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Post subject: ~:DiSScuSSion:~  Posted: Wed Feb 11, 2009 6:26 pm |
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Dear members
Jaisa ke aap sab jaante hain ke mujhay yeh zimmedaari sonpi gayee hai ke main aap sub shuara ke ashaar ko pudhoon aur apna naacheez tabsira bhi karoon. Aisa bhi ho sakta hai ke aap log yeh chaahte hi naa hon ke koi un ko sahee kuray, aap sirf apnay khubsoorat khayalat hum tuk pohnchaana chahtay hon lihaza yeh sochtay huey hum ne socha hai ke hum aik naya silsila shuroo kurtay hain. Is main woh tamam shu'ara apna kalam post kur suktay hain jo yeh chaahte hain ke un ke kalaam pur islaah ki gharz se tabsara kiya jaaey.
Baaqee ke tamam members, apnee takhleeqat waise hi post kurain jaise ke aaj tuk kurtay aaye hain yani ke apne hi thread main. Woh thread waise ke waise hee ruhain ge aur baqi ke members agar un pur compliments daina chahain tou woh bhi kurtay ruhain.
Badla sirf yeh hai ke jo yeh chahtay hain ke un ke kalam ki islaah ki jaaye woh apna kalaam yahan pur post kurain taake humaare seniors us ki zuroorat ke mutaabiq islaah kur sukain.
Umeed hai ke aap sab ko yeh naya silsila pasand aaye ga aur yeh bi umeed kurtay hain ke is se kisi ki dil aazari bhi naheen ho gee. Yahan pur jo bhi islaah ki jaati hai ya dostana mushware diye jaatay hain un ka maqsad kisi ki dilaazari naheen bulke us ko nikhaarna hai.
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 8:21 am |
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Mohtarm Seema Ji Adab,
Mujhe is thread k start hone ki sab se ziyada khushi hai aur yun samjhiye k meri to murad barr aaie. isliye is silsilay ko sarahtay huwe subse pehlay main qaaraeen k samnay khud ko paish karne ki jisarat karraha hoon is iltimas k saath k aap log apni garaan qadr raey se nawazain aur islah ka mouqa ata karain.
Baba tum kyun door huwe,
kyun milne se majbor huwe
milne humko kyun nahin aatay
ham sang kyun nahin khailtay khatay,
gudgudi kar k kyun nahin uthatay,
sinay pe apne kyun nahin sulatay.
Baba tum kyun door huwe,
kyun milne se majbor huwe
baba mera hath pakad lo,
bahon main mujhe jakad lo,
bheed main logon ki kho gaya hon,
rah tumhari taktay taktay mama k sang so gaya hon.
Baba tum kyun door huwe,
kyun milne se majbor huwe
Beta tumse dori kyun hai,
kya hai aur majbori kyun hai,
kaisay main tumko samjhaon,
ji karta hai urd kar aajaon,
mera bhi sina jalta hai,
dekhne tumko ji karta hai
Beta tum kyun door huwe,
kyun milne se majbor huwe
Duago
Tabassum Asad Qureshi
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Post subject: Re: Dedicated to my Mother Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 1:41 pm |
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 8:12 pm |
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AOA Afzal ji, hum tou aap ke fan ho gaye. Maan tou aisi cheez hai ke hum chaah kur bhi us ka haq ada kur diya laikin aap ne yaqeenan bohot had tuk kiya hai aise khubsoorat alfaz main unhain yaad kur ke. Aap ke yeh alfaz un tamaam logon ke dil ki awaaz hain jo ab is duniya main naheen raheen. Bohot saare daad aur duaein. Humaisha khush ruhain aur aise hee apne khubsoorat khayalat ko hum se share kurtay rahain 
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 9:24 pm |
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Aslamaualaikum .. Sorry i m posting a post which is out of topic per Question hai tho poochna parega
Yahan hammen apni shairy post karni hai .. per question is k ..
