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 Post subject: chhoTi bahar ke ash'aar pesh kiijiye.
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haaziriin-e-bazm aaiye ek naya silsila shuru karte haiN...yahaaN aap ko chhoTi bahar ke ash'aar pesh karne haiN...aap chaaheN to poori Ghazal bhii likh sakte haiN...to chaliye koshish kiijiye chhoTe se chhoTa sher pesh karne kii.

liijiye maiN aaGhaaz karta hooN "Qateel" shifaaii sahab ke is kamaal ke sher se aur mere khayaal se is se chhoTa sher aur nahiiN hoga.

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mar sake to mar

maiN hooN gum kahaaN
kuchh meri Khabar ?!

ratjage Khareed
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Ab jo ik hasrat-e-jawani hai,
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un se ab visaal?
yaa Khudaa! kamaal!

do ghaRi ko hai
husn aur jamaal

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woh meharbaaN haiN
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duniya se khelo
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Yeh dard mit gaya tu phir?
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shukriyah "Khadija" jii aur "Aasif" bhaaii.... :buke:

talve zaKhmii hone de
phooloN par mat panv rakh


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shukriyah "dignity" ji... :buke:

koshish ab kiijiyega saare kii
thoRha-thoRha badal nahiiN sakta


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Saans madham,
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Rooh ghayal,
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Saans jaisay,
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Zakhm jeevan,
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Koun kaatey,
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Wasl, raahat,
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zindagi yun howi baser tanha
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اپنے سینے کا یہ ننھا سا دیا کام آیا
نہ یہ جلتا نہ یہ اشعار میسر آتے

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bahut khoob "kash11" jii.. :buke:

shukriyah "haifa" jii...lekin maazrat ke saath kahna chaahooNga ki aap ka diya sher chhoTi bahar meN nahiiN hai...koshish kiijiye kam se kam lafzoN vaale ash'aar pesh karne kii.

aa gayii manzil-e-muraad
baang-e-dara ko bhool ja

zaat-e-Khuda meN yuN ho mahv
naam-e-Khuda ko bhool ja


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chupkay chupkay de jatay hain,,,

gehray rog , sunehray log!!!!



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Tumhari jeet se ziada,
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aa ke bhaNvar se baahar ham
Doob gaye hairaanii meN


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ہے خواب ثبات آشنائی
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wafa ki talash t sahab

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nahi aati nazar koi.
humen chahat idher koi.


khamoshi is sy behtr hy,
zabaN oogly zehr koi.


meri abadi musafat main,
nahi zad-e-safar koi.


andheroN sy na dar miskeen,
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eik nukta eik baat
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sabr k kaaley koas
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us k sab iqraar
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merey sheher ki bheer
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aag se phool na maang
jal ja'en gey haath

rukh, sehra ki dhool
aankhon mein barsaat

tu aur us ka naam?
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bahki chaal sanbhaal
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us k naqsh na deikh
sab ujli ayaat

MOHSIN se mat pooch
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کچھ نہ کسی سے بولیں گے
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bOOht sa shukriya ap sb ka share krne k liye :)O :buke:

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тнє ѕ๏lιтαяу wrote:
جیتے جی مرجاتا ہوں
مرکے میں معدوم نہیں


jeete jee mar jaata hoN
mar k maiN madoom nahi



very Nice.... :b)b:

Really Beautiful .. :b)b:

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kash11 wrote:
тнє ѕ๏lιтαяу wrote:
جیتے جی مرجاتا ہوں
مرکے میں معدوم نہیں


jeete jee mar jaata hoN
mar k maiN madoom nahi



very Nice.... :b)b:

Really Beautiful .. :b)b:

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سوال کچھ بھی ہو
جواب تم ہی ہو

Sawal kuch bhi ho
Jawab tum he ho

wahh... bohat dilkash...



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تیز ہوا نے مجھ سے پوچھا
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taiz hawa ne mujh se pooch
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