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 Post subject: lafzoN kii takraar vaale she'r likhiye
PostPosted: Sun Apr 27, 2008 7:41 pm 
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aaiye dosto ek nayaa silsilaa shuroo karte haiN....yahan vohi Ash'aar ''post'' kiijiyegaa jis main kisii ek lafz ki takraar huii ho....is baat ko zaroor madd-e-nazar rakhiyegaa ki kisii bhii ghazal ka matla yahaaN qaabil-e-qubool nahiiN hoga, kyoN ki har matle meN laziman lafz ki takraar ho hi jati hai.

iss munfarid silsile ko shuruu karte hue liijiye merii jaanib se pahla she'r haazir hai...


na thaa kuchh to Khudaa thaa, kuchh na hotaa to Khudaa hotaa
Duboyaa mujh ko hone ne, na hotaa maiN to kyaa hotaa


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duniyaa meN is Dhab se rahiye
duniyaa ke, duniyaa se nyaare


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Ye qo'al kisi ka hai key mai kuch nahi kahta
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tum kahaaN, vasl kahaaN, vasl kii ummiid kahaaN ?
dil ke bahlaane ko ik baat banaa rakkhii hai


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balvinder ji bohat acha thread banaya hai...bohat munfarid :b)b:

lafz kafi nahin hain safar ke liay, is dayar-e-sukhn main guzar ke liay..
aajazi chahi'ai, agahi chahi'ai, dard-e-dil chahi'ai, chashm-e-tar chahi'ai



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Dey khushi key ooz andh-o-alam gin gin kar
Ley shab-e-vasl key badley shab-e-gham gin gin kar

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UDAASI CHAA GAI DIL PAR, SITAROON SAY KARAIN BAATAIN
NAHIN HAI PAAS WOH DILBAR, SITAAROON SAY KARAIN BAATAIN



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Tamanna vasl ki ek raat mai kiya aae sanam nikley
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balvinder ji bohat acha thread banaya hai...bohat munfarid :b)b:


silsilaa pasaNd farmaane ke liye behad shukr_guzaar hooN ''sadaf'' ji.....lekin ek guzaarish fir se sab dostoN se ki yahaaN ''matlaa'' pesh karne se bachiye....shukriyaah..

dekh kar bhii na dekhne waale
dil tujhe dekh-dekh Dartaa hai


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dil ne aise bhi kuch afsane sunaye hon ge
ashk ankhon piye aur na bahaye hon ge
band kamre mein jo khat mere jalaye hon ge
aik aik harf jabeen par ubhar aya ho ga



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kise maaloom kab, kis waqt, kis par, gir paRhe bijlii
abhii se maiN chaman meN chal kar aabaad aashiyaaN kar looN


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kabhi saiban na tha baham, kabhi kehkashan thi qadam qadam
kabhi bemakan, kabhi la makan, meri adhi umr guzar gayee



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kujaa butKhaana-o-kaaba, kujaa Khum Khaan-o-saaqii ?
kahaaN se ''shauq'' shauq-e-diid laaya hai kahaaN mujhko?


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husn tera bohat jaan fiza hi sahi, khush nazar hi sahi, khush ada hi sahi
sun magar dil ruba tera nagma sara dekhta hai nahen sochta bhi to hai



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voh bevafaa hai ki ham bevafaa, khuda jaane
hayaat khatm hai aour unkii aamad-aamad hai


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koi nagma buno, chandini ne kaha, chandini ke liye aik taza gazal
koi taza gazal, phir kisi ne kaha, phir kisi ke liye aik taza gazal



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tum the to meri shaam meiN thaa subh kaa aalam
tum jab se gaye shaam jhalaktee hai sahar meiN !


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boht hoob balvinder sahab boht zaberdst thread hai

na ker nahi nahi yeh waqt nahi hai nahi ka
teri is nahi nahi nay humein chora nahi kahin ka



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silsilaa pasaNd farmaane ke liye shukr_guzaar hooN ''Yaser'' saahib.....

daagh duniyaa ne diye, zaKhm zamaane se mile
ham ko ye tohfe tumheiN dost banaane se mile

ham tarasate hi, taraste hi, tarasate hi, rahe
vo falaane se, falaane se, falaane se mile


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Azm-e-parwaz ki toheen say mayoos na ho
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bhoolne kaa khayaal bhee ek tarah kee yaad hai
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inkaar si lazat iqraar mei kaha
Shoq behrta hai zalim teri nahi nahi say



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aate jaate yuN to dekhe haiN hazaaroN Khush-Khiraam
dil meiN aana, dil se jaana ko_ii tum se seekh jaaye

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pocho to aik aik hai tanha sulag raha
dekho to shahar shahar hai mela laga hua
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angraai par angraai leti hai raat judai ki
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kul zameen bech de, asman bech de
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Her hawaab azaab ho chuka hai
aur tu bhi to hawaab ho chuka hai...

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apne ghar ki aap raunaq giriya-o-zaari ke waqt
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Na Guwao Nawak-neem-Shab
Dil-e-rezza rezza guwa diya

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tukRe tukRe ho jaayeNgi jab hadd se baRheNgi zanzeereN
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 Post subject: Re: lafzoN kii takraar vaale she'r likhiye
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bazm-e-hasti ! apni aarayish pe too naazaaN na ho
too to ik tasweer hai mehfil ki aur mehfil huuN maiN


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kahe jatey ho ro ro kar hamara haal dunya se
ye kesi razdaari hai sitaron tum to so jao
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baat karanii mujhe mushkil kabhii aisii to na thii
jaisii ab hai terii mahafil kabhii aisii to na thii



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juz naam nahiiN suurat-e-aalam mujhe manzuur
juz vahm nahiiN hastii-e-ashyaa mere aage
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