Woh kya halaat hote hain Ya kis reason ki wajah se Hum poems likhte hain ????
apne ehsasat ko tho hum ik mazmoon ki tarah bhi likh sakte hain na ?? tho phir shairy hi kyu ???
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Thu Feb 12, 2009 10:22 pm |
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SyedZada wrote: Aslamaualaikum .. Sorry i m posting a post which is out of topic per Question hai tho poochna parega
Yahan hammen apni shairy post karni hai .. per question is k ..
Woh kya halaat hote hain Ya kis reason ki wajah se Hum poems likhte hain ????
apne ehsasat ko tho hum ik mazmoon ki tarah bhi likh sakte hain na ?? tho phir shairy hi kyu ??? Wasalaam Syed, Koi baat naheen kyounke yeh sawaal shiry se related hai tou aap issay yahan post kur saktay hain. Raha aap ka sawaal tou bada acha sawaal hai ke shairy hi kyoun.. HUm iss ko nasr main bhi keh saktey laikin baat sirf iti hai ke jo mausiqiyat aur rythm shairy main hain, woh aap ko nasr main naheen milay ga. Shairy gaaee jaa saktee hai aur nasr naheen. maslan agr aap Mir ka yeh sher lain ke Mir in neem baaz aankhon main Saari masti sharab ki si hai tou aik bohot khubsoorat ehsaas hota hai dil ko choo laine waala aur agar yehi baat aap nasr main kahain ke Un aankhon ki mastee bilkul sharab ke jaisi hai tou wah rang naheen aata. Aur doosri baat yeh ke ...Aap ko issay beher main radeef main aur qafiye main baandhnaa hai tou aap nasr main tou apnay khayalayaat man o ann likh saktay hain magar jab baat shairy ki ho tou us ka rung alag, aik mouseeqiyat, rythm jis ki wajah se shairy zyaada khubsoorat lagtee hai padhne main aur sunnay main. Wohi baat jo aap saada se andaaz main kahain woh shairee main kuheen zyada khubsoorat lagtee hai. Mujhay yeh tou naheen maloom keh main aap ke sawal ke jawab sahee se day payee yah naheen magar main ne wohi likha jo main mehsoos kurtee hoon. Pls feel free to ask agar aap ke zehen main kuch aur sawal hon, main apni naacheez see maloomat ke hisab se app ko jawab daine ki koshish karoon ge.
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 2:22 am |
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seemanaqvi wrote: AOA Afzal ji, hum tou aap ke fan ho gaye. Maan tou aisi cheez hai ke hum chaah kur bhi us ka haq ada kur diya laikin aap ne yaqeenan bohot had tuk kiya hai aise khubsoorat alfaz main unhain yaad kur ke. Aap ke yeh alfaz un tamaam logon ke dil ki awaaz hain jo ab is duniya main naheen raheen. Bohot saare daad aur duaein. Humaisha khush ruhain aur aise hee apne khubsoorat khayalat ko hum se share kurtay rahain Esteemed Seema........It is indubitable that man hankers after true love but he finds that the only affection of mother is without affectation. Thanks........for this comiseration.
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 2:55 am |
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 5:49 pm |
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@seema ji Thxx for ur reply..jo kuch farmaya is the fact .. bilkul sahi kaha aap ne ..
ab aur topic kharab nahi karna chahta ... sorry .... and thx alot
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Fri Feb 13, 2009 6:34 pm |
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You are welcome, Syed. Anytime!!!
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 1:06 pm |
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Sat Feb 14, 2009 8:07 pm |
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Tue Feb 17, 2009 4:34 pm |
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SyedZada wrote: ik post thi delete hogayeee..
tHX GOd Ohh good, main samjhee ke mairi koi baat buree lag gaee 
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Post subject: Re: Aaya hai us ke pass moqader leay howe. Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 12:20 pm |
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Wed Feb 18, 2009 1:26 pm |
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Ghazal paish-e-khimat hai........aapki qeemti aara ka muntazir rahon ga.
