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 Post subject: Ginti ke Aedad walay asha'ar
PostPosted: Fri Jul 06, 2012 7:01 pm 
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دوستو آپ کو دعوت دیتا یہاں ایسے اشعار پیش کرنے کی جن میں گنتی کا کوئی عدد استعمال کیا گیا ہو جیسے انشاء اللہ خان انشاء کے شعر میں دو اور چار کے اعداد آئے ہیں؛

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janaab-e-aala is na_ilm ka bhii khayaal rakhiye.


اس میں کون سی ایسی مشکل بات ہے، ایسے اشعار لکھنے ہیں جن میں گنتی کا کوئی عدد آ رہا ہو۔


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Great thread Faseeh ji :b)b: Fasseh ji darasal balvinder ji urdu nahin parh pate hain isi liye hum yahan roman mein zaror likhte hain ta ke balvinder ji bhi participate kar saken :)

balvinder ji aap ki asani ke liye main yahan explain kar deti hon :)

"dosto aap ko dawat deta hon, yahan aise ashar pesh karne hein jin mein ginti ka koi adad istemal kiya gaya ho, jese Insha Allah khan Insha ke sher mein do aur chaar ke adaad aye hein,

bhala gardish falat ki chain deti hai kise Insha
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sono wrote:
Great thread Faseeh ji :b)b: Fasseh ji darasal balvinder ji urdu nahin parh pate hain isi liye hum yahan roman mein zaror likhte hain ta ke balvinder ji bhi participate kar saken :)

balvinder ji aap ki asani ke liye main yahan explain kar deti hon :)

"dosto aap ko dawat deta hon, yahan aise ashar pesh karne hein jin mein ginti ka koi adad istemal kiya gaya ho, jese Insha Allah khan Insha ke sher mein do aur chaar ke adaad aye hein,

bhala gardish falat ki chain deti hai kise Insha
ganimat hai ke hum surat yahan do chaar bethe hain



Aap ka bot shukria Sono ji,
meray iss thread ko pasaNd kernay aur iss ko roman mieN pesh kernay k liay.
maeN aainda roman meiN bhi likhh diya karooN ga, In Sha Allah.



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any time Faseeh ji :)

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sono wrote:
balvinder ji aap ki asani ke liye main yahan explain kar deti hon :)


is zehmat ke liye maiN aap ka behad shukr_guzaar hooN "Sono" jii.. :buke:

"Faseeh" jii achha silsila shuru kiya hai aap ne...liijiye merii jaanib se ye pesh_kash haazir hai...

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