Hath Ke Lakeera'in Tera Naam Ban Kay Chamka'in
Meri Khuwahisho'n Ke Khushbo Mairy Zaichay Main Rahna.

Should Be 'alif'.


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PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 3:53 pm 
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aiteraaf apni khataaon ka mein kerta hi chalon
janay kis kis ko milay meri saza meray baad

the word is DAAL



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PostPosted: Wed Dec 15, 2004 9:22 pm 
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yehi hi nahi k mera dil merey bas mein na tha
jo tu mila tu khud apni dastaras mein na tha
ajeeb samer ka alam tha is ki qurbat mein
woh merey pass tha aur meri dastarasmein na tha



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main ye kehta hun her rukh se basar ki zindagi
zindagi kehti hai, "her pehlu adhoora reh gaya"...
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PostPosted: Thu Dec 16, 2004 3:31 am 
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YE JO RAAT DIN KA HA KHAEL SA ISSAY DAIKH IS PE YAQEEN NA KER
NAHIN AKS KOI BHI MUSTAQIL SER-E-AAINA USSAY BHOOL JA
"alif"



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 Post subject: LOG
PostPosted: Fri Dec 17, 2004 1:39 pm 
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Itna socha hai kuch sawalon per
barf si girne lagi hai balon per
rone wale tu hans nahi sakte
log hanste hain rone walon per
8)



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Yeh Bhi Theek Hai K Woh Chala Gaya Mujhay Band Raastay Par Chor Kar
Yeh Bhi Theek Hai K Na Aaye Ga Woh Kabhi Buut Ana Ka Tor Kar
Woh Juda Bhi Kaisay Huwa, Main Koi Rasm Bhi Na Nibha Saka
Woh Hansi Hansi Mein Hi Chala Gaya Mein Hath Tak Na Hila Saka
Should Be 'Alif'.



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 Post subject: Re: LOG
PostPosted: Sat Dec 18, 2004 7:59 am 
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shahzadi wrote:
Itna socha hai kuch sawalon per
barf si girne lagi hai balon per
rone wale tu hans nahi sakte
log hanste hain rone walon per
8)
Hum Tujh Say Kis Hawas Ke, Shahzadi Justajo Karain ~
Dil he Nahin Raha Hay Kah Kuch Aarzo Karain.
:?:



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Yeh Bhi Theek Hai K Woh Chala Gaya Mujhay Band Raastay Par Chor Kar
Yeh Bhi Theek Hai K Na Aaye Ga Woh Kabhi Buut Ana Ka Tor Kar
Woh Juda Bhi Kaisay Huwa, Main Koi Rasm Bhi Na Nibha Saka
Woh Hansi Hansi Mein Hi Chala Gaya Mein Hath Tak Na Hila Saka
Should Be 'Alif'.


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Reply of 'noun'
Nazro'n main Apni Gunah Gaar Na Hota Kiun-kar ~
Dil he Dushman hay Mukhalif kay Gawahoo'n ke Tarah.
Should be 'hay'


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Woh khush naseeb sahi,tujh se jo qareeb hain
hum budnaseeb hain jo ghum se dur jaa na sakay

Chah ker chandni bhi us husn ko phechan na sakee
nikhar ke phool bhi us ka shabaab laa na sakay



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 Post subject: aaj
PostPosted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 11:29 am 
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aaj os ne dard bhi apne alehdha ker liye.....!
aaj main roya tu mere sath woh roya na tha
8) 8)




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Yeh Bhi Theek Hai K Woh Chala Gaya Mujhay Band Raastay Par Chor Kar
Yeh Bhi Theek Hai K Na Aaye Ga Woh Kabhi Buut Ana Ka Tor Kar
Woh Juda Bhi Kaisay Huwa, Main Koi Rasm Bhi Na Nibha Saka
Woh Hansi Hansi Mein Hi Chala Gaya Mein Hath Tak Na Hila Saka



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 Post subject: Re: aaj
PostPosted: Tue Dec 21, 2004 9:27 pm 
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shahzadi wrote:
aaj os ne dard bhi apne alehdha ker liye.....!
aaj main roya tu mere sath woh roya na tha
8) 8)
Howa Hay Tujh Say Bicharny Kay Baad Ab Maloom ~
Kah Tu Nahin Tha Tery Saath Aik Duniya Thee.



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Yeh Bhi Theek Hai K Woh Chala Gaya Mujhay Band Raastay Par Chor Kar
Yeh Bhi Theek Hai K Na Aaye Ga Woh Kabhi Buut Ana Ka Tor Kar
Woh Juda Bhi Kaisay Huwa, Main Koi Rasm Bhi Na Nibha Saka
Woh Hansi Hansi Mein Hi Chala Gaya Mein Hath Tak Na Hila Saka


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Reply Of Laila's 'Alif'
Aisy Na Thy Hum Ahl-e-Dil, Itny Kahan Kharab Thy ~
Hum Bhe Kissi Kee Aas Thy, Hum Bhe Kisi Ka Khuwab Thy.
Should be 'yeh'.


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 Post subject: DIL
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 11:07 am 
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Yahi bohat hai k dil os ko dhondh laya hai
kisi k sath sahi woh nazar tu aaya hai
main kya karoon ga agar woh na mil saka Amjad
abhi abhi merey DIL mein kyayal aaya hai.........!
8) 8)



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Reply Of Laila's 'Alif'
Aisy Na Thy Hum Ahl-e-Dil, Itny Kahan Kharab Thy ~
Hum Bhe Kissi Kee Aas Thy, Hum Bhe Kisi Ka Khuwab Thy.
Should be 'yeh'.



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Aapas Ke KiSsi Baat ka Milta He Nahin Waqat ~
Har Baar Yahi Kahty Hain Baitha'in Gain KiSsi Din.
Should Be 'noun'.


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 Post subject: Re: DIL
PostPosted: Wed Dec 22, 2004 11:27 pm 
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shahzadi wrote:
Yahi bohat hai k dil os ko dhondh laya hai
kisi k sath sahi woh nazar tu aaya hai
main kya karoon ga agar woh na mil saka Amjad
abhi abhi merey DIL mein kyayal aaya hai.........!
8) 8)
Mine Shair Was'nt the Part of 'Bait Baazi' :? It was A Reply of your Shair.



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Reply Of Laila's 'Alif'
Aisy Na Thy Hum Ahl-e-Dil, Itny Kahan Kharab Thy ~
Hum Bhe Kissi Kee Aas Thy, Hum Bhe Kisi Ka Khuwab Thy.
Should be 'yeh'.


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osuuloon pe jahaan aanch aaye Thakaraanaa zaruurii hai
jo zindaa hoon to phir zindaa nazar aanaa zaruurii hai
saliiqaa hii nahiin shaayad use mahasuus karane kaa
jo kahataa hai Khudaa hai to nazar aanaa zaruurii hai
8) 8)



na hareef-e jaan, na shareek-e ghum, shub-e intazaar koi tau ho
kise buzm-e shauk mei lain hum, dil-e be-qarar koi tau ho
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PostPosted: Fri Dec 24, 2004 8:59 pm 
Wo Apny Za`am Main That, Bay Khabar Raha Mujh Say ~
Ussy Guman Bhe Nahin, Main Nahin Raha Uss Ka.
Should be 'Alif'.


  
 
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