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 3:20 am |
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Janab Afzal ji, Aap aik ke baad aik itnee saree khubsoorat ghazlain paish kar rahay hain ke its hard for me to keep track magar masha' allh bohot hi khoob. Is ghazal main aik aadh jagah mujhay lagta hai ke aap isko aur khubsoorat kar sakte hain jaise ke aap ka matla Dhoondtay phirtay ho khud ko, aap kis mushkil main hain Yahan pur yaa to aap istemaal karain yaa phir tum Dhoondtay phirtay hain khud ko, aap kis mushkil man hain aur maire dil se ab bhi uthnay waale dhuain ke nishaan, yeh misra wazn main naheen hai issay doobara kahiye Baqi tamam ghazal bohot khoob hai. Matla bhi utna mazedaar naheen hai, kuch mubham hai, koshish kar ke issay tamam padhne waalon ke liye aur asaan kar dain. Dhairon daad aur aap ke aglee ghazal ka intezaar rahay ga  Duago, Seema
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:06 pm |
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bilkul theek kaha aap ne
Pehlay shair me APP ka istemal ziadah hai .. But Poori ghzal buhat hi umda hai Thx for sharing FAYPAL
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Thu Feb 19, 2009 7:15 pm |
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SyedZada wrote: bilkul theek kaha aap ne
Pehlay shair me APP ka istemal ziadah hai .. But Poori ghzal buhat hi umda hai Thx for sharing FAYPAL Thank you Syed..
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:31 pm |
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sub ki participation bohat achi hai yahan, dil chaha yahan kuch post krnay ko, so here i m...
ajeeb bandish si thi labo’n pr
k dil main jo lafz goonjtay thay
zuba’n pe atay hi rukk gaye thay
meri tamanna k raastay main
meray khyalo’n k silsalay thay
jo hr ghari sar utha rahay thay
mujhe musalsal dara rahay thay…
yunhi achanak hua phir ik din!
K rahbari ki khirad ne meri..
Kaha mohabbat to dil-lagi hai
Suni nah us din kisi ne dil ki..
Khayal aya kabhi jo dil ka,
To dekha, rasta who mit chukka tha,
Jo ik tamanna ki zindagi tha!!
Dil-o-khirad ki isi jharap mai,
Meri tamanna ka khoo,n hua tha,
Ye dil alag be-sakoo’n hua tha!!
(17th july, 2004)
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Fri Feb 20, 2009 8:45 pm |
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Tuba bohot khoob.... Baree khubsoorat nazm hai Bohot saree daad aur main chahoon gi ke aap apni khubsoorat takhleeqat hamare saath zyada se zyada share karain aur aik dafa phir main tamam likhnay waaloon se guzaarish karoon gi ke please aap apni takhleeqat hamare saath zuroor share karain. Agar aap naheen chahtay ke hum un par kuch kahain tou is section main naheen balke apne section main post kar dain. Seema
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 12:40 pm |
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Esteemed seema! aap ne darust rahnamaai farmaai. main zaroor isko change ker lon ga aur is nawazish ke leay hamaisha duago rahon ga.
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Sat Feb 21, 2009 8:06 pm |
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thanx a lot seema.. actually meri poetry meray thread main posted hai to dobara dobara kya post karun, waqt nikal k visit kijye ga aur bataye ga k apko kesi lagi..
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Post subject: ~!~Sawaalan Jawaaban~!~ Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:45 am |
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Salam guyss....
Aap sab ya tho naye likhne walay shair hain ya Purane Shair... so aap logo se behtar is sawal ka jawab kon janta hoga ...
I m letting a question in front of u ...
Kya Shairy karnay k liyey Muhabbat ki zaroorat hai...
ya
Muhabbat karnay k liyey Shairy ki zarurat hai...
i would appriciate ur comments...
i'll eagerly wait for ur valuable comments for this...
Note By Moderator:Dosto!
Ab iss thread ko aik silsilay ki soorat de di gaee hai!
Aap logoN k paas kisi bhi qism ka sawaal ya koi uljhan (shairy ya "aap ki shairy" section se mutalliq) ho ya koi baat share karni ho to wo iss section mein kar saktay hain.
Shukria
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Shairy Aur Muhabbat~!~ Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 2:47 pm |
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SyedZada wrote: Salam guyss....
Aap sab ya tho naye likhne walay shair hain ya Purane Shair... so aap logo se behtar is sawal ka jawab kon janta hoga ...
I m letting a question in front of u ...
Kya Shairy karnay k liyey Muhabbat ki zaroorat hai...
ya
Muhabbat karnay k liyey Shairy ki zarurat hai...
i would appriciate ur comments...
i'll eagerly wait for ur valuable comments for this...
AOA Syed, Hmmmmmmmmmmm.... Tumhara saval mazay ka hai. Shairy karnay ke liye muhabbat ki zurorat hai....DEFINITELY....Ishq sirf mehboob se he naheen hota, khuda se bhi hota hai. Muhabbat ke to hazaron roop hain. Maan ka aulad (the best and most pure love), Bhai behen ka , maan baap ka, shahau biwi ka and so on and so forth... Duniya ka har shaksh muhabbat karta hai kisi na kisi se is liye shairy ke liye muhabbat ki zurooorat bilkul hai aur agar pyar main zakhm khaey hon, tou kya kehnay. Jitna zyada dil gudaz utni hee achi shairy. Pyar kare ke liye shairy ki zuroorat naheen laikin zyada tar pyaar karne waale shair ho jaate hain. Kya khayal hai??? 
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Shairy Aur Muhabbat~!~ Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 3:37 pm |
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wsalam ..
Thank for being here...
bilkul theek kaha aap ne... Muhabbat aur ishq tho kisi se bhi ho sakti hai .. maan baap ho ya dost.....
Hum us shaks ki hasni , khushi , ghum , narazgi , sab ko apna bana leta hain ... . .
Shairy kya IK TARFA muhabbat per hi hoti hai .. ager muhabbat dono taraf se hotho .. kya hum log shair na bantey ??
jab tk hamare dil ko koi nahi torta tab tk hum kisi k dil ka ehtraam kyu nahi karte ...Dil tootne k baad Shairy karne bhet jate hain
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Shairy Aur Muhabbat~!~ Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 3:53 pm |
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usman sahab...shairy section mein ye kesa thread bana dia aap ne????? 
aray ye "AAP KI SHAIRY" section hai!!!!! and on a serious note... SEEMA ji!kya khayal hai....yahan "aap ki shairy" mein bi aik 'chit chat' ka thread na bana diya jaaye???
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Shairy Aur Muhabbat~!~ Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 4:00 pm |
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SAlam Arooji Ji .. Shairy ka Aghazzz hi Muhabbat SE hota hai ji... Sirf Shairy KArna hi ki nahi Shairy Parhne ka shoq bhi Muhabbat ki wajah se hota hai.. Is forum me 90% log kisi na kisi ki muhabbat ki wajah se AAte hain .... Main un sab se yehi Poochna chahta hoon ...... Baki aap Dono ki marzi ... delete bhi kar dengi ... tho your highness
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Shairy Aur Muhabbat~!~ Posted: Wed Feb 25, 2009 6:00 pm |
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Arooj Amjad wrote: usman sahab...shairy section mein ye kesa thread bana dia aap ne?????
aray ye "AAP KI SHAIRY" section hai!!!!! and on a serious note... SEEMA ji!kya khayal hai....yahan "aap ki shairy" mein bi aik 'chit chat' ka thread na bana diya jaaye??? I agree Arooj, bohot naik khayal hai... I am sure ke Syed jaise aur bohot se hain jo shairy ke baare main sawal karna chahain. I think we should go for it........
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Shairy Aur Muhabbat~!~ Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 12:25 am |
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Thx Seema ji Ab jawab chahiye mujhe
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I can not stop thinking about you
I can love you
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Shairy Aur Muhabbat~!~ Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 6:01 am |
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SyedZada wrote: Thx Seema ji Ab jawab chahiye mujhe Kaisa jawab, Syed? Aap ke suggestion par tou kaam ho raha hai.......
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Shairy Aur Muhabbat~!~ Posted: Thu Feb 26, 2009 10:55 am |
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SyedZada wrote: wsalam ..
Thank for being here...
bilkul theek kaha aap ne... Muhabbat aur ishq tho kisi se bhi ho sakti hai .. maan baap ho ya dost.....
Hum us shaks ki hasni , khushi , ghum , narazgi , sab ko apna bana leta hain ... . .
Shairy kya IK TARFA muhabbat per hi hoti hai .. ager muhabbat dono taraf se hotho .. kya hum log shair na bantey ??
jab tk hamare dil ko koi nahi torta tab tk hum kisi k dil ka ehtraam kyu nahi karte ...Dil tootne k baad Shairy karne bhet jate hain aoa janab...
Shairy aik aisa art hai jo aik tareeqa-e-izhaar hai...aik outlet hai...jaise kuch logoN ka outlet painting hota ha kuch ka singing kuch ka dancing...issi tarha kuch log shairy kar k apne jazbaat aur ehsaasaat ka izhaar karte hain.
baaqi reh gaee mohabbat ki baat...to mohabbat insaan ko emotionally hillaa k rakh deti hai.kuch ko positively (insaan khush rehta hai,khwab dekhta hai,unko poora karne ki koshish karta hai,kuch constuctive karta hai;etc)aur kuch ko negatively (udaasi,tishnagi,judaai;etc) so jab insaan aik emotinal state se doosri mein shift hota hai to laazmi uss k andar,jazbaati toR pHoR k baais itna kuch bhar jaata hai jissay kehne k liay aik tareeqa hona bohat zaroori ho jaata hai.aur jo log already shairy karne ki silaahiyat rakhte hain wo iss tareeqa-e-izhaar ko istemaal karte hain.
Here i must say k mere khayal se ye silaahiyat natural hoti hai..aap shair "hote" hain..."bante" nahin!
aap k andar aik natural rythm aur silaahiyat hoti hai...jiss mein waqt,mushaahida,practice,ilm aur mutaalea..nikhaar laate hain.uss pe dil mein dard bhi ho to nit naye mazaameen mil jaate hain shairy k liye.
ab kahiye kya khayal hai?? 
Seema ji! i need ur raaye too...!
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Sawaalan Jawaaban~!~ Posted: Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:30 am |
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AOA Arooj and Syed,
You are absolutely right, yeh aik outlet hai hamare ander ki feelings ka, khushi gham, baichaini, besukooni, judaai, Muhabbat, Ishq and so on and so forth...
As for the other part, shair donon tarah ke hota hain, aik jo qudratee hotay hain aur doosray jo banaey jaate hain yaa ban jaatey hain halaat ke badaulat....
Muhabbat tou bara pyaara jazba hai aur jaisa ke main ne pehle bhi kaha ke yeh sirf aik he tarah kii naheen hai jisko kehtay hain "ISHQ E MIJAZI". ISHQ E HAQEEQI jo khuda se hota hai woh bhi ishq hai. Uss main bhi insaan duniya o maa feeha se baikhabar ho jaata hai. Ishq tou ishq hai, jaise ke Arooj ne kaha, mehboon mila tou wah wah aur naheen mila tou shairy ko aik huznee kaifyat ata kar daita jo zyada tar ashaar main nazar aatee hai.
Shair hpnay ke liye apne aap ko push naheen kiya jaa sakta aur na hee shairy sikhane se aatee hai, haan islah zuroor kar sakte hain usse behter banane ke liye laikin agar koi shairy seekhne ke liye school jaaye tou aisa naheen hai. You can learn about poetry but you can't learn poery.........
Anyways tou yeh yo hai meri raey ab aap logon ki rae ka bhi intezaar rahay ga
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Shairy Aur Muhabbat~!~ Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:18 am |
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Arooj Amjad wrote: aoa janab...
Shairy aik aisa art hai jo aik tareeqa-e-izhaar hai...aik outlet hai...jaise kuch logoN ka outlet painting hota ha kuch ka singing kuch ka dancing...issi tarha kuch log shairy kar k apne jazbaat aur ehsaasaat ka izhaar karte hain.
baaqi reh gaee mohabbat ki baat...to mohabbat insaan ko emotionally hillaa k rakh deti hai.kuch ko positively (insaan khush rehta hai,khwab dekhta hai,unko poora karne ki koshish karta hai,kuch constuctive karta hai;etc)aur kuch ko negatively (udaasi,tishnagi,judaai;etc) so jab insaan aik emotinal state se doosri mein shift hota hai to laazmi uss k andar,jazbaati toR pHoR k baais itna kuch bhar jaata hai jissay kehne k liay aik tareeqa hona bohat zaroori ho jaata hai.aur jo log already shairy karne ki silaahiyat rakhte hain wo iss tareeqa-e-izhaar ko istemaal karte hain.
Here i must say k mere khayal se ye silaahiyat natural hoti hai..aap shair "hote" hain..."bante" nahin!
aap k andar aik natural rythm aur silaahiyat hoti hai...jiss mein waqt,mushaahida,practice,ilm aur mutaalea..nikhaar laate hain.uss pe dil mein dard bhi ho to nit naye mazaameen mil jaate hain shairy k liye.
ab kahiye kya khayal hai??
Seema ji! i need ur raaye too...! Asalamualikum.. thanks for ur reply.. aap ka matlab hai k Shairy is the best way to express our emtions.. hmm thts rite.... Rythemic aur gaigi k tor per agr kuch pesh kya jaye tho woh asani se samajh me bhi ajati hain .... aap ka buhat buhat shukriya jis ki wajah main aap logo se buhat kuch samajh saka....... Thanks
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Post subject: Re: ~!~Sawaalan Jawaaban~!~ Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 9:26 am |
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seemanaqvi wrote: AOA Arooj and Syed,
You are absolutely right, yeh aik outlet hai hamare ander ki feelings ka, khushi gham, baichaini, besukooni, judaai, Muhabbat, Ishq and so on and so forth...
As for the other part, shair donon tarah ke hota hain, aik jo qudratee hotay hain aur doosray jo banaey jaate hain yaa ban jaatey hain halaat ke badaulat....
Muhabbat tou bara pyaara jazba hai aur jaisa ke main ne pehle bhi kaha ke yeh sirf aik he tarah kii naheen hai jisko kehtay hain "ISHQ E MIJAZI". ISHQ E HAQEEQI jo khuda se hota hai woh bhi ishq hai. Uss main bhi insaan duniya o maa feeha se baikhabar ho jaata hai. Ishq tou ishq hai, jaise ke Arooj ne kaha, mehboon mila tou wah wah aur naheen mila tou shairy ko aik huznee kaifyat ata kar daita jo zyada tar ashaar main nazar aatee hai.
Shair hpnay ke liye apne aap ko push naheen kiya jaa sakta aur na hee shairy sikhane se aatee hai, haan islah zuroor kar sakte hain usse behter banane ke liye laikin agar koi shairy seekhne ke liye school jaaye tou aisa naheen hai. You can learn about poetry but you can't learn poery.........
Anyways tou yeh yo hai meri raey ab aap logon ki rae ka bhi intezaar rahay ga Wsalam Seema ji .. aap logo ki itni achi achi raye parh kar dil tho yehi karta hai .. jitne bhi sawal hon aap logo k samne rakh doon ... ....
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Sun Mar 01, 2009 5:03 pm |
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Aik naee ghazal
Husn aeena roo hai sangdil hai
Ishq kyoun muztarib hai bismil hai?
Haq ki baade saba kahan thehray
Tund baade samoom e baatil hai
Mil rahay hain qadam qadam pe jo sang
Paas lagta hai jaise manzil hai
Phir chalo Karbala ko aam karain
Phir Yazid aa gaya Muqabil hai
Ab naheen hai judaiyoun ka malaal
Mairi rag rag main tou jo shamil hai
Chuntay hain ishq ko pas e deewaar
Ab bhi shahon ko haq yeh haasil hai
Kalma go keh rahay hain yeh khud ko
Aaj khatray main deen e kamil hai
Zaad e reh chaak garaibaan lay kar
Dhoondhta koi apni manzil hai
Jis main hum dhoondhtay hain chaara gar
Kaun jaane asil main qaatil hai
Kya taraqqee hai, aaj bhee naaree
Nisf hee mard ke muqabil hai
Kaisi gardaab main phansee Seema
Jabke do hee qadam pe saahil hai
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Post subject: Re: Share you poetry for discussion Posted: Mon Mar 02, 2009 11:39 pm |
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Seema ji...
a really nice ghazal indeed...
aik cheez aine aap k kalaam mein note i hai k kabhi kabhi aap ka matlab waaze' nahin ho paata.aisa lagta hai koi word missing hai ya aap apne qaare'en k liye kuch cHoR deti hain k ye baat wo khud samajh lein ge ya ye k wo gap wo khud fil kar lein ge.
mera maswara hai k aap apni taraf se aik baat bikul complete ker k aur aasaan kar k bayaan kiya kijiye!!!!seemanaqvi wrote: Husn aeena roo hai sangdil hai
Ishq kyoun muztarib hai bismil hai?
acha sher hai,acha comparison kiya hai dono ka...according to characteristics of both...seemanaqvi wrote: Haq ki baade saba kahan thehray
Tund baade samoom e baatil hai
bohat ache tashbeehaat,bohat acha comparison again!seemanaqvi wrote: Mil rahay hain qadam qadam pe jo sang
Paas lagta hai jaise manzil hai seemanaqvi wrote: Phir chalo Karbala ko aam karain
Phir Yazid aa gaya Muqabil hai seemanaqvi wrote: Ab naheen hai judaiyoun ka malaal
Mairi rag rag main tou jo shamil hai
nice!seemanaqvi wrote: Chuntay hain ishq ko pas e deewaar
Ab bhi shahon ko haq yeh haasil hai seemanaqvi wrote: Kalma go keh rahay hain yeh khud ko
Aaj khatray main deen e kamil hai seemanaqvi wrote: Zaad e reh chaak garaibaan lay kar
Dhoondhta koi apni manzil hai seemanaqvi wrote: Jis main hum dhoondhtay hain chaara gar
Kaun jaane asil main qaatil hai seemanaqvi wrote: Kya taraqqee hai, aaj bhee naaree
Nisf hee mard ke muqabil hai seemanaqvi wrote: Kaisi gardaab main phansee Seema
Jabke do hee qadam pe saahil hai
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Post subject: Re: :~DiSScuSSion~: Posted: Tue Mar 03, 2009 7:29 pm |
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Aap ka bohot shukriya Arooj maire ashaar ko pasand karne ka. Bohot sahee mashwara hai aur ab mairi yehi koshish rahay gi ke mazmoon har tarah se clear ho. Asil main akar aisa ota hai ke hum yeh samajhtay hain ke kyounke hamain pata hai ke is ka kya matlab hai iss liye ham assume kar laite hain ke yeh aur sab ko bhi samajh aae ga lihaza mairi yehi koshish ho gee ke main apne ashaar main jo paighaam daina chah rahee hoon woh bilkul waazeh ho.
Aap ka bohot bohot shukriya,
Duago,
Seeman
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